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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: anushababli

thank you for your wonderful comment. will update my ff soon.

thanks to u for writting, its always a pleasure to read ur parts 😊.
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely ff...plz plz plz pm me!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sharvi123

lovely ff...plz plz plz pm me!!

thanks shravi will pm you always
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Posted: 16 years ago
u r a gr8888888888888 writer...

kash sagars ye pehle padhte toh they cud continue gr88888😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kiyudnive

u r a gr8888888888888 writer...

kash sagars ye pehle padhte toh they cud continue gr88888😉

awwwwwwwwwwww......... thank you so much. that was so sweet of you.
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 6:-

END OF THE FIRST DAY OF COLLEGE

After lunch, two lectures were cancelled which left only one lecture which was to be attended. College ended earlier than usual. Dharam and Veer are heading home. Veer eagerly wanted to know Ananya's story but Akshay had to get home and finish some urgent work.

Veer had parked his bike in the college campus. Dharam didn't do so as there wasn't any space for a car to be parked. Veer headed towards his bike. He started the ignition but it wouldn't start.

Dharam:- Kya hua Veer?

Veer:- Lagta hain ki ignition main problem hain. Lagta hain accident ke badh hui hogi.

Dharam:- Chalo tum humare saath aana aaj.

Veer:- Agar main tumhare saath aaya toh bike ko ghar lekar kaun jaaega?

Dharam:- Yeh tumhara bike bhi naa. Kitna samjhaya ki bike math khareed. Cars are more dependable.

Veer:- Dekho Dharam. Bike ke bare main kuch math bolna. (Veer bends down and strokes the fuel tank). Yeh mera pehla pyaar hain.😆

Dharam:- Bas bas! Itna melodramatic banane ki koi zaroorat nahin.😆

Veer:- Aur vaise bhi main tumhe disturb nahin karnaa chahata tha.

Dharam:- Tum mujhe kaise diturb kar sakte ho?

Veer:- Tum toh bar bar us ladki ke baare main sochoge naa.

Dharam:- Kaunsi ladki?

Veer:- Vo he jise tum aaj class main ghur ghurke dekh raha tha.

Dharam blushes. He couldn't deny that he was starring.

Veer:- Oye hoye tamaatarr. Bas bhi kar. Vaise bhi mujhe bike ko garage le jaana padega. Main tumhe ghar par milta hoon. Haan! Aur ek aur baath, dhyaan rahe ki tera dhyaan raste pe ho aur us ladki par nahin.🤣

Dharam goes away still red at the face.

Veer starts walking with his bike. He couldn't take the bike all the way home as home was a good 1 hour away by walking. He had to find a garage somewhere. He asked some of the students whether they knew where the garage was. No one had any idea. Veer kept going ahead. While walking he saw Ananya with her bike parked on the road. Veer was again disappointed that out of all the people in the world he had to see her. She was standing near a Vada Pav wala. She was about to eat her Vada Pav when a small boy came up to her and asked her for some money. She looked at him and without hesitation gave her Vada Pav to him. She took another one and paid for both. She headed towards her bike.

Veer saw all of this and was completely surprised. He thought how can a girl who is so arrogant and egoistic be so kind? Something is strange. Something is fishy. Veer still didn't understand her and couldn't understand how to categorise her. Veer had to pass by Ananya. He had no option. He was expecting some comment from her and his guess was right. Ananya saw him and said.

Ananya:- Tumhe pataa hain, bike ko chalaaya jaata hain. Bike ke saath chalte nahin hain.

Veer:- Mujhe acchi tarah se pataa hain. Shayad teri yadhdash kamzor hain. Subh ke race ke badh bike kharab ho gaya.

Ananya:- No wonder! You were the one who rode it.🤣

Veer:- I have no time to listen to your crap.🤣

Ananya:- I never said that you have to listen to what i am saying. Its your fault that you are listening.🤣

Veer:- Arrgh!!!! Just leave me alone.

Ananya sat on her bike.......................

Ananya:- Mechanic ke paas lekar jaana hain?

Veer (Surprised that Ananya was offering help) :- Haan! Lekar jaana hain.

Ananya:- Thekh hain to lekar jaa................... Permission lene ke koi zaroorat nahin.🤣

Ananya vroomed past him.

Veer:- What an irritating pesk. How can Akshay handle this girl at home and in college. He must be so brave.

Veer finally managed to find a garage. The servicing would take a day so he left his bike there. He took a bus and went back home thinking about Ananya's rude behaviour all the way. (Well atleast he thinking about her.)☺️

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey just loved ittttttttttt
der fights ohhh anayana is really a strange gurl hahahhahaha bechara veer!!!!
dharam ki sia kaha hai!!
plzz pm me wen u update next
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: anushababli

PART 6:-

END OF THE FIRST DAY OF COLLEGE

After lunch, two lectures were cancelled which left only one lecture which was to be attended. College ended earlier than usual. Dharam and Veer are heading home. Veer eagerly wanted to know Ananya's story but Akshay had to get home and finish some urgent work.

