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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......maine ye part miss kiya????😲😲😲 Maine itna badhiya part miss kiya????😲😲 Me stupid idiot fool.....πŸ˜•πŸ€’πŸ€’ - hey its ok dear ab to par liya na

Khair achha hua....abhi jake padh to liya....πŸ˜ƒ Loved it Dii.....the way things were going on....I was like....zarur kuch gadbad hai.... - hehehe of course after all kahani garbar ke bagair kese chalsakti hain

.but I must admire ur style Dii....u put things so nicely.....that even after guessing.....I was perplexed....πŸ˜† - aaww thanks and I'm glad i have that effect

.....but at thend Raj got all the more furious....πŸ˜•......mujhe na darr lagta hai jab bhi chillata hai....🀒 - haan oska ghussa hain hee khatarnaak

Anyways....I loved the turn of the events.....specially how Navin reacted at the colour being pink...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.....wo bhi kaafi stupid hai....πŸ˜†πŸ˜† - haan sab ke sab kabhi kabhi stupid se hojaate hain to kya kare. wo kehte hain na ke yeh puri family paagal hain

Pls continue soon Dii....and so sorry for missing out on this part.....πŸ˜• - its ok and yeh i shall continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Arwa, gr8888 update..lots of confusion.u really write soo well.
2 minute to mein bhi shock ho gayi ke Naina ko sach mein goli lagi.😲 but finally All izz well....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! - thanks very much

Navin is so angry with Raj and is abusing and accusing him!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - yes he is really angry ke kuch or samajh me aahee nahi raha

Navin is hitting Raj and finally showed him the device!!!!!! - he couldn't control himself

Raj was shocked to know the reason for it!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - ab koi bhi hota na

Naina tried to free Raj from Navin's grip and stop him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - of course she couldn't let injustice happen with him

She was upset to see that Navin had found the pregnancy test she had used!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - it was terrible for sure

Navin knows that both Raj and Naina have crossed their limits and Naina is pregnant!!!!! - he just couldn't take it

Naina is so distressed and crying so much and Raj feels terrible to see her like this!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - yeh both of them are worrying about each other

Raj held Naina in his arms to comfort her and he was going to take care of everything!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yes oske hote huwe she doesnt need to worry

He knew it was his fault and he was not going to leave her in the middle!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - definitely not as he knew his responsibilities

Navin to gun leke aaya hai to shoot Raj and even Ritu can't stop him!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - hehehe kya kare paagal hogaye hain

Ritu ko toh ek thappad laga ke Navin ko raaste pe laana chahiye tha!!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - naah i dont think that wud have worked either

They haven't commited any crime and it was just love!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ - it sure was per yeh samaj to kabhi nahi badle gi na apna nazarya

Everyone is trying to stop Navin and Raj taking the cue ran away!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - ab jaan bachaanee hain to bhaag na to parega

Raj is running for his life and Navin is behind him!!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - its become a chase per osme itna hasne ki kya baat hain

Raj ne sahi kaha ke uske bagair Naina kaise jeeyegi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - of course after all they are one body one soul now

Naina stood before Raj like his shield and is trying to save him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - she couldnt let anything happen to him na

Raj is trying to get her to go and in all this Naina gets shot!!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - it was very unexpected

This was the height but how can the heroine die??πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 - well thats something to think abt na

Everyone ran towards them and is crying their eyes out and Navin is thinking what has he done!!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - it was traumatizing for them all

Raj was shocked and did not know how to react and upset and angry at Navin!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - kyu na ho after all he just lost the most precious thing in his life.

Raj is crying and asking Naina to come back to him and promises ke usse kabhi tang nahi karega!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - yeh he was really upset aur Naina ko waapis laane ke liye wo kuch bhi karne ko tayaar tha

Naina said uski kasam khaake kehta hai and Raj agreed without thinking!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehehe ose aise pakar na jo tha or wo phas bhi gaya

Then Raj realised what he had heard and saw Naina smiling!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj finally came to know ke yeh sab natak tha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes it was all a play after all they couldnt have been that cruel to him

When Naina had slipped tab Neelu ne usse sambhala tha and helped her to her room!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - she was lucky that Neelu found her

Naina was horrified to be caught with her pregnancy test by Navin!!!!! - ofcourse as it was terribly embarrassing

Neelu also blabbed out without noticing Navin and Navin was stunned!!!!! - haan ab kya kare yeh Neelu bhi ek number ki bewacoof hain.

