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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
thanks for liking it. I will update it soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
nice update haya...šŸ‘
hmm...seems like there would be love triangle bet Veer,Ananya and HarshšŸ˜‰
do continue....



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Posted: 16 years ago
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My fourth update

RECAP: ananya is impressed with harsh. Sia still confused.

IN THE BOYS ROOM

V: ach dharma tou batao k tumhari R.Sia say mulakaat kaisi rahi.
D: tum isay mulakaat kehte ho. Bas takraye…….. aur kya hua??????
H: lekin phir bhi kya khayal hai tumhara un k bare mein?
D: pata nai. Mujhe faisla karne k liye thore aur waqt ki zuroorat hai!!!!
V: haan haan waqt bilkul milay ga ( and giggles)šŸ˜†
D: tum hans kyun rahe ho?
V kyun k mujhe tou apni bhabi pasand aaien (winks to harsh)šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
D:aur R sia ki behen k bare mein kya khayal hai????
V: mujh say kyun pooch rahr ho.(gets irritated) harsh say poocho jo uski itni taareef kar raha tha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
H: mein tou bas……….

DASI ENTERS AND CALLS THE THREE FOR DINNER

V: haan haan chalo . buhat bhook lagi hai
SIA AND ANANYA WERE WAITIMG ON THE DINNER TABLE

ALL THE FOUR WERE FEELING AWKWARD EXCEPT VEER

S: ayyi!! Khana lag chuka hai. Baithye.
DHARAM SITS WITH SIA HARSH WITH ANANYA
VEER IN THE MIDDLE
A: mujhe umeed hai k aap donoon ki thakkan utar gayi hogi (ignores veer)
H: jee bilkul
V: dharma yehi acha mauka hai tum R sia say jo poochna chahte ho pooch lo……….
D: R sia who mein keh raha tha k (stops for a while but then continues)
Aap tou jaanti hain k hum doonon k mata pita nay hamare liye kya socha hai par mein chahta tha k hum aik doosre ko achi tarah say jaan kar hi apna faisla lein.

Sia feels very relaxed and happy that dharam is matured and understanding—qualities she looked for in her man to be.

😳😳

S: hume yeh jaan kar buhat acha laga tou chalo aap mujhe apne bare mein kuch bataye. Kya kya shok hain aap k
D :jo har rajkumar k hote hain. Ghur sawari. Talwar baazi aur apne rajye k bare mein jaankaari rakhna. Aur aap k
S: mujhe gaane aur nirtye ka shok hai. Bachpan say seekh rahi hoon

While talking dharam stretches his hand out to get the jug of water and sia does the same so they touch each others hands and keep looking into one anothers eyes.
Dharam feels very nice about this and started to feel sth weird for sia
S: kya aap har rajkumari ko aisay hi dekhte hain???šŸ˜†
D: moves his hand away feels embarrassed but replies…. Nahi aaj tak aap jaisi sunder rajkumari nahi dekhi na….

Sia feels shyšŸ˜³ā€¦ā€¦ā€¦ā€¦.. veer is seeing all this and enjoying thoroughly but wait what about harsh and ananya

H: aap un bachoon k saath khel rahi thin?
A: haan mujhe bachoon k saath khelna buhat pasand hai aur zyada waqt mehal say bahar rehna bhi!!!!!
Harsh smiles .
A: aap ko lag raha hoga k mein kaisi rajkumari hoon jo……………..
H: nahi nahi .aisi baat nahi hai. Aur bataye na apne bare mein
A:aur kya bataaon . din bhar mein maa aur sia ko pareshan karti rehti hoon. Par mein tou aisi hi hoon( SAYS THIS WITH PRIDE)šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼
H: buhat pyari😳
Ananya feels shy. Her hairs blow on her face and harsh tries to remove them.she smiles and now start to feel comfortable in his PRESENCEā˜ŗļø

VEER SITTING IN THE MIDDLE WAS OVER WITH HIS DINNER. HE TURNS LEFT ….DS ARE BUSY. HE TURNS RIGHT HA ARE BUSY AND HE WAS LEFT ALONE!!!!!šŸ¤”

DASI ENTERS.
Aap sab ko darbar mein bulaya gaya hai
V: upar waale ka lakh lakh shukar hai warna mein in charoon ki baatein sun kar behosh hojata
Ananya gives him a stern look.😔
They all proceed to the darbar. And find that M .aryawardhan and nivriti have arrived along with M. someshwar R. maya (parents of harsh).

The three rajkumars are happy but confused to see them….

PRECAP: PARENTS ASK STH IMPORTANT AND THE REALISATION OF FEELINGS BY THE KIDS…….



