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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update. 👏 👏 👏
I think ek aur tufaan wait kar raha hai Rajveer k liye, after reading the last part of the update mujhe to kuch aisa hi lag raha hai.
Raj was concerned about Naina, that's y he ordered food for her too. Anyone would be freak out seeing that poor condition of bath room. But i specially loved the horror movie concept of ur this part.
Naina was feeling scary but she didn't want to show it to Raj because he has already made fun of her. Par Raj ne i think jaan moojh k horror movie dekhne ko socha tha.
Otherwise he knew that very well that Naina is scared of such movies. How the idea struck in his mind to bring something for Naina. And whatever happened after that was really terrible for Naina n funny for us.
Alekh n Neelu also joined them in whole drama, poor Raj he got a tight slap as reward for the drama. But Naina was right, Raj must not do that with her.
Once again all of them misunderstood Raj, whereas he was not at fault this time. Naina tried to explain the whole situation and she made it a bit better but now what?
I think now something big is gonna happen with Raj this time.
continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing updt indeed......👏👏
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loved d way raj and others played prank on naina.....but poor naina had enough .....
raj realised and quickly he did d needful and dey wer once again d tom n jerry we know.....loved d cuteness..😳.

also d way whole prank part was written...njoyed it throughly...👏👏
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n den d misunderstanding part...also was nice1...but finally navin's mom knows d truth thru navin......😊

raj is gonna take while dis time and others will have to do somthing very large to do dat...😊
Hope naina's f9 and raj is der for her....😊

lets see wats on ur mind.....😉

waiting for ur next1!!!😛

Edited by fanatic 21 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Awesome update. 👏 👏 👏- thanks alot Vertika

I think ek aur tufaan wait kar raha hai Rajveer k liye, after reading the last part of the update mujhe to kuch aisa hi lag raha hai. - hmmm ab wo to kabhi khatam hone waale hee nahi

Raj was concerned about Naina, that's y he ordered food for her too. Anyone would be freak out seeing that poor condition of bath room. But i specially loved the horror movie concept of ur this part. - yeh Raj cares for a lot per oske saath ose bohat satata bhi hai. I'm glad u luved it

Naina was feeling scary but she didn't want to show it to Raj because he has already made fun of her. Par Raj ne i think jaan moojh k horror movie dekhne ko socha tha.- hmmm perhaps he did after all ose naina ka darr nikaal na tha na

Otherwise he knew that very well that Naina is scared of such movies. How the idea struck in his mind to bring something for Naina. And whatever happened after that was really terrible for Naina n funny for us. - heheheh luved the way u put it.

Alekh n Neelu also joined them in whole drama, poor Raj he got a tight slap as reward for the drama. But Naina was right, Raj must not do that with her. - yeh she got really scared after all Raj is everything for her now

Once again all of them misunderstood Raj, whereas he was not at fault this time. Naina tried to explain the whole situation and she made it a bit better but now what? - now what can i say oski kismat hee kuch aisee hai.

I think now something big is gonna happen with Raj this time. - for sure just wait and watch.
continue soon.





Originally posted by: fanatic 21

amazing updt indeed......👏👏
👏- thanks alot lipi

loved d way raj and others played prank on naina.....but poor naina had enough ..... - yeh mazaak kuch ziada hee hogaya is baar

raj realised and quickly he did d needful and dey wer once again d tom n jerry we know.....loved d cuteness..😳.- as always. Tom and Jerry hehehe luved it.

also d way whole prank part was written...njoyed it throughly...👏👏
👏 - i'm glad u did

n den d misunderstanding part...also was nice1...but finally navin's mom knows d truth thru navin......😊- yes after all a Naina wasnt going to leave things as they were

raj is gonna take while dis time and others will have to do somthing very large to do dat...😊- definitely this time its going to be tough

Hope naina's f9 and raj is der for her....😊- yeh lets see what happens

lets see wats on ur mind.....😉 - for that u'll have to wait for sometime.

waiting for ur next1!!!😛


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Posted: 15 years ago

Hiiiii Arwa....

