Barsaat.- Note, pg209 - Page 14

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Posted: 20 years ago
Hey continue soon sweety pls......luv ur fanfic....can't wait longer.....
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: zenia680

well lemmetake a wild guess is he a part of the ape clan.....from one of the Kserials.....???????(pls don't let it be someone like Manik/Kartik ....they do make a good bunch of jokers...)

no darling he is not the part of K serials.. definately not kartick and manek 😆! what r u thinking girl! i bet u'll luv him but at the samtime u'll think what he's doing wid kripa!

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Posted: 20 years ago
awwwwwwwww
plz cont soon izzy 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
i m working on it at the moment. give me sum time.
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Posted: 20 years ago
nice part
do continue soon 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: happe

nice part
do continue soon 😳

i m glad u liked it 😃

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Posted: 20 years ago

cotinued..

Meanwhile Kripa stops in the mandir in midway; to start her life fresh and new again. She went off to college!

Suddenly it's start raining really hard. The breaks down soon and she was really frustrated to know that car got punctured in the midway. The driver instructed her it's only 10min walk from here.. she looked here where but couldn't find a shelter. She did not even have an umbrella with her.
She stood there at the edge of the road trying waiting for a signal or a lift. The wind was gushing from backside towards her making her hair fly and coming infront of face! She frowned and thinks: what a bad day!! She tried to stop her hair but hard luck!

Suddenly a red car passes came into view, she quickly puts a smile to her face and waves! The car storms right infront of her making all the mud water splash on to her clothes.. she frowned again but this time in more strong and louder!

Eeeeergh.. but then she sees the car coming back to her. She quickly puts a fake smile on her face!
The window slides down slowly revealing the person. He was wearing glasses and had a chain around his neck. He was none other than Angad!

K: tum!
A: haan main.. u called me!

He took out a can from his car drawer, and stook a sip and smiled as he looked up at her.
A: jaldi karo .. mere pass time nahin hai.
He looked down up and down to check her appearance!
K: (y is he looking at me like that)
Angad sets his front mirror in a way that Kripa can see..
He smiled and took another sip of can pretending that he iss checking himself in the mirror!
Kripa on other hand is shocked when she see herself in the mirror. She can be seen easily as the rain made her clothes transparent. She was embarrassed! Angad has realized this and decides to make fun of her.
K:woh.. main
A coolly says: jaldi karo.. I don't have time tum jaise larkiyon kay saath spend karney kay liye

Kripa got furious after hearing this:
K: aree mere hi badkismati thi tum hi maine wave kiya tha.. mujhey kya pata tum jaise gathiya insaan idher aa raha hai!
A: maine socha tumhein lift de doon but u r impossible. Look at urself first!
He drives of bit forwards and stops and throws the can back! The can was half finished and it ended up on kripa's head making her hair wet with the taste of coke!

She's fuming and unable to control her self.. she screams: arrrrrgh tum hay main nahin chorun gi..
He reverses the car and says: by the way tum har roz aise he transparent kapre pehen kay aana.. u r looking sexy.. tumhari image bhi theek hogayi gi! He laughs and drives off once again living enraged Kripa behind!


Half of the lesson has passed and everyone in the class is working with their partner. Angad on the other hand knows the reason and can see that she can't come!
Suddenly sum 1 knocks.. Angad looks up and is surprised to c kripa infront of him. She was no longer looking transparent as the first thing she did was get her clothes dry by standing in front of the dryer and has fixed her self..

P:did u c what time it is?
K:sorry sir.. actually the tire got punctured so I could not come
P:I m letting u go this time but not next time!

Everyone's eyes are on Kripa. She goes and takes her seat next to Angad. Their table is right at the back.

They can talk freely as all others were discussing about the project..

The project was to write down lyrics of a song. The lyrics have to be by their self made not copied!

A:tum bar baar mere piche kyun bhagti rehti hoo
K:apna muun band rakho.. mujhe bhi tum se baat karnay ka koi shook nahin hai
A:shok aur who tumhein! Tum ko sab behenji ki tarhaan larkoon se darti ho.. tum to yeh bhi nahin janti boyfriends kya hota hai.. m I right?
K:apni ghatiyaa baakwaas apnay pass rakho.. tum ko is se kya!
A:mujh see achi tarhan baat kiya karo warna sara college tum sai nafrat karega

Kripa just gives him the disgust look and shakes her head..
Suddenly she c's prof checking in everytable the work. She smiles.

Preview: what she is up to?
😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
ooh...so now kripa will get back at him??? pls continue..
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Posted: 20 years ago
oh plz continue i cant wait to to raed wot kripa is going 2 do !! 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
good nice part continue
Izzy wrote:
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hey vallanki, in ur avatar doesn't kripa look like bit madhuri dixit? or is it only me who is think this?
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Yes Izzy she's. I like this pic. It's at Dil(telugu) movie celebrations time. She's so pretty and she must be just 18 that time 😊

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