Kahani hamare Romeo aur Juliet ki(RN) NOTE pg16 - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi guys

I'll be putting this fic on hold for the time being as some thigns have come up and not getting the oppurtunity to update.

As soon as i get the time i'll update it

i know many wud be disappoitned but im sorry for now and i promise i shall come back soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey di,.......must be finding it difficult to manage all the beautiful fics..... its a good idea to take a break from this fic for some time but plz plz do not discontinue it...........it is wonderful and we all can wait eagerly for the time you re-start it................

But do promise that you would continue......And i hope you are feeling better now...........waiting for u to be back in full swing.....hehehe.....take care...
luv,
rajita......
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet.dreamz

Hey di,.......must be finding it difficult to manage all the beautiful fics..... its a good idea to take a break from this fic for some time but plz plz do not discontinue it...........it is wonderful and we all can wait eagerly for the time you re-start it................

But do promise that you would continue......And i hope you are feeling better now...........waiting for u to be back in full swing.....hehehe.....take care...
luv,
rajita......



hey Rajita yeh it is quite difficult but i do manage somehow

yeh i thought let em finish one of my fics forst and then ill continue with this one. dont worry i wont discontinue it.

i shall be back soon

as long as ive got al u supporters.


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: arwa72

Hi guys

I'll be putting this fic on hold for the time being as some thigns have come up and not getting the oppurtunity to update.

As soon as i get the time i'll update it

i know many wud be disappoitned but im sorry for now and i promise i shall come back soon.

No problem dear but try to come up soon n ud it soon too.😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! - thanks alot

Raj ne jabse Naina ko dekha hai apna dimag hi kho baitha hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- for sure kuch or samajh me aata hee nahi hai ose

All night he kept dreaming about Naina and her effervescent beauty!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍- yeh sirf wohi chahyee huwi hai har taraf

Rajveer towel pehen ke Saawariyaa ka Ranbeer Kapoor ban gaya hai and he is singing and dancing in it!!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- oh yeh we all love it

The song is very nice and just perfect for him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊- yeh it is and i'm glad u luved it

Raj kept imagining Naina everywhere aur Yudi ko bhi Naina samaj kar uske saath dance kar raha tha!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣- hehehe paagal deewana hai bilkul

Bechara Yudi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Aaj toh uski izzat ussi ke dost ke haatho loot jaati!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Accha huya time rehte yeh confusion clear ho gaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊- ha my poor Yudi

Yudi was very uncomfortable and started doubting Raj's sexual orientation!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕- i mean cant blame the guy

Ab tak toh sirf Neelu was doubting them issi tarah se chalta raha na toh puri KMA mein yeh baat phail jayegi!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣- hehehe for sure wo din dhoore nahi

Drill ke beech Raj ko Naina dikhi aur woh usse dekhta hi rahe gaya!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍Naina also gave him a shy smile!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳- hehehe yeh dono ka to kuch nahi hone waala

Yahan Raj ki wajah se sab gir gaye by stumbling on his sack and they were all irritated with him!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- yes they were aakhir sab ke liye bigaar diya osne

Ab woh Naina ke saath jaake dance karne laga!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 She tried to warn him but he is just too lost to understand anything!!!!! - ha jab bhi naina ko dekhta hai tab aisa hee haal hota hai ke hosh oh awaaz urjaate hai

When Raj closed his eyes Naina slipped away!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Accha huya kuch pagalpan karne se pehle Naina bhaag gayi!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊- ha warna pata nahi Raj ke saath wo bhi phas jaatee

Pyaar ka bukhar kuch zyada hi chada hai Raj par!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Yudi toh samaj mein aata hai magar kaise usne Naina ko Major Nair mein dekha??😲 😲 😲 😲 😲- it sure was shocking

Suna tha pyaar mein log andhe ho jaate hai par itne andhe ki apne pyaar ka chehra ish kadar bigaad de yeh nahi suna tha!!!!! - hehehe ha for sure yeh kabhi nahi huwa

Raj toh usse kiss bhi karne jaa raha tha!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢Uski wakai satak gayi hai!!!!!!🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪- lost it completely

Raj bhi soch raha hai ke usne Naina ka khubsurat chehra Nair pe kaise imagine kiya and he felt sick!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 😕- finally bheja me se bhussa nikla and he came back in time

He actually puked all over Nair's face!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆That was really funny!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣And I Iove him for doing it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗- yeh osne ham sab ki muraad puri kar li

Raj ko pata tha ke ab toh woh gaya!!!!!! Aur wahi huya Nair ne usse ulti duniya dikha di!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒- ab kaam aisa karega to saza to milnee thee na

Nair had also hung Raj on an insecure branch which creaked!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡And he actually said ke yaha pe kayi cadets ki kabar khode chuki hai aise!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡- ha khatarnaak saza di ose

Raj kept dreading about the branch snapping!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔- poor him

Raj apne dosto se help maang raha hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Woh bhi kam nahi hai aise dost ho toh dushman ki kya zaroorat hai!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡- sahi me, sab ke sab nalayak nikle

Ish condition mein bhi Raj ka mazak banane mein lage huye hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒- sab aise hee hai

Yudi is mad at Raj for making him fall into a mud patch but Aalekh stopped him saying ke yeh thori dair mein apne aap upar pahuchne hi waala hai!!!!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe ha Alekh to hai hee aisa ke ose ziada farak parta hee nahi.

