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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

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Posted: 16 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: blushpink13
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update.
thanks for the pm n update.

Iqra

Aww thanks so much Iqra!! No need to say thanks yaar yeh to mera farz tha!! So glad you liked it hun!! 🤗

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

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Posted: 16 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: sweetvidisha
wow....lol....fresh from mind huh.......but bahut chota tha 😭 hamara mayank..thoda aur likhna tha nah....koi nahi phir bhi i am waiting for next part yarr...ise baar itna intazar mar karwana ...woh kya hai nahi...mayank ka intazar zayad dear thak nahi hota...lol i wonder what goign to happen next...i hope mayank loose since he will be thinking abt nupur all day heheheh i hope so...see i am giving u hint lol...JK .....update soon 🤗love ya

Awww vidi ya yaar you caught me....it was shorter than my usual updates....I had to study after toh I didn't get carried away this time...usually I write 6 pages on MS but this time it was 5...sorry about that yaar next time I'll make it long again. hehe....theekhai yaar is baar I'll try to update on time...it's my dream ke i will do that and you guys won't threaten me with chappals!! *sigh* one of these days....oo yaa got your hint dearie, par food for thought: agar mayu nupur ke baare mein sochta rahega toh questions kaise answer karega phir to woh jeet jayga na..?? lol abhi maine decide nahin kiya hai kya karungi but tu bata aur i will def. take your suggestions.

Thanks sooo much yaar you make my day!! Love you too as always!! 🤗🤗

Edited by cute2stay - 16 years ago

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sajanFan

@sajanFan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#303

hi pallavi.....

👏 mein kya kahoon yar.u r getting better day by day..... mayank - mom conversation was excellent.... samrat- benji were awesome..... hope benji will b key in making samrat realise his feeling for gunjan......

and samrat is as usual at his best when it coms to gunjan.... keep it up babes....

babes i want some cute scene between mayank-mom-samrat..... something funny.... like samrat flirting wid mayank mom and mom brainstorming samrat to know the girl who is in his heart.... and then she starts teasing samrat wid gunjan.....

something like this.... if u feel it wil b gud, plz try to incorporate this dear... not a demand.. just a request😉

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

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Posted: 16 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: hemasharma36
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! luv
hema

awww thanks so much Hema!! love you!! 🤗

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.BarunSanaya.

@.BarunSanaya.

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: cute2stay

awww thanks so much Hema!! love you!! 🤗

luv u toooooo sweetyyyyyyy!😃

luv ya

hema😊

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

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Posted: 16 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: sajanFan
hi pallavi.....

👏 mein kya kahoon yar.u r getting better day by day..... mayank - mom conversation was excellent.... samrat- benji were awesome..... hope benji will b key in making samrat realise his feeling for gunjan......

and samrat is as usual at his best when it coms to gunjan.... keep it up babes....

babes i want some cute scene between mayank-mom-samrat..... something funny.... like samrat flirting wid mayank mom and mom brainstorming samrat to know the girl who is in his heart.... and then she starts teasing samrat wid gunjan.....

something like this.... if u feel it wil b gud, plz try to incorporate this dear... not a demand.. just a request😉

Hey Pri!!

Was waiting for your comments yaar they always make my day!! Bingo yaar tune mere mooh ki baat chin li!! I was thinking of making benji a catalyst in sajan's story only! hum dono ki thoughts bahaut milti hain! 😉

Omg I loveee your idea yaar!! I think that would be awesome!! Samrat's soo that type too na...flirting with mom and all! And yaa I feel like he needs a mom figure in his life too. Will def. keep that in mind for the future maybe if they all become friends or something they can go to dinner at mayu's house or something...don't know yet...but ya its an awesome idea thanks so much for sharing your lovely ideas with me!! Main zarur unko dhyaan mein rakhungi and will try my best to incorporate all of them!! Aww love you yaar and your amazing ideas!! Thanks a billion!! 🤗

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

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Posted: 16 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: shrishti gupta
Wonderful update!

Thanks sooo much Shrishti!!! 🤗

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Kiran1018

@Kiran1018

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#308

hey

first of all, i m very upset....tumne kaha tha tum update friday ko karongi....i waited up till almost 2am for you to update....kya yaar...why tease me like that?...u already know i m over addicted to reading your fan fic.

anyways, now that you update...i have to say, like always, its worth the wait....i loved it!!!!!!!!!!........starting from the beginning, i loved the way everyone was rushing together and bang into each other..that was such a cute and funny scene....especially uday comment about his face...lol.

samrat-benji jodi is as charming and rocking in your fan fic as it is on the show....so their scenes are always funny...they have a great chemistry in the show and you have produced that same chemistry in your fan fic....kudos to you for that!

my favorite part of the update was the mayur nok-jhok when they try to tell CJ what happened....that was so innovative concept to me...i loved your idea here...the way they came close to each other while telling CJ exactly what happene on their trip....2 things at once...and they both were unconciously attracted to each other.....i thaught that was really a very very well-written scene.

so sweet of samrat to take care of gunjan....he is too cute...i can always imagine him wink and smile his broad smile every time you write about him.....especially his request....that was too sweet of him...he is such a caring friend.

also, what was really adorbale was the way nupur teases mayank about being in class....he keeps saying yes and finally falls for nupur's trick...lol..that was cute......and nupur's challange is quite interesting...i really want my mayu to win and it would be so interesting to see what he would make nupur do...i cant wait for the next part.

it was so funny when mayank and nupur turn around to see CJ and Uday seated together and look at them in shock and suprise....they make an unusual pair.

anyways, overall, a very well written part.........but no romantic scenes b/w mayur...i just cant wait for those to happen...i have really high expectations from you when that point comes.........i m sure you wont disappoint us....and will come up with some nice and innovative situations and scenes.....i cant wait to read those.

keep writing!

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Neha

@Awesome.Sauce

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Posted: 16 years ago

#309

heyy heyy heyy.....js discovered dis AWESOME...place...of urz pallu...😆😆😆*sorry cant help it..i hv sum slow...reactin' issues*😆😆😆...yeh tabaahi kab shuru ki tune????mujhe bata toh detii..mein bhii FANNNNNNNAAAA hone aa jaatii....😆

nywaiiz'...abhii tak i js read the first part of ur FF..n' i must saii "TERA DEEMAG COMP SE BHII TEZ CHALTA HAI"..😆...i mean wa a script....picture banayen kya????😆😆😆now i trust ur INSANITY...😆...i can totally imagine the mayur convo..👏..awesome...👏...so now without further KACHAR PACHAR...me headin' to read the second part...*RUNS*..*SLAMS DOOR AT THE BACK*.....😆