Kahani hamare Romeo aur Juliet ki(RN) NOTE pg16 - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago
Arwa...after soooo long ur Back with the BANG!!!

amazing update.....i really enjoyed much...waiting for more.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was so wonderful
and especially the meeting scene
that was hilarious
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

Arwa...after soooo long ur Back with the BANG!!!

amazing update.....i really enjoyed much...waiting for more.....



hey thanks a lot for the appreciation

yeh finally i came back and I'm glad u luved it

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was so wonderful

and especially the meeting scene
that was hilarious
plz continue soon



hey thanks alot for loving this

yeh the meeting scene was funny and gud to see u having a blast reading it.


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Posted: 16 years ago
Superb funny yaar.
Mujhe nahi pata tha ki Raj ye sab bhi karta hai. I mean ishare baaji. Sab se jyada jo cheej mujhe funny lagi thi vo thi Shalu ka MN ko slap karna aur doosra tha chit ki vajah se MB aur Raj me confusion. Par ye MB k liye kis ko select kiya hai? I mean is role ko kaun play kar raha hai?
Poor Raj dear Naina ko kab se ishare kiye jaa raha tha pehle to us ko ishare samajhne me hi itna time lag gaya aur fir pata nahi kahan se har baar ki tarah kabab me haddi ban n Naveen aa gaya beech me aur sochne laga ki Raj Ritu per fida hai. JO kabhi nahi ho sakta. Naina ne kuch had tak smartly apne bhai se bacha liya Raj ko.
Libraray scene was excellent jab sab shock ho gaye the apne saath one by one kisi aur ko dekh k. Par ye Shalu ko kya hua? Y was she behaving like that? Yudi, Raj aur Alekh taiyaari kis cheej ki kar rahe hain ye bhi mujhe samajh nahi aaya.
ud soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

pahle apna fav dial bol deti hun... sooooooooo sorry for late rply...!!! is me naya kuch bhi nahin hai...par kya hai na...sorry aur thanx aise do words hain...jinhe kahin bhi use kar sakte hain...!!! koi kisi ko diamond ka set agar gift me de...to us k ankhon me chamak to aa jati hai...lekin honthon par thanx k alawa aur kuch nahin...vo din dur nahin ki koi kisi ko galati se khoon kar dene k baad bole...'sorry bhai...galati se mistake ho gaya'...!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

ok ok...ab apni boring baton se tumhe irritate na karte hue...tumhare ud par aate hain...!!!😊
yeh fic to funny hai hi...!!! to is k effects to har ek ud me nazar aayenge hi na...!!!😉 😆 😉 😆 😉 😆
Raj ka green signal tha to kisi aur k liye...par naveen ne use red signal samjh liya reetu k liye...!!! vaise bhi raj chahe green signal kisi ko bhi bhejta ...vo naveen k liye red signal hi hota...!!! kyoun ki ek us ki sis hai...to dushri ko vo line maar raha hai...!!! isiliye raj ka accident hona to pakka hai...!!! us k signals hi thik se nahin aa raha hai...!!! simply kaha jaye to...raj ka 'kahin pe nigahain' hai...par naveen ka 'kahin par nishana'...!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
vaise apna raj aaj to bal bal bach gaya naina k wajah se...!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
par ritu ki entry hamesha galat timing par hoti hai...!!! serial me bhi aur ab to us ne fics ko bhi nahin choda... hadh ho gayi...!!!
vaise yeh achha kiya tum ne...maj.bhargav ko is fic me subedar bana diya...!!! akdu kahin ka...achhe se dhulai ki hai us ki shalini ne...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
aur jaise raj ne subedar bharghav ko pataya na...vo mind-blowing tha...!!! matlab...aise kaam to sirf apna raj hi kar sakta hai...!!! vo to master hai in sab me...!!!😉 😆 😉 😆 😉 😆
ok...yudi, alekh, raj yeh sab mil kar naveen ko maza chakhane k liye koi plan bana rahe hain na...!!! ab raj ne apna dimag ladaya hai to...kuch na kuch to khaas hoga hi na dear...!!! ab vo dekhna baki hai...!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉
finally...is ud k bare me to yahi khayal aata hai...ki obviously is fic ka naam tedha hai...in fact yeh fic hi tedhi hai...aur is k uds bhi tedhe hain...par simplly mere fav hain...!!! just like 'kurkure' add...'tedha hai...par mera hai...'...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
do ud fast...dear...!!!😊 😛 😃 😆
Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Superb funny yaar.- thanks alot for the appreciation

