MJHT Ka Safar continues...(FF) part 9 page 55.

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Ayesha

@styleislife13

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#331

Hi Pallavi..

Awesum update after a long time...!

Its just soo gud that u manage to write abt every single character....

I've said tis too often but here it goes again...

It defo feels like reading a daily update...

Ur dialogues r just amazing...

Sounds just like Nupz....

Sich a nice dialogue wen Nupz says....Main apni akad dikhane main beleive karta hoon..soo much like Mayu......Gunjan ones r too sweet....nice.

Story is going to a new start...nice idea...

Now iam thinking ....kya woh 4 log apni sharat fulfill karein gay ya nahin?....

Plz update soon dear...

Luved the long updates....

MayUr scene was just awesum....

And at the end it was to cute...the finger pointing....

SaJan scenes were really nice...

Most hilarious scene had to be wen in the morning everybody slams in to oneanother..............ROFL...

Can totally imagine every scene...

Really well written...i cant see a single mistake....

Sorry for the late reply...was studying for examz.....u know the drill...

Really nice update sweetie..

Continue soon...

Keep it up.......

Gud luck wid te next part...

Take Care...

Luv Ayesha...

XxX

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#332

oh gosh pallavi, it was just too good. this shows what a genuius you are. Its not an easy task to build up on another story but the way you have built up, its toooooooooooo good. I like it soooooooooooooo much, i would so want the real show to be like this. How i wish you were one of the writers of the show. Your each and every update reflects the most beautiful attribute that is the power of pen and how can one use it to the optimum. The mayur fight was the highlight for me and oh my gosh, i am so excited to see who wins the challenge and waht would mayank or nupur would have to do. Please update soon. You have as usual made my heart flutter and flutter. Awesome job. Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#333

Hey yaar...!

I was waiting soooo long for you to update and what an update it was!!

It was exactly like watching a new episode of MJHT. You put scenes with every character and everything was really balanced between scenes...

Now let me come to the Mayur scenes! I sewar I didn't watt it to end...and Nupur's teasing, it was so in character of her to say " Main apni akad dikhane main believe karta hoon"!! How do you think of such fitting dialogues!

And Samrat and Gunjan...the way she was hesitating before going to sit with him...such little things add so much!

Uday and CJ were great too! I can't wait to see Mayank and Nupur's reaction to them!

Please update soon this time yaar, I'm already so impatient to read what happens with the bet Mayank and Nupr made! I have an inkling that Mayank is going to lose...I hope he does. It will be fun to see what Nupur makes him do...

Keep up the good work!!

🤗

Nidhi

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Anshul

@anshuls

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#334

GAZAB!! wat a wonderful update👏👏

i simply loved all MayUr nokjhoks,especially d one in wich they kept coming closer to each other while telling CJ abt their trip!!😉

even SaJan scenes were gud!! n Nupur's challenge....BY GOD,whr do u get these ideas frm??❓

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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Arpita Madan

@Arpita.Madan

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#335

hey pallavi di (i figured you're older than me since i'm in 10th grade and even though i dont really know by how much you're older than me i was like oh well. lolz) anyway i LUVED your update!!......real cute!!! n Nupur's challenge was soo funny! 😆 aur haan sorry i didnt reply earlier but btw i read it the moment you updated.....but it was really late at night....and so cudnt reply.....isiliye tho achi neend aayi mujhe! 😃 and ya....i dont live in India, i live in saudi arabia, and so our weekends are not saturday sunday.....they're thursday and friday.....weird i know....tho isliye i had to go to skool....anyway thanks for updating!!!
luv
Arpita

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sweet_charmed

@sweet_charmed

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#336

omg.. this has got to be one of ..if not best ff that i have ever read.. 👏i feel like i'm actually watching the show..i love the dialogues.. nupur and mayank'z dialogue are soo funnyy..😆😆😆 .. the writing style..everything.. keep up the great work.. can't wait to read ur next update

Your fan 😛
Palu 😃

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#337

HI PALLAVI!!!

GREAT UPDT!!!! SAMMY IS TRYING TO IMPRESS GUNJAN!!!WOW!

GREAT MAYUR IN CLASSES!!!

CUTE MAYUR'S TRIP FIGHT!!!

I CAN IMAGINE CJ & UDAY LAUGHING!!!!!

CANT WAIT 4 NEXT PART!!!

IM SO EXITED!!!

CONT SOON!!! WHEN U HAV TIME!!!

SEE YAA!!! LOVE UUU!!!

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: ananya_s
wow pallu awesome update tha yaar......i really want 2 see wat mayu will do now....plz jaldi se update kar de

Hey Ananya!! Thanks soooo much yaar!! Jo hukum jaldi update karungi iss bar!! Love you!! 🤗

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: sanah tendulkar

haan..toh...finally aapka update aa h gaya...!!!! 😊

by god....!!! mujhe toh lag raha tha ki tere is update ka w8 karte karte kahin mai budhi na ho jaun..!!😆😆

anyway..woh kehte hai na...better late thn never...der aaye par durust aaye...!!kya kehte ho...!!😆😆

so....mai toh abhi reply karne bhi nai wali thi ji...mai bahut gussa thi aapse....!!!😔😔😔

par ...aapka update padh k toh dil khush ho gaya by god...!!!!😃😃

as usual bahut h superb update tha....!!!!

toh iske liye-

👏

aur yeh bhi-

🤗🤗 🤗 🤗

Nupur: Arrey Gunjan tujhe nahin pata'woh monkey mayank haina? Suraj ugte hi class mein pahunch jaata hai'abhi abhi toh humari dosti hui hai'class mein late gayi toh woh toh mujhe chodega nahin by god!

