MJHT Ka Safar continues...(FF) part 9 page 55.

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Hi Guys,
My name is Pallavi and I'm new to this forum. Like all of you here, I too love this show a little too much and I am now officially addicted to it like anything!! So since I had some free time after my exams I thought I'd write an FF of my own. I have been reading a few FF's on the forum and they are all SOO good!! So inspired by all of the ones I have been reading I decided to write my own FF. And since I am not that creative I couldn't think of a new story of my own. So this is just a continuation of the current MJHT track.
So this FF continues after Thursday's episode. Please read and comment/ critisize/ make suggestions. Here it is:

Precap (from last time): Principal tells Gunjan to dance at the Valentine's Ball and Dia to pick a song for her and Gunjan gets scared at the thought. Nupur tells Mayank to get married and Mayank imagines an abusive Nupur as a housewife and sees himself as a "chunnu ke papa"! The thought of such a future makes him go "Nahhiiiiiinnnn".

Nupur: Haan Mayank.

Mayank: (gives Nupur a disgusted up and down look) Shaadi aur tumse?

Nupur: Mujhe bhi tumse shaadi karne ka koi shauk nai hai. Par kya karoon, galti ki hai to punishment bhi bugatni padegi. (she says in a dramatic heroine way putting her hand on her forehead)

Mayank: (says as he puts Nupur's hand down from her forehead) Forget it. Tumse shaadi karma matlab khudkushi karna hai.

Nupur: Kya? Waise tum kyun itna ghabra rahe ho Mayank, ghabrana to mujhe chahiye. Tum jaise monkey se shaadi karke meri life to maha boring hone wali hai. Humara future to mujhe abhi se hi nazar aa raha hai-(Nupur has a futuristic look as she says) tum roz subha uthkar pehle koi na koi kitaab parte aur mujhe bhi padwate. Phir dupair ko usse bhi moti wali kitaab padte aur shaam ko chai ke saat ek aur moti si book padtey. Bus din bhar yehi chalta rehta. Tum kitaabe parte aur mujhe bhi apne saat bor karte. Aur jaise hi humara bacha hota to khilone ke wajaye tum uske haat mein bhi koi bahut moti wali kitaab thama dete. Aur hamaare ghar mein bas kitaabein hi kitabein hoti. (Nupur says all this in one breath and as dramatically and with as many hand gestures as possible)

Mayank: Dekho Nupur'.

Nupur: Mujhe to abhi se hi humare bichare chunnu ki chinta ho rahi hai. Woh bichara to yeh bhi nahin jaanta ke uske naseeb mein kitni books padna likha hai'

Mayank: chunnu?

Nupur: Aur kya. Dekho Mayank tum uska naam Einstein ya jo bhi rakho, mein to use pyar se chunnu hi bulaoongi. (she says in a matter of fact way)

Mayank: (with his desperate, sad look) Mujhe pata tha, tumse shaadi karke mujhe tumhare saat saat chunnu ko bhi jhelna padega.

Nupur: (shocked) Haye Mayank kaise baap ho tum jo apne hi bache ke baare mein'..chi chi chi (she makes a disgusted face)

Mayank: Dekho Nupur chunnu ko beech mein mat layo. Mein sabse zaada chunnu se nahi tumse irritate hoonga (points finger at her)

Nupur: Mein nahi Mayank, tum bichare chunnu ko beech mein mat layo. (points back at Mayank)

Mayank and Nupur (together): Tum toh'

Here Mayank and Nupur pause at their classic pose with both really close to each other and both pointing their fingers at each other.

'

Gujan: (thinks to herself as she walks down the hallway) Ab mein kya karoongi. Pehle yeh RJ hunt ki pareshaani aur upar se ab mujhe dance bhi karna padega. Aur mujhe toh dance karna bhi nahi aata. Kash di yahan pe hoti, wo zaroor meri madat kar paatin.

(With this Gunjan sits down on a stair step and rests her chin on her hand looking very worried)

(Just then Samrat enters the same hallway dribbling his basket ball. He sees Gunjan looking worried and hides behind a pole so Gunjan can't see him and thinks to himself):

Samrat: Yeh chasmish itni pareshaan kyun lag rahi hai. Hmm'pata karna padega.

