MJHT Ka Safar continues...(FF) part 9 page 55. - Page 33

Originally posted by: cute2stay

Awww Kiran!!! 🤗

Ok I am so soo majorly sorry yaar!! you can give me as many gaaliyan as you want I deserve it!! I tried sooo hard to write it on Friday but honestly my mind went totally blank yaar I couldn't think of any ideas!! And this update was hard cuz I summed everything up in the last update so there was no continuity na? I had to like start afresh so it was really hard!! Plus I had so many assignments due this week that I think I just didn't have any brains left to write a nice part. So I thought I'd sleep on it and then work on it the next day. And usually when I sleep I can think of ideas for my FF and stuff toh that helped a lot. Anyway sorry for my lambi explanation thank you sooo much for saying it was worth the wait yaar!!! That really means alot to me!!

Aww Kiran your fav. part was also my fav. part to write!! Hehe seems like everyone wants mayuu to win...might just have to take your wishes into command then!! apka hukum sarakhon par!! Aww thanks for the high expectations Kiran...I hope I can continue to meet them!! *pulls collar* That's why I never wanna rush the updates and wanna write them aaram se cuz I can't work well under pressure!! Toh that's why I never make it on time...but thanks for bearing with me you're free to use chappals!! One of these days I'll update on time!!

Love you Kiran you're truely my biggest inspiration!! 🤗

Originally posted by: sherizzz

heeyyyy palluujii.....amazing update yaaar......!!!!!!!

mayur back in action with der nok-jhoks.......waaaahhh.......and i liked nupz' challenge.....uska to devlish mind hi hai na....ohh mayu gonna accept da challenge.....hhehe😆

Originally posted by: Kiran1018

Hey

u dont have to give an explantion.....its completely ok...besides school work comes first anyway.....and one thing i would like to tell you is your fan fic is quality so it shouldnt matter how long you take....b/c it always is great quality.....always take your time.....you have never disppointed your readers till now and i m sure our complaints always prove that your writing is always great....b/c if it wasnt, we all wouldnt be whining about u not updating.....so our complaints are justified in a good way...lols.

wonderful part pallavi!!!!

Originally posted by: drishti_sajan

wonderful part pallavi!!!!

brilliant just loved it and thanks for the PM

continue soon.....

drishti

wow pallu awesome update tha yaar......i really want 2 see wat mayu will do now....plz jaldi se update kar de

haan..toh...finally aapka update aa h gaya...!!!! 😊

by god....!!! mujhe toh lag raha tha ki tere is update ka w8 karte karte kahin mai budhi na ho jaun..!!😆😆

anyway..woh kehte hai na...better late thn never...der aaye par durust aaye...!!kya kehte ho...!!😆😆

so....mai toh abhi reply karne bhi nai wali thi ji...mai bahut gussa thi aapse....!!!😔😔😔

par ...aapka update padh k toh dil khush ho gaya by god...!!!!😃😃

as usual bahut h superb update tha....!!!!

toh iske liye-

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aur yeh bhi-

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Nupur: Arrey Gunjan tujhe nahin pata…woh monkey mayank haina? Suraj ugte hi class mein pahunch jaata hai…abhi abhi toh humari dosti hui hai…class mein late gayi toh woh toh mujhe chodega nahin by god!

Omg...!!! ths was so hilarious...!!!!!suraj ugte hi class me...!!!!!by god ...!!! yeh toh mayu p h chutkula ho gaya...!!!!😆😆😆

oh n by d way...!!! evrybdy seemd 2 b in a hurry huh...!!!😆

achanak sabko college jaane ki kya jaldi mach rai hai...!!! interesting..!!😆😆😛

awww😳😳..i luv mayu's mum yaar....!!!! she's so sweet ....n u literally portray ths sweetness in ur ff....i can really imagine their scenes....!!!😳😳😳

mayur ki nok jhok toh is alwyas brillant yaar....ths one was exceptionally gud....!!!

n finally......!!!

ooooooooooooooo.......mayank ko challenge....!!! woh bhi class m ek bhi answer na dene ka....!!!!!!!!!! mayu toh bura phasa....!!! 😆

ab voh kya karega...!!

bt i hope n wish ki mayu yeh contest jeet jaye...!!!!plzzzz....!!!!mayu ko jeetana...!!!!

n mayu n nups rxn on uday n cj..!!!😆😆😆

brillant update yaar....

Pallojee..!! 🤗🤗Kaise ho aap?

Finally got to read ur update.. I wanted to read it earlier in d day but pehle kuch iritating bache ghar aa gaye, uske baad light chali gayi toh main padhne lagi.. phir jab login karne wale thi toh phone bajne lage dhadad, ab jaake time mila.. phew!
Kaafi kuch hua na is update me? I liked the sister scene with Nupur raving abt how she didnt want to get late and Mayank behaving the same way at home.. esp his Mum's dialogue - ek yeh aur ek iski Nupur.. haha, truly kamaal ki jodi hai! 😳
Samrat and Benji always manage to rock; theirs is a friendship I really like and you described it so well! I think Benji will knw Samrat is falling for her even before he realizes it himself.. lol
Ok then the Nupur-Mayank-CJ scene, I was waiting for one of those. I hope we get one on the show too. What a fight - so typically Mayur. They are so cute!! And hey, the challenge idea is so much fun. You knw u reminded me of a truth and dare game we once played in school.. sum1 was dared to ask 5 stupid questions in class to one of the strictest teachers we had.. poor guy managed to do it but baad me jo dhulayi hui dare dene wale ki, wo nazara toh dekhte hi banta tha! Lets see what Mayank does.. I cant wait for this part. And oh, I can well imagine their expressions on seeing CJ and Uday together.. hahaha.. thunder struck!

Agla update kab aayega? *taps fingers on the table with a stern look* jaldi jaldi karna.. warna threats toh yaad hai na? Thanks for this wonderful treat Pallo.. love you lots.. hugs!! 🤗

amazing
i just loved it
both challenges r nice lets c wat happens
will wit for ur next update

arrey yaar pallu... waah kya update he...