Navin is disappointed aur samajh gaya ke uska shak sahi tha ke ush raat jab woh dono beach pe gaye thhe tab!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - finally ose sab answers mil hee gaye

Naina told him ke usse pehle bhi and Navin said he is going to kill Raj!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - yeh because which brother was going to tolerate this

Neelu ne kaha ke its pink toh Navin ne samajh liya that Naina is pregnant!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - men i tell u

Navin ki wajah se sabko pata chal gaya and Naina felt so embarrassed as now everyone knew and it was going to be awkward for her to be around them!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yeh it was really embarrassing for her

Naina was so frustrated that she grabbed the device and informed Navin that it meant she is not pregnant!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - somebody had to stick some sense in him na

It took a lot of convincing and finally Navin seemed okay with it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - make that a lot and alot of convincing

But he found it awkward to know that his sister had grown so much to have that sort of relationship!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - once again which brother wouldnt

Finally Naina came up with this master plan!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - she is also a trickster

Naina rightly said ke Navin ki tarah Raj ko bhi pata nahi hoga toh yeh dikhakar usse fool kar sakte hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - heehe after all, all men are like that

Aalekh ne warn kiya tha that Raj may take it in the wrong way!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” - yeh coz he knows him and his anger

Magar Naina ka kehna bhi sahi tha ke Raj had played the dying game with her so many times and she always forgave him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - of course to is baar oski baari hain

Everyone agreed to act in the plan and Navin scared Raj with the wonderful act!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - hehehe haan sab ke sab ek hee clan ke nikle

Aakhir sher ko sawa sher mil hi gaya!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Raj sab ke saath aisa karta tha aur aaj Naina ne usse hi maat de di!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - oski hee counterpart hain to oske jesee hee honi chaheeye thi na

All of them are now laughing at Raj but he is not happy at all!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - yeh he was still quite upset

Raj didn't take this joke in a good stride!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - pehlese jo itna ghusse me tha isliye

This is not fair jab Raj Naina ke saath aisa karta hai she forgives him but now jab uspe aayi hai toh gussa ho gaya!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - ab kya kare all men are spoil sports

Raj is angry as they had made fun of his life and his child's life and he wasnt going to forgive them for that!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - sahi hee hain na itne khoobsurat ehsaas ko mazaak bana diya to

Everyone is upset and hurt as he was still angry with them!!!!!! - yeh they are for Raj's sake

Naina hadn't expected this and she followed him out and hopefully ab woh Raj ki akal thikane laayegi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm lets see ke wo kya kartee hain and how successful she is


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

hey Arwa, gr8888 update..lots of confusion.u really write soo well.
2 minute to mein bhi shock ho gayi ke Naina ko sach mein goli lagi.😲 but finally All izz well....



Thanks very much for enjoying the update

yeh ab kahani me confusion ma ho to phir maza kahase aaye and yeh end me to sab kuch hamesha well hee hojaata hain.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 34

Naina: Raj! Raj! (went up to him and held onto his forearm) ruko Raj. Yeh kya hai, ham sab tumse kabse baat karne kee koshish karahe hai or tum ho ke bas ghussa hee hote jaarahe ho

Rajveer: maine kisee se nahi kaha ke wo mujhse baat kare (removed her hand and walked towards the main door)

Naina: (followed him) tumhaaree problem kya hai? Tumne bhi to mere saath kitnee baar aisa mazaak kiya hai or phir bhi maine kitne sportingly liya or tum…

Rajveer: (opened the door and was out in the garden) ha to me hee ghalat hu na, har baar ki tarha.