Raj is desperately trying to convince them but Aalekh is not paying any attention as he knew Raj was a number one nautanki!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- yes he knows him inside out

Raj ab gaana gaa raha hai and is shedding crocodile tears as he knew Yudi would melt!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊- yes kyu ke wo jaanta hai ke Yudi bohat hee emotional hai

Yudi couldn't take it anymore aur bahain phailaye Raj ki taraf bhagte huye gaya as if he was running towards his lover and hugged him still with him hung upside down!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣- hehehehe yeh bilkul osee style me and i can see u had gr8 fun reading it

Inki love story phir shuru ho gayi so romantic!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛It was hilarious!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣- it sure was

Aalekh is saying ke honi ko kaun taal sakta hai and they all have to leave one day and iska waqt abhi aaya hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆He is too much!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊- for sure he is too much. kyu ke ose koi farak parta hee nahi. he knows ke kuch hone waala nahi hai

Yudi is crying dramatically and saying that he would miss him and telling Raj not to leave him!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣- ha bohat gehra pyaar jo hai

Yudi is saying to Raj that you will be alright naa!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Did he actually expect Raj to be alright even while hanging down from a tree??🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪- yeh per kya kare Yudi thera na stupid

No wonder Raj got irritated said sarcastically that he is hanging around here as if he is on vacation!!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣- koi bhi ghussa hoga na aise bewacoofo jese sawaal se

Aalekh is also annoyed with Yudi and said his characteristic nautanki saala!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡- yes his famous line

Naina heard the girls talking about Raj and finally Naina found out from Navin what had happened to Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊- ha ose to khabar milnee hee thee

Navin thinks he deserved it and is angry that people are sorry for him!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡- ha ab nafrat jo karta hai Raj se

Naina kitna pareshan ho gayi thi isilye bahana banake Navin ke paas se nikal gayi!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊- ab wo bhi to ustaad hai na
When Naina saw Raj her heart ached to see him in that position and she began running towards him!!!!! - pyaar ka dard sehnahi jaata

Naina Raj ko bula rahi hai aur usse lag raha hai ke upar se bulawa aaya hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- ha Raj bhi ek number ka dumbo hai

Raj bhi naa!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Har waqt Naina Naina karta rehta hai aur jab Naina aati hai toh socha bhagwaan bula rahe hai!!!!!🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪- sach me marne ke darr se pagla gaya hai

But obviously his brain is not working now!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- of course it isnt

Phir jab Raj ke dil mein ghanti baji tab jaake he heard music playing in his ears then he knew it was Naina!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳- ha saare signs aaye tab ose yakeen huwa

But in his excitement he jumped and the branch finally snapped and he fell on the ground!!!!!!! - Ouch! i know kaafi chote aayee hogi

Phir he started laughing insanely saying bachgaya and began dancing like a clown!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪- hehehe ab to sach me hee pagla gaya hai

Naina was really worried that his brain had been affected by the fall!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Another branch finished the unfinished task and he passed out!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- ha ab koi bhi worry karne lagega na...ha phir to sach me behosh ho hee gaya

Naina finally rescued him and with Pooja's help managed to carry him to the infirmary!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼- ha aakhir oska hee to haq hai yeh

Yahan sab ulta hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj Naina ko apni baaho mein lene ke bajaye Naina had to rescue him with Pooja's help!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- yes isme sab kuch ulta hee hai to make it funny

Raj ko bachate bachate Naina aur Pooja bhi infirmary mein admit ho gayi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- ha ab sarn jese insaan ko carry karenge to aisa hee haal hoga na

Aalekh keh raha hai bhagwaan bhi Raj se chirgaya aur usse wapas dharti par bhej diya and slapped on Raj's still paining back!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣- yes yeh Alekh kabhi nahi sudrega or Raj ko sata ta rehga

Navin bahut udh raha hai aur Raj ka mazak bana raha hai ke usse do ladkiyan infirmary le gayi!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒- ab yehi to oska kaam hai ke Raj ka mazaak uraaye

Navin ko abhi pata nahi hai ke Raj ko sahara kisne diya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Jab pata chalega toh uski shakal dekhne layak hogi!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- for sure tab dekhenge ke koun kispe hasta hai

Aalekh is getting enraged but Raj is being cool about it and asking Aalekh to ignore him!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊- aakhir ose rishte daari bhi to nibhaani hai

