Mohabbatein (Mayur FF) part 5 page 11

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Mohabbatein

Welcome everyone this is my first FF in this forum and if it is a success then i may start another one. I am a BIG fan of Mayur so i thought why not do my very own FF. I will try to keep this FF as romantic as possible and sweet. I will try to update every week. So i will update as soon as possible.

Character


Mayank:
A sweet,cute,adorable boy who is in love with his books and only his books. Loves helping his friends and thinks he will never fall in love. Girl's run after him but he run's after his books

Nupur:
A sweet,cute girl who is always in temper whenever Mayank is around her. At night in her diray she right's about how her prince charming will be like. Always in wait for her love.

Gunjun:
Nupur's best friend. She is always there for her whenever she needs help but also get's annoyed when samrat is around her.

Samrat:
The most popular boy in college. Girl's are always mad about him. He is cool and he loves his bike. He loves annoying Gunjun

Diya
Nupur's biggest enermy she always want to hurt her feelings

Rohan: (played by karan singh grover)
Sort of helps Nupur and Mayank to come closer. (Comes later in the story)
Updates

Part 1- page 2

Part 2 - page 4

Part 3- page 8

part4- page 10

Part 5- page 11
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi!i'll be eagerly waiting 4 d ud!do ud soon!MaYur trully rock!!!!
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Hi do start soon....😊I love MayUr jodi lots...😳😳
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Very good idea, Start it soon, i love Mayur too 😳
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interesting
i will love to read it
do post the 1st part as soon as u can yea?
love
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hai princess am eagerly waiting for the ff to begin,.nvr knew abotu this hidden talent.😉....do update soon.......
Luv Raee🤗
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I can't wait to read it. I know it'll be great!
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Yay, Bulbul would love to read ur fanfic! Post soon.
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plz update it soon i m waiting
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Part 1
Nupur at her house:
Nupur: OMG mein late ho jogi collage ke liye.
Nupur's mum: Nupur are nashta kare le
Nupur: Ma mein late ho jogi mujhe jana hai bye
Nupur's mum: arye nupur son to zara
Nupur: nahi ma abhi nahi bade mein
Nupur left she started walking. It was quite hot that day and she was thirsty. she wiped her sweat with her duppata.
Voice: pani lo
Nupur turned around
Nupur: Tum! Tum yaha kya kare rehe ho?
Mayank: yeh road kya tumne banaye hai ke yeh mujse pooch rahe ho
anyways pani lo lagta hai ke tumhe garmie lag rahe hai
Nupur: Nahi, mujhe tumhara pani nahi chahye aur vasie bhi mein itni late ho joge aur tum mujhe aur late kara rahe ho
Mayank: Tum kasie ladke ho mein tumhe pani de raha hu aur tum mujhe attitude dakar rahe ho. Tum larkiya bhi na
Nupur gave him evils. As she was walking fast she slipped but suddenly mayank caught her. They stared at each other for quite a while nupur looked down mayank let go off her.
Nupur: Thanks
Mayank: No problem
They arrived at the collage they attended there english class where they went to the library.
Nupur: shh shh hey mayank
Mayank: Chup, ollu ke pati!!
Nupur: Kya tumne mujhe kaha? she shouted
Assitance: SHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
Mayank: Pagal ho gaye ho kya?
Nupur: Tum pagal ho, huh
Nupur went to get some books for herself for her project she was doing in english. She picked up atleast 7 books and coudn't even see where she was going. On the other side mayank was coming they didnt see each other and crashed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nupur: yeh tumne kya kar diya?
Mayank: mein ne, saath books leke gomthi ho aur phir mujhe khete ho ke maine kya kiya
Nupur: Ab moo band karo aur meri madath karo khathabhi chane ke liye
They went down to pick up the books and bumped each other on the head!
Nupur: OUCH!
Mayank: kya karo mein tumhara
Break time
Gunjun: Hi Nupur
Nupur: hi gunjun (all fedup)
Gunjun: kya kua?
Nupur: kuch bhi nahi. Bas vo mayank. Kya mayank ko koi aur college nahi mila tha? kya bas yahi college that puri india mein?
Gunjun: Kya nupur vo tumhe kya khetha hai tum bhi na. Atleast vo ose samrat ke jasa to nahi hai na.
Gunjun turned and saw samrat with these girl's she gave him eveil's
Nupur: Oh please gunjun tum nahi ose janthi pagal karta hai vo subko. Mera pura din bura gaya!
Gunjun: Acha, chaur tu ready hai na kal ke liye?
Nupur: Kyu kal kya hai:
Gunjun: Kyu bhool gaye kal humara Hisory ka rip hai os jungle ke pass. Mujhe to dar lagta hai vaha se koi shear r gaya to?
Nupur: Ary ha mein to bhool gaye aur for Mayank bhi are raha hai na. I wish vaha koi shear use ka jaye
Gunjun: Aur samrat bhi are raha hai.
Nupur+Gunjun: Mar gaye
I hope you liked this part
i am really sorry for any spelling mistakes
Edited by bulbul123 - 16 years ago

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