Omg...!!! ths was so hilarious...!!!!!suraj ugte hi class me...!!!!!by god ...!!! yeh toh mayu p h chutkula ho gaya...!!!!😆😆😆

oh n by d way...!!! evrybdy seemd 2 b in a hurry huh...!!!😆

achanak sabko college jaane ki kya jaldi mach rai hai...!!! interesting..!!😆😆😛

awww😳😳..i luv mayu's mum yaar....!!!! she's so sweet ....n u literally portray ths sweetness in ur ff....i can really imagine their scenes....!!!😳😳😳

mayur ki nok jhok toh is alwyas brillant yaar....ths one was exceptionally gud....!!!

n finally......!!!

ooooooooooooooo.......mayank ko challenge....!!! woh bhi class m ek bhi answer na dene ka....!!!!!!!!!! mayu toh bura phasa....!!! 😆

ab voh kya karega...!!

bt i hope n wish ki mayu yeh contest jeet jaye...!!!!plzzzz....!!!!mayu ko jeetana...!!!!

n mayu n nups rxn on uday n cj..!!!😆😆😆

brillant update yaar....

keep writing....!!!!

luv u...!!!🤗

xxx

sanah..!!

Haan to mahodaya Sanah jee finally apne comment kar diya!! Mujhpe reham kardiya apne thank you very much ji. hehe update pad ke gussa gum? 😆😆 Waah yaar that has to be the best compliment ever!! Maybe that's how I should advertise my FF now...update pado, shant raho!! 😆😆 Arreyy mera update sirf ek din hi toh late tha, itni jaldi budhi ho jaygi kya tu? 😆 thanks for the taaliyan and hugs woh bhi itni saari!! kya baat hai yaar now i feel happy!! hehe glad you liked my suraj chutkula!! 😆😆 i feel so happy when other people also laugh at my chutkula's yaar not just me laughing at them by myself so thanks for boosting my ego!! 😆😆 hehe haan i thought it'd be cool to show everyone in a rush!! tujhe nahin pata inh sabko jaldi kyun thi? meri hint nahin samjhi tu? *shakes head* kya hoga apka mahodaya sanahji...chal koi baat nahin main batati hun....yeh pyaar ka mamla hai boss, idhar aisayich hota hai! 😉 ab samjhi tu? i think you need some pyar-vyar ishq mohabbat classes!! aww thanks that you liked the mom scene!! I know I lovee mayu's mom in the show can't resist writing about her every chance I get!! yay you liked the nok-jhoks!! you know sab yehi request kar rahen hain ki mayu jeet jayee!! ab main kya kar sakti hoon yaar....tum sab ka hukum sarankhon par!! *hint hint* 😆😆 Thanks a billion yaar teri comment pad ke I felt soo happy!!! Aur woh bhi itni rang birangi comment!! 😆😆 Love youuu!!! 🤗

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#340

Originally posted by: debby
Pallojee..!! 🤗🤗Kaise ho aap?

Finally got to read ur update.. I wanted to read it earlier in d day but pehle kuch iritating bache ghar aa gaye, uske baad light chali gayi toh main padhne lagi.. phir jab login karne wale thi toh phone bajne lage dhadad, ab jaake time mila.. phew!
Kaafi kuch hua na is update me? I liked the sister scene with Nupur raving abt how she didnt want to get late and Mayank behaving the same way at home.. esp his Mum's dialogue - ek yeh aur ek iski Nupur.. haha, truly kamaal ki jodi hai! 😳
Samrat and Benji always manage to rock; theirs is a friendship I really like and you described it so well! I think Benji will knw Samrat is falling for her even before he realizes it himself.. lol
Ok then the Nupur-Mayank-CJ scene, I was waiting for one of those. I hope we get one on the show too. What a fight - so typically Mayur. They are so cute!! And hey, the challenge idea is so much fun. You knw u reminded me of a truth and dare game we once played in school.. sum1 was dared to ask 5 stupid questions in class to one of the strictest teachers we had.. poor guy managed to do it but baad me jo dhulayi hui dare dene wale ki, wo nazara toh dekhte hi banta tha! Lets see what Mayank does.. I cant wait for this part. And oh, I can well imagine their expressions on seeing CJ and Uday together.. hahaha.. thunder struck!

Agla update kab aayega? *taps fingers on the table with a stern look* jaldi jaldi karna.. warna threats toh yaad hai na? Thanks for this wonderful treat Pallo.. love you lots.. hugs!! 🤗

Debbyjiii!!! 🤗

Main tu theek hoon ap sunayiye? Thanks yaar for liking all those scenes!! Main toh dhanya hogayi!! 😆 Yaa I hope we get a mayu-nupur-cj scene in the show too. Im missing those. hehe glad you liked the fight I had fun writing it! ahahaha that truth dare story of yours is hilarious!! Bichara!! but you know that story would've been hilarious in canada cuz here profs/teachers are always like "there's no such thing as a stupid question"...blah blah blah....toh if that guy asked 5 stupid questions, the prof wouldn't be able to say anything to him...toh iss case mein prof ka nazara dekhne layak hota!! 😆😆

Arreyyy another dhamki Debbyji!!! 😲😲 kya baat hai yaar kuch zyaada maar dharad wali movie shovies to nahi dekh rahi aaj kal?? sweet sweet Debby se tu kya tapori ban rahi hai aajkal. koi bhai logon ke saat teri setting-wetting to nahin hai na? agar hai toh bata de aur mujhe bhi unka number dede...kya patah future mein kabhi kaam aajaye!! 😆😆😆

No no yaar love YOUU lots!! 😃

Aajaa jhappi paleeyyy!! 🤗

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