But Navin continued to taunt him and is now singing a song!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡- ha ab Navin to sudharne se raha

Aalekh was going to go and give an answer magar Raj ne rok liya as Navin was only verbally abusing him and he did not se any use of violence in that!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊- yes kyu ke Raj sensible hai

Aalekh told Raj that Navin had insulted Raj that he is not a man!!!!! - ha ab kuch to kehna tha na ose oksaane ke liye

Anger now rose on Raj's face as he was too sensitive about him being a man and it hurt his ego badly if anybody insulted that!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡- of course ab koi bhi mard yeh bardaasht nahi karpaaehga

Aalekh now instigated Raj and Raj was about to go to Navin when he stopped midway and returned back saying uske peet mein dard hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆- heheheh saaree hawa jo nikal gayee oski

Bechara Raj!!!!! Naina ko bolo ke peet pe moov laga de!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊- ha zaroor or agar wo nahi to ham me se koi na koi to tayaar ho hee jaaehga lagane ke liye

Raj kept thinking of getting back at Navin in a more civil way and an evil plan came to his mind!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😈 😈 😈 😈- yes aakhir apna Raj bhi kissee se kam nahi

Raj ne bhi Navin ko mazza chakhane ka soch liya hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼I am waiting to see what his plain is!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊- ha ab Raj ne plan banaya hai to zabardast hee hoga. im sure u all shall enjoy it


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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi guys I'm posting this after some time so i decided to put in a recap first to refresh ur memories.

RECAP

Rajveer was going around the academy insanely in love with Naina and he kept seeing her everywhere. he mistook Nair as Naina and then got the harsh punishment of ulti dunya. Naina came to save him and he fell down with a thud and she carried him to the infirmary with pooja's help. Then in the mess Navin made fun of Rajveer with his group and Rajveer decided to teach him a lesson in a more civilised way.

now for the part.

Part four

The plan had been made and now they were ready to go for action. The only thing left was to wait for the right time. Rajveer had instructed Yudi to get all the necessary things and Yudi being the commander's nephew could practically do anything he wished.

After Rajveer left the mess he went around in search of Naina as he didn't get a chance last time. So much was left to tell her but everytime he met her he simply lost all the words. As he went around in the corridor he finally spotted her with her group of friends. He stood agaisnt the wall and kept staring at her as she just looked out of the world. Her sweet smile was enchanting. The way she moved her head slightly to the right when she got excited made her look completely like a small innocent child and Rajveer just couldn't stop admiring her. Music began playing in the background.

Aakhon ki ghustaakhiya maaf ho

He put his hands out pointing towards her and automatically began getting drawn towards her in a trance.

Aakhon ki ghustaakhiya maaf ho

Ek tuk tumhe dekhtee hai

Jo baat kehna chaahe zubaan

Tumse yeh wo kehti hai

All of sudden the tape got scrambled and he came back to his senses with an abrupt halt.

"Oh God why is he here?" he spoke to himself as he saw that some distance away from Naina was Navin. He was also with his group pf friends. Now he knew that it would be difficult to talk to her. But he was not going to give up especially when only half an hour was left before lights out and then he would have to wait till next morning. He began thinking that he won't survive till then. He hid behind the wall near her and then peeked out.

"Pst…pst.. Naina" he whispered so only she can hear but when he looked out he saw she hadn't heard anything. He scrunched his face and then called out to her again. "Naina…look over here."

Finally she heard something in her ear and she began looking here and there. The voice felt like a fly buzzing around her and she hated flies. She brushed her hand in the air as if to move the fly away and then resumed talking again.

He felt like banging his head on the wall as this girl was impossible. Then he thought of something else and he took something out from his pouch and then aimed it towards her and it was bullseye. She got hit.

"Aaaw." She yelped out loud and then turned to see who the insolent person to hit her like that was. "Koun hai batameze…" she paused when she saw Rajveer signalling her to be quiet and her voice choked.

Navin and others also turned at her scream and he wondered what happened to her but she very curtly covered it up and then Navin resumed back to his conversation.

Naina wanted to go to Rajveer but she knew that Navin would catch her so she stood where she was and signalled back to Rajveer as to what was he doing. She lip synced to him, "what is it?"

"I want to talk to you." He lip synced back.

She kept giving him curious looks as she didn't interpret anything he was saying. He really wanted to bang his head on the wall now. Then he tried again with sign language and made all these funny actions that she got lost even more.

What both of these didn't know was a few distances away, was Ritu's group too and she had turned around a while ago and had spotted Rajveer but she hadnt seen Naina. The way Rajveer was signalling and making all those actions she thought he was trying to tell her something.

"Hey Ritu I think RV is trying to tell you something." One of her friends teased her and Ritu blushed and just smiled.