'

In the Canteen, Dia, Uday, Annie, Chacko and Benji are sitting and chatting.

Dia: Pata nahi ye principal sir us Morena behenji ko itni importance kyun de rahe hain.

Annie: Ya you're right babes. Woh Morena behenji aur RJ? Aur woh dance?

Dia: I know doll, kitna silly sound karta hai. Mein to imagine bhi nahi kar sakti Gunjan ko padayi ke ilawa kuch karte hue. Khair jo bhi ho, us Gunjan ko apne aap ko embarrass karta hua dekh bahut maza ayega. Valentine's ball mein thoda humour bhi hojayga. Right Annie?

Annie: Of course Dia (Annie and Dia giggle and high five each other)

Dia: (suddenly she notices Uday). DODO!!! Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?

Uday: (still has his hand on his check from CJ's kiss and is daydreaming) Uday's daydream:

Uday: Nahi CJ pehle tum khao na..

CJ: Nahi dude, tum hi khao. Waise bhi mujhe aur bhook nahi hai.

Uday: (gets excited) You mean yeh saara khana mere liye?

CJ: (laughs) Knock yourself out

Uday: (knocks himself on the head with a confused look and seeing CJ laugh, he gives a nervous smile and starts eating all the food) Thanks CJ tum mera kitna khyal rakhti ho.

CJ: Of course dude.

(And then in the daydream they both look into each other's eyes'Just then Uday hears Dia's voice)

Dia: DODO!!

Uday: Oh Sorry Dids woh kya haina valentine's ball ke baare mein sochte sochte pata nahin kab mein apne valentine ke barre mein sochne lag gaya. (scratches his head stupidly)

Dia: Watever Dodo.

(Uday gives his classic disappointed that no on understands him look)

'

Meanwhile Samrat calls up Benji to discuss Gunjan:

Samrat: Dude ab pata nahi yeh chashmish itni pareshaan kyun hai. Mujhe laga wo valentine's ball mein apne secret friend ko milne ke liye excited hogi.

Benji: Samrat mere yaar, tu kaisa friend hai mere bhai? I'm afraid tu up to date nahin hai.

Samrat: Benji, agar tujhe kuch pata hai to bol de. Yeh paheliyan bujha kar mera time mat waste kar. Waise bhi Samrat ke paas faltu time nahi hai.

Benji: Arey batata hoon na mere bhai. Woh kya hai na, Gunjan ko principal sir ne valentine's ball mein dance karne ke liya kaha hai aur woh bechari is baat se gabhrayi hui hai.

Samrat: O to yeh baat hai. Chasmish ko dance karne se darr lag raha hai. Theek hai Benji time for Plan #2 to come in action.

Benji: Yaaarrr ab ek aur naya plan! Dekh tu jaane aur teri Gunjan jaane, mein is jhamele mein nahi padne wala.

Samrat: Theek hai Benji. Waise mein teri liye valentine's ball ke liye ek ladki se baat karne wala tha'par agar tu interested nahi hai to mein use na keh deta hoon'

Benji: Arreey nahi yaar. Tu toh mera bhai hai na. Chal tere liye ab ek aur plan sahi.

Samrat: Yeh hui na baat. Chal sabse pehle main tujhe ek letter deta hoon. Yeh tujhe Chashmish tak pahuchana hai.

Benji: (thinks to himself: Shukar hai iss bar phone pe baat karne ko to nahi kaha) Of course dude, tere liye to jaan bhi haazir hai.

Samrat: Don't worry, teri jaan tu apne paas rakh. Woh mere kissi kam ki nahi hai. Filaaal to letter se kaam chal jayga.

...

Back to Mayank and Nupur scene:

Mayank and Nupur look at each other and then Nupur looks away and crosses her arms. Just then Mayank realizes what nonsense they just went through. He is horrified and shocked at the fact that he went on with Nupur's blabbering for so long but he ignores the thought and says:

Mayank: Ek minute Nupur, waise humein shaadi kyun karni chahiye?

Nupur: Mayank tum behre ho kya? Itni der se jo mein bak bak kar rahi hoon kya tumhe sunayi nahi diya?

Mayank: Sunayi to diya Nupur, par tumhari nonsense baaton ko sunna zaroori nahin samjha.

