Barsaat.- Note, pg209 - Page 12

wow, that was good. continue soon.
i wonder who will come to save her??????????????

dat was amzing
cont soon
i think dat pritvi will save her

i will continue tommo.. suprise is on da way 😉

2mmorow is here
cont fast cant w8 2 read more 😆

hi i lost my memory stick where i had saved my fanfics parts that i have updated.. the one in my computer are just introductions and first few parts.. let's hope i can find my memory stick fast so that i can post it! 😭

Awwww Izzy....that's sad...pls update fast coz ur story is really nice....pls make A-K frnds....and then let them fall in luv....wideachother ofcourse and not K with some unknown langoor... 😡

Originally posted by: zenia680

Awwww Izzy....that's sad...pls update fast coz ur story is really nice....pls make A-K frnds....and then let them fall in luv....wideachother ofcourse and not K with some unknown langoor... 😡

lol how do u know it's a langoor?? 😆

i found my memory stick.. errghh stupid me i was panicking yesterday where did i lost and eventually end up messing all my room and today when i went to school my teacher gave it to me saying i left it on the my comp desk 😳

i'll post it soon!

hmm. so we cd get next part soon. ok izzy we wait for it 😉

After few minutes later an old lady arrives..

Angad looks up and smiles: dadi
Dadi: Angad what hav u done?
Angad: dadi' not fair u did not ask whether I hav done it or not (pretending to be angry)

Kripa still did not look up because she did not know how to face Angad family or she does want anyone to have pity on her and decided to keep quiet and solve the problems after Angad leave. Hearing the conversation between A and dadi made her emotional. Her grandma died a year before because of heart attack. She loved her grandma very much and remembered the moments she spent with her grandma. Kripa and her Dadi shared a good proper Daughter and Mother relationship.. she always cum to her when her parents scold her or any problems she come up.. whateva it was her dadi was here even if she has lots of friends. She closed her eyes and let the silent tears flow from her eye.

Dadi to the P.O
Dadi: kya baat hai Inspector sahib.. app ne kyun bulaya mujhey yahan?
P.O: yeh baat aap khud he aapne betay sai pooch lo!
Dadi: what's wrong Angad
Before they can speak .. inspector interrupted
P.O: u can talk abt it later.. first u need to pay the fine and sign it here.. (he showed the papers)

Dadi sign the check , hands it to him and sign where he instructed..

Suddenly her eyes catches the girl who has been seating there quiet and she is looking the other way.. (in otherway she is trying to avoid the eye contact with Angad and his dadi) she can see tears from her eye flowing down her face..

She could see that she is innocence but again feels something is not right. She put her hand on her shoulder: beta, r u alrite
We see the camera goes to face the girl and the girl is none other than Kripa. She has been crying a lot. She quickly wipes her tear and turns around to face the dadi..

She smiles: I m fine.. thanku for the concern
Dadi can clearly see that she has been crying and her eyes looks bit red.

Dadi: beta.. tum kis se jhoot bhol rahi ho

Kripa hearing her call her beta made her more emotional as painful and good memories swept on her mind. She stood there for a moment. But again she cannot do anything afterall she is from Angad side..

Kripa: nahin.. who main theek hoon
Dadi can see her stubbornness, decides to consult the police.. she turns to him and ask abt her problem
P.O who has been busy with some papers and looks up: well problem aap us se baad me puch lens but she is saying that her parents r living in NYU and can pay it by herself. U just leave it.. she is lying
Dadi: can I sign it for her
P.O.. what's ur relation with her..
Dadi: she is like my grand daughter

Both Angad and Kripa opens their mouth and stare at dadi.. dadi who is busy signing..
A (kitna acha natak kar leti hai aur upper se dadi ko bhi emotional black mail kar diya.. mujh se nahin bacho gi.. ab to tumhara kuch karma hi hoga)
K does not know how to react.. she let all the emotion slip it away.. tears flow falls down from her eyes as she closes her eyes.
Angad sees this :( I m impress.. I hav to take acting class from her!)

Before Kripa can say anything to dadi.. she covers it up: I know what r u going to say.. but I don't want anything from u but lekin phir bhi tum money dai kar apna bojh kam karma chahti ho … ni problem
K: thank u.. but y did u release me.. I can be guilty
Dadi: abt um pucho gi mujhey kaisa pata chala… beta tumhari safaai tumhare chehre pay thi.. u did not hav to tell anything to me..
K:but..
Dadi: no buts.. chalo I'll drop u u home…

Kripa can say anything or do anything she is helpless.

Dadi bought kripa and angad face to face:

Kripa meet him …. Yeh mera sab sai acha bacha hai

Kripa gives him cold look while angad just ignores him by giving most of his sizzline and dashing smile that represents "I m cool"
K: (samajtha kya hai ap ne aap ko, who bhi apni dadi kay sanmay yeh acha natak karta hai… ufff )
D: angad beta, iss ghar pe drop kar dete hain…
Kripa say: no it's o.k aunti, main hood hi chali jaoon gi after all I m a big girl aur baat rahi aap ke pasiay ki I will pay u tomaarow..
D: what r u here alone on this big city?
K:woh..woh.. actually I m here to study music
A( she does not even know how to sing.. she can only sing sa re gam pa or kavita's… typical behenji's"
Dadi: kya.. achi baat hai.. Angad bhi music kar raha hai
K: (meri bad kismati hai ki mujhe issi ki class main jana tha..)
D: kaunsay college may jati ho
K: soul academic of music..
D:phir to tum Angad ko bho janto hogi
A: dadi.. college itna bara hai.. it's impossible for everyone to know eachother
D: haan.. but do u know kripa and kripa do u know angad
Both glare at each other and says NO at the same time.
Kripa did not want angad t know where to live.. so she acts as if she got a call from her friend : note her mobile phone is switched on to silent mode

K:hi
K: m infront of the police stationK:who main baad main bataaon gi
K: thank u..

She hangs up and smiles herself:
To daddy: Aunty aap chaly jayee .. woh mere friends mujhe pick karney kay liyee aajaigee
D: abhi to tum nay kaha hai ki tumhara Mumbai main koi rehta nahin hain ab kai rahee of tumhari friends.
Angad sarcastically :dadi aap ko is ki batoonn main trust nahi karma chahiyee tha.. yeh sab ek jaisee hain
K: who aunty.. mere college ki friends hain na
Dada: ohh.. o.k

Angad and dadi drives away. Meanwhile angad is happy that he has not dropped kripa basically he is concerned about his image what would other people will think about him.


She stood there alone on the road watching them drove away..

Sighs.. thank god he got away otherwise I would have got a heart attack…

She managed to get taxi and went her own house. She is still living the special guest room provided by the hotel.


On the other hand angad is in room thinking about the events that happened today that by a one girl who managed to drag him to the jail. He was thinking what to do with her. His eyes were showing vicious look and has determined look of settling of scores with that girl. Suddenly an idea strikes his face and he smile. A smile that shows anything is. A smile that shows that shows red as blood.

He phoned some one and we hear talking him in the mute.




Preview: More A-K fights

hey vallanki, in ur avatar doesn't kripa look like bit madhuri dixit? or is it only me who is think this? 😕