Navin was just going towards Ritu when he paused and he also saw Rajveer in the far corner signalling towards her. He was really irritated and wanted to box his ears right then but he saw how Ritu was also enjoying this so he waited to find out what exactly was going on.

In all of this Naina was the one who still didn't understand what the guy was trying to tell her. She thought, "why doesn't the idiot just tell me in plain words?"

It was as if Rajveer read her mind and a light bulb lit in his head. He then removed a small paper out of his pouch and he wrote something down in it. Then he folded it up into a paper aeroplane and then he signalled towards Naina again that he is sending her the note.

Ritu saw it and wondered what was he sending her and then Navin was also thinking the same thing. As Rajveer threw the plane he put on a rather strong arm and instead of it landing near Naina it flew all the way and hit Navin on the face.

Rajveer hit his head and bit his tongue. "are yeh wrong number kese lag gaya." He quickly hid behind the wall and Naina tried to go over and get that note before Navin saw it.

The note was on the ground and Navin picked it up and he read it but then Ritu came and snatched it from him. "Excuse me Navin, but this is my note." And then she left with it in her hands. Navin was now going to kill Rajveer so he began striding towards him as he knew he was somewhere behind that wall.

Rajveer quickly wrote another one and threw it and this time it did land next to Naina but she couldn't pick it up as Navin just passed her. "Hey bhaiyya where are you going?"

"I've got some unfinished business to handle."

His voice made Rajveer peek out from behind the wall and he saw that Navin was approaching. "Are yeh saand to yehi aaraha hai…Raj beta bhaag le yahase." He saw that Naina had Navin involved so he quickly ducked out of there not looking back.

Naina convinced Navin that she needed some help from him and took him away with her but forgot the note on the ground. Meanwhile the previous note was still in Ritu's hand and as she got to her room she read it and got excited.

"I'll be waiting for you in the common room after lights out."

She jumped up and down with joy as finally Rajveer had agreed to meet her and she knew what this meant. This meant that he also had feelings for her. This was just amazing and she checked her watch and saw that it was nearly time so she got ready for it.

Here Rajveer was still running under the impression that Naina must have seen his note. As he ran he thought, "why am I running? I haven't even done anything." He stopped and started laughing at his own stupidity. Then he checked his watch and saw that lights out had already happened and it was time to go and meet Naina. He made his way towards the common room in haste but collided with someone he always liked to avoid no matter what.

The man he had collied with glared at Rajveer and began snarling at him. He never thought the best of Rajveer and he knew he was nothing more than a trouble maker. "What do you think you're doing at this time Cadet Shekhewat?"

This man always got on the edge of Rajveer's nerves so he made a face but then supressed his annoyance. "I'm sorry Subedaar Bharghav but I was just going towards my room."

"Is that right," he gave him a sharp look. "As far as I remember the boy's hsotel is not this way," he pointed towards the back from Rajveer, "but that way."

Rajveer thought about that and then gave an innocent smile, "I know I guess I did get a bit lost. You know what I think I'll just turn around and make my way there." He turned around to go but Bharghav stopped him.

"Just wait right there cadet." Bharghav stepped forward and prevented Rajveer's way. Rajveer halted and sighed as he knew what was coming. "how long has it been for you in this academy." He didn't let Rajveer answer that, "as far as I remember you're a senior cadet right?"

"Yes sir." Rajveer bowed his head and spoke like an innocent child.

"I didn't hear that, what are you a small child? Speak up cadet."

"Yes sir." He raised his voice like a soldier.

"Good, now what do we say when we've been very naughty?" he gave an evil grin.

"I'm sorry sir." He again spoke like a child was being told off.

"What do you mean you're sorry?" Bharghav flipepd his head, "this is the problem with your generation. Simply you do the wrong deed and think everything will be alright by saying sorry." He shakes his head. "When will you guys become responsible and start behaving like true soldiers. When will you guys stop fooling around and take things seriously. When will you guys…" he continued with his lecture and Rajveer just kept staring at him simply getting bored. He felt like strangling the incorrigible fool in front of him but he knew that violence wasn't always the answer.

He thought, "iska kuch karna parega." Then he looked apologetically at Bharghav and made a remorseful face. "You're absolutely right subedaar Bharghav. We should really take your example and move forward in life. You've shown us all how responsbile you've to be in the army and…" all of a sudden he went into mute mode but kept moving his lips as if he was speaking normally.

For a while Bharghav kept staring at him and thinking that what happened. He pretended to hear him properly but he couldn't hear a thing so he reached his ear and removed his hearing aid and began adjusting it so he can hear Rajveer more clearly but still there was no volume. He adjusted it to the highest and put it back in his ear and just then Rajveer got a chance and he took out his flute and blew it creating havoc in Bharghav's ear. Bharghav held onto his ear whilst Rajveer laughed out loud and got out of there before the clown caught him again. Since Rajveer had joined the KMA he had always wondered why Subedaar Bharghav was still allowed in the army when he was physically impaired. Till date he didn't get his answer but he knew he would get it one day. The man always bored all the cadets with his none ending boring lectures of how to be responsible and just got on everybody's nerves. But Rajveer knew how to take care of him.

