Mohabbatein (Mayur FF) part 5 page 11

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bulbul

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Raee_rockz
really nice bulbul..........👍🏼 do update soon...will b w8in'😃
Luv Raee🤗

thanks raee

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bulbul

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

part 2

mrs labichaut: chalo chalo sab bus mein charo

All the students were gettin ready for the trip they all entered the bus

voice: ary ruko mine bhi arye hu

the bus started. Nupur ran after it as she got near the door she saw mayank

Mayank: Haath do

nupur put her hand forward so mayank could get hold of it he pulled her in and they both fell onto the floor. Nupur's hair was covering half of her face, mayank slowly and gently notted it back. nupur closed her eyes and mayank just coudn't stop starin at her.

Gunjun: Di mein yaha hu

Mayank and nupur both got up.

Nupur: thankyou mere madat karne ke leye

Mayank: Koi baat nahi chote billyo ko aksar madat chaye hote hai

Nupur gave him evils and as she walked past him she stepped on his foot

Nupur: Aksar gado ko chot lagte hai! Aur vasie tum mard to nahi ho kyu ke meine suna tha kei marad ko dard nahi hota lekin tum to dard ho raha hai to tum gadhe hue na!

As nupur started walking mayank got hold of her hand and pulled her towards him

Mayank: Dard to hua hai lekin is chote ka nahi kise aur chote ka

Nupur looked down and went off when she arrived to where gunjun was, she saw priya

Gunjun: Kya di app bhi na itni dair karde ab yaha priya hai app vaha mayank ke pass bethye

Nupur: KYA!!!! Mein aur us mayank ke pass pagal hogaye hai kya gunjun!

Gunjun: Please di

nupur went to mayank

Nupur: Oye gade mein yaha beth sakti hu?

Mayank: Agar tum kise ko gada kaho ge to vo tumhe apna pass behne dega kya? pyar se bolo to phir

Nupur: mayank je mein apke pas beth sakti hu kya? All cross and annoyed

Mayank: Ha nupur je ap yaha beth sakti hai

They didnt talk for a while and nupur fell asleep. The window was open and nupur's duppata covered mayank's face. Mayank was enjoying that moment as if it was the most beautiful moment of his life. He closed his eyes and just felt the duppata touch is face.

They arrived to there destination

Thats all for now hope you liked it

Sorry for any spelling mistakes

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Zaara Parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

aww sooo sooo cute.. loved it yaar... MayUr r too cute.. please yaar continue i really like it... MayUr ROCK..

Zaara

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Tania

@Sadaf.B

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Aweosme!! Very cute!!!! Loved Mayur..

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bulbul

@bulbul123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: brklyngurl4u
aww sooo sooo cute.. loved it yaar... MayUr r too cute.. please yaar continue i really like it... MayUr ROCK..

Zaara

thankou so much yr coments really mean alot

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coolmimz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

WONDERBAR..I SO MUCH LOVE IT..ITZ 2 ROMANTIC...

I CAN IMAGION IT IN MY HEAD

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Shahida

@Inshira

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Hey I started to read ur ff very nice story line cnt wait till da rest cont soon😛

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SamLuvsSaRun

@SamLuvsSaRun

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Oh WOW!!!!!MayUr superb..😍😍DDLJ wala scene bhi haat dene wala gr8 yaa...Please continue soon dear....IT was FANTASTIC 😳😳

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sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

I JUST READ YOUR FF AND ITS AWESOME PLZ UPDATE SON

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pooja

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

hi!so sorry yaar!net kharab tha isiliye aaj ud padhi hai!

anyways,the ud was very good!(both of them)👏 i suppose its ur 1st fic isiliye spell.mistakes hain,koi baat nahin,you'll definitely overcome it!excellent ud⭐️,do update soon!

Edited by cutiepooja - 16 years ago