Mujhe nahi pata tha ki Raj ye sab bhi karta hai. I mean ishare baaji. - hehehe yeh apna Raj to sab kuch karsakta hai

Sab se jyada jo cheej mujhe funny lagi thi vo thi Shalu ka MN ko slap karna aur doosra tha chit ki vajah se MB aur Raj me confusion. - yeh that was funny and i'm glad u found it so

Par ye MB k liye kis ko select kiya hai? I mean is role ko kaun play kar raha hai? - well haven't really thought of anyone special. shall think abt it later

Poor Raj dear Naina ko kab se ishare kiye jaa raha tha pehle to us ko ishare samajhne me hi itna time lag gaya aur fir pata nahi kahan se har baar ki tarah kabab me haddi ban n Naveen aa gaya beech me aur sochne laga ki Raj Ritu per fida hai. JO kabhi nahi ho sakta. Naina ne kuch had tak smartly apne bhai se bacha liya Raj ko. - ab kya kare bechaare Raj ka bad luck hee kharaab hai. Or sab kuch ulat pulat hee hota hai oske saath

Libraray scene was excellent jab sab shock ho gaye the apne saath one by one kisi aur ko dekh k. - for sure as jhatka jo laga sab ko

Par ye Shalu ko kya hua? Y was she behaving like that? - she was sleep walking

Yudi, Raj aur Alekh taiyaari kis cheej ki kar rahe hain ye bhi mujhe samajh nahi aaya. - hmm dont worry next update me samajh aajaehga
ud soon.



Originally posted by: srojaleen


pahle apna fav dial bol deti hun... sooooooooo sorry for late rply...!!! is me naya kuch bhi nahin hai...par kya hai na...sorry aur thanx aise do words hain...jinhe kahin bhi use kar sakte hain...!!! koi kisi ko diamond ka set agar gift me de...to us k ankhon me chamak to aa jati hai...lekin honthon par thanx k alawa aur kuch nahin...vo din dur nahin ki koi kisi ko galati se khoon kar dene k baad bole...'sorry bhai...galati se mistake ho gaya'...!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe is baat ke bnaad me to chaahu bhi to naraaz nahi hosakti

ok ok...ab apni boring baton se tumhe irritate na karte hue...tumhare ud par aate hain...!!!😊
yeh fic to funny hai hi...!!! to is k effects to har ek ud me nazar aayenge hi na...!!!😉 😆 😉 😆 😉 😆 - ha for sure and im glad u find each part so funny
Raj ka green signal tha to kisi aur k liye...par naveen ne use red signal samjh liya reetu k liye...!!! vaise bhi raj chahe green signal kisi ko bhi bhejta ...vo naveen k liye red signal hi hota...!!! kyoun ki ek us ki sis hai...to dushri ko vo line maar raha hai...!!! isiliye raj ka accident hona to pakka hai...!!! us k signals hi thik se nahin aa raha hai...!!! simply kaha jaye to...raj ka 'kahin pe nigahain' hai...par naveen ka 'kahin par nishana'...!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - gr8 way of putting it. yes for sure bechaare ka signal hee theek nahi hai to accident to hona hee hai or wo phas gaya.
vaise apna raj aaj to bal bal bach gaya naina k wajah se...!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 - she is always her saviour
par ritu ki entry hamesha galat timing par hoti hai...!!! serial me bhi aur ab to us ne fics ko bhi nahin choda... hadh ho gayi...!!! - kya kare oska yehi role hai her jage wrong entry me ghus na
vaise yeh achha kiya tum ne...maj.bhargav ko is fic me subedar bana diya...!!! akdu kahin ka...achhe se dhulai ki hai us ki shalini ne...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - ha had to make him at a position to have fun with him per Shalini ne Nair ko maara tha, Bharghav ko nahi. pata nahi sab kyu confuse horahe hai is baat pe.
aur jaise raj ne subedar bharghav ko pataya na...vo mind-blowing tha...!!! matlab...aise kaam to sirf apna raj hi kar sakta hai...!!! vo to master hai in sab me...!!!😉 😆 😉 😆 😉 😆 - yep osme koi shaq nahi.
ok...yudi, alekh, raj yeh sab mil kar naveen ko maza chakhane k liye koi plan bana rahe hain na...!!! ab raj ne apna dimag ladaya hai to...kuch na kuch to khaas hoga hi na dear...!!! ab vo dekhna baki hai...!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 - Raj ne banaya hai to mazedaar hee hoga. you just wait and watch
finally...is ud k bare me to yahi khayal aata hai...ki obviously is fic ka naam tedha hai...in fact yeh fic hi tedhi hai...aur is k uds bhi tedhe hain...par simplly mere fav hain...!!! just like 'kurkure' add...'tedha hai...par mera hai...'...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - wow thanks a lot and i hope it stays ur favourite all the time
do ud fast...dear...!!!😊 😛 😃 😆


