Kahani hamare Romeo aur Juliet ki(RN) NOTE pg16 - Page 5

Simply superb. Truly hav no words to express. How do u do it??? Everything was so nice n perfect. RN meeting was gr8 but fiest meeing me hi kiss woh bhi do do. Must say very fast they r.😉😉 But the poor babies fell in luv 4 the 1st tym n dat too wid enemies.

The song selections wer gr8, perfect wid the situation. 👏👏👏

Btw I liked it when u said Raj was honey n girls wer bees. That indeed is true. 😳😳😳

W8ing to knw their luv story. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

woooh! gr8 part yaar, pehli mulaqat mein hi kiss? lol well lage raho raj bhai....but i loved the way naveen said "i'm supposed to be the flirt in the story but he's stealing all the limelight..."

the update was really mindblowing👏👏👏, raj is the hottie in k.m.a and has nt found his dream girl.... that ritu , just as alwz after raj and navin is jealous of raj,..... wish they were frnds...

that sounds too good

Thx for writing another nice fiction.....

This part was soo filmy....song sequences dance....Raj fell in Naina's arms....Navin snatched naina from raj....all was so nice to read...

Do update..

Sorry for being so late...in posting my comments

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Simply superb. Truly hav no words to express. How do u do it??? Everything was so nice n perfect. RN meeting was gr8 but fiest meeing me hi kiss woh bhi do do. Must say very fast they r.😉😉 But the poor babies fell in luv 4 the 1st tym n dat too wid enemies.

The song selections wer gr8, perfect wid the situation. 👏👏👏

Btw I liked it when u said Raj was honey n girls wer bees. That indeed is true. 😳😳😳

W8ing to knw their luv story. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

Hey thanks alot for the appreciation. Hehehe well i just try hard and its all of u guys that make it so successful.

Yeh this was love at first sight after all to ab sab kuch fast hee hoga na

I'm glad u enjoyed it all and liked the songs too.

Yes Raj is definitely honey 😆

Sure their love story is going to be an interesting ride.

Originally posted by: springsign29

he update was really mindblowing👏👏👏, raj is the hottie in k.m.a and has nt found his dream girl.... that ritu , just as alwz after raj and navin is jealous of raj,..... wish they were frnds... - Thanks alot for loving the update. Yeh he is the hottie after all Raj jo thera. hmmmmm well in this one they are quite the opposite.

naina and raj started reciting "romeo and juliet "😆, and then felt embrassement at their stupidity........but that love for u....

that too at first sight...... - ha it was meant to be funny after all their situation is also similar na

yudi and shalini are an item couple.....😆, shalini beats up yudi if he drinks.................., she is opposite of wat she was in lrl...... - yes isme sab ke sab alag hee hai

but now both of them know that they are frm each other 's enemy side......😔 😔 😔 😔.......... - dreadful truth i know. Well lets see how they fight through it

plz update soon this time...................... - i'll sdurely try.

Originally posted by: crackpots86

That was awesome dear...!!!👏 - thanks alot Dhara

Poor Rajveer still hasn't met Naina...😭 - hmmm yeh poor thing

God seems to be diwaane about Hindi movies....saar a staff is actors n actresses...I m sure He is enjoying their company as well...😉 - hahaha ab kya kare sab ke sab osee me lage huwe hai to how can God be left behind

The idea of going to the ball with a partner of the same gender was very different...as in never ever used anywhere before...😃 - yeh it hasnt been used before

Poor Rajveer.....Never thought he could be this silly....😆 His friends choosing his 'dream girl' for him...😆 - bechaara hai isme wo. hahaha

Yudi and Shalini thing was very funny...I could actually imagine Shalini beating Yudi...😆 - yeh thats why i put it kyu ke its different na

Navin jelous of our hero... Loved his dialouges.....😆 They were quite funny....😆😆 - im glad u did

Loved the whole Rajveer meeting Naina sequence...😳 - thanks for it

It was soooo cute...😳 - yes it sure was

Aalekh and Yudi actually helped him get his dream girl.....😉 - itne bhi bure nahi hai wo

The dialouges sounded very strange at first😕 and I was actually confused as to what they were talking...and I was soo engrossed in the story that I completely forgot that Romeo and Juliet was supposed to make its way here....😆 - hehehe that was the idea my dear. WO khud bhi to confused the or phir yaad aaya na ke kya karahe hai. Yep Romeo and Juliet ki hee tyo kahani hai yeh

All in all a wonderful part, a great storyline and writing...well I have no words left for your writing...👏 - thanks once again for the appreciation

Looking forward to the next part......hope it comes soon.....😊




Love,
Dhara.....😊

Thanks a lot sea_nyx and prerna1 for the appreciation. I'm glad u luved this part.

@sea_nyx - yes ab yeh love at first sight hai to fast track me karna para na. I'm glad u loved Navin's dialogues.

Originally posted by: diya7000

Thx for writing another nice fiction.....

This part was soo filmy....song sequences dance....Raj fell in Naina's arms....Navin snatched naina from raj....all was so nice to read...

Do update..

Sorry for being so late...in posting my comments

hey thanks a lot for finally finding this fic.

Yes ull be surprised how filmy this whole fic is going to turn out to be 😆

its okay.

Originally posted by: vvdn

Zakaaaaaaaasss update... - thanks a lot

Raj aur Naina ki pehli mulakat is unforgettable...too good plzzzzzzz update soon m lost........ - hehehe it sure is going to unforgettable kyu ke kaafi kuch hogaya osme.

Happy holi Arwa Sorry for replying so late but I was little busy..know wat I am getting married on 27th April...😛 Update was too hilarious n I really liked the descrption of heaven as well as hell. So finally flashback has started ..How can any1 kiss at their very first meeting dear😆😆😆 anyways I really laughed while reading the update Do update soon