How r u?

so sorry dear i am commenting so late
the update is awesome asusual 👏 👏 👏 👏
raj is so naughty ...naina ko kitna dara diya...sach kahun to main bhi bahut darr gayi thi ye sochke ki achanak whats happening with raj n naina...alekh aur neelu bhi is plan main shaamil tha...sab milke naina ko kitna dara diya
but ye naina ke father kuh jyada hi gussa nahin hogaya raj pe...mujhe bilkul bhi accha nahin laga...raj is so upset ...thank god naina ne sab kuch tikh kar diya...why raj is not opening his door...but what happened to naina ..why she felt dizzy...hope she is fine
totally wonderful part arwa
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hiiiii Arwa....

How r u? - hey i'm gr8

so sorry dear i am commenting so late - its okay
the update is awesome asusual 👏 👏 👏 👏 - thank you

raj is so naughty ...naina ko kitna dara diya...sach kahun to main bhi bahut darr gayi thi ye sochke ki achanak whats happening with raj n naina...alekh aur neelu bhi is plan main shaamil tha...sab milke naina ko kitna dara diya - hehehee yeh Raj is just Raj who just doesnt learn. Oh that means the idea worked that u also got scared lol. Sab ko milke her baar Naina ko satane me hee maza aata hai

but ye naina ke father kuh jyada hi gussa nahin hogaya raj pe...mujhe bilkul bhi accha nahin laga...raj is so upset ...- well yeh but it is all due to their thinking which is not so open minded like Raj. Yeh poor Raj.

thank god naina ne sab kuch tikh kar diya...- ha ose to karna hee tha na after all she couldnt leave her love in despair

why raj is not opening his door...but what happened to naina ..why she felt dizzy...hope she is fine - all the answers shall be answered soon.

totally wonderful part arwa
plz continue soon

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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!!Awesome!!!!!! - thanks very much

Raj was concerned about Naina and thats why he had ordered food for her!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - as usual he is always going to be concerned abt her small small needs

Anyone would freak out seeing the condition of the bathroom!!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 - of course isliye to wo itna darr gayee

Raj is laughing at her and even though she wanted to leave immediately, it was impossible as the rain had still not stopped!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - ha bechaaree phas gayee thi dono ke beech

Naina was feeling scared but did not want to show it and so she said its okay if Raj watched the horror movie!!!! - ha kabhi kabhi ham jise pyaar karte hai oskee khushi ke liye yeh sab bhi karna parta hai

But I think Raj jaan bujhke horror movie dekhne baitha tha!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hmmm for sure as we know he is always up to no good

Naina itni darri huyi hai aur Raj kitchen mein khaana laane gaya!!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 - ab bhook lagi hai to kya kare

Bechari Naina channel change bhi nahi kar sakti yeh sochke that Raj will think she was really afraid and kept lying!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 - hehehee sach me buri tarhase phas hee gayee thi

Jo Naina ke saath ho raha tha usse koi bhi darr jaata and Raj's scream and those noises obviously scared her!!!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 - yep the situation around her had made her too anxious

The phone call and the trail of blood made her tremble and she was sweating!!!!!! - ab koi bhi aise hee react karta na

Raj ko us haalat mein dekh ke toh Naina ki jaan nikal gayi hogi!!!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 - definitely kyu ke oski jaan to Raj me bas ti hai

Then she saw a masked man with a knife behind her and she began running!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - she had to run for her life

Raj removed his mask and is now laughing!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 - ab kya kare yeh Raj kabhi nahi sudrega, itna bhayanak mazaak karta rehta hai

He is joined by Aalekh and Neelu, his partners in crime!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - now it couldnt have been done alone

Raj is really very naughty and he scared Naina to death!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - sach me osne bohat hee buri tarha se darra diya ose

He totally deserved the tight slap Naina gave him as he really went too far this time!!!!! 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Aisa mazak koi karta hai kya??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - he sure did but he wasnt aware that it wud go that far and she'll be really upset

Raj is now hugging her and telling her he is sorry as Naina continued to cry!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗- ha wo sab kuch dekh sakta hai per naina ke aasoo nahi

Naina is scared of losing Raj and would die if something happens to him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - ab oske bina oski saas nahi chalti

Raj also cannot live without her and promised ke woh aisa mazak phir kabhi nahi karega!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - definitely dono ek duje me hee bas te hai

