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reserving this one...coz i'll comment after reading...thanx for keeping ur word...love ya....
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so it starts on good note, with medical things, which besides other things, i love about this....them working, disagreeing, then fighting n sorta making up.....is the basic essence of RM.....u alwaz maintained that in all ur parts....
this part has no low-points...i read it in one go, n by the end of it, i had a big smile on my face😃😃.....there r some particular lines of rahul, that made me fall in love with rahul all over again...
1.He walked to where she was. "Yahan dekhogi to bataunga na?"
2.His right hand moved to her face..making her almost to tremble. (adore rahul for having such an effect on muskaan)
3."Hum kaam to kar sakte hai..leken pehle file to sedhi karo." He chuckled and put the file properly in her hands which was kept upside- down.
4."Muskaan..tere aankhen hai ya button..andhere main tujhe apne ghar ke baare main kuch nahin dikhta to shaadi ke baad mere ghar..." and then he stopped (😆😆😆)
absolutely loved when....."She cleaned his eyes with the water..and then blew some air...she was so close that her lips touched his eyes. Its as if all the pain vanished.."
n the final one should be.....
"Bechare mere bacche kabse bhuke behte hai..aur aap aise nakhre kar rahe hai?"
"Bache?" Rahul echoed......
....."Par maine to sirf paanch bache bola tha..tuna kameena..itni gandi si baten karta hai..cricket team..matlab gyarha [11] tujhe main chodungi nahin.."
Rahul burst out laughing. "Gyrah nahin 16 with substitues!!.....
u have an excellent comic-sense......i was never bored for a single moment.....u kept me wanting for more....n though it was a long update...it finished in a flash😕....
i have a question though, its about the chronology....the part where muskaan breaks the engagement, is yet to come na???
otherwise, love it, love it, love it......please update the next part soon....no pressure though....lolz....
PS: am curious about the forwarded msg that rahul refused to show to muskaan....what was it???n secondly, i never knew, omlette could be cooked in a microwave.....mine turned out a disaster....n boiling eggs are also a strict no-no for micro.....i guess...i'm sorry...coudn refrain...😛😛😛
Shiv Shakti
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
Arjun
