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[SIZE =6] CONTINUED….


FONT = VERDANA]The darkness surrounds him; he cannot see anything yet again. The first thing came into his mind;'Aaliyah'. He feared as he remembered what happened on that night.

'NO, she cannot be dead'

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She stood there at the corner of the ball, her eyes searching for him.
It is prom night on Sunday yet why is am 1 ruining this beautiful evening by thinking of that murder? She thought.

She watched her new best friend Harshini dancing with Prithiv. She could see the big smile on harshini face and it looks like they know each other a lot.
She wondered why did she not mention about him to her ever before?

Do they know each other, if yes for how long; after all Prithiv and Angad are seen together every time they hang around the college.

Her face got serious as she thought about Angad

-*-*Flashbacks-*-*

She stood there at the edge of the road; the moon glistening on her. It was dark night and the weather was stormy. It was calm night and she glances at the watch and frowns. It has been ten minutes since she stood there waiting for Harshini to come and pick her up

Suddenly she heard screams from the woods. She freezes, she never has had this type of frightening experience in her life, she had fun but not this frightening.
She stood there still wondering what to do. She heard more screaming. She realises that the sound belongs to female. It is the sound of male. She wondered should she help and put her life in the danger.

She took out mobile to dial the police number but to her shock that battery was dead!

She followed where the screams had come from. After sometime she realized she was standing in the middle of woods without realising where she had came from. She was surrounded by the dark and tall trees.

This time she heard the scream very loud and she realized it was nearer.

Suddenly she heard the footsteps. She hides behind the trees and sees:

Angad holding the knife, the knife was read and the blood was all on his hand and some on the knife. She gasps and breathes.

She followed the gaze as the blood drips from the knife, to her horror she seas the dead body!

She stood there frozen, her eyes bulging out and tears of fright roles down on her cheeks. She opens her mouth but little sound came up but she quickly put her hands on the mouth and hides behind the tree.

She stood there for three minutes as Angad looks around to see if there is anyone or not. She hears his footsteps coming nearer, she stands there frozen shocked.
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heya guys,

This is the last parts i am sending here because as i explained i cannot send anymore unless 5th of december. hope u understand. Thankyou for being impatent. 😃 🤗 A hug to u all who reads my fanfic.

Luv ya all
sanya

ps. Keep commenting tell me how it was and yeah giving me ideas to get more A-K scenes.
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nice part Izzy...It's difficult to remember the story if u take so much time for updates...but it's okey I bear wid u coz of ur studies...wish u good luck on ur assignments.... 😊
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it was a nice part izzy 👏 👏 and all the best for ur assignments 😊
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OH MY GOODNESS GREAT JOB!!! 😉 coninue soooooooon
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great job! the suspense is killing me..!
continue soon plz..and add more A-K scenes
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Keeewl, cont soon! 😃
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Hey 5th December is long gone...Continue soon..
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plz continue ur doin so good! I can't wait till ur next post, i hope u post soon
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heya guys,
I apologize for not continuing this fanfic after 5 december because my deadline was delayed. I did have a lot free time and visited I.F but because I am lazy i did not prefer it. I will post the next part today.
promise.

luv ya
sanya
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[SIZE =6] CONTINUED….

previous part, (Incase u forgot)

The darkness surrounds him; he cannot see anything yet again. The first thing came into his mind;'Aaliyah'. He feared as he remembered what happened on that night.

'NO, she cannot be dead'

-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-* -*-*-*-*--*-*--*-

She stood there at the corner of the ball, her eyes searching for him.

It is prom night on Sunday yet why is am 1 ruining this beautiful evening by thinking of that murder? She thought.

She watched her new best friend Harshini dancing with Prithiv. She could see the big smile on harshini face and it looks like they know each other a lot.

She wondered why did she not mention about him to her ever before?

Do they know each other, if yes for how long; after all Prithiv and Angad are seen together every time they hang around the college.