Naina loves Raj very much and could not stay mad at him for long and genuinely forgave him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - ha aakhir koun itne pyaare insaan se ziada tar naraaz reh sakta hai

But Raj and Aalekh are again teasing Naina and their Tom and Jerry chase started!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehe they are back to sqaure one to inka kuch nahi hosakta

Naina waking up next to Raj and them smiling at each other was very cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - hmmm it sure was cute

Naina is worried as they had fallen asleep there instead of going back after the rain had stopped!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - ha she hadnt expected this at all

Naina is trying to wake Raj and Aalekh and Neelu are least bothered by another of Raj and Naina's arguments!!!!!🥱 🥱 🥱 🥱 - hehehe kisee ko koi paree hee nahi or bechaaree Naina hee peeche paree hai

Lagta hai yeh Raj aur Naina ka jhagadna aam baat ho gayi hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - hehehe aisa hee lagta hai shayad hogaya hai

Here Navin is getting a scolding and he is trying to explain but Mira and Naina's dad is not ready to listen and even Ritu is getting a scolding!!!!!! - ab baat baro se chupaaoge to aisa hee hoga na

Raj has to pass a comment even in this situation and his comment about head office and wakeel was funny!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - if he wouldnt do it then he simply wont be Raj and I'm glad u found his comment funny. He cant help but do comedy all the time

Naina's dad does not have any respect for Raj nor does he trust his daughter to do the right thing!!!!!! - hmmmm he is too concerned abt his principles thats why

Yeh kya tareeka huya apne damad se baat karne ka??😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 - ab ghusse me hai to sab bole diya

Baat toh aise kar rahe hai jaise Raj ne Naina ko zabardasti uske saath le gaya ho!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Damad ki koi izzat hai yaa nahi??😕 😕 😕 😕 - honi chaheeye per kya kare her baar ki tarha oski safai kisee ko sunni nahi hai

Even Gehlot blames Raj and is upset with him!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - yeh it looked like everyone left his side

Bechare Raj ko kya kya sunna padha!!!!! A big issue was made out of nothing!!!!!! - absolutely as always.

I had thought four of them being together will sort things out par yahan toh koi Raj ki baat sunne ko taiyaar hi nahi hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 - yehi to problem hai ke koi oski baat sunta hee nahi

Aalekh aur Neelu bhi unke saath thhe, dono akele toh nahi thhe aur phir bhi sabko problem hai!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 - alekh or Neelu ki baat sunni kaha hai ke clarify ho

Naina ke dad ko Raj ki pichli zindagi ki baat karne ki kya zaroorat thi??😕 😕 😕 😕 - gussa hai to sab nikal aaya na

Raj is now more angry than upset and stomped off upstairs to his room!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - this was bound to happen

Ritu ne sahi kiya jo Navin ko daanta ke oro ki tarah usne bhi Raj ko itna kuch keh diya!!!!! 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 - atleast someone was still on Raj's side and she had to explain to him.

Naina told Navin everything and he felt bad for what happened, especially for Rajveer!!!!! - he sure did as he felt ashamed of his own actions

Naina and Sameera decided to solve this mess and they all went to explain everything to the parents!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yes it was about time she made sure her Raj was proved innocent

Raj is now throwing things around in anger and is upset and distraught!!!!!!! - yep he is really steamed up

He is thinking deeply about things and knew that the step he has taken with Naina was not a sin as his intentions were not wrong!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - for sure as it was his pure love

Raj's reaction to this was right as zyada safai dene se sabko lagta hai ke woh galat hai!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔 - ha bechaara her baar ki tarha is baar bhi bura bana

Ish wajah se hamara sudhra huya Raj kahi phir se na bigad jaaye!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 - are dont worry Naina hai na ose smabhaal ne ke liye

Mira is now saying ke Raj ne kuch kaha kyun nahi??😛 😛 😛 😛Arre woh log kuch kehne ka mauka dete toh kehta na!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - certainly ab osne khud moka nahi diya or phir sochtee hai ke kyu kuch nahi kaha

Mira is now pulling Navin's ear and saying ke asal doshi toh woh hai aur bechare Raj ko kitna sunna padha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 - she is right na as Navin was the one who gave them the permission and then didnt even support them

