Ek Ajnabi (RN) Last part pg126 - Page 67

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi Arwa !

what an Update dear !!! 😛 - thank you very much

I had a roller coaster of reactions reading it...😆 - hehe I'm glad u did

Firstly I was stunned at Naveen's behaviour and thought has he lost it? 😆 - well it was meant to show that nah

Then was very angry on him for abusing and accusing Raj like that..😛 - yep he was really harsh

Then was shocked to know Naina's pregnancy test was positive 😲 - it was very shocking

Then I switched to defend Raj when that Naveen was tirelessly accusing him only, while Naina is equal partner in the crime 😛 - for sure both are responsible per kya kare bhai hain larki ka to doshi to larke ko tehraayega na

Then seriously I was on edge when that moron was behind my Raj to kill him and my poor Raj was running to save his life...

I was like 'come on ! Raj !! Don't Run !!! Give him some piece of brain ! ' 😆 - hehehe gud one per os waqt Raj ka dimaag chal hee nahi raha tha

Maine toh yaha tak socha ki yeh Ritu waha khade khade kya kar rahi hai? Ek thappad laga deti toh bhi Naveen line par aajata ! 😆 - for sure hosakta tha

Jab koi kuch nahi kar raha tha toh mann kiya main hi aajau wahapar aur do fatke lagau Naveen ko ! 😆 😆 - brilliant mujeh bata detee to daal de tee na 😆

And then Naina jumped to defend Raj...and I was like 'Arey meri Tragedy Queen! Marna kyun hai ? Ek jhapad laga apne bhaai ko...line pe aajayega !" ( In short aaj Naveen ko peetne ka FULL MOOD tha mera ! 😆 😆 ) - bechaara Navin

Then Naina was shot and I was shocked ! 😲

when Naveen was crying I was like, ab kyun ro raha hai ! But I got the inkling what you were about to do and see....I was right ! 😃 - hmmm it was supposed to give the jhatka na and then u know how i always love to show what is not

They played a prank on Raj, but I'm on Raj's side !( as always 😉 ) Aisa mazak karenge toh usse toh gussa aayega hi na ! - definitely wo bohat hee ghussa hogaya hain

So....the gist of my nonsensical rambling is that....I liked the update and enjoyed it veryyyyyyyyyy much ! 👏👏 👏 - I luved ur ramble and my advice to u is to continue with it hehehe. Thanks once again

ohkk....now do i need to say? Or u'll understand??😕

U didnt??😲

okay..i think i should say it then....😳

UPDATE SOOONNNNNN ! 😉 - for sure.

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Arwa

How r u?? - im great

Update was really hilarious..Manali is right when she says that it was similar to a roller coaster ride..Kabhi kuch ho jaata n kabhi kuch..😲😆. - Well I m glad u all enjoyed it very much

I mean initially I was scared like wat has got into Naveen's head? - the reaction shud have been that

He was so very angry with Raj..n like Raj even I was shocked to know the reason..He knew that both Raj n Naina had crossed their limits n Naina is pregnant..

Way he was abusing Raj made me flinch..I really wud have killed Naveen for this..😡

Then he hit him too.This is not done Naveen .They haven't commited any crime..It was just love.. yeh Navin did get out of hand but he didnt have a choise s he loves Naina a lot and has been protective of her since childhood.

Raj was running away to save his life ..Every1 was so shocked to see Naveen holding the gun to kill Raj.. - ab gun rakhee to shocked to hoenge na sab

Naina was so distressed ..She was crying so much.Raj was feeling terrible to see her like dis.. - her lover was put on gun point so how cu dshe relax

Then when Navin tried to kill Raj Naina came in between n got shot..

Raj was so shocked n angry..he cudn't believe wat has happened !!!😕😭😭 - ha oski to jaan hi nikal gayi to kya karta

This was high time n den Naina was fine..

Like Raj I too came to know abt this stupid plan..

Oh My God!! This was just too funny..u really made me laugh so much🤣🤣- hehehe I'm glad u enjoyed it that much

It was really embarrasing for Naina to b caught with preganancy test kit by her own brother.....But Naveen is really very understanding.😆😆😆.he agreed to act in that plan n really scared Raj with his wonderful act..👏 - ab kaam hee aisa kiya Naina ne to embarrassed to hogi per ye hsab se paat chalgaya na ke sab ke sab ek hee company ke hain

Alekh n others were having a gud laugh at this joke..