Veer had parked his bike in the college campus. Dharam didn't do so as there wasn't any space for a car to be parked. Veer headed towards his bike. He started the ignition but it wouldn't start.

Dharam:- Kya hua Veer?

Veer:- Lagta hain ki ignition main problem hain. Lagta hain accident ke badh hui hogi.

Dharam:- Chalo tum humare saath aana aaj.

Veer:- Agar main tumhare saath aaya toh bike ko ghar lekar kaun jaaega?

Dharam:- Yeh tumhara bike bhi naa. Kitna samjhaya ki bike math khareed. Cars are more dependable.

Veer:- Dekho Dharam. Bike ke bare main kuch math bolna. (Veer bends down and strokes the fuel tank). Yeh mera pehla pyaar hain.😉(cooooolllllll)

Dharam:- Bas bas! Itna melodramatic banane ki koi zaroorat nahin.😆

Veer:- Aur vaise bhi main tumhe disturb nahin karnaa chahata tha.

Dharam:- Tum mujhe kaise diturb kar sakte ho?

Veer:- Tum toh bar bar us ladki ke baare main sochoge naa.

Dharam:- Kaunsi ladki?

Veer:- Vo he jise tum aaj class main ghur ghurke dekh raha tha.

Dharam blushes. He couldn't deny that he was starring.

Veer:- Oye hoye tamaatarr. Bas bhi kar.🤣(my brother and cousins call me that)😆 Vaise bhi mujhe bike ko garage le jaana padega. Main tumhe ghar par milta hoon. Haan! Aur ek aur baath, dhyaan rahe ki tera dhyaan raste pe ho aur us ladki par nahin.🤣

Dharam goes away still red at the face.

Veer starts walking with his bike. He couldn't take the bike all the way home as home was a good 1 hour away by walking. He had to find a garage somewhere. He asked some of the students whether they knew where the garage was. No one had any idea. Veer kept going ahead. While walking he saw Ananya with her bike parked on the road. Veer was again disappointed that out of all the people in the world he had to see her. She was standing near a Vada Pav wala. She was about to eat her Vada Pav when a small boy came up to her and asked her for some money. She looked at him and without hesitation gave her Vada Pav to him. She took another one and paid for both. She headed towards her bike.

Veer saw all of this and was completely surprised. He thought how can a girl who is so arrogant and egoistic be so kind? Something is strange. Something is fishy. Veer still didn't understand her and couldn't understand how to categorise her. Veer had to pass by Ananya. He had no option. He was expecting some comment from her and his guess was right. Ananya saw him and said.

Ananya:- Tumhe pataa hain, bike ko chalaaya jaata hain. Bike ke saath chalte nahin hain.

Veer:- Mujhe acchi tarah se pataa hain. Shayad teri yadhdash kamzor hain. Subh ke race ke badh bike kharab ho gaya.

Ananya:- No wonder! You were the one who rode it.🤣

Veer:- I have no time to listen to your crap.🤣

Ananya:- I never said that you have to listen to what i am saying. Its your fault that you are listening.🤣

Veer:- Arrgh!!!! Just leave me alone.

Ananya sat on her bike.......................

Ananya:- Mechanic ke paas lekar jaana hain?

Veer (Surprised that Ananya was offering help) :- Haan! Lekar jaana hain.

Ananya:- Thekh hain to lekar jaa................... Permission lene ke koi zaroorat nahin.🤣😆🤣

Ananya vroomed past him.

Veer:- What an irritating pesk. How can Akshay handle this girl at home and in college. He must be so brave.

Veer finally managed to find a garage. The servicing would take a day so he left his bike there. He took a bus and went back home thinking about Ananya's rude behaviour all the way. (Well atleast he thinking about her.)☺️




superb dialouguessssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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hats off 2u
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Posted: 16 years ago
i must say that your ff is sooooooo difeerent from others anywayz back to the part... well.... it was outstanding amazing mindblowing HISTORY(sorrry i remembered himesha's dialogue from sa re ga ma pa) 😆well anywayz it was marvellous.
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Posted: 16 years ago
I like entire update. Veer loving his bike n saying its his pehla pyar hai😳(Dusara pyar waiting on the way😳) n saying tamataar to Dharam. Dharam also so cutie shying 😳😳haaye ladkiya bhi etna nahi sharmati muze lagta hai sia bhi nahi sharmayegi.😃 Your ananya to terrific n rockkkkkkkkking . Khud vadapav bhi khati dusaro ko bhi khilati hai. Aur Veer ko tease karne mein toh use kya maza aata hai. 😉 bike ko mechanic ke paas lekar jaane ke liye permission ki jaroorat nahi. 😆😆😆 Me also thinking first ke bechare veer ko woh madad karegi🤣
Please update soon n don't forget to pm
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Edited by shruja - 16 years ago

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