Lost#2- (RN) p74 'The Traitor' pg144

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Agnishikha Raichand

@Agnishikha007

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Posted: 8 years ago

#971

Haii di , your story is so beautiful. Oh I can't believe this is the longest ff I read. Please update.

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Sri

@sridhsc

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Posted: 8 years ago

#972

Arwa u r truly Amazing, how do u think of these plots dear.

Now the wait again starts to know what's going to happen.

I just finished both the threads today.

Got to know a little and still there's a lot.

Feeling sad for Naina as his harsh behaviour towards her and the way he used the words r really hurtful.

I do understand what he is going through still it's indigestible.

Those r not the words a husband should blurt out let alone a the man who thinks she is the world to him and his soul.

I know it's a fiction but tears rolled down when I read those 2 parts.

How long will be the wait now as after a year u updated.

Take care

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Yasmin

@Yazzi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#973

I really enjoyed this story initially but now every time I read this it's with a heavy heart.

I still appreciate your writing, you are talented and I am not going to take that away from you and you bring out so many emotions into your story that actually makes the readers feel as well and that is why for the past numerous chapters I'm always left sympathetic towards Naina and really angry with Rajveer.

I am not going to lie I don't understand why is it necessary for him to cheat on Naina for the mission, it's not needed, I get flirting to keep cover but to actually have physical intimacy with some one else other than your wife all for the sake of a mission, I personally find that repulsive and very insulting to a sacred bond of marriage and then on top of that I feel as if he doesn't even care that he's essentially destroying his marriage with the women he claims to 'love' - it's quoted because I have lost faith in his character and I don't believe he loves her. I don't know if that's because you haven't shown his internal dilemma in regards to betraying Naina in the worst imaginable way or even remotely showed him being guilty or even try to explain himself to Naina of all people.

I get that the mission is important, this will be really Important for Naina as well because she wants justice for her brother more than anyone - Rajveer himself, but its not fair to break someone over this, some one who you are meant to cherish.

I am at the point in the story where I don't actually care for RN to happen because of the way Rajveer, oops R2 is (because lets be real Rajveer is dead for all intent and purposes) I believe that Naina deserves someone who will be faithful to her regardless of the obstacles and hardships that come their way. She deserves someone who will respect her and their marriage.

I know this isn't going to happen because more than likely you'll make Naina take him back with open arms, but I really am hoping that Naina leaves him, tells him that she can't be with some one who has made mockery out of her, who has disrespected her in a cruel way. I hope she questions him and ask what did she do to deserve this from him? If you can make R2 redeemable (cheating for me is unredeemable) then I can possibly start rooting for them again, but at this moment in time I have lost all faith in their relations, it has lost that pureness to it which is the whole reason I fell in love with this couple in the first place - Rajveers character for me has been destroyed beyond fixing.

Once again this is not insult to you are your writing, it's the way I personally feel about Rajveer's characterisation and the whole cheating business, I am really against this and it makes me sick to my stomach when I read about a Raj doing that to Naina because I can't get the show Rajveer out of my mind when reading stories about RN and the way his character was portrayed on the show I am positive he would have never even considered being unfaithful to Naina, but I realise that this Rajveer is not anything like the show Rajveer and we will need to learn how differentiate between them.

I am sorry If you took this comment negatively that was not my intention, I just wanted to get this all of my chest :)

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arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#974

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Nice..

Thanks very much

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit
Nice part Arwa..

Thanks very much Suhana

Originally posted by: kajalkalwani

Wonderful update

Thanks very much

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Nice one

Thanks very much

Originally posted by: -purnima-

Long time no see of captain ... 😊 glad to have him back ... - thank you

Hope Goa trip not only brings in answers to his questions ...but along with gives him chance to have quality "WE" time with his wife ...fun & frolicking on Goan beaches 😛 😆 😆 ... - hmmm lets see what happens

Goodluck to captain &husband Rajveer !!! - great

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Woww... After such a long time.. I really missed reading this one.. I don't know when will we get another update for this one but I am so glad that you are not leaving the stories incomplete... That really requires some devotion... So hats off to you for continuing always.. - yeh im sorry im not at all regular with this fic but i do try

I loved the update... Although I really missed reading rajveer and naina scenes.. It's been so long since they had a nice conversation let alone doing some romance... I hope that happens soon... - hmmm yes but sometimes the yearn for it increases curiosity

Sonia is really a fool... She doesn't know what she exactly wants... But one thing she never forgets is to flirt with Raj... Seriously.. In between such a serious conversation she could think of kiss.. Wowww.. She needs help... Lol.. - she is a cheap s**t what else could be said

Now I am looking forward to read some Raj naina scenes in the next update... - well lets see
Hopefully sooner this time..
Continue soon

Originally posted by: das.jayati.1

AMAIZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVED IT SO MUCH...
WAITING FOR NEXT...
TO PM ME...

Thanks very much

Originally posted by: senchaitali131

Haii di I just read all part of this story. Oh its very good. The way u draw all part is magical.please update soon& pm me when update.

Thanks very much for loving the fic so much

Originally posted by: RNforever

nice part
after long time u updated
but plz yr next update thida jaldi or bada part
RN sceen toh missing the plz put some RN sceen also ...
love the part
but plz break the suspension soon ...

Thanks very much for loving the part

Originally posted by: Agnishikha007

Haii di , your story is so beautiful. Oh I can't believe this is the longest ff I read. Please update.

Thanks very much

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RamAayeHain

@RamAayeHain

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#975

I read all chapters now

Very interesting story

Please continue it and pm me also

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shilpa_akki

@shilpa_akki

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#976

Js read ur ff.. .i love Raj and naina so much ...n u reflect their emotions very well beautifully...
Update soon.. .
N pm me too

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#977

i am starting to read,i recently start watching lrl on sony pal ,and i love it and now u am reading ff .plz add me to ur pm list ,i fall in love with this serial and raj ,every one .raj and naina never physically close but they are such a gem.i really love it and plz update soon ,and if u plz tell me some or ff of lrl

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shilpa_akki

@shilpa_akki

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#978

Hey plz continue Yr.. ...eagarly waiting for the next part

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#979

hi arwa

finished both thread ,with working and making mistake like putting tea in vegetable and mixing curd in milk,i was so engrossed in your ff i just forget to work or eat, and i can say i lost in this story .plz update soon i was so shocked that this ff is running from almost 9 year you really a amazing writer ,a request plz pm me and plz dont leave this in middle and plz finish this ff.d ont leave it in mid. i want to read ot till the end plz update soon

Edited by adi_gupta - 8 years ago

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arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#980

Originally posted by: vssdp
I read all chapters now
Very interesting story
Please continue it and pm me also

Thanks very much for enjoying the story

Originally posted by: gdfss

Js read ur ff.. .i love Raj and naina so much ...n u reflect their emotions very well beautifully...
Update soon.. .
N pm me too

Thanks very much

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

i am starting to read,i recently start watching lrl on sony pal ,and i love it and now u am reading ff .plz add me to ur pm list ,i fall in love with this serial and raj ,every one .raj and naina never physically close but they are such a gem.i really love it and plz update soon ,and if u plz tell me some or ff of lrl

hi arwa
finished both thread ,with working and making mistake like putting tea in vegetable and mixing curd in milk,i was so engrossed in your ff i just forget to work or eat, and i can say i lost in this story .plz update soon i was so shocked that this ff is running from almost 9 year you really a amazing writer ,a request plz pm me and plz dont leave this in middle and plz finish this ff.d ont leave it in mid. i want to read ot till the end plz update soon