Naina: yeh tum kya kehrahe ho Raj, please ruko

Rajveer didn't listen and continued walking off into the garden away from her. She couldn't think what to do and how to stop him but she had to try again so she followed him.

Naina: aakhir tumhe ho kya gaya hai (held his hand and pulled him towards her) maana ke sabne tumhe itna bhala bura kaha per oske baad maafi bhi maangi na sab ne. to phir bhi tum itne naraaz kyu ho?


Rajveer: aisa kyu hai ke har baar mujhe hee safai denee partee hai? Her baar… (anger and pain evident in his eyes) pehle itna sab kuch kehdiya or phir maafi maangli bus hogaya. Per mujhe hamesha ghalat hee samajhte rahenge.

Naina: (shook her head) aisa nahi hai Raj…

Rajveer: (pulled his hand out of her grip rapidly) Aisa hee hai. Aisa hee hai Naina. Or hamesha se yehi hota aaraha hai to aaj kyu naya ho. (she was alarmed by his sudden outrage and could feel the bottleneck bursting) or tumne bhi hamesha mujhe hee ghalat samjha hai Naina

Naina: that is not fair Raj

Rajveer: fair? (gave a sarcastic laugh) life has been unfair with me from the beginning. Her baar maine kuch chaaha wo bohat mushkil se mila hai mujhe, per dunya ko laga bohat aasaan tha mere liye (started walking and reached the main gate. Opened it and was about to step out) maine kaha tha Naina tumse ke kabhi bhi mujhse alag hone ka mazaak mat karna or tumne oska mazaak bana diya. Jo khoobsurat pal hamaree zindagee me kabhi aaengee jab hamare bacche honge, os ehsaas ka bhi tumne mazaak bana diya. Tumne bhi mere bhavnaao kee kadar nahi ki or oske baad bhi tumne mujhe hee doshi thehraaya. I'm just tired of people constantly accusing me or koi meree baat sunne ko tayaar nahi. To acha hai na ke me rahu hee nahi

He slammed the gate shut behind him leaving Naina in a state of shock. For the first time Rajveer actually spoke his heart out about how he actually felt and so much pain and hatred was embedded in him. The others caught up with her and asked her what happened and she told them how he was really angry and left the house.

Alekh: Maine pehle kaha tha Naina ke aisa hee hoga. Raj bohat hee sensitive hai in maamlo me and he just gets really angry.

Naina: kitnee baar osne mera bhi dil dhukaaya hai aise per maine kabhi itna ghussa nahi dikhaya. It was about time someone gave him his own medicine back

Alekh: Tumhaaree baat alag hai Naina kyu ke tumne itna nahi khoya jitna Raj ne khoya hai.

They all just remained silent as none of them had anything to say. They didn't know what to say actually so thought best to remain silent.

Sameera: (smiled) me jaantee hu ke brother ko kese mana sakte hai. (all eyes went on her) osee tarha jese wo sab ko manaate hai

She explained her plan and they all joined hands.

Rajveer walked out on the roads not knowing where he was going but was just going. He needed space to think over everything and his mind was clouded with many unhappy thoughts. He didn't want to get so angry but after what happened he couldn't help himself and it all came out like a bomb.

After a while he stopped as he found a sign in front of him which surprised him. It read:

"WE ARE SORRY"

He knew who it was from so he ignored it and carried walking further. Then he found another sign.

"WE WON'T DO IT AGAIN"

He still continued to ignore it and walked on further. Soon he stopped again as someone came in front of him and he didn't recognize them as they had their back towards him. The person was dressed from head to toe in a clown's outfit so he was even more annoyed. Then they turned around and he saw it was Naina. She smiled at him and slowly came towards him preventing his way.

Naina: Ho gaya so hogaya, ab yaar choro

Maanjaao dosto ka dil na toro

He moved her out of his way but she kept stopping him

Naina: Ho gaya so hogaya, ab yaar choro

Maanjaao dosto ka dil na toro

The others came and joined in also dressed in funny costumes trying to make Rajveer laugh but he was less perturbed by them.

