DharamVeer in 21st Century - Part 23 - Page 67 - Page 13

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PART 7:-

HOME SWEET HOME

Veer finally reached his home. Dharam had already reached and had parked the car in their private lawn. Being born in a very rich family, Dharam and Veer never had to worry about anything. Neither did Dharam's dad have to worry about any business problems like recession etc. Dharam and Veer got whatever they wanted whenever they wanted. But they never showed off their wealth and preferred going to a public college instead of a private one.

Veer closed the gate behind him and entered their private bungalow (Something very difficult to possess in Mumbai.) The bungalow was a beautiful looking four storied white coloured house facing the sea. As Veer went inside, few girls having their daily jog looked at him and kept staring (No wonder!!!)😉. Veer was used to girls looking at him and so was Dharam. But Veer never had any feelings for them. He was least bothered about girls. All he wanted was an empty road to ride his bike😆. Dharam never liked anyone before Sia.

Veer walked inside still very angry with the way Ananya was behaving with him. (Well he better get used to it!!)😆. Veer entered the house, threw his bag on the enormous couch in the gorgeously furnitured living room and went into the state of the art kitchen having all the equipments any top chef would need and opened the glossy silver door of the refrigerator, removing a bottle of ice cold water. He began to drink when all of a sudden someone screamed in a melodramatic voice, "Beta!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........."

Veer almost spat the water which he was about to drink. He turned back and shrugged. It was his very filmy mother, Nivriti or Niv as she liked to be called.😆

Nivriti:- Beta!! Kahan gaye the tum? Tumhe pataa hain main kitni ghabaraa gayi thi? Tumhare bhai toh kabka laut chukka. Magar tumhe toh apni maa ki koi fikar nahin naa?

Veer:- Maa.....

Nivriti:- Nahin, kuch mat kaho.... Jab se tumhare dad marr gaye tab se tumne meri baat sunna he chod diya.

Veer:- Maa!! Dad mere paidaa hone se pehle he guzar gaye.🤣

Nivriti:- Chup kar badhmaash. Main kitna darr gayi thi. Ab tum mujhe kabhi chodke mat jaana beta.

Veer lied down on the couch.

Veer:- Maa!! Kitna over acting karti ho. Kabhi toh dhang se acting kiya karo.🤣

Nivriti:- Arre!! Ja ja... Tumhe kya pataa acting kya hota hain. Jitna jyadaa emotion ho utna jyadaa accha hota hain.

Veer:- Yeh emotion nahin, tension hain.🤣

Nivriti:- Veer, tumhe kya pataa? Agar maine tumhe paidaa nahin kiya hota naa, toh Kajol ki jagah mujhe chunaa gaye hota Pyaar Toh Hona He Tha ke liye. Waise Kajol ne bhi thekh thakh kaam kiya tha.

Veer:- Mom, agar aap chune gaye hote toh film ka naam Flop Toh Hona He Tha huaa hota.🤣

Nivriti:- Tum aise he mera mazaak udaate ho Veer.

Veer:- But I still love you Mom.

He went and hugged his Mom. (Aww!!!!!!!!!!!)☺️

Nivriti:- Bas Bas!! Mujhse accha toh tu acting karta hain. Ab yahan baith aur mujhe tere college ke pehle din ke baare main bataa.

Veer:- College accha tha Maa.

Nivriti:- Aur vahaan ke log?

Veer:- Bahut he confusing hain Maa.

Nivriti:- Kyun????

Veer:- Kuch log bahut acche hain aur kuch log bahut rude hain.

Nivriti:- Ye kiske baare main baath kar rahe ho Veer?

Veer:- For example, there is Akshay and there is his very irritating twin sister Ananya. She is just behind me. Har baath pe mujhe irritate karti hain. And Akshay is so sweet on the other hand.

Nivriti:- Its alright Veer. You come across these kind of people. Just give her some time. Maybe, she will start appreciating you.

Veer:- Rehne do Maa. Zameen phathh jaaegi, aasmaan thuthh jaaega, magar Ananya ka attitude nahin badalega.🤣

Nivriti:- Itna melodramatic banne ki koi zaroorat nahin.

Veer:- Main aap he ka beta hoon. Melodramatic he rahunga.🤣

Nivriti raised her hand to hit him but Veer ran away from there.

Nivriti:- Chup badmaash. Jaldi mooh dholo aur khaana khaane ke liye aa jaao.

She looked at Veer's bag lying on the couch and shrugged.

Nivriti:- Yeh ladka bhi naa, kabhi nahin sudarega.

She picked up his bag and went to his room.

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