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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 5:-

CANTEEN :- LUNCH TIME

Dharam, Veer and Akshay head to the canteen. They believed Akshay when he said that the canteen is the crowdest place in any college when they say the canteen. There was absolutely no place to sit. They somehow managed to catch a place after a long wait. They sat down. Ananya was sitting at a table next to theirs. Veer did everything possible to avoid her because he knew that if he saw her even once she would do something to irritate her.

Akshay:- Hey i am goimg to get some bhel puri for me. Tum logon ko kya chahiye?

Veer:- No thanks. We brought something from home to eat.

Akshay:- Thats strange. Hardly anyone brings something from home. Everyone eats in the canteen. They are bored of home food.

Veer:- Well, mujhe apni maa ka khaana bahut pasand hain. (Aww!!! Thats so sweet...........)😆😳

Dharam:- Even i am fine Akshay. Go and get something for yourself to eat.

Akshay came back with some food to eat when Ananya said...........

Ananya:- Dekho toh.......... Bacche tiffin khaa rahein hain!!🤣🤣🤣

Veer had enough. He got up but Dharam stopped him again.

Dharam:- Jaane do Veer. Tum bas khaana khao.

Akshay:- Ananya, en logon ka pehla din hain. Jaane do naa. Vaise bhi tumhe dushmano ki kami nahin hain. Kabhi kabar dushman nahin banana ki koshish karo.

Ananya got up rather upset............

Ananya:- Fine!!!!!!!!!!! If you like them so much then you can stay with them. I give a damn.😡

While walking away she looked around and said in a calm voice..................

Ananya:- See you at home Akshay.

As Ananya was going out of the canteen, she saw a guy smoking a cigarette. She went to him and took out the cigarette from his mouth. She threw it on the ground and stamped it until it stopped releasing smoke.

Ananya:- Smoking is not allowed in college premises.

Guy:- What????????

Ananya:- Tujhe angrezi samajh main nahin aati kya?🤣 Thek hain. Hindi main samjhati hoon. College main tum cigarette nahin pe sakte. Agar marne ke itna he shock hain to khud mar. Dusroon ko mat maar. 🤣🤣

As Ananya was leaving the guy said.......

Guy:- Who the hell are you to tell me what to do? Tu hoti kaun hain be?

Ananya:- Tera baap hoon be............🤣 Agar aur ladna hain to bahar chal.

The guy kept quite as he knew it was no use. He knew very well that he would lose in any fight against her.

After she left Veer was still angry that Ananya got away with whatever she said.

Veer:- Why is she always picking on me?😡 Usko aur koi kaam dhandha nahin hain kya?😡

Dharam:- Chodonaa Veer. Ladki hain. Kyun uske saath ulaj rahe ho?

Veer:- Toh kya? She only said that she doesn't like partiality? So why should i treat her any different from what i would react when a guy does all this? I cant even get her. Sometimes she gets angry and punches anyone she likes or might i say hate and sometimes she acts like a social service person and throws cigarettes on the floor to protect people. What is with her? She doesn't know me. I can be twice as arrogant as her. (We all know that Veer😊)

Akshay:- Veer, tum nahin jaante ki uska vyavahaar aisa kyun hain. Yahan baaki sab log jaante hain. Tum naye ho. Isi liye usko galat samajh rahe ho.

Veer said in a very sarcastic tone..........

Veer:- Aisa kya bura hadhsa hua uske saath ke vo aisa behave kar rahi hain?😆

Akshay:- Well it goes like this....

But as they say the bell always rings at the wrong time.😆 Break was over and Dharam, Veer and Akshay had to rush if they wanted to be to the lecture on time. Akshay said that he will tell the entire incident later...........

