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Posted: 20 years ago
sorry for the late response. i m usually busy at weekends and i can continue on weekdays! LOL.. this goes for me hehe 😆

anyway here is the next part, hopw u like it
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Continued..


K: ok
K: to.. what do u think about this professor
A: this professor.. he is totally bullshit!.. everyone thinks he is famous pata nahin kya samjtha hai.. arre maine job hi sare test di hain woh sab cheat kiyee aur is budhoo ko kuch nahin pata chala..
Anway why I m saying this to u! chalo tum ko pata bhi chal gaya tum kay kya sakti ho.. tumhare pass to himmat hai hi nahin
K: khawab dekhna band kardo
A: tumhare pass koi tape recorder hai kay tum nay record kar liyaa hai.. agar kar bhi liya hai they won't believe u.. they will think u hav made a fake proof!
K: acha agar main kahoon main prove ka doon gi to
A:itni khush kyun horahi ho.. pehle kar to lo
K:kehte hain… blind logon ko bhi pata chal jata un kay paas anne wala toffaan arraha hai lekin tum to pore hi bewakoof or nalyak ho! Pehley apne aap ko dekho
A:don't u even dare to speak me like that
K:arre maine to prove bhi kardiya hai
A:what do u mean? Yahhan baithe sab kuch kar diya hai
K:zara aage dekho or khawab dekhna band karo

As he looks ahead, he is shocked as he see professor raghav standing there (music teacher), he is boiling with anger that is clearly shown on his face!

P= professor
P:stand up
A:sir.i ..was
P: I said STAND UP
Whole class was paying attention to him
A: sir I was just.. I
P:so what were u saying there?
A:i..i
P:chalo.. u can't say anything
Suddenly Kripa spokes up
K:I can help with u that
P:tell everyone what he was saying
K this professor.. he is totally bullshit!.. everyone thinks he is famous pata nahin kya samjtha hai.. arre maine job hi sare test di hain woh sab cheat kiyee aur is budhoo ko kuch nahin pata chala..

The class was not even surprised because they know what Angad was like but they never thought that someone will outstand him that fast..

Meanwhile prithiv has entered the class for something, he's dumbfounded by her actions and her intentions were drawing him more attracted towards her. He wants to seek what goal and after all what does she want from Angad Khanna; the most popular guy who can achieve anything. Till today no one has been able pull the wool over his eyes.

P:did u mean it.
Before he could do anything, Kripa hard as she could stomped on his feet and prithiv caught this sight
A screamed. Arrrrgh
P:WHAT?
A realising what he has just done and gives a nasty look to Kripa.
A: I did not mean this.. yeh sab iss larki nay kiya
P: what did she do? She told the truth
A: sir she's lying
P:ENOUGH! Mr.khanna I cannot tolerate this kind of behaviour from you, it's ur own college and u should respect us teachers rather than sending them a dirty comment. I m going to resign today and I can have job anywhere I want.

And for u class it's shame that you did not realize what does this stage means to you r career and by this I m not referring to Kripa

P: Kripa, I know u r new here and I wish u the best of luck in your future.
Saying this he went off

Angad on the other hand was furious just grabs the book from the table and hits hard on her head..
K:aaoooo (she was about to cry but controlled her tears)
K:what da hell did u do that for
A:that's what u deserve what u did to me
K:what did I do (she said that aloudn that everyone can hear that)
A:u know and just shut up
K:u shut up Bandar…
A:STOP CALLING ME BANDAR.. I hav a name
K: what do u want me to call u? donkey?
A:he got mad.. he pushes her hard enough on her shoulder by his strong hands that she fell down on..

She heard someone laughing and looked up to see some people were actually laughing at her. slowly everyone surrounds her laughing. Kripa was hurt badly. Tears rolled down on her face. She did not look up . she wants to pay him back..

Angad on the other was also laughing at her
A: c this what happens when u messes with Angad khanaa..

To be Continued..
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow this is such a cool fan-fic please continue as soon as possible...

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very very goooood
plz cont soon
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dat was mindblowing 👏
i wanna read more 😳
i wanna c wat kripa is going 2 do 😆
cont soooooooon 😃
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Continued..

Angad being pround of himself taunts Kripa more. Kripa just sat there looking at the floor trying to hide the pain.

A: u Bl***….

He was about to sayanything when all of a sudden something hit him very hard that he nearly fell.

It was Kripa who had enough of his talks and kicked him in his leg. She stood up and looked at him:


This is what happens when u messes with me! Don't u even dare to call him this. Look at urself then judge others. I know u r all same.. Grow up!

Saying this she storms of from the class.

Prithiv on the other hand is just awed by what he saw. He respects the confidence that this girl have and she is totally stands out from other girls.

The day passes quickly and the rumours are spread everywhere. Some people are glad that Raghav has reigned as he was the stringent teacher in this school. They were always embarrassed by him when they arrive late or no homework but whatever the matter the professor Raghav would do something to make them embarrass or teach them.

