Barsaat.- Note, pg209 - Page 11

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Posted: 20 years ago
soory for short part but i'll promis to continue long part next.. 😛 😊 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
continue. i think he will threaten her.
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Posted: 20 years ago
he will threaten her. No kiss. He's not cheap after all he's ANGAD 😉
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Continued.....

he gets more closer to her that he can hear her breathing and vice versa with kripa..
there face are just an inch away. kripa gets scared, she struggles for herself but couldn't get through as his grip is tight. he brings his lip closer to hers.

The crowd are just amazed and scared what's gonna happen.
Misti: (kahin woh ussey kiss to nahin karney laga)
Prithinv: (my first chance will be ruined.. oh what i was thinking that i'll date a girl who hasn't even dated angad.. flop of plan! 😆 )

He brings his lips clos and was about to kiss her when all of a sudden kripa, kicked him in legs and spit on his face!

K; how dare u to touch me? samajthe kya ho ap ne aap ko itna kuch kai diya.. Tum to bandar say be bewakoof nikley! pata nahin college walon ney tumhey kiss taran admit kar liya hai.
A is fuming with anger, can't just believe what she just did..
K: kya howa, r u deaf! sunai nahin de raha
A: u... 😡
K: u.. kya,.. i m a girl
U. i won't leave u
K: chora bhi kab hai abhi tak bandaron ki tarhan shor kar rahey or kya karna
A starts pulling her hair, kripa on the other is short tempered does the same.
They both are pulling each other hair and shouting with each other. other people tried to stop them but useless!


Meanwhile in the college, we see police coming here for the inspection! As they entered the canteen, they hear some shouting and whole crowd gathered at on corner in a circle! the police reaches them and pushes the people around to see what's happening!
To their utter shock. they see a boy and girl fighting and shouting each other. They were pulling each other hair and then both kicking each other.

A just pulls her hair down with full strenghths that K screams and u c her face that she is going to burst out crying. She punches him with full on his stomach and then pulls his hair down with anger.
K: yeh hota hai when sum1 hurts kripa sharma!

Police: (kya zamana aagaya hai ab to larka aur larki bhi wwf may part lay rahey hain but then again they r teens!)
he sees the situation gets worseer and worse..

P shouts: STOP IT!
Both A and K stops and whole college is quiet!!

U both r under arrest!!


preview: jail scene!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
wow, continue soon. that was very good.
Kripa, wat should i say about her.ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
i love her character. 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
😆 i fell from my chair laughing. 😆 😆 ple cont.soon.
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Posted: 20 years ago
i even choked while laughing
it was mindblowing
do more scenes like dis
cont soon
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

i even choked while laughing
it was mindblowing
do more scenes like dis
cont soon

Yeah, i know it's funny isn't it😉. ermm yeah i m going to do more scenes like that between A-K. Love is so far away from them. 😃 The question of bringing love between A-K is out of boundaries so let's c them fighting and their naughty actions! 😊

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Originally posted by: *Izzy*

Yeah, i know it's funny isn't it😉. ermm yeah i m going to do more scenes like that between A-K. Love is so far away from them. 😃 The question of bringing love between A-K is out of boundaries so let's c them fighting and their naughty actions! 😊

this is the first fan fic that kripa stands for her self .in the other she like scared of him😆

i am waiting 4 u 2 cont

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continued....

Continued

K: WHAT!
A:I don't belive this
P:u heard it right.. u both r under arrest

He calls other Police force and in a minute three more mens arrive wearing police uniforms. The have handcuffs in their hand.

K: sir it's not my fault.. it's all his fault.. I did not do anything and anyway today is my first day.
P: well we'll see this in the police office and y don't u come with us.
A: xcuse me sir, I think u don't who I am, u can't just arrest me!
Kripa just give the disgust look to him and shakes her head.

P: I know who I am talking to, Mr.khanna

Take them away he instructed his people..
(Police Officer is played by Aman verma cuz it's suits him a lot and he will be seen a lot)

P to the crowd: what are u looking at, don't u have ur work to do…
They all starts to move away in their own place slowly.

In the jail:

We see two people sitting across each other in the corners. They are none other than A-k. The whole cell is painted plain white giving no shades to all. Its look that they are trapped in some square box!