All: Oh baby aha ha baby

Ohoh baby ahaha baby

Sameera: hehe ho gaya so hogaya, ab yaar choro

Maanjaao dosto ka dil na toro

All: Oh baby aha ha baby

Ohoh baby ahaha baby

Rajveer was displeased and removed himself from their presence. He continued walking further hoping they would leave him alone but he was wrong as suddenly Naina and Sameera popped up in front of him startling him.

Naina:Humko bhi tum, saath lelo, dekho yu na jao aakhe pherke

He turned away but Sameera caught him

Sameera: Off karo na mood hamara. Ham pare hai peeche kitnee dair se

the others came and held onto Rajveer as if were kidnapping him and kept manhandling him for fun trying to make him laugh

All: Oh baby aha ha baby

Ohoh baby ahaha baby

He just pushed everyone away and walked off. All of them were unhappy with him and now just had enough especially Naina.

Naina: Yeh kya hai Raj, kabse ham tumhe manane kee koshish karahe hai or tum ho ke bus kuch sunne ko hee tayaar nahi

He didn't answer and just carried on walking in silence as he didn't want to listen to anything or say anything. Naina kept trying to get through him but he just continued ignoring her. A group of hooligans were sauntering around on the road and saw Rajveer and Naina pass by. They were up to no good and just gave Naina dirty looks.

Hooligan 1: oye hoi, kya larki hai yaar (drooling)

All of them joined in and whistled and just gave dirty remarks. Naina didn't pay attention and continued following Rajveer, but he heard them and it didn't please him. He halted and turned around towards them but Naina came in between and turned his attention towards her.

Naina: Raj please aisa mat karo. (held his hand) dekho me maafi maangtee hu ke maine wo mazaak kiya ab kabhi nahi hoga. Per please aise ruth ke mat jao

Hooligan 2: (chuckled) are agar wo nahi maanraha to hum to kabse raha dekh rahe hai (all the rest joined in and made fun)

The blood in Rajveer was boiling and he clenched his fists together. Then he strode towards them.

Rajveer: kya problem hai tumhe?

Hooligan 1: kyu tujhe bohat problem horahee hai

Rajveer: agar tum log yahase abhi nahi gaye to bohat baree problem hojaehgee

Hooligan 2: kyu be kya karega tu huh (pushed Rajveer)

Rajveer glared at him with menacing eyes for touching him and he was about to pounce on him when Naina intervened.

Naina: Raj please stop it. Khamakha in logo ke kyu mooh lagrahe ho

She convinced him to walk away with her but his eyes remained on the group as he was not satisfied in leaving them.

Hooligan 1: ha ha ache bacche hamesha baro ki baat maante hai

Hooligan 2: yeh to bilkul ek dood peeta baccha hee lagta hai

Everyone joined in laughing and gave each other high fives. Rajveer had lost it but Naina kept holding him to just ignore them and carry on with her.

Hooligan 1: ja ja munna ghar jaake apnee maa ka dhoodh peeke aah

Hooligan 2: are nahi nahi (sly smirk) ab to yeh kisee or ka dhoodh peeta hai na (they all continued laughing) hamare liye bhi thora chore dena, zara ham bhi to chakhe ose

That was it and Rajveer left Naina's hand and marched over to the disgusting disrespectable group and grabbed the guy's collar.

Rajveer: (enraged) kya bola tu, kya bola tu? Phirse bole!

Hooligan 2: Abhe saale collar chore

All of them gathered around Rajveer but Rajveer was too angry to back out now and he just hardened his grip on the guy and threw him across the road.

The rest of them charged on Rajveer and began fighting with him. He had lost all control and defended himself and attacked all of them as if he was going to kill them. Naina freaked out seeing him so angry and she had to stop it before someone got seriously hurt. Rajveer was just not ready to listen to her. His uncontrollable anger had taken over now and he had lost all self control. The guys kept attacking and he kept throwing them here and there. Giving them heavy blows and kicks. Once or twice he got held up by two men and got attacked by the third but he soon used force and attacked them off him and started beating them up again. He was just not going to stop. Naina could see his face had turned red with fury as if something really deep had been locked and had finally outburst. The hooligans wanted to escape as Rajveer had become a wild animal but Rajveer didn't let them and he caught the guy who had said so many dirty things about him and Naina from the back. His grip was so hard that he ripped off his shirt to stop him from escaping. Then he threw him across the road again and put his force on him.

