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Posted: 20 years ago
dat was amazin
wot did kripa c dat ur not tellin us????????
well n*ways
cont soon
cant wait 2 read more
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow awesome!!!! 👏 👏 👏

& continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
Thank you guys for encouraging me to write the fanfic. i will continue on friday.

keep guessing what did kripa witness the previous nights?
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Posted: 20 years ago
well was it angad misbehaving wid a gal
not sure
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well was it angad misbehaving wid a gal
not sure
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Posted: 20 years ago
Plz cont. really SOON....
Gr8 Partz...👏👏👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey guys,
sorry for delaying but i'll cont tomaarrow as i don't write on sundays. 😉 i just came from cinema say Harry potter.

And yes Your mystery Guy's name will be revealed in next part and after sumparts it will be revealed who's playing it! 😉

just wait and watch

luv ya
sanya
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[/FONTKripa has hardly done any shopping as her mind is dozing back to previous nights. She just gave compliments on the products that harshine brought; oh that's nice, it'll look good on you. Hmmm where did you get that from and how much is it? Wow where did you get this from and so on.

Harshine felt that something is wrong but as she could see that she is more stubborn and is complicated for her to let the things spill out from her mouth. She tried it several times to know whether she liked Angad khanna but as usual she would reply; Oh that jerk, don't even talk about his name. You are spoiling my mood, what do you want me to say? I like him, oh get a life harsh. I'd rather marry someone else than him. She would never get the answer that easily that's the one thing she knew. She so much stubborn and can see that she and Angad can share a good relationship as they both do what ever they want. In someway they share some similar things but would not admit it. How ironic is that she wondered, couples that are made in heaven show some interests in each other but them too they won't even look at each other! Oh well what can I do?

They are sitting in the Coffee star caf across each other. The place is packed with so many people that they can hardly hear the light music that is being played in the back ground. The delicious and lovely smell of coffee is spread all over the caf.

Kripa takes out breathe to take in the charming smell of the coffee.

How come you have not bought anything Kripa?, she asked taking a sip of her coffee.

I have everything with me and anyway it's not that important as if we are going to the prom!

Kripa are you feeling alright? She asked eyeing her

What, I am fine she answered back in rather not pleasing manner

No, you are not, I have been observing it . what's wrong with you?

I... I am feeling alright and why are you saying it and what's wrong with me? She said lazily.

It's strange, three days ago you were saying that you want to buy some clothes and now look you can't even remember

Did I ? she questioned pretending not to know anything about. She felt really sorry for harshine because she was lying and she did not want to say anything about the previous night.

Come on Kripa, don't lie to me. Do you not consider me as your friend?

Kripa examined her face and realized that she is serious and see that she is doomed now and she does not have any other choice left.

What are the hell are you on about; she inquired pretending now to kow what she us on about? Of course we are friends, it's just I have a minor headache that's all.

So what are we doing tomorrow? Avoiding the subject

What on Sunday? Kripa have you lost your memory?

Now what? She muttered loudly
Both continued with their conservation and harshine tries her best to get to know what happened to her? she's been unsuccessful as Kripa is so intractable than anyone she ever met. She wondered, how did she get along with her parents and other friends. She is very irritated by her behaviour decided it's best not to talk about this anymore.

They both left the caf and made their way to the home.


He opens his eyes to find himself surrounded in the dark. He tried to remember for how long he has been here? But nothing! He blinked his eyes again and again but nothing happened. He was scared and horrified at the thought may be has become blind as he only can see black and nothing else. He tried to remember how did it happen and how he came here? But nothing.. no respond.


He feel his head aching very badly, he put his hand on his head and suddenly feels like everything is roaming around him and collapses there.



The first thing that kripa did when she back from shopping is lock herself in her bedroom and told her Harshini she need some rest. Harshini even though is aware that something is weird but again there's no point discussing this thing again leaves her on her alone and goes out with her other friends.

Kripa is glad that she got some space decides to check the mail again that she got from her boyfriend. She can't even believe that even being a boyfriend he is saying this thing. She have known him for a long time and now he is behaving strange. This time, his e-mail response is weird and is quite different from others. To clear her misunderstanding she decides to read the mail and get her self sorted out. Maybe she was wrong she thought as she logs onto her e-mail box.

The mail:

Dear kripa,
I am sorry; I could not reply you earlier as I told you earlier that I am busy with my exams. Anyway how are you and how's your Angad? I think you have fallen in for him as in every mail you always talk about him and you only have one or two words about me. You can't hide anything from me as I have know you from a long time. You always seem to have been disapproving about him. Clearly seeing the explanations I think he is not that bad as you think? Maybe you should give him a chance. I don't care how he behaves with you and other girls that's not your problem and anyway why are you being so concerned about him as if you know a lot about him. I miss you lots and hope that you miss me as well.

Love you lots

Neal


What the hell is that? I, kripa Sharma being in love with Angad khanna, that's the funniest joke I ever heard! A rush of anger approaches her and why did he even say that and how did he think that I don't even miss him. She had the sudden urge to reply him and the same time she was angry;

Dear Neal,

I did not expect this thing from you? How could you every say that I don't even miss you, you idiot! "I love Angad khanna", that's the funniest joke I ever heard. You have not even met him and how can you judge him and saying I am wrong. It seems like you do not even trust me. I don't even talk about that stupid, irritating man every time and when eva I m with him; I ended up in trouble .Because of him even in the first time I went to college I ended up in jail!

Bye Bye.

With that she clicked send and she feel like a huge burden lifted of her shoulders and feels more relaxed.



He waked up to find himself in the dark room but again he fears he may lost his eye sight has become blind as he cannot see anything. He cannot see anything apart from black and black yet no strange colour images.



Preview: to find out more just read and wait.

No it's not that he misbehaved with some gal it's something else! Secrets are going to be revealed slowly that will make bring A and K together and Neal going away. Who plays Neal? Any guesses.. nope not Uday Chopra. Lol.. any guesses??

Luv ya
sanya
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow it was a nice part 👏 👏 please cont.soon 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
dat was amzing 👏
cont soon 😃
is it ejaz who's playin neal
and did kripa see a knife with blood in angads hand 🤢 😆
or somebody who's been murdered 🤢
well i have more strange predictions but i am not going 2 write them 😉 cant wait 2 read the next part and reveal who neal is
cant wait for romantic parts 😳
cont soon 😃

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