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Posted: 16 years ago
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arre!!!!!!!!!!!! yeh kya? ek din ho gaya and no replies???? Lagta hai ki kisi ko pasandnahin aaya!!!!!!!!!!!😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: anushababli

PART 5:-

CANTEEN :- LUNCH TIME

hm here comes edit as u wish.. u wanted full edit na 😕😕 so it took time 😡

chal ab rona band kar de 😡😆 😆😆

Dharam, Veer and Akshay head to the canteen. They believed Akshay when he said that the canteen is the crowdest place in any college when they say the canteen. There was absolutely no place to sit. They somehow managed to catch a place after a long wait. They sat down. Ananya was sitting at a table next to theirs. Veer did everything possible to avoid her because he knew that if he saw her even once she would do something to irritate her. 😆😆😆 lol yes this anu is a bit bindassssss 😆😆😆 bechara veer..bach k rehena 🤣 is lrki ka koi baharosa nahi kab kya kar de 😆

Akshay:- Hey i am goimg to get some bhel puri for me. Tum logon ko kya chahiye? yummy pani puri my fav too 😳 lekin hamare canteen mein nahi milti thi we always had to rush out of college to FP (i hope u know FP at matunga ) 😆

Veer:- No thanks. We brought something from home to eat. aw so cute baccha same as me...bas kabhi kabhi mein bhi bahar khati thi u see he is more like me 😳😆 mera chutku veer 😳😉😆 ekdum mere pe gaya hai mera bhai shant sushil 😆

Akshay:- Thats strange. Hardly anyone brings something from home. Everyone eats in the canteen. They are bored of home food.😆😆 i know my friends use to have from my tiffin..all 6 n only one tiffin sab toot padte the 😕😕 mere liye kuch nahi rakhte 😆 aur fir canteen mein mein sirf ek bite leke baith jati thi

Veer:- Well, mujhe apni maa ka khaana bahut pasand hain. (Aww!!! Thats so sweet...........)😆😳 😆😆 haan ekdum..cute 😳😆 are bhai kiska hai 😉😆

Dharam:- Even i am fine Akshay. Go and get something for yourself to eat.

Akshay came back with some food to eat when Ananya said...........

Ananya:- Dekho toh.......... Bacche tiffin khaa rahein hain!!🤣🤣🤣 lol yeh anu bhi na 🤣🤣🤣🤣 iska bura waqt ab door nahi iska ghamand jarur tootega 😆 🤣🤣

Veer had enough. He got up but Dharam stopped him again.

Dharam:- Jaane do Veer. Tum bas khaana khao. han Dharam so shant....😳 so cool...😛

Akshay:- Ananya, en logon ka pehla din hain. Jaane do naa. Vaise bhi tumhe dushmano ki kami nahin hain. Kabhi kabar dushman nahin banana ki koshish karo. 🤣🤣🤣 anu bhi na..use pata nahi kaisa dushman milega use veer k roop mein jo uska ghamand choor choor kar dega 😉🤣

Ananya got up rather upset............ 😡 🥱

Ananya:- Fine!!!!!!!!!!! If you like them so much then you can stay with them. I give a damn.😡 😆

While walking away she looked around and said in a calm voice..................

Ananya:- See you at home Akshay. lol bhai ko dhamki..🤣🤣🤣 mein bhi deti hu kabhi kabhi apne cousins ko 😉🤣🤣

As Ananya was going out of the canteen, she saw a guy smoking a cigarette. She went to him and took out the cigarette from his mouth. She threw it on the ground and stamped it until it stopped releasing smoke.

Ananya:- Smoking is not allowed in college premises. 😆😆 hm aa gayi samaj sudharak 🤣🤣 well daredevil 👏👏👏

Guy:- What???????? 😆

Ananya:- Tujhe angrezi samajh main nahin aati kya?🤣 Thek hain. Hindi main samjhati hoon. College main tum cigarette nahin pe sakte. Agar marne ke itna he shock hain to khud mar. Dusroon ko mat maar. 🤣🤣 👏👏👏 lovely dialog 👏

As Ananya was leaving the guy said.......