It took him a while to reach the common room but he got there. Since the ligts were closed he couldn't see clealy but he knew this was the right room and he quickly entered. "Naina? Naina are you here?" he whispered but he heard no sound so he realised she hadn't come yet. Then he was going to open the lights. "nahi, lights ko me oske aane ke baad hee kholunga. Yeah." He walked inside and took out his small torch and began searching in the room for things and making some arrangements.

He sat there for five minutes still waiting with everything ready. He held a guitar in his hand and it was well tuned to his base. Then he heard the door open and he readied himself. Then there was the sound of heels clicking and he knew that she had entered. "Don't open the lights and just follow my voice." The lady agreed and followed his lead and stood there waiting for what he said.

At the same time another room was opened and a man stepped in where it was the similar atmosphere. The lights were closed and the room was lit by the dim night sky outside. The man walked in and went near the window where the lady stood and just embraced her from behind.

Here Rajveer began strumming the guitar and filled the air with his soft music. Then he began wooing his lady.

"Tu hi meri shab hai subha hai, tu hi din hai mera

Tu hi mera rab hai, jaha hai, tu hi meree dunya

Tu waqt mere liye hai, me hu tera lambha

Kese rahega bhala, hoke tu mujhse judaa

O o o o o o o o o o o o oo o o

O o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o"

He got off the table he was sitting on and began walking towards her

"Tu hi meri shab hai subha hai, tu hi din hai mera

Tu hi mera rab hai, jaha hai, tu hi meree dunya

Tu waqt mere liye hai, me hu tera lambha

Kese rahega bhala, hoke tu mujhse judaa

O o o o o o o o o o o o oo o o

O o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o"

He closed the door and then took her hand and took her towards the table and then lifted her and made her sit. She felt different but he was too absorbed in the magic that he didn't take much notice.

"Aankho se parke tujhe, dil pe maine likha

Tu ban gaya hai mere jeene ki ek wajah

Ho aankho se parke tujhe, dil pe maine likha

Tu bangaya hai mere jeene ki ek wajah

Teri hasi, teri adaa, auron se hai, bilkul judaa

O o o o o o o o o o o o oo o o

O o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o"

He was quite close to her and her hair flowed on his face. Now the dim light from the night sky slightly fell on her face but only her eyes could be seen and he just got lost in them.

"Aankhen teri shabnami, chehra tera aaina

Tu hai udaasi bhari, koi haseen daastaan

Ho aankhen teri shabnami, chehra tera aaina

Tu hai udaasi bhari, koi haseen daastaan

Dil mein hai kya, kuch to bata, kyu hai bhala, khud se khaafa

O o o o o o o o o o o o oo o o

O o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o"

He took her hand and softly kissed it

"Tu hi meri shab hai subha hai, tu hi din hai mera

Tu hi mera rab hai, jaha hai, tu hi meree dunya

Tu waqt mere liye hai, tu hee mera lambha

Kese rahega bhala, hoke tu mujhse judaa

O o o o o o o o o o o o oo o o

O o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o"

The lady in the other room felt something strange on her bare neck. "Hey when did you grow a moustache?"

The man laughed, "come on darling I know you're joking. You've known I've always had a moustache." He snuggled into her more and the lady found his voice weird too. She felt soemthing was not right and needed to open the lights.

Back in Rajveer's room the lady was owed by him. "I never knew you had such a beautiful voice."

After hearing that Rajveer felt weird, "and I also never knew you had such a voice. Yeh tumhaaree aawaaz ko kya huwa, kuch peeke aayee ho kya?"

"Come on sweety mazaak choro. Mujhe to lagta hai ke tum kuch peeke aaye ho." She tried smelling him and Rajveer went back a bit as what was she doing. This was way too weird for his Naina and he started to have doubts. He moved slightly away from her but she simply kept coming closer. He moved further and she moved along with him. "Kya huwa mujhse yu dhoore kyu jaarahe ho?"

He gave an innocent half laugh, "nothing much I just wanted to open the lights now. You know its getting a bit creepy here."

She held him closer, "leave the lights as it is more romantic this way." She ran her finger on his face giving him goosebumps but not in the melting way but in a creepy way. Her touch didn't give him the same sensation as he had with her before. Neither did he hear the DING DONG of his heart or the soft tunes so this was definitely foul play. He tried moving away but she held onto his arm holding him back.

In the other room the lady was trying to move the man away but he also didn't resist and kept asking her why she was running away. "I'm afraid of the dark so please let me open the lights."

"When I'm with you then why are you so scared?"

