Jeevan Saathi- AR-Part 5 Pg.1 | 11/25/08 - Page 3

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever

Anita!!!!

Oh my god. This is so amazing...

I'm seriously dumbfounded after reading the first part...It's so different, yaar! And I too was expecting that girl in the white churidaar to be Riddhima...

But I was very pleasantly surprised! It's kinda like the original story of DMG, which I would've loved to see onscreen...Kindasorta...And I'm definitely going to keep up with this story, hun!

(You know how much I love Anjali, na? 😳 I'm quite devastated that she's dead, though...*sniffle* Kaash woh kam se kam Atul ke liye zinda hoti...If Atul is going to be a character in the story, that is...There goes my wishful thinking again...)

Love the story so far, and keep PMing me, if you can!

Ooooh, and if you ever get a chance, would you consider writing an AA fanfic? (Just asking...You're such an amazing writer, jaan! 👏 )

Originally posted by: anitamalik

Bornaaa! Boy am I so glad to see you, the hugest PaNa fan EVER, grace my FF with your appearance! I HAD to reply back to your comment first after reading such amazing compliments for my writing coming from you!😳

Borna, Awww, I'm flattered reading your comments😳 If I feel that if my readers are getting satisfied, then my writing feels worth it...I feel like my effort is truly paying off..Thanks for making me feel that way Borna...You know what's reaally funny---you're telling me that I am an amazing writer--but the fact is that english is my worst subject--believe it or not.😲😆I'm just an amateur when it comes to creative writing and I'm still learning---so if you see any mistakes while reading this FF, then please do point it out! Any constructive criticism is welcome and your opinion matters a lot..so tell me frankly what you feel when you read a part...😊 I want to improve..lol..

I kind of made it look like the white churidaar girl was going to be Riddhima...It was misleading...but I guess that's what I was trying to portray when I was writing the part out...I had to confuse you readers..LOL..😆Thats the whole fun of writing--being able to show what you want to show..

I'm soo sorry Borna...But my concept required me to kill Anjali..Im extremely sorry! I could somehow imagine her being Armaan's wife..LOL..don't ask why...I don't know myself either...I haven't thought about Atul's character yet, but on your insistence--I would be more than happy to put him in here...Maybe he would fit a cameo role..Hmmmm--I gotta start thinking now..LOL...I could fit him in! I will try to grant your wish!

Aww..thanks a lot Borna...I will SURELY PM you whenever I update!

Hmmmmmm...Would I ever consider writing an AA fic?...Do you really even have to ask me to write a AA fic? I would be MORE than Happy to write an AA fic for all those Atul-Anjali lovers out there--including me and you of course!😊 i just need time to think of a good concept for both of them...maybe it could be both a AR and AA FF? If you have a concept or storyline you would like to see then please PM me and tell me!

Thanks Again Borna!

Love

Anita

Saira- Thanks for liking the concept and the first part and leaving such encouraging comments..Thanks a lot Saira

Perfectpiscean- Thanks Marisha! I'm glad to know that the concept is intriguing you'I hope I can keep you glued to this FF! Yeah, I know, I know Anji's intro was misleading..lol'but that's what us writers do'give you a little bits of twists and turns'lol'I will PM you for sure! Thanks!

cutie13- Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and commenting..Im glad you liked the first part'I was really nervous about it..I feel bad for Armaan too'Poor him'Lets see whether or not he is ever going to move forward in life'Thanks again!

Samijan- Thanks Samira!

Iqbal Neha1- Thanks again sweety! I'm glad to know you are enjoying both of my fics till now'I'm glad that you took time out to read this other attempt of mine'Thanks for liking the flash back scene'I enjoyed writing that! Armaan's a flirter'who would have thought that he would have to change..Poor him'Lets pray things get better for him! Hmm'you're smart'You guessed right'Anji is Rahul's sis!

sweet_JAY_FAN- Thanks Shriya! Will PM you for sure!

lil_desi_goddes- Thanks sweety for taking time out to read and comment..It means A LOT!

Miketa_P- Thanks Miketa'Im not sure if tht's you name or not..Do tell me though, I would love to know!

[Quote=Richa1234] An introductory part that has been written amazingly well Anita. The story is definitely worth looking forward to but the way you have written is worth all the praises too. Armaan's bond with his receptionist, the elevator scene and even the interview one was handled really well. Good job, waiting for you to create another sensation with part 2.

Luv Richa[/Quote]

Thanks Richa! I'm going to steal your line now..lol.. 'I'm like literally BLOWN away by your comments' I seriously am Richa'Your too sweet! I'm glad you enjoyed my way of writing! I hope I get better as each update passes by! Thanks for pointing out the aspects you liked in the part..I love feedback! Makes me improve! lol'Thanks for the compliments Richa..Thanks you seems like such a small word now after these praises..I will update the next part for you!

rimli_remix rox- Thanks Rimli! Im glad you enjoyed the beginning'Hopefully I can keep you interested in the FF!

