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Originally posted by: Kiran1018
hey
first of all, i m very upset....tumne kaha tha tum update friday ko karongi....i waited up till almost 2am for you to update....kya yaar...why tease me like that?...u already know i m over addicted to reading your fan fic.anyways, now that you update...i have to say, like always, its worth the wait....i loved it!!!!!!!!!!........starting from the beginning, i loved the way everyone was rushing together and bang into each other..that was such a cute and funny scene....especially uday comment about his face...lol.samrat-benji jodi is as charming and rocking in your fan fic as it is on the show....so their scenes are always funny...they have a great chemistry in the show and you have produced that same chemistry in your fan fic....kudos to you for that!my favorite part of the update was the mayur nok-jhok when they try to tell CJ what happened....that was so innovative concept to me...i loved your idea here...the way they came close to each other while telling CJ exactly what happene on their trip....2 things at once...and they both were unconciously attracted to each other.....i thaught that was really a very very well-written scene.so sweet of samrat to take care of gunjan....he is too cute...i can always imagine him wink and smile his broad smile every time you write about him.....especially his request....that was too sweet of him...he is such a caring friend.also, what was really adorbale was the way nupur teases mayank about being in class....he keeps saying yes and finally falls for nupur's trick...lol..that was cute......and nupur's challange is quite interesting...i really want my mayu to win and it would be so interesting to see what he would make nupur do...i cant wait for the next part.it was so funny when mayank and nupur turn around to see CJ and Uday seated together and look at them in shock and suprise....they make an unusual pair.anyways, overall, a very well written part.........but no romantic scenes b/w mayur...i just cant wait for those to happen...i have really high expectations from you when that point comes.........i m sure you wont disappoint us....and will come up with some nice and innovative situations and scenes.....i cant wait to read those.keep writing!
Awww Kiran!!! 🤗
Ok I am so soo majorly sorry yaar!! you can give me as many gaaliyan as you want I deserve it!! I tried sooo hard to write it on Friday but honestly my mind went totally blank yaar I couldn't think of any ideas!! And this update was hard cuz I summed everything up in the last update so there was no continuity na? I had to like start afresh so it was really hard!! Plus I had so many assignments due this week that I think I just didn't have any brains left to write a nice part. So I thought I'd sleep on it and then work on it the next day. And usually when I sleep I can think of ideas for my FF and stuff toh that helped a lot. Anyway sorry for my lambi explanation thank you sooo much for saying it was worth the wait yaar!!! That really means alot to me!!
Aww Kiran your fav. part was also my fav. part to write!! Hehe seems like everyone wants mayuu to win...might just have to take your wishes into command then!! apka hukum sarakhon par!! Aww thanks for the high expectations Kiran...I hope I can continue to meet them!! *pulls collar* That's why I never wanna rush the updates and wanna write them aaram se cuz I can't work well under pressure!! Toh that's why I never make it on time...but thanks for bearing with me you're free to use chappals!! One of these days I'll update on time!!
Love you Kiran you're truely my biggest inspiration!! 🤗
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