Rajveer was also struggling, "Dekho mujhe yeh lights on karne do to choro mujhe." In both the rooms all four of them were struggling with each other and in that struggle the light switch was finally found and the lights opened. Then there was a shock for few seconds. Then it was followed by silence for another few seconds. Then came the thing which was most expected and four loud screams were let out.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!" The lady with Rajveer was shocked out of her wits as she was not with someone she had expected.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!" Rajveer screamed as he saw that the lady he was romancing with was not Naina but was Dr. Natasha.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!" the lady in the other room was shocked to see that she was in the wrong room and with the wrong man. In front of her was not Rajveer but was Subedaar Bharghav.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!" finally Subedaar Bharghav was the one to scream as he realised that he was with Ritu and not his Natasha.

All four of them stood like statues in front of each other as if the life from them had been extracted. The only good thing that came out of this was that their scream remained only within the walls of the rooms otherwise the whole academy would have woken up to witness their crime.

Then there was some movement when eventually Dr. Natasha fainted and Rajveer was in more shock. He ran towards her and tried reviving her. "Ma am? Ma am?" he shook her but she didn't come to. Then he lightly slapped her but she didn't stir. "Oh god yeh hamesha mere saath hee kyu hota hai." He laid her down on the ground and stood up. "Well ab jo huwa so huwa per isse pehle ke koi aajai beta Raj bhaag le yahase." He went towards the door but he heard some shuffling so he closed the doors again. "Oh no who could it be? Agar wo BC huwa or osne mujhe aise dekh liya to me to aaj..." looks heavenwards indicating he would be dead. Then he opened the doors again and peaked out and saw no one was there so he sighed and crept out quickly before that person returned.

In the other room Ritu and Bharghav were still in a state of shock but soon one of them snapped out and fainted and it wasn't Ritu but Bharghav. Ritu felt sick that she was in the room with that guy and quickly ran out shrieking and making sure no one found her in that position.

Rajveer had begun to walk back towards the hostel but he heard some footsteps nearby so he became cautious and moved slowly. He waited to know where exactly were they headed and when it seemed like they were getting close he increased his speed and then turned into running. Who ever was on his trail was not going to leave him so he changed the course and went down from the other corridoor and just kept running blindly when at last he collided with someone yet again.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!" He let out from the sudden encounter.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!" the person he had collided with also screamed from the sudden encounter.

"Abhe tum dono nautanki company kya karahe ho? Puree academy ko jaagaana hai kya?" Alekh covered both of their mouths to stop them from screaming like stupid kids.

Finally Rajveer and Yudi calmed down and then Alekh removed his hands away from their mouths. "What the hell are you guys doing here?" Rajveer was still a bit jumpy and then vexed with his friends for giving him a fright.

"We were searching for you since you forgot about our meeting." Yudi spoke as a matter of factly.

Then Rajveer remembered the whole plan and slapped his forehead. "Sorry guys per is Naina ke chakkar me sab bhool gaya."

"I'm telling you man, ek na ek din wo tujhe zaroor marwaaehgee." Alekh warned Rajveer.

"That would be my lucky day." He spoke dreamily but then Alekh slapped his back to bring him back. "Okay guys we better get to work before someone really does catch us." He led the way back to the hostel. "Yudi you did get everything I asked you for."

"Yes you've told me umpteenth times to how am I to forget?" he took everything out to show him. "Here is the bucket and here is the stuff."

"And where is the rope?" Rajveer checked in the things and then made a face at Yudi.

Yudi searched and bit his tongue, "I thought I forgot something." Rajveer and Alekh both got aggitated, "I'm sorry but I'll get it from the room as it is there." The guys shook their heads as Yudi was simply impossible. Then they continued walking when they halted and quickly hid behind the wall.

"Yeh saale mucchar ko bhi yehi waqt milta hai ghoomne ka?" Alekh spoke through gritted teeth as he peeked out from the wall.

"Sssssh…if he'll find out we're here after lights out then all of our lights would be out." Rajveer quietened him down as he thought of a plan.

"Oh no guys it's Shalini." Yudi looked horrified as he looked out and saw Shalini walking down the corridors. "And she is coming this way only. I've got to stop her." Yudi was about to go when Rajveer held onto his collar and pulled him back.

"Don't be stupid Yudi and just wait and watch what happens."

They had no choice and they watched from behind the wall. Shalini kept walking in their direction but as if she couldn't see anything around her. By the looks of it she didnt even notice Major Nair was in front of her too. She kept walking oblivious of anything.

"Cadet Singhal what are you doing here after lights out?" Major Nair confronted her when he turned around. When she didn't answer and walked passed him he gruffed and insisted on knowing what was going on. "Excuse me cadet I'm asking you a question." He spoke in his usual strict voice but still Shalini didn't answer and kept walking forward as if she was in a trance. Then Nair grabbed onto her arm and he realised he shouldn't have done that.

