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Posted: 9 years ago
Just end the two parts!!!! Just awesome writing!!! I m spellbounded after reading it!!! Plz update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

It's long when u updated the fic last time I almost forgot the storyline I mean the last point where the last update posted. 😆 😆 😆

I had to re read the past part to think again about it. 😛 😛 😛

Anyways nice update. 👏 👏 👏

Raj looks still confused at many points. Alekh and Yudi came there surprising him. He has to get angry over them. Alekh has asked direct questions to him though he trust Raj till now completely.😊 😊 😊

From where Col. Shakti called Yudi there. It means someone is planning something against them. Raj is highly confused that's why he has to interrogate Sonia now. Someone knows that Yudi is alive. 😔
😔 😔

Here Naina is fuming over Raj as she is now feeling that Raj is betraying him and she now thought to teach him a lesson but I think it will be wrong. Major Bhargav is really smart to notice her expressions but it was so matured that she hide her expressions.

Raj is good at heart and this always shows when he takes care of Sonia who was injured surprising her. She has never received such compassionate gesture from anyone. But Raj is Raj so loving. 😳 😳 😳

He was really smart otherwise Sonia can inject that drug to Raj and he would have not ended up telling all the secrets but this was Sonia's turn to reveal the info she has. But this was really surprising that she didn't tell much to Raj. 😕 😕 😕

The song you chose was perfect and suitable for the situation. Sonia was behaving so desperate just to divert Raj's all attention but she didn't knew it's Raj. Abhimanyu's mystery has been not solved yet.

Update soon dear.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kajalkalwani

Thanks fr updating. Amazing update hopefully rajveer comes to noe d truth soon



Thanks very much for loving the update. Hmmm lets see what happens


Originally posted by: m.bahety


That was amazing! You know the thrill element of ur fic is awesome...it keeps the reader engaged to the fic and even if you update a lil late ppl still remember the point where you last left the fic... - thanks very much for loving that element of my fic

Thanks for the pm and plz update soon...




Originally posted by: sakha_sakhi


Hiii Dear Arwa...

Really very nice... You are a very good writer... - thanks very much

Liked the desperate steps by Raj... I suppose Rio is Naveen... The same person who has two times attacked Naina... - hmmm well lets see what it turns out to be

Loved this update... waiting for next. - thanks

Thank you so much for PM...

Sakhi







Thanks very much




Thanks very much



Originally posted by: RNforever


hey dear
finally u get time to update
lost is one of my favorite ff on RN
i just simply love it
thanks for updating
i hope next part u will update soon



love naina



Hey Naina thanks a lot for loving my fic.



Originally posted by: suhana.dixit


Nice part..

Waiting for the new update.😃



Thanks very much Suhana


Originally posted by: Milleegarg


Hey its awesme
Plz update soon
Naina's behaviour toward rajveer n rajveer pain n d mistry behind all the things

Pm me whenever u update



Thanks very much for loving it so much



Originally posted by: anu000


Just end the two parts!!!! Just awesome writing!!! I m spellbounded after reading it!!! Plz update soon :)



Thanks very much for loving my fic and reading it.
Edited by awaazilicious - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

First of all I am so glad that you chose to update this fic first..this is my favorite one.. - thanks very much

And I loved every bit of this update. ..there are so many plans and back stabbers in this one that it is now actually difficult to remember that who is back stabbing whom... - yeh that is the idea to keep it interesting

I just know that whatever happens raj and naina has to stay together for our own sanity😭..can't see them apart for long. .. - surely lets see how long it takes for them to get together again

the mms I am sure is of Raj naina's private moments and raj can't afford to let it go viral for obvious reasons. ..there is too much at stake plus he can't let anyone see naina like that...he knows that it's his duty to protect her dignity and he will go to any length to protect her... - hmmm ur on the right lines

And now coming to sonia..she is purely confused. ..don't know what she is doing and for whom...anyway her plan totally backfired and I hope Raj gets his hand on that Mms and also the boss... - yes the ball shall be in his court

One more thing. ..actually a wish. ..I really want to see what will happen if naina discovers that she is pregnant at this point?? How will Raj react? ? Considering he is not allowed to be close to Naina and naina hating him for his behaviour. ..how will he deal with the news and will the enemies use this to their benefit?? Pls include this if possible in the story. ..if not then its fine too...- sorry at present it wont be possible but can be part later

Continue soon






Originally posted by: -purnima-

Here comes my "lost" capt 😳 😳 yippiieee ...long time no see ...
Hope all doing well 😃😃😃... - hehehe i always luv it when u say this

