Jeevan Saathi- AR-Part 5 Pg.1 | 11/25/08

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Aakriti Mehta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

superb!! outstanding! please do continue!

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Richa1234

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

An introductory part that has been written amazingly well Anita. The story is definitely worth looking forward to but the way you have written is worth all the praises too. Armaan's bond with his receptionist, the elevator scene and even the interview one was handled really well. Good job, waiting for you to create another sensation with part 2.

Luv Richa

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Rimli

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

great intro and a superb starting anita

enjoyed it so much

do update it soon

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Robin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

aww thats so sad, armaan lost the the women he loved, even if its not riddhima but anjali, its still sad! poor guy! well im definately very interested in your fic and the story sounds great! look forward to riddhimas entery and ar meeting! continue soon!

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Sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

awwww anita....

such a sweet start....

can't wait for u to cont...

do cont sooon...

Sonia

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Jodubai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

great intro, Anita

part 1 was kind of sad, with Angie's death, but their meeting was terrific & Arman is such a flirt!

do continue soon

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Wow, amazing start yaar 👏, I loved the concept ⭐️. I don't know why, but the minute I read your intro, I was kinda reminded of "dil ne jise apna kaha " the Salman movie. Not that that's a bad thing at all. That was a really sweet movie 😳 and I would love to read an ff based on the same concept 😊.