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Posted: 16 years ago
very sorry for late updt was out of town......

though aapki iss unique love story ka yeh part bhi behtareen tha.....

maza aaya jaise raj naina ko signals bhej raha tha aur voh hai ki kuch samaj nahi paati hai..udhar naveen kuch aur hi samaj leta hai......

meeting wala scene brilliant tha..........totally hillarious......

hamesha ki tarah dialouges kamaal k the......

in all bahut hi badiya ud tha.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
Kya majedaar ud tha mujhe to padh k hi lot pot ho gayi. 😆 ishaare me gadbad ho jaati hai aksar aur sach me yahi yahan bhi hua😛 . Mujhe nahi pata tha ki Raj itna bada gadha hai ki aise ishaare karega ki naina ki jagah Ritu us ko samajh legi 😲. naveen ko naraj hona hi tha na kyounki us ko laga ki us ki Ritu ko Raj le gaya.😆
yahan gaana bhi gaa liya maharj ne phir bhi samajh nahi aaya ki vo naina hai ya ritu?😆 Ye MB bhi kahan se aa gaya beech me par Raj ko acche se aata hai mujhe lagta hai kisi ka bhi antenna ghumana.😆 Par ye log kis ki vaatt lagane ka intejaam kar rahe hain.😉
ud soon.

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Kya majedaar ud tha mujhe to padh k hi lot pot ho gayi. 😆 - thanks alot for having fun reading this part

ishaare me gadbad ho jaati hai aksar aur sach me yahi yahan bhi hua😛 . Mujhe nahi pata tha ki Raj itna bada gadha hai ki aise ishaare karega ki naina ki jagah Ritu us ko samajh legi 😲. naveen ko naraj hona hi tha na kyounki us ko laga ki us ki Ritu ko Raj le gaya.😆- hehehe ha yeh ito sabsebara confusion hai ke yaha pe sab ke sab kuch or hee samajhte hai

yahan gaana bhi gaa liya maharj ne phir bhi samajh nahi aaya ki vo naina hai ya ritu?😆
- ha ab kya kare oska dimaag kabhi kabhi tubelight hee ban jaata hai

Ye MB bhi kahan se aa gaya beech me par Raj ko acche se aata hai mujhe lagta hai kisi ka bhi antenna ghumana.😆 - yep our Raj knows it all

Par ye log kis ki vaatt lagane ka intejaam kar rahe hain.😉- hehehe ull soon find out in the next update.
ud soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Guys I'm putting this fic on the hold for the time being.

I Know its been over two months since i updated but i had some problems as im moving away from here now

It would take some more time still for me to get back on track so im sorry if u guys are waiting for this fic.

I'll try to do the update as soon as possible.

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