DharamVeer in 21st Century - Part 23 - Page 67 - Page 12

Originally posted by: shivu_dmg

hey just loved ittttttttttt
der fights ohhh anayana is really a strange gurl hahahhahaha bechara veer!!!!
dharam ki sia kaha hai!!
plzz pm me wen u update next

Originally posted by: kiyudnive

superb dialouguessssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

gr88888888888888 work

hats off 2u

Originally posted by: hiri

i must say that your ff is sooooooo difeerent from others anywayz back to the part... well.... it was outstanding amazing mindblowing HISTORY(sorrry i remembered himesha's dialogue from sa re ga ma pa) 😆well anywayz it was marvellous.

esh jhan

Originally posted by: shruja

I like entire update. Veer loving his bike n saying its his pehla pyar hai😳(Dusara pyar waiting on the way😳) n saying tamataar to Dharam. Dharam also so cutie shying 😳😳haaye ladkiya bhi etna nahi sharmati muze lagta hai sia bhi nahi sharmayegi.😃 Your ananya to terrific n rockkkkkkkkking . Khud vadapav bhi khati dusaro ko bhi khilati hai. Aur Veer ko tease karne mein toh use kya maza aata hai. 😉 bike ko mechanic ke paas lekar jaane ke liye permission ki jaroorat nahi. 😆😆😆 Me also thinking first ke bechare veer ko woh madad karegi🤣

Please update soon n don't forget to pm

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Loved your update. Ananya is unstoppable oh God the way she shuts veer up is very funny. Hope her secret is out and they become sparring friends quickly.

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hmmm....thats strange...i rmember puttin a comment up herer abt part 6...neva mind...loved part 6...Veer is so comical! hehe...poor Dharam's red in the face!...loved the dias as well...Veer's gttin mre confused abt Ananya hehe...cant wait for the nxt part xxx

Originally posted by: asrasrasr

Loved your update. Ananya is unstoppable oh God the way she shuts veer up is very funny. Hope her secret is out and they become sparring friends quickly.

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

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loved the chapter 😛 👏👏

especially veer saying "yeh mera pehla pehla pyar hei" 😆😆😆 reminds me of fimly scenes 😳

and, ananya teasing him 😆😆 "permission" 😆😆😆 lol, for a second i thought she wud help him! 😆 hey anusha, that was really original and surprising and nice 😃👏

lol lol.. dharam blushing..😛 aaw!!

btw, hope next part u include finally sum dias from sia and ananyas story. 😊

Originally posted by: CutieA

hmmm....thats strange...i rmember puttin a comment up herer abt part 6...neva mind...loved part 6...Veer is so comical! hehe...poor Dharam's red in the face!...loved the dias as well...Veer's gttin mre confused abt Ananya hehe...cant wait for the nxt part xxx