Guy:- Who the hell are you to tell me what to do? Tu hoti kaun hain be?😆😆ekdum mumbaiyaan istyle hu bebe 😆

Ananya:- Tera baap hoon be............🤣 so witty....bolna chahiye tha tere bebe 🤣 Agar aur ladna hain to bahar chal. 🤣🤣lol ye toh directly challenging dat boy..😕 🤣🤣

The guy kept quite as he knew it was no use. He knew very well that he would lose in any fight against her. 🤣🤣 lol yeh toh jaise college ki dada..oops dadi hai 🤣🤣🤣

After she left Veer was still angry that Ananya got away with whatever she said.

Veer:- Why is she always picking on me?😡 Usko aur koi kaam dhandha nahin hain kya?😡 😆 😆

Dharam:- Chodonaa Veer. Ladki hain. Kyun uske saath ulaj rahe ho?

Veer:- Toh kya? She only said that she doesn't like partiality? So why should i treat her any different from what i would react when a guy does all this? I cant even get her. Sometimes she gets angry and punches anyone she likes or might i say hate and sometimes she acts like a social service person and throws cigarettes on the floor to protect people. What is with her? She doesn't know me. I can be twice as arrogant as her. (We all know that Veer😊) hm yeh larka bhi egoistic 🤣🤣lo sher ko sava sher mil gaya 🤣🤣 nayeh kabhi apni galti manega na woh 😆😆 inka kya hoga hey bhagwaannnn 😕😆

Akshay:- Veer, tum nahin jaante ki uska vyavahaar aisa kyun hain. Yahan baaki sab log jaante hain. Tum naye ho. Isi liye usko galat samajh rahe ho. 😕 aw kya tragedy ho gayi hai anu k saath 😕

Veer said in a very sarcastic tone..........

Veer:- Aisa kya bura hadhsa hua uske saath ke vo aisa behave kar rahi hain?😆

Akshay:- Well it goes like this....

But as they say the bell always rings at the wrong time.😆 Break was over and Dharam, Veer and Akshay had to rush if they wanted to be to the lecture on time. Akshay said that he will tell the entire incident later...........

aw are jaldi update kar ab....😕
anu ki story suspense na rakh 😡😡
le ab maine poora edit likh diya..
i hope u wanted such an edit only... 😳😆
here is my quota...... 🤗 😳

lovely update muah 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great work👏👏👏.....keep rocking⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
i liked this part very much! 👏👏
but arrey, why didnt u tell us that u like long comments??, i always make long posts in the ffs i like 😛
anyways, from the beggining:
"Veer did everything possible to avoid her because he knew that if he saw her even once she would do something to irritate her."
change her to him, or change others words, anyways, u know wat i want to mean, and u know english, im sure better than me, so correct this small mistake of urs. 😛
"bache tiffin kharahe hei.." 😆 soo irritating.. .. whoo.. ananya is cruel 🥱 does anyone care if they eat or dont eat home food 😕 😆 anyways..
oh, akshay and ananya are siblings right? ya... u told us b4, 😛 so sweet.. "see u at home akshay"

As Ananya was going out of the canteen, she saw a guy smoking a cigarette. She went to him and took out the cigarette from his mouth. She threw it on the ground and stamped it until it stopped releasing smoke.

Ananya:- Smoking is not allowed in college premises.---------->😎

🤣that one was really good! 🤣
Agar marne ke itna he shock hain to khud mar. Dusroon ko mat maar.
😆 great.. 👏
aghh.. we are going to discover the 1st serious tone things here, and surprise! bell ring!! 😆😆 anyways, usual thing.. 🥱
cya, at next update 😊
Edited by Girl_2007 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
Very very nice👏👏👏. I really liked that you gave Ananya a very devil-may-care attitude. Please make Ananya Veer love story develop in a very smooth and realistic fashion. Looking forward to your next update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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minid blowing gr8 wah ananya kya ladhki hai yaar kanhi maar kabhi dawa gr8.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: anushababli

arre!!!!!!!!!!!! yeh kya? ek din ho gaya and no replies???? Lagta hai ki kisi ko pasandnahin aaya!!!!!!!!!!!😭

Are paata toh chale update kiya hai tohi padhenge n comment karenge na😡😡😡 me will comment later
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: anushababli

PART 5:-

CANTEEN :- LUNCH TIME

Dharam, Veer and Akshay head to the canteen. They believed Akshay when he said that the canteen is the crowdest place in any college when they say the canteen. There was absolutely no place to sit. They somehow managed to catch a place after a long wait. They sat down. Ananya was sitting at a table next to theirs. Veer did everything possible to avoid her because he knew that if he saw her even once she would do something to irritate her.