Now Naina's father is feeling bad and decided to go and apologise to Raj!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔Gehlot is also feeling bad for not trusting Raj!!!!! - ha sab kop bohat bura laga hai

Sab Raj ko manane ki koshish kar rahe hai magar ab woh itni asani se nahi manne waala!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 - oh yes it wud be difficult to calm down the angered tiger now

Naina phir se Raj se baat karne gayi but she felt faint and slipped!!!!!! Yeh Naina ko kya huya hai??😲 😲 😲 😲 - yeh i know it's worrying so just wait for the next one to find out what happened.

I hope Naina is alright and Raj would be there to help her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - lets see.


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Part 33

Half an hour later

Navin: (banging on the door angrily) Raj, open the door! Darwaaza kholo! (he kept banging hard forcing Rajveer to open up and come out)

Rajveer was still emersed in his thoughts and when he heard the banging he curiously thought what happened now. Navin sounded pretty angry.

Navin: agar Raj tum darwaaza nahi khologe to me yeh tore dunga (he continued banging on the wooden pane)

Finally Rajveer got frustrated and opened the door rapidly in order to scold Navin but stopped when he saw Navin pretty steamed up himself.

Rajveer: Kya huwa, ab kya kardiya maine jo tum aise ghusse me aaye ho?

Navin: (grabbed Rajveer's collar and dragged him out) Tune jo kiya hai oske liye me tujhe chorunga nahi (pulled him out with him)

Rajveer: (held onto Navin's grip on him and pulled himself off) Yeh kya batamezee hai Navin. Choro mujhe.

Navin: Tujhe chore du (glared at him) tune jo kiya oske baad chore du. Kabhi nahi!

Rajveer: aakhir kya kardiya hai maine?

Navin: Kya kiya hai tune? (grabbed him again) tune hamare khandaan kee izzat ke saath khilwaar kiya hai, ospe badgumaan daag lagaya hai tune or iske liye me tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga (threw Rajveer ahead of him)

Rajveer: (stumbled into the side table) Me nahi jaanta ke tu kya kehraha hai

Navin: itna zaleel kaam karne ke baad kehraha hai ke tu nahi jaanta ke kya kiya hai. Tune meree bholi bhaali Naina kee zindagee barbaad ki hai. (pushed Rajveer aggressively)

Rajveer: (tried balancing himself) Dekh Navin meree baat sun. aisa nahi hai jo tu soch raha hai

Navin: acha? (took something out of his pocket and shoved it in Rajveer's face) to phir yeh kya hai? Kya hai yeh?

Rajveer looked at the device Navin held in his hand with horror. He couldn't believe what he was looking at.

Navin: kya yeh jhooth bole raha hai? Ise dekhne ke baad mere to hosh hee urgaye ke maine tujhe kya samjha tha or tu kya nikla

Rajveer: (held it in his hands) ek baar meree baat sun Navin. Jo bhi huwa hai me manta hu ke abhi nahi hona chaheeye tha per hamne jaan bujke kuch nahi kiya or…

Navin: kaha tha tujhse ke aisa kuch mat karna jisse mere ghar ki izzat pe ungli uthe or tune wo izzat ko hee mittee me milaadee. (pushed him again further throwing him against another table)

Rajveer: me maanta hu ke hamse ghalati huwee hai Navin per yaakeen maan maine kabhi nahi socha tha ke yeh hojaaehga (tried saving himself from Navin's blows) meree baat sun

Navin: (grabbed him) bohat sunn li teree baat jiska nateeja dekh chukka me. Ab me tujhe chorunga nahi, tujhe tere kiye kee saza milke rahegee (dragged him along with him as if he was some kind of goat)

Naina: (came running) Bhaiya! Aap kya karahe hai bhaiya (tried freeing Rajveer from his grip)

Navin: kya karaha hu? (menacing eyes) itna bara ghinona kaam karne ke baad pooch rahee hai ke me kya karaha hu. Ek baar bhi tune nahi socha apne parivaar ke bare me?

Naina: (is confused) bhaiya kya kehrahe hai aap? Kya kardiya hai maine?