Her face got serious as she thought about Angad

-*-*Flashbacks-*-*

She stood there at the edge of the road; the moon glistening on her. It was dark night and the weather was stormy. It was calm night and she glances at the watch and frowns. It has been ten minutes since she stood there waiting for Harshini to come and pick her up

Suddenly she heard screams from the woods. She freezes, she never has had this type of frightening experience in her life, she had fun but not this frightening.

She stood there still wondering what to do. She heard more screaming. She realises that the sound belongs to female. It is the sound of male. She wondered should she help and put her life in the danger.

She took out mobile to dial the police number but to her shock that battery was dead!

She followed where the screams had come from. After sometime she realized she was standing in the middle of woods without realising where she had came from. She was surrounded by the dark and tall trees.

This time she heard the scream very loud and she realized it was nearer.

Suddenly she heard the footsteps. She hides behind the trees and sees:

Angad holding the knife, the knife was red and the blood was all on his hand and some on the knife. She gasps and breathes.

She followed the gaze as the blood drips from the knife, to her horror she seas the dead body!

She stood there frozen, her eyes bulging out and tears of fright roles down on her cheeks. She opens her mouth but little sound came up but she quickly put her hands on the mouth and hides behind the tree.

She stood there for three minutes as Angad looks around to see if there is anyone or not. She hears his footsteps coming nearer, she stands there frozen shocked.

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NEW Part !

CONTINUED

"KRIPA, KRIPA"

Harshini snapped her fingers infront of her face.

"Hello to Kripa, back to earth"

"What' she said snapping back with a confused look on her face?

She noticed prithiv standing along with harshini, she smiled. She wondered whether prithiv knew anything about it and she was curious to know about the girl, who was she and what had it to do with Angad.

'Sh*t', she thought she does not even know her name, how would prithiv know which PARTICULAR girl she is on about. PARTICUAR, she thought is the most important word in the sentence because He would be seen new girls every new day.

"Kripa, you look stunning" said prithiv. He really did mean it; He never thought Kripa would be that gorgeous. Usually she dresses up that normal and look simple but never thought that she can wear these types of dresses.

Kripa was blushing, 'Oh' she replied in sarcastic tone

'Don't I look beautiful normally?' she asked.

prithiv caught the naughtiness in her tone and was embarrassed.

'oh cheeky boy, I was only kidding, y thank you' she said as her usual way. She can't help it but to tease other people.

She was wearing a lovely white with gold glitter dress that was full to her knee. If she wanted she could have bought the latest dress but she decided not to reveal everything so steadily. She bought the dress quickly before an hour to her prom. She was so engrossed to her thoughts that she did not realized how the time has passed quickly.

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She left the prom early and went straight to her flat. She knew that she could not concentrate on as her thoughts were interrupted by a huge concern;

'Where could be Angad be?'

She remembers girls around gossiping about the lucky girl who could go to the prom with him. How is that possible of him not going to prom? Something is wrong she thought.

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'AALIYAAA' a huge scream escaped his mouth,

'No, she can't be dead' he thought. He wants to get out of here, go somewhere there is light.

He tried to get himself up but no luck. He figured out that he was laying there on the floor as it was hard and yet cold. The cold freezing night sent shivers around his body.

"Angad, Help me" she screamed

She ran faster and faster into the woods. She ran faster and faster and felt the wet drops on her cheeks. she thought 'how stupid as she cannot see it's her own tears'. Her hands were freezing with cold and were plain white' she did not have time to rub her hand and warm her hands or stop to breathe. She continued running and looked back,

Yes, he was still there

'You can't escape from me bl**dy fool' a sharp voice said

Suddenly he appeared in front of her behind the tree.

She stopped there shocked, breathing harder this time.

He grabbed her from her hair and gave tight slap. The next he saw was, she's lying down with her head bleeding.

Angad appeared from behind him bashed him a lot. They were both fighting. Suddenly the man took a knife from his pocket and pointed towards Angad

"Bhayya" she screamed as she regained conscious

Angad with full force twisted his hand and stabbed right on his stomach. He stood there shocked at what he has done. The blood dropped from his knife.

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preview: Kripa scared of Angad 😉

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I hope this satisfies you. Keep on waiting because the winter break is near and the season for Fanfic is arriving 😉😆

luv ya all

sanya

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