Akshay:- Hey i am goimg to get some bhel puri for me. Tum logon ko kya chahiye?

Veer:- No thanks. We brought something from home to eat.

Akshay:- Thats strange. Hardly anyone brings something from home. Everyone eats in the canteen. They are bored of home food.

Veer:- Well, mujhe apni maa ka khaana bahut pasand hain. (Aww!!! Thats so sweet...........)😆😳

Dharam:- Even i am fine Akshay. Go and get something for yourself to eat.

Akshay came back with some food to eat when Ananya said...........

Ananya:- Dekho toh.......... Bacche tiffin khaa rahein hain!!🤣🤣🤣

Veer had enough. He got up but Dharam stopped him again.

Dharam:- Jaane do Veer. Tum bas khaana khao.

Akshay:- Ananya, en logon ka pehla din hain. Jaane do naa. Vaise bhi tumhe dushmano ki kami nahin hain. Kabhi kabar dushman nahin banana ki koshish karo.

Ananya got up rather upset............

Ananya:- Fine!!!!!!!!!!! If you like them so much then you can stay with them. I give a damn.😡

While walking away she looked around and said in a calm voice..................

Ananya:- See you at home Akshay.

As Ananya was going out of the canteen, she saw a guy smoking a cigarette. She went to him and took out the cigarette from his mouth. She threw it on the ground and stamped it until it stopped releasing smoke.

Ananya:- Smoking is not allowed in college premises.

Guy:- What????????

Ananya:- Tujhe angrezi samajh main nahin aati kya?🤣 Thek hain. Hindi main samjhati hoon. College main tum cigarette nahin pe sakte. Agar marne ke itna he shock hain to khud mar. Dusroon ko mat maar. 🤣🤣

As Ananya was leaving the guy said.......

Guy:- Who the hell are you to tell me what to do? Tu hoti kaun hain be?

Ananya:- Tera baap hoon be............🤣 Agar aur ladna hain to bahar chal.

The guy kept quite as he knew it was no use. He knew very well that he would lose in any fight against her.

After she left Veer was still angry that Ananya got away with whatever she said.

Veer:- Why is she always picking on me?😡 Usko aur koi kaam dhandha nahin hain kya?😡

Dharam:- Chodonaa Veer. Ladki hain. Kyun uske saath ulaj rahe ho?

Veer:- Toh kya? She only said that she doesn?t like partiality? So why should i treat her any different from what i would react when a guy does all this? I cant even get her. Sometimes she gets angry and punches anyone she likes or might i say hate and sometimes she acts like a social service person and throws cigarettes on the floor to protect people. What is with her? She doesn?t know me. I can be twice as arrogant as her. (We all know that Veer😊)

Akshay:- Veer, tum nahin jaante ki uska vyavahaar aisa kyun hain. Yahan baaki sab log jaante hain. Tum naye ho. Isi liye usko galat samajh rahe ho.

Veer said in a very sarcastic tone..........

Veer:- Aisa kya bura hadhsa hua uske saath ke vo aisa behave kar rahi hain?😆

Akshay:- Well it goes like this....

But as they say the bell always rings at the wrong time.😆 Break was over and Dharam, Veer and Akshay had to rush if they wanted to be to the lecture on time. Akshay said that he will tell the entire incident later...........

haste jaste maza aa gaya
apni annay to is century i mean 21 me lafi aage bar chuki haii
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loool...wkd...ur dia's r funi! haha...i wna no wahs da story wid her is! update soon! x

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