The mystery is getting deeper & deeper with every day, every move 😃😃 & i am loving it...as I know the deeper the mystery will be...my capt will solve it with more intelligence 😃😳😳😳... - oh yes that he shall do

Till next UD will keep guess who Rio is, wonder if he is whom I am thinking to be 😆😆😆😆 coz at this stage I dont think he can just be a new character, but for sure someone from Rajveer's past 😊😊😊 - hmmm keep guessing hehe

Hope admist solving Sonia Rio mystery captain gets enough few time to sort his own love story 😛😆 poor Naina...handling everything back there all alone 😊😊 these two need to come together as they are invincible together 😃😃😃 - surely its true

Goodluck to my capt 👍🏼 hope he is able to reach to the end of mystery & no more desperate measures 😛😆😆 - hehehe well lets hope he doesn't need any

Oh yes!! come back soon next time soon(est)😳😳😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
Egrly waiting for next updt !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey great update with a lots of happenings around.😊 First Yudi and Alekh came up to him surprising him than he came to know that Yudi was called here by Colonel Shakti 😲 who is not in touch with Raj from sometime.😕Than here Sonia planned to trap Raj with that drug waala injection which was used by Ritu in an episode of LRL 😉 but thank god Raj's smartness didn't end it up as she wanted.😊 Instead she got injected and now she is forced to tell the truth to him. Surprisingly she didn't tell him much and I can't believe she has any sort of control over her mind.😔 I think she just know a little. Naina bhi na I know Raj is behaving differently but all I think she should trust Raj as much as Alekh and Yudi trust him.🤔 Even Bhargav could read her mind. 😒
Update fast.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha


It's long when u updated the fic last time I almost forgot the storyline I mean the last point where the last update posted. 😆 😆 😆


I had to re read the past part to think again about it. 😛 😛 😛

Anyways nice update. 👏 👏 👏 - thanks very much

Raj looks still confused at many points. Alekh and Yudi came there surprising him. He has to get angry over them. Alekh has asked direct questions to him though he trust Raj till now completely.😊 😊 😊 - yes so many things are going on that it is hard for him to believe anything

From where Col. Shakti called Yudi there. It means someone is planning something against them. Raj is highly confused that's why he has to interrogate Sonia now. Someone knows that Yudi is alive. 😔
😔 😔 - its a big loop hole

Here Naina is fuming over Raj as she is now feeling that Raj is betraying him and she now thought to teach him a lesson but I think it will be wrong. Major Bhargav is really smart to notice her expressions but it was so matured that she hide her expressions. - yes she is very smart indeed

Raj is good at heart and this always shows when he takes care of Sonia who was injured surprising her. She has never received such compassionate gesture from anyone. But Raj is Raj so loving. 😳 😳 😳 - that he sure is

He was really smart otherwise Sonia can inject that drug to Raj and he would have not ended up telling all the secrets but this was Sonia's turn to reveal the info she has. But this was really surprising that she didn't tell much to Raj. 😕 😕 😕 - he is smarter because it had happened before and he isn't an officer just like that. Well she told him many things which would be revealed in the next part

The song you chose was perfect and suitable for the situation. Sonia was behaving so desperate just to divert Raj's all attention but she didn't knew it's Raj. Abhimanyu's mystery has been not solved yet. - hmmm just like he was desperate she was too

Update soon dear.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita25

Hey great update with a lots of happenings around.😊 - thanks very much. yes full of action part


First Yudi and Alekh came up to him surprising him than he came to know that Yudi was called here by Colonel Shakti 😲 who is not in touch with Raj from sometime.😕 - yep lots of confusion

Than here Sonia planned to trap Raj with that drug waala injection which was used by Ritu in an episode of LRL 😉 but thank god Raj's smartness didn't end it up as she wanted.😊 Instead she got injected and now she is forced to tell the truth to him. - yes he is very smart

Surprisingly she didn't tell him much and I can't believe she has any sort of control over her mind.😔 I think she just know a little. - hmmm well she has said quite much which would be revealed in the next part

Naina bhi na I know Raj is behaving differently but all I think she should trust Raj as much as Alekh and Yudi trust him.🤔 Even Bhargav could read her mind. 😒 - lets see
Update fast.

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Posted: 9 years ago
dear it is an excellent story ever read please update the next part waiting for you to continue please
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: das.jayati.1

dear it is an excellent story ever read please update the next part waiting for you to continue please


Thanks very much for loving this fic

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