Rajveer: Kya bola tha tune? Phirse bole ke bata, PHIRSE BOLE!

He kept strangling the guy as if he was going to kill him. Then another guy came from the back and pulled him off him. Rajveer struggled and then he roared and pushed him away and fought him till he was out. Then he returned back to the other guy who was still on the ground trying to recover from the strangled neck. Rajveer didn't let him get up and began kicking him. Kicked him so hard that he found it hard to stand up. He kept pleading for Rajveer to let him go but Rajveer had no control over him or his anger anymore.

Just then Naina returned back with the rest of the group and saw the scene. All of them ran with her to stop Rajveer continuing with the madness. Navin and Alekh went to pull Rajveer off but he struggled out of their grip again and attacked the guy non stop.

Navin: Raj…Raj chore de ose Raj

Rajveer: Nahi chorunga ise (in between attacking him) isne meree Naina ko gaali dee hai, nahi chorunga ise, nahi chorunga

Navin held him back but Rajveer didn't stop and he kept kicking the guy. Alekh came and held him back too but it wasn't easy. Then finally Naina came and held onto him and pulled him. But he didn't budge and kept yelling and getting angry.

Naina: (held onto his face tight and made him look towards her) Raj bus! (he didn't calm down) Bus Raj! Bus! (finally he halted and stared at her with tearful red eyes) Bus (she also had tears in her eyes and softened her voice to console him) Bus…bus…

His anger slowly drained and the hooligans all ran away from there quickly before Rajveer changed his mind. Then he dropped on his knees and wrapped his arms around Naina's waist and cried out painfully. All of them were just stunned by his act and felt upset too seeing so much pain in him. Something seriously had gone wrong in his head and they hadn't realized it till now. Naina laid her hands on his head and tried to comfort him.

Naina: (tearful) Tumhaare dard ka ehsaas hai mujhe Raj per itna bargaya hai iska pata nahi tha mujhe. Kis liye hai yeh sab? Kyu Raj? Kyu?

Rajveer: Thak gaya hu me Naina. (in between painful sobs) Thak gaya hu me sab ke sawaalo ke jawaab dete dete. Thak gaya hu apne aapko hamesha saabit karte karte. Ek tum hi to thi jo mujhe samajhti thi (sniffed) Or tum bhi mujhe chore ke jaarahee thi to mujhse raha nahi gaya. I can't loose you Naina. (held her tight as he cried painfully) I can't loose you.

Naina: Me tumhe kahi chore ke nahi jaane waali. Kabhi nahi. Kabhi nahi.

The rest also had tears after hearing Rajveer's pain. No one had known that a small matter would turn into such a big issue.

After a few minutes he sepearted from her gradually and stood up, he wiped his tears but his crossed face remained.

Rajveer: Phir bhi tum logo ne jo kiya mere saath oske liye me maaf nahi karunga

He walked off leaving all of them in despair that they came back to square one.

Naina: dekhtee hu kese nahi manta (stomped off after him)

Back at the house in Rajveer's room

Sameera barged in.

Rajveer: Ever considered knocking?

Sameera: Oh whatever. (hands on hips) why are you so stubborn?

Rajveer: (slouched on the bed) Sam mujhe tujhse koi baat nahi karni

Sameera: it's becoming tiresome now. (he attempted to get off the bed but she went and pushed him back by force) aapko meree baat sunni paregee brother. Kitnee baar to mazaak kiya hai aapne Naina ke saath I mean you've been joking around with her from day one to phir aaj jab paasa ulta pargaya to itna ghussa? (shook her head) Agar mazaak lenahi sakte to mazaak karna bhi nahi chaheeye

Naina: (stood by the door) correct Sam kyu ke joker agar apni nautanki chorede to phir apne mooh ke bal girta hai

Rajveer: lagta hai is ghar me kisee ke paas tameez hai hee nahi. Bus jaha dekho ghus jaate hai

Naina: ab apne honewale pati ke kamre me ghus ne ke liye mujhe permission lenee paregee?