[Quote=Robin_M] aww thats so sad, armaan lost the the women he loved, even if its not riddhima but anjali, its still sad! poor guy! well im definately very interested in your fic and the story sounds great! look forward to riddhimas entery and ar meeting! continue soon! [/Quote]

Thanks for liking the part! Poor Armaan, I know..I feel bad for him too! It's really depressing for me to write the parts on his behalf'but then again, a little bit of sadness will soon be overshadowed by happiness in the near future'Lets hope so at least'Thanks for the interest in my Fic'It means A LOT! It's all of your feedback that gets me going to write parts'So continue with the encouraging comments'Riddhima and Armaan would meet, but you're going to have to wait a bit for that..Im so sorry! They will meet soon though'Im trying to get Armaan's side of the FF out right now..Thanks again Robin'sorry if that's not your name!

Bollywood_chic- Thanks Sonia! Im glad you found the first part sweet..I thought it got kind of depressing more than being alive..lol..Thanks Sonia! Will PM you for sure!

Jodubai- Thanks Jo! Im glad I kept you intrigued with the intro! Yeah, Part one was meant to be sad as I was going to move the story forward from there..There will be happiness in the future..lol..Armaan was Armaan back then'typical flirt'He's just lost in the crowd now with Anji's death..Hopefully he would move on in life!

sea_nyx- OMG thanks a LOT! You're flattering me..lol..You know, to tell you the absolute truth...When I penned down this concept and all, I was inspired from 'Dil ne jise aapna kaha' too! You caught that quite well! The whole Maya-Armaan scene was like inspired from it completely.. I imagined Salman Khan while writing that scene down..lol'Good job! I don't know whether the story would flow like the actual movie'Im just gonna have to see.lol'Thanks again!

prernawaghray- Thanks Prerna..I will surely PM you..Thanks for the encouraging comments sweety!

Saridena- Thanks for the support! Of course I can PM you!

Aarora-Thanks for the encouragement! Yeah, sadly Anji is no more'Lets see how the story moves along now..I hope I do justice to it! I will PM you!

tanasha1993- Thanks Tanasha for such encouragement! Hopefully Ridz will take away the bitterness from Armaan as time goes by..Will she be successful? Their meeting will have to wait though..Im sorry, I want to get Armaan's emotions and thoughts cleared up before AR meeting'I want you to understand his stance on life first'Thanks a lot Tanasha!

swetha10- Thanks Swetha for the amazing support..im glad you're liking it! I feel bad for Armaan too, but what to do'Lets hope he gets his share of happiness in life again! Will PM you for sure! = D

Chaiti- Thanks Honey! No problems at all for the late comments..you took time out to comment'that means a lot to me itself! Yea, the intro of Anji was misleading for you all..lol'Don't worry AR will meet soon'but before that I want you all to know Armaan's stance on life and his emotions! Thanks Chaiti!

Originally posted by: jia..

Hey Anita....me here..so sorry for the delay in my comment here. Hope u had a great Eid. 😳

But but omg the intro of this ff.....Anita u left me stunned and speechless!!!😲 It was simply fabulous.....i mean i am at loss of words to describe the effect this start had on me !!

The start...i mean u know ur description of how he has changed and everyone fearing him, it was excellently written!!👏

His hands made their way toward his desk as he picked up the photo frame with her picture on it and stared at it deeply whilst tears began to well up in his eyes, letting lose the emotions he had kept secure inside of him. The love of his life had departed from his life since a year now and somehow he still couldn't come to terms with the fact. It seemed like yesterday that they both were arguing with each other like little kids and he was pacifying her in his cute, teasing way upon seeing her irritated face.

The last line specially was fabulous...love ur way with words Anita!!

Then the FB mode.....omg his intro there...interaction with Maya....everything was excellent.....

How do you think I am doing,' asked Maya as she embraced him in a tight hug. 'Using your big smile as a weapon, you must be killing everyone who comes to the reception desk'Has no one died yet looking at your killer smile,' he chuckled,
Loved this one specially^^......it was so naturally and flawlessly written....loved it!!😳


A young, petite lady wearing a white churidaar suit, holding some files against her chest, quickly stepped into the elevator as she tried catching a hold on her breath. Something about her seemed to have struck him and he was amazed at her simplicity as she wore minimal make-up on her eyes while her long, black silky hair finally settled into place after all the motion it had underwent. She came forward and pressed the button to the floor she wished to go to while Armaan came out of his little session and did the same.

Ok Anjie's intro was outstanding....i mean u made us fall in love with her character from her intro itself......her description was fabulously penned...great job Anita!!👏

Their convo...their meet....Anita seriously am at loss of words here....it was so mesmerizing...the entire picture u painted....left us just in a daze....loved the interaction between Armaan-anjie....and then the back to present mode where he weeps....u really felt the pain for his character....

Its an excellent start Anita...really waiting to red more...u have me hooked completely.....

love
Jia