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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
hey swwety..tis is a g888888 fic n I rilli love it..sachi mein its beautiful..n the kind jo sabka mood bhi aacha karta hai..n light n refreshing...
G8888 wrk..keep goin babe...
n sweety Do cont sn...plzzzz PM me wheneva u update nxt (if possible)...
Love ya sweety.....t.ccccccccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
hey pls read my ff.coz i will be updating again tonite inshallah
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
lovely but is Anu falling for harsh ?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely update
but even i have the same question of bhuvi, pls dont make our anu fall for harsh
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
Hey tis was rilli g88888 prt..n I loved it..the whole prt was so sweet n cute...n veer..I jus love him..bichare veer..akele chutt gaye the...N ananya is falling for harsh..(madz is horrified)..abb veer bhaiya ka kya hoga..he will be left alone..
Well that's upon u..n I jus ove the way u present the story sweety...it's awesum...
btw..plssssss temme u'r name...like what shall i call u sweety...
Do cont asap...I'm waitin eagerly....
Love ya hon......t.cccccccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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My fifth update
RECAP: A SWEET DINNER AND THE PARENTS ARRIVE

H: array ma pitaji aap log yahan. Namastey .
Veer and dharam also greet their parents.
H: pitaji ab ajmer k halaat kaisay hain. M . bhimdev nay tou ajmer par hamla karna tha.
M. someshwar: tum uski chinta mat karo beta . wahan sab kuch theek hai. Tum sunao avdhi may mann tou laga na.
V: kuch zyada hi lag gaya hai maharaj
H: veer (gives a stern look)šŸ˜•šŸ˜•
M. arya: M uday aap tou jaante hain k hum yahan kyun aye hain. Dharam aur sia k rishtay k liye.
Sia and dharam feel uncomfortable
Their parents understand their situation and say that they will wait for their decision. DS feel relieved
H : lekin pitaji aap nay bataya nahi k aap yahan kaisay.
R. maya. Beta hum chahte hain k hum tumhara rishta r. ananya k saath karein. M uday aurR. Mohini ki bhi yehi ikhcha hai.
( Veer's mouth is wide open.)😲
koi jaldi nahi hai . tum donnon bhi araam say faisla karna.
Ananya leaves from their
V: tou is liye tumhe hamare saath avdhi aanay ko kaha tha. Waisay tum tou us toofan ko pasand karte ho na………….
D: bas bhi karo veer tum bhi na kahin bhi shoroo ho jate ho..
MAHARAJ UDAY ESCORTS THE GUESTS TO THE GUEST ROOM AND DECIDES THAT THEY WILL WAIT FOR THE KIDS DECISION.

In the boys room.
V: yeh acha hai . shaadi aik ki karne aye thay . aur ab do ki zindagi dao par lag gayi
H: r ananya itni bhi buri nahi hai😳
V; haan haan tou tum wahin keh detay na k tum is rishtey k liye tyar ho…..
Veer just doesn't like ananya

Dharam is lost in some thought and yes he is thinking about sia. He goes near the window and starts talking to himself and remembers his meetings with sia.
He resolves….. pata nai kya karoon itna bara faisla kaise loon.waisay who hai tou buhat pyari aur samjhdar aur aaj un say baat kar k bhi acha laga. HE CLOSES HIS EYES OPENS THEM AFTER AWHIE AND SAYS….. Mujhe mera jawab mil gaya and then goes to sleep with veer. (he saw sia when he closed his eyes)šŸ˜
Harsh couldn't sleep the whole night.
H: tum itna kyun soch rahe ho harsh tumhe tou ananya pehli nazar mein hi achi lag gayi thi.šŸ˜ Lekin kya who bhi mujhe pasand karti hai.patanai yeh kaisi uljhan hai…………

In the girls room

S:aaj khane kay waqt mujhe R. dharam mein who har khubi nazar aayi jo mein apne rajkumar mein dhoond rahi thi.mujhe lagta hai mein usay pasand karti hoon ananyašŸ‘šŸ¼

BUT ANANYA WAS COMPLETELY LOST AND CONFUSED . SHE JUST WAS NOT READY TO TAKE SUCH A BIG DECISION
A: mein kya karoon sia.
S: kyun kya tumhe harsh pasand nahi hai?????
A: aisi baat nahi hai balkay hum us k saath buhat acha mehsoos karte hain par shadi……
S: apni aankhen band karo aur apne dil ki baat suno.

Ananya sees all those cute moments spent with harsh and smiles…..😊

NEXT MORNING.

VEER WAS VERY EAGER TO KNOW ABOUT THE DECISIONS.
KINGS AND QUEENS ARRIVE……..
Nivriti: tou kya faisla kia tumne dharam.
D; mein is rishtay sau khush hoon ma.
R mohini: aur sia tum
S mein bhi maa and then hugs her.
Everyone is very happy to hear this esp veer…..
DS have a cute eyelock sessionā˜ŗļø
Now harsh and ananya
V; mana kar do harsh tum aur yeh tofan….
A: mujhe yeh rishta manzoor hai.
Harsh is delighted to hear this and immediately says
Mujhe bhi……………………………EVERYONE IS VERY HAPPY EXCEPT FOR VEER .

PRECAP: FUNCTION ,SOME MOMENTS AND A NEWS!!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved both parts they were amazing oh no waht about veer awww feel sorry for him yaar do cotn soon..
esha

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