Rajveer: (makes a face) filhaal tumhaara honewala pati tumse naraaz hai to ha lenee paregee

Naina: (slaps her forehead with her palm) sach me Sam what is wrong with your brother. I mean bilkul ek chote bacche kee tarha ziddi hai

Rajveer: Sam agar logo ko takleef horahee hai to wo jaake thande paani se nahasakte hai, mujhe pareshaan karne kee koi zaroorat nahi

Naina: (flirtatious whistle) hai hai, kitna cute lagta hai ghusse me bhi

Rajveer: (aghasted by her audacity) Sharam nahi aati aise larke ko chere te huwe. Sam ise kaho ke mujhe isse koi baat nahi karnee to chalijai

Sameera: uffo! (agitated) khamakha mujhe aap dono ke beech mat ghasito. Mujhe nahi parna, me to chali

Rajveer held onto her hand to prevent her from leaving and he got angry at her.

Naina: Oh come on Raj, apna ghussa ispe mat nikaalo (pulled Sameera from Rajveer's grip) Sam tum jao yahase isse pehle ke jwala mukhi phirse phat jaaye

After she left Rajveer turned away from Naina just like a spoilt child and she just smiled at his behavior. She loved him even more. She went up to him to talk to him but he kept turning away ignoring her so she sighed.

Naina: theek hai agar kisee ko interest hee nahi to kya karsakte hai. (took something she had put on the side table) to phir yeh triple chocolate ice cream me laayee thi ose me akele hee khaaletee hu (she opened the tub and took the first spoon) ummmmmmmmmmmmmm…..mind blowing. Kya baat hai. (took another bite) ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm….

The seductive noices she made tore Rajveer's insides and it was torture for him. He looked at how on purpose she ate the ice cream in a seductive manner because she knew how much he was going to love it and won't be able to resist it.

Rajveer thought: Saali jaantee hai ke mere buttons kese push karne per me bhi Rajveer Shekhawat hu, aasaanee se haar nahi maanunga

as she ate the ice cream she saw how he was looking at her so she offered him a bite but he pretended to not be interested. She rolled her eyes and thought of another trick.

Naina: OUCH!

Rajveer: (panicked and jumped up towards her) Kya huwa Naina tumhe?

Naina: (wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him tight) Wese huwa to bohat kuch hai

Rajveer: (tried getting out of her grip but she didn't budge) Choro mujhe Naina

Naina: Ab chore ne ke liye thori pakra hai (mischievious glint) ab yeh zidd chore bhi do mister Rajveer kyu ke me jaantee hu you simply can't resist me

Rajveer: Kuch ziada hee khush femee hai apne baare me

Naina: (tongue in cheek) Agar yeh baat hai to phir I'm sure tumhe kuch nahi hoga jab me yeh karungi (reached up and lightly kissed him on the edge of his neck)

Rajveer: (tried to control his emotions) Nahi hota

Naina: Yaha pe bhi nahi (she kissed him further up the neck)

Rajveer: (it wasn't easy as his inner desire was dying with pleasure but he had to stay firm) bilkul nahi hota

Naina: (spoke with a sultry voice) ab bhi nahi? (kissed him on his jawline slightly grazing his lips with hers)

Rajveer: (now all limits had been passed and he couldn't take it anymore) nahi…

So as she moved in closer to tease him further he grabbed her tight in his arms and savaged her lips in a hungry kiss. She also held onto him as they dwelled in the pleasure of hot desire. It was as if a bubble of passion had suddenly burst and the shower had poured. He didn't want to let go as it gave him solace and he knew as long as it was with him then he required nothing further. Finally what looked like forever, they separated taking deep breaths.

Naina: (rested her head on his chest) Ab kabhi bhi mujhse aise ruth mat jaana Raj.