Navin: Kya kardiya hai tune? (showed her the device) yeh kardiya hai tune, yeh!

Naina stared at the device in shock. She couldn't believe her brother found it. Something which she had hid for such a long time he found it. She felt terribly embarrassed as well as upset that he found the pregnancy test she had used for precaution and when she found positive results she herself was horrified.

Navin: tune hamara sir sharm se jhuka diya hai Naina (turned his face away from her and she had tears in her eyes) kabhi nahi socha tha maine ke tu aisa kaam karegee. (rage filled him as he glared at Rajveer) or yeh sab is Raj ki wajese huwa hai to ab me…

He left from there with utter dispointment. Naina kept crying and Rajveer saw she was really upset. He couldn't believe that it was true and she was pregnant with his baby. He knew it was his fault and he was not going to leave her in the middle. He had promised her that he'll take care of everything so he was going to take care of this mess too. He held her in his arms to console her.

Just than an enraged Navin burst back inside the hall and this time he wasn't alone. He carried a big shooting gun in his hand. Ritu followed him trying to stop his madness. She couldn't believe he was actually going to shoot Rajveer.

When Rajveer and Naina saw him approaching with the gun they seperated and gave him a terrified look.

Rajveer: Navin yeh tu…

Navin: jis insaan ne mere parivaar ki izzat ke saath khilwaar kiya ose jeene ka koi haq nahi. (put the gun up pointed towards Rajveer) me tujhe zinda nahi chorunga Raj

Naina: (desperate need) yeh kya karahe hai aap bhaiya. Raj ko maarahe hai? Hosh me to hai aap?

Navin: mere hosh ho awaaz hee to cheen liye hai isne or me nahi chorunga ise.

Everyone, Alekh, Neelu, Sameera and Ritu had all gathered in the hall hearing the commotion. And when they saw the scene they all were horrified. Ritu was already there but she was still afraid of Navin's sudden crazy behavior. She had to put sense in him.

Ritu: Navin yeh kya paagal pan hai, gun ko neeche rakho

Navin: aaj me kisee kee nahi sunne waala. Ab Raj ne her hadd paar karli hai (he was adamant and the gun stayed pointed towards him)

Everyone panicked and Rajveer was out of his senses as to what was happening and how he was going to save his life. Then he saw that Naina was also very distraught and he had to save her life too. Navin had gone crazy and he had to stop his madness for his sake if not anyone else's.

Alekh: Dekho Navin jo bhi huwa ose beith ke suljha sakte hai istarha paagalpan se kuch haasil nahi hoga

Navin: Alekh tu beech me mat aa…(moved Alekh aside) is waqt mera sir bohat garam hai or me ab kuch nahi sunna chahta. Me Raj ko zinda nahi chorunga isne meree Naina ki zindagee barbaad kardee.

Everyone tried to stop Navin from taking the step but he just wasn't prepared to listen. Ritu tried pulling the gun away but he didn't budge and then Alekh also came and pushed Navin backwards away from Rajveer but it was a hard task. Navin was too strong for all of them to handle. In the commotion Alekh yelled to Rajveer to run away quickly and they'll take care of Navin. Rajveer took the cue and ran from there, with his constant eye on the drama happening. Navin was angry at everyone for stopping him and he gave them all an aggressive shove and managed to get out of their grip. Then he saw Rajveer running away so he also ran in the same direction after him. The rest also followed Navin to stop him and save Rajveer.

Rajveer saw Navin approaching so he increased his speed and ran around the whole house desperately trying to save his life. He stumbled many times but didn't care about it or the things he destroyed in between. The most important was his life which had to be saved at any cost. He tried to get through Navin but it was as if he had become deaf ears to everything. The chase continued until Rajveer reached upstairs and then was cornered in the lobby by Navin. Now Navin held him on gun point once again and warned him that he'll pull the trigger no matter what so he was stuck.

Ritu: Oh my God Navin stop this please (yelled from below) wo gun neeche rakho

Alekh: Navin gun ko neeche rakho, yeh sahi nahi hai, put it down (slowly he began to climb the stairs)

Navin: Khabardaar jo koi upar aaya to (warned them by pointing the gun at them) warna ose bhi maardunga. Alekh neeche jaa

Alekh: Navin tum sunne…

Navin: (raised voice) I said go down. Neeche jaa Alekh, I'm warning you. Neeche jaa!