Angad smiles as he sits there on the centre table in the canteen. The table was especially reserved for him and his friends. It was round and five chairs beside it.
Prithiv and Misty sat there. Misty kept glancing him every two or three seconds;

P: Can u believe it guys, one girl actually stood up for him

A: just shut the crap, what the hell do she think of herself?

P: Angad, I think u r being mean on her? Just stop it and leave her alone.

A: M I hearing u right prithiv? Did u just say that? Leave Kripa alone.. he said sarcastically.

Misty on other hand was not really paying attention to the conservation as her mind was always jingled the thought about Angad and how she will tell him the way she feels about him. She actually wants to confess that she likes him more than friend. Angad on the other hand has always thought of her as a friend not best friend. He never had any feelings for misty but always used her to make other Jealous, misty knowing well agreed with Angad to play along with him. In fact she has pretended to be his girlfriend in front of the college for whole week. She spent time with him but it was nothing beyond that. They actually did what every friends do like going to cinemas, bowling but nothing beyond that.

Oh how she wished her having an proper relationship with Angad like other boyfriends and girl friends do.

She was drawn back to earth from her thoughts as she hears name KRIPA! She has heard this name before, but where? Oh yes the girl that went jail with Angad. The thought of her having spend with Angad with jail and that alone in the jail just lurched in her stomach. What could have happened.. did they.. erm nnoo what r u thinking Misty.. she and Angad no way! What cheap girl can go out with Angad! He hates her!

M: what happened?

P: Kripa and Angad had fight again?

A: hey it was not me ..it was her!

P: (tells her the whole situation)

M: she just blinks her eyes.. and says WHAT? Trying to sound upset but inside she is really exultant and is like I have to know more about her.. at sametime she feels bad for her that what Angad is going to do with her.. poor girl! other than that she would love to see them fight!

M: what are u going to do ANGAD?

P: Misty, tum bhi.. come one guys leave her alone.. she is new! Anyway I don't see why are you chasing her. she's cheap!

A: Just shut up!

M: (bhai, is behaving strange today)

Angad keeps checking at the door as his eyes were searching for something.
His expressions break into mischievous smile as soon he sees Kripa entering the canteen.
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Posted: 20 years ago

awsoem part----continue soon! 😉
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dat was awesome
cont soon
wen will their fight end???????
i wanna see some romantic parts now
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Continued..

She goes and takes place on the table that is opposite to Angad's. they both have their backs toward each other. Angad on the other hand gives up the thumbs up sign and gives the nod to move on.

Kripa is shown reading a book but she was not really paying attention as she can feel that people are giving her look. She looks around to see but again they continue with their own business.

She wondered what she done, stupid Kripa.. it's because u have been into jail but she brushed it away as she think it will be sorted out later. Nothing serious! She was feeling uncomfortable but decided it's best not to pay attention.


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It's been two weeks that Kripa has rented a house that is located near the beach. The sight of the beach can be seen clearly from her bedroom balcony.

She stands there in the balcony lost in her thoughts. A tear fells from her eyes.

Someone: Kripa

No answer

She shakes her

K: harshini tum?

Kripa and harshini lives in the same flat. They both has become best friends and shares each and everything. However Kripa did not tell her about the guy and what her family do?
She just told that they do business and her brother helps them along. She did not mention how rich she is? If she would have told her, would she like other girls go after her money? She shooks her head and no! she is not doing good she should have told her by now because she has been good friends. But apart from that they have same hobbies and interests!

H: r u missing ur parents again?

K: she nods

H: Kripa.. c'mon it's weekend.. u should not be crying. Let's go to shopping that would cheer u up.

K: thanks harshini, how would I thank you because you are the only one I know more here than anyone.

H:no need to say more.. what are friends for

K: so where r we going?

H: That's the spirit

She smiles.

They both get ready and dresses up humming their favourite tune. Harshini can see that Kripa can sing very well.

Kripa has worn baby pink kurta that has blue embroidery on it with jeans. She grabbed her duputta and set it on her self looking in the mirror and gave the final touch of make-up and left. They both made their way to the taxi that they have called.

She sat there in the taxi and again wandering into her thoughts..


K: how can this happen, why am I always thinking about him and that too Angad Khanna who does not even have a respect for a girl! Then why did he said that and that mee, I Kripa Sharma loves Angad Khanna.. I need to get it sorted it.



To be continued…
Edited by *Izzy* - 20 years ago
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H: Kripa

Kripa comes back to earth as Harshini clicks her fingers in front of her.

K: what?

H:are you o.k, you have not been feeling good lately?

K: yeah I am fine, come one let's go..

They both got out of the taxi, made their way to the shopping mall. Harshini can see that something is distracting Kripa.

Writing in the brackets ( ) shows that the person in thinking.

K:(what are you thinking about Kripa and that too about Angad Khanna, the jerk!, she shivers as she remembers what happened on the night that too alone in the woods. She was there who saw what happened! Can a man be that cold blooded? ) she asked herself. This thought sends more Goosebumps into her body.
She wished she was not the only one who was present at that scene and she was the only proof who saw what happened.


To be continued..

i will continue next on friday 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome parts Izzy
what did Kripa witness?
Can't wait to read more.

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