Rajveer: Agar tum isse tarha manatee rahogee to phir koun kambakht aisa nahi chahega. (looked into her passionate eyes) wese I must say you do know how to push my buttons (teasing smile)

Naina: tumharee hee parchai hu

He raised his eyebrows and smiled and then both of them kissed again briefly. Then sat down feeding each other the rest of the chocolate ice cream. She teased him half of the time by showing him the spoon but then not feeding him. Then he pretended to be cross and she would then feed him properly and it just continued until the whole tub finished. Both of them were too high on chocolate and just couldn't keep their hands off each other.

Sometime later

Everyone were sat in the hall just passing time when Rajveer came over and surprised all of them with his jolly mood.

Rajveer: aao milke, jhoome gaaye, hungama karne ka mausam aagaya

Hum deewane, behke behke humpe jese jaadoo koi chaahgaya

All of them joined in with him happy to see him back with his old self

All: Oh baby aha ha baby

Ohoh baby ahaha baby

He danced around with all the girls and then took Naina's hand last.

Rajveer: Ho gaya so hogaya, ab yaar choro

Maanjaao dosto ka dil na toro

She joined in and they all went out in the garden all merry merry.

Naina: Ho gaya so hogaya, ab yaar choro

Maanjaao dosto ka dil na toro

All had fun

All: Oh baby aha ha baby

Ohoh baby ahaha baby

Ohoh baby ahaha baby

All of them played around with each other and then Rajveer got the naughty idea and picked up the water pipe outside and began showering everyone with the water. It created a riot amongst them and they all fought over getting each other wet and just ended up completely drenched. They hadn't had that much fun in ages and all felt like small children all over again. Naina was really happy to see Rajveer back to his old self and she thanked God for bringing him back.

Rajveer's room

Naina and Rajveer sat together.

Naina: Raj tumhe itna ghussa kyu aata hai?

Rajveer: I don't know Naina mujhe kya hojaata hai. (ran his fingers through her's) per bachpan se hee aisa raha hai. Jaantee ho jab meree maa mujhe chore ke chalee gayee tabse mujhe sab cheez se nafrat hone lagee thi. I guess wo nafrat itnee bargayee ke phir wo her baar ek ghusse ke roop me hee niklee. Mere ghusse ko bus ek hee kaaboo karpaata tha (she gave him the curious look) or wo me khud tha lekin ab (held her tight and rested his chin on her shoulder) tum hi ho jo mujhe itnee acchi tarhaase sambhaalti ho. Tumhaare pyaar ne mujhe pyaar karna sikhaaya, zindagee se pyaar karna sikhaaya or meree nafrat ko pyaar me badalna sikhaaya.

Naina: To phir me jo kahungi karoge? (she waited for an answer from him but he didn't say anything. Instead he kept staring as if he didn't understand what she said) Batao Raj karoge?

Rajveer: Ab yeh Rajveer tumhaara ghulaam hai malika to aapka huqum sir aakhon per

She just shook her head as she laughed. The guy was impossible and she didn't know whether to love him more or to just get annoyed. She took his hand and pulled him with her outside the room and stopped by the small mandir they had in their house.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj is really very angry with everyone and does not want listen to any reasoning as he was very hurt!!!!!!

He was angry because all of them had made fun of his emotions and feelings!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Naina Raj ko manane ki koshish kar rahi hai but Raj is going away!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Raj's life has not been easy and he had to suffer a lot before Naina came into his life!!!!!!

Naina is right ke kitni baar Raj ne bhi uska dil dukhaya hai and she had always forgiven him!!!!

