Mohabbatein (Mayur FF) part 5 page 11 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW COOL FF.PLZZZZZ WILL U PM ME.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowow really cute story i love your part 1&2
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bulbul123

Part 1

Nupur at her house:
Nupur: OMG mein late ho jogi collage ke liye.
Nupur's mum: Nupur are nashta kare le
Nupur: Ma mein late ho jogi mujhe jana hai bye
Nupur's mum: arye nupur son to zara
Nupur: nahi ma abhi nahi bade mein
Nupur left she started walking. It was quite hot that day and she was thirsty. she wiped her sweat with her duppata.
Voice: pani lo
Nupur turned around
Nupur: Tum! Tum yaha kya kare rehe ho?
Mayank: yeh road kya tumne banaye hai ke yeh mujse pooch rahe ho
anyways pani lo lagta hai ke tumhe garmie lag rahe hai
Nupur: Nahi, mujhe tumhara pani nahi chahye aur vasie bhi mein itni late ho joge aur tum mujhe aur late kara rahe ho
Mayank: Tum kasie ladke ho mein tumhe pani de raha hu aur tum mujhe attitude dakar rahe ho. Tum larkiya bhi na
Nupur gave him evils. As she was walking fast she slipped but suddenly mayank caught her. They stared at each other for quite a while nupur looked down mayank let go off her.
Nupur: Thanks
Mayank: No problem
They arrived at the collage they attended there english class where they went to the library.
Nupur: shh shh hey mayank
Mayank: Chup, ollu ke pati!!
Nupur: Kya tumne mujhe kaha? she shouted
Assitance: SHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
Mayank: Pagal ho gaye ho kya?
Nupur: Tum pagal ho, huh
Nupur went to get some books for herself for her project she was doing in english. She picked up atleast 7 books and coudn't even see where she was going. On the other side mayank was coming they didnt see each other and crashed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nupur: yeh tumne kya kar diya?
Mayank: mein ne, saath books leke gomthi ho aur phir mujhe khete ho ke maine kya kiya
Nupur: Ab moo band karo aur meri madath karo khathabhi chane ke liye
They went down to pick up the books and bumped each other on the head!
Nupur: OUCH!
Mayank: kya karo mein tumhara
Break time
Gunjun: Hi Nupur
Nupur: hi gunjun (all fedup)
Gunjun: kya kua?
Nupur: kuch bhi nahi. Bas vo mayank. Kya mayank ko koi aur college nahi mila tha? kya bas yahi college that puri india mein?
Gunjun: Kya nupur vo tumhe kya khetha hai tum bhi na. Atleast vo ose samrat ke jasa to nahi hai na.
Gunjun turned and saw samrat with these girl's she gave him eveil's
Nupur: Oh please gunjun tum nahi ose janthi pagal karta hai vo subko. Mera pura din bura gaya!
Gunjun: Acha, chaur tu ready hai na kal ke liye?
Nupur: Kyu kal kya hai:
Gunjun: Kyu bhool gaye kal humara Hisory ka rip hai os jungle ke pass. Mujhe to dar lagta hai vaha se koi shear r gaya to?
Nupur: Ary ha mein to bhool gaye aur for Mayank bhi are raha hai na. I wish vaha koi shear use ka jaye
Gunjun: Aur samrat bhi are raha hai.
Nupur+Gunjun: Mar gaye
I hope you liked this part
i am really sorry for any spelling mistakes

It is nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bulbul123

part 2

mrs labichaut: chalo chalo sab bus mein charo
All the students were gettin ready for the trip they all entered the bus
voice: ary ruko mine bhi arye hu
the bus started. Nupur ran after it as she got near the door she saw mayank
Mayank: Haath do
nupur put her hand forward so mayank could get hold of it he pulled her in and they both fell onto the floor. Nupur's hair was covering half of her face, mayank slowly and gently notted it back. nupur closed her eyes and mayank just coudn't stop starin at her.
Gunjun: Di mein yaha hu
Mayank and nupur both got up.
Nupur: thankyou mere madat karne ke leye
Mayank: Koi baat nahi chote billyo ko aksar madat chaye hote hai
Nupur gave him evils and as she walked past him she stepped on his foot
Nupur: Aksar gado ko chot lagte hai! Aur vasie tum mard to nahi ho kyu ke meine suna tha kei marad ko dard nahi hota lekin tum to dard ho raha hai to tum gadhe hue na!
As nupur started walking mayank got hold of her hand and pulled her towards him
Mayank: Dard to hua hai lekin is chote ka nahi kise aur chote ka
Nupur looked down and went off when she arrived to where gunjun was, she saw priya
Gunjun: Kya di app bhi na itni dair karde ab yaha priya hai app vaha mayank ke pass bethye
Nupur: KYA!!!! Mein aur us mayank ke pass pagal hogaye hai kya gunjun!
Gunjun: Please di
nupur went to mayank
Nupur: Oye gade mein yaha beth sakti hu?
Mayank: Agar tum kise ko gada kaho ge to vo tumhe apna pass behne dega kya? pyar se bolo to phir
Nupur: mayank je mein apke pas beth sakti hu kya? All cross and annoyed
Mayank: Ha nupur je ap yaha beth sakti hai
They didnt talk for a while and nupur fell asleep. The window was open and nupur's duppata covered mayank's face. Mayank was enjoying that moment as if it was the most beautiful moment of his life. He closed his eyes and just felt the duppata touch is face.
They arrived to there destination
Thats all for now hope you liked it
Sorry for any spelling mistakes

Plz update soon.
cant wait.
Thanx.😃😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
very cute!
Love it!
Great update!
Continue soon when u have time!
Byee see yaa!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowowo awesomeeeee partttt plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi bulbul,pls continue soon yaar!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey the FF sounsd really good
njoyed readin both the part..cont.soon wud love 2 read more!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Veryyyy cute. I can't wait for more. If you can pm when you update, that'd be great, if not it's okay. But continuee soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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abey oye !
kabhi update karne ke baaare me bhi socha hai 😡=P

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