Alekh still kept climbing when Navin shot random shots towards him which made everyone scream and the girls went and grabbed him back downstairs.

Rajveer: (was pretty shook up by what Navin was doing) Navin me manta hu mujhse galati huwee hai to me oski maafi maangta hu tujhse. Ab jo hogaya ose badal to nahi sakte na

Navin: Maafi galati ki miltee hai, paap ke liye nahi or tune to maha paap kiya hai. Ab tu tayar hojaa is dunya se uthne ke liye

Rajveer: (nervous) meree baat to sun…yeh soch ke mujhe maarke Naina ka kya hoga. Wo mere bagair nahi jeesakti

Navin: Tuj jese insaan ke saath jeene ke bajai wo akelee hee rahe to acha hai.

This situation had become too tensed and all of them didn't know how to prevent what was happening. Naina stood downstairs crying her eyes out and she had to stop this at any cost.

Naina: Bhaiya me Raj se pyaar kartee hu or me aapko aisa nahi karne dungi

Navin: me ek baar tere is pyaar ki wajese pigal gaya tha Naina lekin ab nahi. Ab me tujhe barbaad hote huwe nahi dekh sakta

Naina: (climbed the stairs) agar aaj aapne Raj ko maardiya to aapki yeh Naina bhi zinda nahi rahegee

Navin: Teree koi dhamki mujhpe nahi chalne waalee aaj Naina. Maine jo than liya hai wo me karke rahunga. (his finger was on the trigger and he was prepared to shoot)

Naina quickly ran towards Rajveer and stood before him as if she was his shield. Everyone panicked further seeing her madness now.

Naina: Agar aapko maarna hee hai to phir hum dono ko maarna parega. Yeh galati sirf Raj se nahi huwee hai, me bhi shaamil hu oske saath

Rajveer: yeh kya karahee ho Naina (tried moving her away) beech me se hath jao. Agar Navin ko lagta hai ke me doshi hu to yehi sahi per tumhe kuch ho me bardaasht nahi karsakhunga

Naina: Or tumhe bhi kuch hojaaehga to me bhi bardaasht nahi karsakhungi (towards Navin) To bhaiya chalaye goli

Navin: Naina tu saamne se hath jaa

Naina: Nahi bhaiya aapko maarna hee hai to hum dono ko saath maarna hoga

Rajveer: Naina yeh paagalpan choro or hath jao raaste se

Navin: Naina tu hath jaa me kehraha hu ke hath jaa

Naina: maine kaha na ke me nahi hathungi. Aap chalaye goli

Navin: me goli chala dunga, hath jaa raaste se. me kehraha hu ke hath jaa

Rajveer: (grabbed her and tried moving her away) Naina hath jao raaste se

All three of them kept arguing and Navin was really excited and then suddenly a shot was heard and everything stood still. Time stood still. The people looking over stood still. Something happened which none of them expected. Navin actually shot at them and now someone was shot but who? For the first few seconds Naina kept staring at Rajveer in shock and then gradually she began to fall towards the ground. Rajveer quickly grabbed her before she collapsed. This shouldn't have happened. It shouldn't have.

Navin dropped the gun and also went running towards Naina, crying his eyes out. The rest also ran up the stairs towards them still in the state of shock. The most shocked was Rajveer who didn't know how to react. What happened was completely unbelievable.

Rajveer: Naina! (shook an unconscious Naina) Naina utho! Utho Naina! (painful tears in his eyes) Nahi Naina tum mujhe aise chore ke nahi jaasakti

Ritu, Sameera and Neelu all dropped on the floor next to Naina and cried their eyes out. This was unbelievable and shouldn't have happened. They also shook Naina to get up but she didn't respond.

Navin: Yeh kya kardiya maine. (shook Naina) Naina uthjaa, mujhe itnee baree saza mat de. Naina!

