DharamVeer in 21st Century - Part 23 - Page 67

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shruja

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

Hey Anusha ur Ananya rockkkkkkk!!!!!!!! 👍🏼i just loved her. but which incident happened with her😭

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anusha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Rash2cool
aw are jaldi update kar ab....😕
anu ki story suspense na rakh 😡😡
le ab maine poora edit likh diya..
i hope u wanted such an edit only... 😳😆
here is my quota...... 🤗 😳

lovely update muah 👏

muah muah muah.............

rashi jaan. loved it

thanku

will update soon.

intezaar karna..............

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anusha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: shona_sweet
great work👏👏👏.....keep rocking⭐️⭐️⭐️

thank you shina. so sweet of you. will update it soon.

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anusha

@anushababli

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

i liked this part very much! 👏👏

but arrey, why didnt u tell us that u like long comments??, i always make long posts in the ffs i like 😛

anyways, from the beggining:

"Veer did everything possible to avoid her because he knew that if he saw her even once she would do something to irritate her."that was such a foolish mistake.. i am such a fool. thanks for pointing it out.

change her to him, or change others words, anyways, u know wat i want to mean, and u know english, im sure better than me, so correct this small mistake of urs. 😛

"bache tiffin kharahe hei.." 😆 soo irritating.. .. whoo.. ananya is cruel 🥱 does anyone care if they eat or dont eat home food 😕 😆 anyways.. ragging does happen alot. and ananya toh number one gundi hain. she will grab every oppurtunity to irritate him.

oh, akshay and ananya are siblings right? ya... u told us b4, 😛 so sweet.. "see u at home akshay"well actually you took it wrong. that was a dhamki. you know how siblings fight and these kind of dhamkis are so common.

As Ananya was going out of the canteen, she saw a guy smoking a cigarette. She went to him and took out the cigarette from his mouth. She threw it on the ground and stamped it until it stopped releasing smoke.

Ananya:- Smoking is not allowed in college premises.---------->😎

🤣that one was really good! 🤣

thanku thanku. personal experince tha. thats why i wrote it.

Agar marne ke itna he shock hain to khud mar. Dusroon ko mat maar.

😆 great.. 👏

thanku thanku once again. i personally hate people who smoke to the core.

aghh.. we are going to discover the 1st serious tone things here, and surprise! bell ring!! 😆😆 anyways, usual thing.. 🥱yup. bell always ring at the wrong time.

cya, at next update 😊

thank you for your wonderful comment. will update my ff soon.

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anusha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: asrasrasr
Very very nice👏👏👏. I really liked that you gave Ananya a very devil-may-care attitude. Please make Ananya Veer love story develop in a very smooth and realistic fashion. Looking forward to your next update.

dont worry. will make sure that their love story is really smooth but with alot of twists in between

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anusha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: hiri
minid blowing gr8 wah ananya kya ladhki hai yaar kanhi maar kabhi dawa gr8.

esha

thanks hiri. humari anu toh aisi he hain😆

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anusha

@anushababli

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Posted: 16 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: shruja

Are paata toh chale update kiya hai tohi padhenge n comment karenge na😡😡😡 me will comment later

arre shruja. i dont know what to do. i dont know how to keep you all update on when i have updated my ff. do you have any idea on how i can do that? please let me know yaar