Raj ne bhi marne ka naatak kiya tha magar Naina ne toh itna gussa nahi dikhaya tha!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

It was about time that someone gave him his own medicine back!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Sameera came up with a plan ke Raj ko kaise manaye waise hi jaise woh sab ko manata hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Sab usse manane ki koshish kar rahe hai and are singing a song magar Raj maan hi nahi raha hai!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

The song is very nice!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Those hooligans made his temper worse by passing dirty comments about Naina!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Raj cannot control his anger and beat the hell out of them!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

It took a lot of effort from Aalekh and Navin to stop Raj!!!!!!Ermm Ermm Ermm Ermm

Finally Naina succeeded in stopping him and he broke down in her arms as his emotions and anger take the better of him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

All the hurt, frustration and anger that he has kept locked in his heart came out!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

He was tired of accusations and tired of explaining himself and being misunderstood by everyone and justifying his actions!!!!

Naina cannot see Raj so disturbed and in so much pain and realises that he is emotionally very weak!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Everyone is shocked to see Raj in this state!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj cried holding Naina tightly!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭However he is still cross with them and goes off!!!!

Sameera ne sahi kaha Raj se ke he has been joking around with Naina from day one aur agar mazaak le nahi sakte toh karni bhi nahi chahiye!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

I loved Naina's answer when Raj commented about them barging into his room!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Naina flirting with Raj and Raj saying sharam nahi aati aise ladke ko cherte huye was too funny!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Naina surely knows how to press his right buttons and seductively ate triple chocolate ice-cream which is too much for Raj to bear!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

He resisted it though it was torture for him but Naina bhi kuch kam nahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

She pulled him near her and began to kiss him as she knew he couldn't resist her!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He grabbed her and kissed her hungrily and did not want to let go of her as he needed her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Finally Raj maan gaya akhir woh Naina ko kab tak resist karta!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Everyone is happy to see Raj happy and his old self again!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj showered everyone with the waterpipe and everyone ended up completely drenched and had great fun while playing with water!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj said to Naina about how he hated everything after his mom left and the hatred comes out in the form of anger!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Raj kehta hai ke Naina ab usse acchi tarah se sambhaalti hai aur uske pyaar ne usse pyaar karna sikhaya hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Waiting to know what Naina wants him to do by taking him in front of the mandir!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Arwa

How r u??
Update was terrificπŸ‘πŸ‘ with so many emotions in it..πŸ˜›
Raj was really very angry n he was just not listening to any1..That picture expressed his angry emotions perfectly...My poor Raj was really very hurt😭😭
He was angry coz all of them had made fun of his emotions n feelings..his life has not been easy..He had to suffer a lot before Naina came in his life... he even had to try hard to bring Naina back in his life..
Every1 was trying their best to cool off his temper but they were just not successful..
Naina tried to cheer him up but those hooligan made his temper worse...😑
I thought he wud definetely send one or two in hell..They deserve this..They were so cheapAngry..Raj really gave dem a gud doze..
Every1 was scared to see Raj like dis..Finally Naina succeeded in stopping him n den he broked in her arms...😭😭..He was tired of accusations..He was in such a pain..Every1 was so upset seeing him like dis..
But then Naina finally pressed his right buttons n he was normal again..Way Naina was eating ice-cream was too much for Raj too bear.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Every1 was so glad to see him happy again..All of dem had gr8 fum while playing with water..
Why did Naina brought Raj infront of temple?πŸ˜›
Continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
That was a gr8 part. Gosh....Raj ko kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa gussa ata hai....but its true when sum1 is in too much pain....sumtyms it cums out as anger!! It hurt to see Raj going thru that mental trauma......but then every1 was there for him.....

Thosa hooligans.....they were sooo yukk.....kisiko bhi gussa aa jaye....and then ye to Rajveer tha....jinka gussa Mashallah....kayamath dhati hai....hehe.

I liked that breaking down scene of his....though it was touchy I am glad he cared to pour out his grief at least!!!

And then Naina pacifying him....wid ice-cream....gosh....HE RESISTED ICE-CREAM???? Uski sehenshakti kamaal ki hai...must say. But yeah....that scene turned out to be extremely beautiful....and I cud imagine it all....it was just lovely!!

W8ing to knw wat Naina wants him to do by taking him in front of the Mandir....however I loved that pic of his......I just love that look all the more on him!!

It was simply a gr8 part Dii....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part
too good
great going
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part dear
really a very nice one plzz update soon

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