Nupur: Tumhe apni hone wali biwi se baat karne ki tameez nahi hai kya?

Mayank: Biwi aur tum? Mujhe kya paagal samajh rakha hai jo main tumse shaadi karunga?

Nupur: Waah Mayank pehli baar life mein tumne sahi baat ki. Waise haan meine tumhe paagal hi samajh rakha hai. Aur Mr. Gyaaniji agar tum itne samajh daar ho to yeh kyun nahi samajh rahe ki shaadi karne ke ilawa humare pass koi choice nahi hai.

Mayank: Bahaut ho gaya Nupur. Tumhara dimaag aur moon kuch zyaada hi chalta hai. Isse pehle ke tum din bhar mera sir khao, mein tumhe batata deta hoon ki kal raat humare beech aisa ulta seedha kuch nahi hua jo galat ho.

Nupur (shocked): KYA?? To itni der se tum mujhe kyun pakka rahe the?

Mayank looks at her as he thinks of an answer to this'.

'

End.

Precap:

Gunjan gets a letter that Samrat is her secret friend and till now all he has done is to see her happy and if she would forgive him and they could be friends again, Guru Samrat could once again help her with her dance problem.

...That's it guys. Please do read and comment and tell me if I should go on. If it's really bad just tell me and I won't bore you guys anymore. 😳
Thanks a lot!! šŸ¤—
Here is an index list:
Part 1: page 1
Part 2: page 2
Part 3: page 6
Part 4: page 11
Par 5: page 16
Part 6: page 22
Part 7: page 28
Part 8: page 38
Part 9: page 55
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hi pallavi
wow.....that was sooooooo great.....i absolutely loved it...you know i was laughing and smiling all through the mayur scenes and also uday and cj scenes......your fan fic seems so real to me...i mean its almost like i can hear all of them actually saying your dialouges....its like a little movie going on in my head.
you know, i m so addicted to this show that any fan fic with mayur in it, i m trying to read all the parts....i m so glad to see another new one start.....i hope that you will update several times a week.......you guys in this forum have such creative imaginations.....i hope you will keep writing because judging by this first part, i can tell i m going to be hooked on your fan fic very very soon as well.
so keep writing and update soon.
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wow yaar gr8 part plz conti...........
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wow just lived it through mayur scenes

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Originally posted by: sajanFan

wow cute2stay ... awesome...šŸ‘ plz continue soon

Hi sajanFan!!! You can call me Pallavi and THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU sooo much!!! My first comment!! You have made my day!!! I'm soo excited right now actually jumping up and down in my room right now!!! I'm so glad you liked it!! A big hug to you!! šŸ¤—
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Awww thank you thank you jiii!! thank you hai ji very much!!! you made my day by saying that!! a big hug back to you too!! šŸ¤—
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hi pallavi
wow.....that was sooooooo great.....i absolutely loved it...you know i was laughing and smiling all through the mayur scenes and also uday and cj scenes......your fan fic seems so real to me...i mean its almost like i can hear all of them actually saying your dialouges....its like a little movie going on in my head.
you know, i m so addicted to this show that any fan fic with mayur in it, i m trying to read all the parts....i m so glad to see another new one start.....i hope that you will update several times a week.......you guys in this forum have such creative imaginations.....i hope you will keep writing because judging by this first part, i can tell i m going to be hooked on your fan fic very very soon as well.
so keep writing and update soon.

OMG Sonia you are soo sweet!! Thank you so much for liking it you made my day by your comment!! And that was actually my goal when I wrote it that people could actually visuallize the conversation so you have no idea how happy you made me by saying that!!! And ya agree with you I'm def. addicted to all mayur FF's too!! And ya I'll def. update often I am free right now since Iam done exams but I have a feeling I'm going to get really busy soon but I'll try to update more than once a week on weekends. Please keep reading and commenting and a big THANK YOU again!!! And of course a big hug to you!!! šŸ¤—
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Originally posted by: Anjalika Khanna

wow yaar gr8 part plz conti...........

Hi Anjalika!! Thanks yaar thanks so much you made my day!! It's 9 am here so you actually started my day happily by saying that!! I will update today in a few hours. Thanks again yaar a big hug to you šŸ¤—

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