Mohabbatein (Mayur FF) part 5 page 11

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww just awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i m looking forward bulbul u didn't tell u also write ff'z?

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angelwingz04

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

heyyyy it was awesome..... plz continue sooon plz!!

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vidisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

nice story line.......could u plz add me to ur pm list and pm me when u update

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bulbul

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

thanks guys for your comments. Want to say sorry for not updating.

Part 4

Nupur: Hum kaha hain?

Mayank: Basically agar tumhe janna hain to hum goom gaye hain.

Nupur: KYA!!!!!!!!!!!! hey mr encyclopedia Tumhe ek Gardan ka diraction nahi mallom kya

Mayank:NAHI, tumhe mallom hain to tum jo acha. Pata nahi kis gai ka dood piya hain, har baat mein irratate karti hain!!!!!!

Then they hear some voices. Nupur holded mayank tightly around his arm.

Mayank: CHARO mujhe

They heard Benji from somewhere and new they were not lost and they ran to the group.

Gunjun: DI

nupz:Gunjun

and they hugged each other really tight

Gunjun:Di tum kaya thi?

Nupur:Mucho maat, abhi chalo !!!!!

Next day

Gunjun: Di uto jaldi karo

Nupur:Gunjun 2 minutes

Gunjun: NAHI DI JALDI, hum arj mountains pe jayge. Kitna maza aye ga na

Nupur: Ary ha jalo chaldi

Gunjun: Di change to karlo

Nupur: Huh, ha mein to bhool hi gaye thi

They all got together and started climbing

Nupur: Gunjun os mayank ko dekho kaise speed boat ke tarha char raha hain. Damag teez tu hain lekin iski giraffe se bhi lambhi laate bhi teez hain. Oye mayank, taro mein arahi hoon. Gunjun tum samrat ke saath toro mein mayank ke saath jati hoon.

Gunjun: Lekin di mein.....

Samrat:Hi bbz, kasie ho

Gunjun: vo mein teek hoon.

Samrat:Lagta hain ke tum sooch rahe ho ke mein tum hare saat flirt karo ga, lekin don't worry mein nahi karo ga. Tumhare saath to bilkul nahi! pooco kyu?

Gunjun: erm kyu

Samrat: Kyu ke tum mere flirting ko pyar na samjo!!!!!!!

Gunjun looked at him in surprise

Samrat: relax Gunji main sirf mazak kar raha hu

Nupur:Hi mayank

Mayank: (Whisper) Are gaye musebaat.

Nupur:Tumne kuch kaha?

Mayank:Nahi to tumse kaya kehe sakta hoon mere itni himat, nahi baba

Nupur: Vo to hain. Mayank vo dekho

Mayank:Kya

Nupur: Vaha baba, us tree pe

Mayank:Kya hain us tree pe

Nupur: Uspa kisi 2 pyar karne vale kabootro ne apna na lekha hain, ke unka pyar hamesha is dunya mein rahe. Mayank jab mujhe mere raj kumar melega to mein bhi yahi garu gi. Aur kabootar ban ke ur jo ge!

Mayank: Abhi ur sakti ho to is mountain par uro aur mujhe marf kro

Nupur: MAYANK tumhara naak father chritmas ke jaise red red kyu hota hain hameha? nka naak to sardi ke vaja hota hain, lekin tumhara naak to gusa karne ke vaja rahta hain. Becareful kahe ye ek dil itna karam na ho jaye ke poof ho aur gayab (laughs)

Mayank: Nupur dekho tum apne raste jo aur mein apne jata hoon. Aur mujhe maarf karo plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Thats all hope you liked it. Sorry for any grammer mistake.

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Priyanka

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

wow kya nok jhok hai.loved the kabhootar scene😆update soon .pm me😊

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Tania

@Sadaf.B

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Awesome, Loved the kabootar part.. 😆

continue soon,

Tania

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bulbul

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

thanks guys for comments they mean alot

Part 5

Nupur: Theek hain jati hoon mere baap!!!!!!!!😡

Mayank: Thankgod

Nupz went but she was really anooyed with mayu she went another route that was diffrent from the rest of them. Mayank saw her going near the edge of the mountain.

Nupz: Samjta hain kya apne ap ko, thori achi banki koshishi kar rahi thi aur vo............................. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Suddently mayank came and grabbed her before she feel off the mountain, nupz hugged mayank so tight thats he didn't even dream of letting him go for a sec. Each sec she kept holdinghim tighter and tighter as she has the fear that if she let go she would fall.

Mayu:Nupur sab kuch teek hai, mujhe choro gi mere daam got raha hai ab

Nupz let go and started blushing😳, Sorry vo mein

Gunjun:Di kya kar rahi ho?

Mayu: bad mein baat kar ge ab chalo

They kept walking and walking until they got to the top and when they did they were amazed byy the beauty of nature😛

nUPZ: wOw gunjun woh, tumhe mallom hain ke mein chati hoon mera Raj kumar yaha mujhe le aye aur Mujhe parpose kare😳

Mayu was hearing all this and whispered: Maloom nahi kab iska Raj kumar aye ga aur hume mukti milege. Vaise iska Raj kumar himat vala hoga jo iske saath rahega

As nupz and gunjun took pics, they were told to now go back to the hotel before the weather condition get's worse as it was starting to get really chilly

Back in thier rooms Gunjun told nupz that she is about to have a shower. Nupz was getting bored and thought that she will play a trick on someone and who be a better person then mayu😆😆😆

Nupz:Chal nupur Kaam pe lagja

Thats all sorry not feeling so creative today😭