It was a reflex action as when Nair touched her she turned around instantly and lifted her hand to slap him. She did so and it left a mark on his face as he stood there holding onto his cheek horrified with her action.

All the three from behind the wall burst out laughing as this scene was not seen everyday. Then Shalini continued walking away in a trance again. "Guys she is sleep walking again." Yudi spoke in between his giggles as it was hard to control it. But Rajveer warned them to be quiet as Major Nair was still there and he could catch them. In a way they thanked Shalini as she was the perfect distraction to send Nair away.

Major Nair gruffled and looked here and there to see if anyone saw him or not. When he saw it was coast clear he walked off to his room.

Then the three stepped out and decided to quickly get back to the hostel before the monster decided to return. Yudi excused himself and told him that he would take Shalini back safely before she did more damage and meet them there.

They stood outside in the lobby of the hostel facing a closed door and just waiting. Actually only Rajveer was waiting whilst the other two were getting on with the plan. A huge rope was tied from inside their room all the way down three doors and they had tied it up in a position that whoever would open the door would be trapped. They had hung two buckets on top of the door and everything was set. Now they just needed to wait for the morning bugle to ring and the rest would be history.

End of part

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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Yudi is the commander's nephew so he could get all the things Raj wanted!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Great!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj Naina ko dhundhne gaya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Aakhir usse dekhe bina reh bhi toh nahi sakta na!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina was standing with a group of friends and Raj just stood admiring her and as usual music started playing in the background!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

The song is very nice and just perfect for Raj's day dream!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Waha Navin bhi tha but how could Raj give up??😛 😛 😛 😛After all then he would have to wait till morning aur Naina se mile bagair how will he survive till then??😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj Naina ko bula raha hai and Naina is thinking it is a fly buzzing in her ear!!!!!!🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪

Raj Naina ko ishare kar raha hai magar Naina ko kuch samajh mein hi nahi aa raha hai!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Bechara Raj!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Ek taraf Naina ko uske ishare samajh mein nahi aa rahe thhe aur dusri taraf Ritu ko laga woh usse ishare kar raha hai aur khush ho gayi!!!!

Beech mein Navin aa gaya kabab mein haddi ban kar aur usse bhi laga ke Raj is signalling to Ritu!!!!!

Naina ko hi samajh mein nahi aaya aur usne socha why doesn't Raj tell her in plain words!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Usne socha aur Raj ne jaise sun liye!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊He is really her soulmate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Maybe they should have tried thinking in their minds instead of signalling!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Akhir dil ki baat toh dil tak pahuch hi jaati hai naa!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne note bheja Naina ko magar laga jaake Navin ko aur woh bhi uske muh pe!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Kahin pe nigahe kahi pe nishana!!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Navin ko toh naraz hona hi tha kyunki usse laga ke Raj uski Ritu ke peeche hai and he wanted to kill Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne smartly Navin ko rok liya aur Raj bal bal bacha!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊But she forgot his second note on the ground!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj ne milne bulaya hai yeh padhke Ritu khush ho gayi thinking he also had feelings for her!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj was still running under the impression that Naina must have seen his note!!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Then he thought why is he running aur phir jaake ruka!!!!!

Jaate jaate Raj collided with Subedar Bhargav aur woh lamba chauda lecture dene laga!!!!!!!

The way Raj tackled Subedar Bhargav by first going into mute mode and then blowing his flute was awesome!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

He surely knows how to take care of him!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Aisa kaam sirf apna Raj hi kar sakta hai after all he is the best!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj common room mein ladki ke aate gaana laga andhere mein!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊So romantic!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Yahan dusre room mein bhi waisa hi kuch ho raha hai and a man is hugging a girl from behind!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

The song is very nice and romantic!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj lifted the lady and made her sit on the table aur phir bhi samajh mein nahi aaya ke yeh Naina nahi hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

He got lost in her eyes and kissed her hand!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Raj ko kya phir bhi kuch feel nahi huya??😕 😕 😕 😕

Finally both the pairs started getting doubts!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Raj felt creepy as she touched ran her finger on his face!!!!!!

Her touch is not giving him the same sensation as before aur uske dil ki ghanti bhi nahi baj rahi thi!!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕So this was definately foul play!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Finally after much struggle the lights were switched on and there was shock and then silence for few seconds!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

And then came the thing which was most expected and all four of them screamed!!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆It was hilarious!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Thank God their screams remained within the walls of the room warna pura academy jaag jata!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Dr. Natasha fainted and Raj tried reviving her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Raj ne sahi kaha ke yeh hamesha uske saath hi kyun hota hai!!!!! 😕 😕 😕 😕