Kripa is just sitting down with her legs touching her stomach and she has hugged her legs and her head is down. Meanwhile Angad has got tired sitting there for twenty as they have been threatened to be in complete silence by the police people. He is looking here and there around the cell and is soon making noises with fingers playing with the wall.
Kripa on the other hand has her eyes closed was getting some sleep.
She was annoyed by the sound (arrgh what the could this be)

She looked up and saw Angad with his fingers playing with the wall.

Their cells was located in the office. This is for new prisoners who has just got locked up and is not on court case. The cell was at one end and two and three were besides each other. They can see the office from there .

Suddecly they hear:
P.O: Ram I m going out for some work, just look after this and yes don't let anyone do anything.
R: yes sir
In a minute he cannot be heard or seen anywhere but the sound of other person (ram) can be heard as he was whistling some tunes in his mouth. He was also not to be seen because his footsteps just got far away and not be heard.

Angad and Kripa both assumed that the police people were not here.

Angad got up and walks up to Kripa: yeh sab sirf tumahri wajah se howa cuz I hav neva been in jail b4!
Kripa: WHAT!!
Angad: shocked kyun horahi ho, main tumhari tarah to nahin hoon, who always fight and ends up in jail.. waisay how many times have u been in jail, koi criminal record hai? He smirks
Kripa: just shut up.. tum jaise logon se bath kar kay koi faida nahin

She was so irritated by his comments: (what does he think of he himself, job hi kahey who keh deta hai.. moron, idiot, duffer)
Angad: tum samajhti to kya ho…. Who do u think u r!
Kripa answers him back:I m a girl named Kripa.. (spells her name) K-R-I-P-A.. do u get it now!
Angad: ohh just get lost from here.. tum aj to bach gayi lekin agli bar nahin
Kripa answers him back in the same tone: for ur information Bandar, I can't get lost b'cuz we r locked… chalo abt um ney prove to kar diya hai kay tum insaan nahin bandor ho
Arre u don't even know I m a girl or a boy
Angad: just shut up… tumey main baad main dekh long a

Kripa was worried about her because today is the first of the college and she is in jail. If somehow the news get to his parents they will call her back and as usual she will have to listen to long lectures from her parent which she hates the most!
She did not know how to get out from here and she did not know who to call for help as if she knows someone here in India!

Suddenly the P.O arrives and opens the lock of the cell..
P.o =Aman verma

P.O: u two follow me to the table.
They both get out and followed him to the table and took seats both r sitting by side to side

P.O: so y were u two creating a scene in the college and as u know according to the law who does physical harm can be jailed for one year or has to pay a fine.
According to me u both were fighting and can be jailed

Kripa was shown worried and did not know how to react.
Angad was like who cares, I'll just pay u whateva u want too keep ur mouth shut!)

So u both.. I m letting u go this time unless someone come and pays the fine that is 20.000 and sign here. They should be your parents or guardians.

A: can I make a call.

Kripa is shown worried and does not know who to call. She cannot make call to those people who told her to come to India and start her profession.. yeah certainly not them cuz again the information will flee to her parents and it will make huge mess.

Angad who has by now finished making call and is smiling to himself
K: sir, I m here on my own and can I just pay u by myself
P.O: kkyun, r u afraid of telling ur parents.
K: no sir, I don't have anyone who live here.. they live in USA
Angad is shown surprised and then again thinks :( she can lie very easily, agar new york ki hoti to she wud not be looking like behenji.. but wht was she doing in airport.. shayed kissi small town se aay ho but out of India .. impossible.. iske parents ka pata lagwana chahiye)
A: (she deserve it, Angad khaanna sai aaj tak koi panga nahin laga sakta)
P.O: but still sum1 has to sign here.. he hesitates for a moment : ido u know anyone from Khanna family maybe they can sign behalf of yours
K:no sir..i don't know anyone

Tears were beganing to come out from her eyes. She promised herself that from now on she will not see this Bandar again that will cause her problems.

They sat their for ten minutes, Kripa has her head down so that no one can see she has been crying silently.


Preview: whow will save Kripa.. definitely not her parents

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