Barsaat.- Note, pg209 - Page 10

How can u say that she will sing yes or no

or may be
she will do sumthing unexpected 😉

Happy Eid Mubarak to everyone!
I will try to continue on friday as i m bit busy 2mo.

Continue....make Kripa stand up 4 herself 😉

awesome job like always
keep up the good work
plz continue soon...............
oh yeah please reveal the suspense about the guy
can't wait anymore....................


sonia

nice part
make kripa slap angad and make her change clothes so she can tell Angad who she is.
please continue soon

Kripa was self-stubborn and rude.
K: (yeh langoor kya samajhtha hai mai iske liyee gaoon gi)
K: ok., what's the dare?
A thinks for a while and recalls the moment that Kripa has not actually apologized to me!
I dare u to pick a guy and kiss him infront of all!
A (dekh ta hoon main yeh behenji kaisa yeh challenge karti aur har bar ki tarah yeh bhi loser hai!
A: c'mon bhi quick (looks at his watch) mere pass itna time nahin hai tum jassi behenji kay liyee time spend karro
Kripa is irritated and gives an angry look to him (how dare he call me behenji!) gives a wicked smile!
She comes closer to him and looks at his eyes in a stern way and A does that back.

Kripa: I m not going to do any of that..u got that!
A:u can't leave from here unless u sing

Whole crowd cheers up for him and forces her to sing

Poor Kripa is getting more nervous (how cheap or what more everone is stupid enough to follow him)
Sighs.. India it is!
K:meri marzi main nahin gaaon gi
A:gaao gi
K:nahin
A gets irritated by her behavious and holds her harm so that she can sing and moves closer to her
K looks at him and pushes him back: enough of u! u r disgusting u r! How dare u call him me Behen ji, look at u, u urself is Bandar
What do u think of urself? Idiot stupid
A is fuming with anger 😡 : tumhari himmat kaise hui mere saath aise bath karney ki
Raises a hand to slap
Kripa stops his hand in the midway: control urself mr.monkey, don't even try to slap otherwise u'll be sorry.. and speaking of challenges I will not do it! This is not ur country that u can rule it? Samjhay.. now get lost from my sight!!

Everyone was quite a it seems bomb has dropped. They did not expected the outcome like this. They were annoyed as well b'cuz no 1 has ever speaken to him like that. They give a dirty look to Kripa.
From the crowd only two people were happy!


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i wonder who were the 2 people who were happy. continue soon

The two people were none other prithiv and Misty
Prithiv is glad that there is someone who hates Angad and has full chance on her. He was awed by her response and who she stood up for herself and that on her first day. Misty on the other hand loves Angad but not revealed yet. She is like thank god I can make sum friends which I don't have to worry! She hates people who r in luv with Angad the reason is she is jealous herself.

Angad stood there shocked and almost his eyes were saying everything that makes the crowd silent. All he think of just kicking this girl out no matter what happens:

K: xcuse bhai sahib.. aap nay shayed suna nahin maine kya kaha (she acted as nothing has happened)
A: hey.. tum kya samajthi mujhs say aisay baat karkey tum bhag jaoogi.. u'll pay for that!
K:Bandar ki tarah awazain nikalni hain jao jungle may jaa kay karo.. this not a jungle just get lost!
A: what did u just called me? I did not hear u properly
K: she says out loudly so dat he can clear it easily! B-A-N-D-A-R
Is that O.K?
A:wah wah.. where did ur manners vanished.. mujhey to aus din barey lecture day rahi thi ab kya howa
K: u did not need a lecture becuz u r gorgetting sumthing Bandar ushaltey hain..they don't have manner.. actually it's not in their dictionary? Tumhey to yeh bhi nahin pata how to respect girls?
A: respect my foot and that to u? u do not know who u r talking to..



more A-K scenes... may end up in jail! 😆 😉

CONTINUE SOON, DON'T MAKE THEM FIGHT A LOT IT GETS ME UPSET.

thank u everyone.

continued...
K: kitni baar apnay barey main introduce karwa chukay ho! If u want than go to jungle, just stay away from me.
Angad could not take it anymore, he moved closer towards her and pins her to the wall. She could not do anything because he has her both hands in his.

Kripa was offended by his reaction; she somehow managed to gather herself and stayed calm. She looked into his eyes
K: (oh god, what is he going to do? I shouldn't have came to India all the way.... stupid me...)




preview: what do u think angad is going to do?
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luv ya all
sanya