Jeevan Saathi- AR-Part 5 Pg.1 | 11/25/08

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Sona

@Sona_25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

gr8 ff....very well written...

cont soon

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Mariam

@shweet29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue fast i have read ur 1st n 2nd part loved it very much plzz pm me okay bye

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

It was an amazing part yaar, totally heart-rending though 😭…imagine loosing the love of your life just when you were about to start a new life together I can't imagine the amount of pain he must have gone through 😭. But you did a beautiful job of expressing his feelings 👏

I loved Rahul's character as well. I can imagine how much he must be hurting as well; after all if Armaan lost the love of his life, Rahul too lost his only sister. But at least some happiness is coming to him in the form of Muskaan. And now ridz too is on the scene…Yay!!!!⭐️

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Tanasha

@tanasha1993

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Awesome part anita!

its sad how just a week before their wedding anjali died;(

But there is ridzy there now!

and I have a strong feeling she bumped into armie there

cant wait til the next update

and thanks for the PM hun!

love

tanasha

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prerna

@prernawaghray

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

hey anita
awesome part sweety
finally they met i guess
its amazing how his life is coming back to him like how it started off with angie n now its the same with ridz
sorry for short comments
running out of time now

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swetha

@bary

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

i am so sorry to say this but i am really afraid the way u narrated lift one where anjali is,i thought her as ridhz and i am so afraid that ridhz died,please pm for next update it seems really interesting

Edited by bary - 16 years ago

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

amazing part

i really liked the way u described armaans pain and the way u potrayed his emotions regarding anjalis death were really good.

finally ridz has entered armaans life i think she banged into armaan cant wait to see how her life changes.

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soumya

@saridena

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

hi anita😊

thks for the pm dear

awesome part

ridz and armi is almost same as angi and armi

update sooooooooooooooooon

waiting to read more parts

P.S. when u going to update ur other ff

👏

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Jia

@jia..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Wowwwwwwwwwww Anita!!! OMG as i had expected a fabulous part girl!!👏 U r truly so talented, i am at loss of words to describe how u leave me speechless with ur superb talent!!🤗

Ok the start...like him entering his home and the events following it....the description is fab!! I have to stress the way set up each scene....i can actually feel as i were present there!! Brilliant Anita....his pain..OMG i hav no words to describe how brilliantly u have penned his sorrow!!👏

Armaan loosened up his tie and threw it on his bed as he stepped into his room and unbuttoned the first few buttons of his dress shirt while kicking the door shut with his foot. He plopped onto his bed and closed his eyes momentarily as he rested on the backboard of the bed when his phone rang.

Loved the first two lines...the description to build up the scene was fab!!.

Next the Rahul-Armaan convo....outstanding. Loved the chemistry u portrayed between them!!👏

And Anjali his sister...the pain being mutual...and Rahul reading Armaan like a book, fab scenes!! I am amazed at ur talent!!👏

'Anjali did wrong'What did God give her after all her faith in him'He gave her DEATH Rahul'DEATH!' said Armaan with fury. 'I can't believe in such a God now'All my faith in him had been washed away the day Anjali was taken away from me.'

And the way you described how she died and the following grief ,..him no longer believing in God........OMG it was really heart wrenching girl!! You portrayed the pain excellently and flawlessly!! Am in ur awe!!👏

Riddhima entry was awesome...and ofcourse her encounter with Armaan i believe is the same as it was Anjali...lets see what you have in store now....U got me totally addicted to this one!! Waiting for more Anita!! Ur a fab.⭐️

love
Jia

Edited by jia.. - 16 years ago