Then he decided ke isse pehle ki waha koi aa jaye usse waha se bhaag lena chahiye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Yahan dusri taraf Bhargav also fainted and Ritu was sick and ran out making sure no one found her in that position!!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Hearing footsteps Raj started running and collided with someone yet again and both of them screamed!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Seems like they are holding a screaming match tonight!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Jisse dekho chilla raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Finally Aalekh stopped them from screaming warna puri academy jaag jaati!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj Naina ne chakkar mein meeting bhool gaya!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina ke naam se hi Raj sab bhool jaata hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Aalekh ne kaha ek na ek din Naina usse zaroor marwayegi!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj dreamily said that would be his lucky day!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaaiiii isse kehte hai deewana!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Yudi ko lakh baar kehne par bhi he forgot the rope!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒He is simply impossible!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

They saw Shalini sleep walking!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Yudi wanted to stop her but Raj pulled him back!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalini ko aise dekh kar bhi Nair usse sawal pucch raha hai!!!!!!🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪Usse samajh mein nahi aata kya??😕 😕 😕 😕

Nair grabbed her arm and Shalini slapped him!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Serves him right!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

All three of them witnessed the historic event and burst out laughing!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

It was just like in the serial!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yudi went to take Shalini back safely before she did more damage!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Now everything is set according to Raj's plan and they need to wait for the morning!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Lets see what Raj has planned for Navin!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊I hope his plan is successful!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow just fabulous. Itne dino ka intezaar sarthak hua. I luved thsi part. But then again I luv each n every part u write. 😉😉
Rajveer's lip signals to Naina was mistook by Ritu n Navin. Though it was gud dat Navin thought Raj was signalling Ritu but bechaare ko kaun samjhaye Raj uski behen ko hi signal de raha tha. 😆😆
Aur Ritu ki misunderstanding regarding the note was to lead to a shock but wat actually happened was never ever been thought by me. Subedar Bhargav n Dr. Natasha came in btwn n wat followed was just hillarious.😆😆😆
And mai to iss Rajveer ki fan ho gayi hu. I mean its simply a unique feeling to Imagine Raj like this. The way he tackled Subedar Bhargav was tremendous. Sirf Raj hi aisa kuch kar sakta. He is a Super Cool Genius. 😳😳😳
And lastly Shalini's slap to Bhargav. Mujhe to lagta hai bechare ka aaj din hi kharab tha.😆😆
I hope Rajveer's plan gets successful n we get to witness a historical scene.😉😉😉
PLS CONTINUE SOON.
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Funny ud. 😆
Raj Naina ko siganl karta hi raha par vo bhi na kuch bhi samajh nahi paati hai lagta hai. Raj bhi jaanta tha ki Naina k aas paas us ka hiltler bhai khada hai to plan mushkil hai. Ritu ko bhi na jaane kya padi thi beech me aane ki.
par ye sab ab karna kya chahte hain aakhir?
ud soon
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wow just fabulous. Itne dino ka intezaar sarthak hua. I luved thsi part. But then again I luv each n every part u write. 😉😉 - thanks alot. I'm glad u always luv my work

Rajveer's lip signals to Naina was mistook by Ritu n Navin. Though it was gud dat Navin thought Raj was signalling Ritu but bechaare ko kaun samjhaye Raj uski behen ko hi signal de raha tha. 😆😆 - hehehehe yeh jab osko pata chalega to pata nahi Raj ka kya hoga
Aur Ritu ki misunderstanding regarding the note was to lead to a shock but wat actually happened was never ever been thought by me. Subedar Bhargav n Dr. Natasha came in btwn n wat followed was just hillarious.😆😆😆 - ha it was. Sab ke sab phas gaye
And mai to iss Rajveer ki fan ho gayi hu. I mean its simply a unique feeling to Imagine Raj like this. The way he tackled Subedar Bhargav was tremendous. Sirf Raj hi aisa kuch kar sakta. He is a Super Cool Genius. 😳😳😳 - yep osme koi shaq nahi. Apna Raj is the best
And lastly Shalini's slap to Bhargav. Mujhe to lagta hai bechare ka aaj din hi kharab tha.😆😆 - ummmmm ae wo Bharghav thori na tha it was Nair. Mistake hogayi na but it was funny.
I hope Rajveer's plan gets successful n we get to witness a historical scene.😉😉😉 - yeh lets see ke aakhir hota kya hai
PLS CONTINUE SOON.



Originally posted by: varshita

Funny ud. 😆- thanks alot for finding it so.

Raj Naina ko siganl karta hi raha par vo bhi na kuch bhi samajh nahi paati hai lagta hai. - ha ab kabhi kabhi dimaag switched off hojaata hai

Raj bhi jaanta tha ki Naina k aas paas us ka hiltler bhai khada hai to plan mushkil hai. - hmmm poor guy

Ritu ko bhi na jaane kya padi thi beech me aane ki. - ab oska kaam hee yeh hai

par ye sab ab karna kya chahte hain aakhir? - well u'll find out soon in the next part.
ud soon


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