But Raj didn't take this joke in a gud stride..He was really very angry with all this..

Naina hasn't expected this..

Wat will happen now?? - oh yes now Raj is really mad and let's see how Naina consoles him.

Continue soon

Bye

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

sher ko saba-sher...mera matlab hai ki SHERNI mil gayi...!!! raj kitna nautanki karta tha...ab Naveen aur naina ne use apne acting se maat de di...!!! 😆 😆 😆 - definitely ose finally oske takkar ka koi mila na. He got his medicine back

pahle toh main naveen se baht irritate hui ki yeh kar kya raha hai...??? Raj se aise kaise baat karr raha tha...!!! par end me ja kar pata chala ki tum ne naveen k dimag se nahi bal ke apne dimag se kaam liya hai...!!!😃 😃 - loved the way u put it dear and of course u know hwo i luv doing this to all of u. pehle kuch dikhaa ti hu per end me kuch or hee hota hai

Raj jo hamesha nautanki karta tha...ab use us ki honewali biwi aur honewale saale ne maat dedi...bichara rone bhi laga...!!! raj ka last dail "maut ka bhi tamasha banata hai koi...!!!" Poor Raj...!!!😆 😆 😆 - well kabhi kabhi jab baazi palat jaati hain to bura lagta hain or yaha pe pata nahi Raj kese maanega.

cont soon.

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

kya updt tha yaar!!!!!!! - thank you very much

firstly wen it began I was like yeh ho kya raha hai....😲
poor raj and navin goin dis crazy and naina doin dis sort of stuff..... - yeh i know it was really shocking and confusing

but den wen it ended it was dat teri ki....but d way it was presented was tooooo good....👏

loved it...👏👏 - hehehehe Im glad u did

and den d flashback part was simply awesome and der d convo of navin and naina was mindblowing.....👏👏👏 - yeh i wanted to make it less dramatic and more practical and funny too. I'm glad it worked to some extent

but still our raj is angry...lets see hw naina comes up wid it..... - now he was already heated up and then this joke really made him furious. yeh lets see how it works out.

aur aap woh iss mein kaise karte hain lets wait for ur next1.....😊 - hehehe sure wud be coming back soon.

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

OMG....what a rush of events....mindblowing update 👏👏👏

I think Manali's reply best describes my reactions...'a roller coaster of reactions'. 👏👍🏼 - thanks a lot for loving the update that much

The only words that came to mind while reading were...'What the😲... How the😲...Why is he😲...."- hehehehe its quite understood

But then after reading the whole part....i found my words back.😉 - of course

So to begin with.....I was shocked😲 to see Navin this angry on Raj....accusing raj and being so rude - yeh he was pretty angry there

And then it was even more shocking😲😲 to know that Naina's pregnancy test was positive. - it sure was shocking

Then I was angry😡...mad at Naveen for wanting to kill Raj and even more stuneed when he pulled the gun to shoot him, I just could not believe that Raj was running for his life. - well the thing was so disastrous that everyone lost their mind and i guess no one cud think straight and Raj became too afraid na

And the only thought that kept comming to mind is that why is Raj not standing up to Naveen.😕 - kyu ke situation me darr gaya wo or samajh me nahi aayi ke kya kare

Later Naina gets shot while she is trying to save Raj....and this was the heights....but then how could the heroine die.😉 - of course warna kahani puri hojai

So it was all an act. The master artist was outsmarted.😉 Everyone had supported Navin and Naina in their drama. - yep it was abt time he got his medicine back and who else than Naina cud possibly give it back.

It must have been very embarassing for Naina to be caught with her pregnancy test by Naveen.😳 - very embarrassing

But while everyone is thinking that this act will lighten Raj's mood...it does just the opposite. He is even more angry.😡 Raj could never bare to see anything happen to naina.😭 - for sure or ab osse manana itna asaan nahi hoga

Waiting to see what will naina do now. please continue soon - sure wud continue soon

Originally posted by: ammuakhi

hey arwa

am amrutha can u plzz add me to your friends list and pm me when you update it its really a very nice one cont soon