Rajveer: (was very angry and upset at the same time) Yeh kya kardiya tune Navin. Maardiya ise? (Navin kept crying uncontrollably) ab khush hai tu? Khush hai ke jiskee wajese tune yeh saara bawaal macchaya wo hee khatam hogayee. (raised voice) khush hai. Meree Naina ko maarkar khush hai tu

No one said anything and just continued crying at the distraught scene. Everything had happened so fast that no one was able to control themselves. They all just didn't know what to do.

Rajveer: Naina utho! (shook her again) Meree galati kee saza tum nahi bhugat sakti. Mujhe aise akele chore ke nahi jaasakti kyu ke me kese zinda rahunga? Utho Naina! Utho! (violent tears) Mujhe maaf kardo ke meree wajese tumhaare saath itna kuch huwa per me waada karta hu ke abse me sab kuch chore dunga or jesa tum chahtee hu wesa hee banjaunga. Bus ek baar waapis aajao mere paas. Naina please don't do this to me. (he hugged her tight) Please Naina mujhe chore ke mat jao. Me waada karta hu ke aaj ke baad tumhe kabhi bhi tang nahi karunga tumhe kabhi bhi nahi rulaaunga. Please Naina waapis aajao. Please Naina (he continued crying)

Naina: Meree kasam khaake kehte ho?

Rajveer: ha tumhaaree kasam (he paused as he thought over what he just heard. Did she actually speak to him? He pulled her out and saw she lay there in his arms with wide eyes and a smile on her face as if nothing had happened. What was going on?) Naina tum…

Naina: (wrapped her arms around his neck) bilkul theek hu. Jab tak tumhaara pyaar mere saath hai to mujhe kese kuch hosakta hai.

Rajveer: (found it unbelievable) to phir yeh sab…what the hell is going on? (was displeased)

Navin: are tere mooh se yeh pyaari pyaari baate sunne ke liye hee to pura naatak racha tha. Jaante the ke tu zaroor baahar niklega is wajese.

Rajveer: naatak?

Naina: ha naatak. Me batatee hu…

FLASHBACK

Naina had climbed the stairs to go towards Rajveer's room but midway she had felt light headed due to which she slipped and was going to collapse but Neelu caught her on time.

Neelu: My God Naina kya huwa tujhe?

Naina: Pata nahi (held her head) achanak chakkar sa aagaya mujhe. Mujhe kuch theek nahi lagraha.

Neelu: tujhe aaraam karne kee zaroorat hai (held her for support) chal kamre me or me dekh tee hu.

Both of them reached Naina's room and then Neelu helped her get on the bed and then made sure she rested. Then she said she'll go and get something for her to eat which will make her better and she left.

Naina remained on the bed for sometime and then something struck her and she panicked. There was a high possibility of that so she instantly grabbed her purse and fished through it. Then finally found it and rushed to the bathroom with it. She had bought the pregnancy test before they had left to come for Khandala just as a precaution. She did the test and crossed her fingers hoping for it to come negative.

It took a while and then she came out of the bathroom holding it in her hands and then stood still with horror. Navin stood in front of her and when he saw what was in her hands he was also shocked.

Naina: bhaiya aap yaha? I mean wo…

Navin: Neelu ne bataya ke teree tabiyat theek nahi to poochne aaya (saw the pregnancy test in her hands) yeh kya hai Naina?

Naina: (tried hiding it) uhhh…kuch nahi bhaiya wo to bus…(gave him a weak smile) me ab bilkul theek hu

Neelu: (came in without seeing Navin and was alarmed) Naina tu os pregnancy test se kya karahee hai?

Naina cursed Neelu under her breath for blabbering it out in front of Navin and now she was certainly going to die. Then Neelu noticed a stunned Navin standing and she covered her mouth with her hands for making such a grave mistake. Then Navin glared at Naina waiting for an explanation.

Naina: Bhaiya aisa nahi hai jaisa aap soch rahe hai…actually wo me…

Navin: tere haath me yeh pregnancy test hai or mujhse keh rahee hai ke me aisa na sochu? (disappointed) iska to ek hee matlab hosakta hai Naina or agar aisa hai jo me soch raha hu to phir aaj os Raj ko mujhse koi nahi bachaa sakta

Naina: what are you saying? Aisa kuch nahi karenge aap bhaiya, yeh sirf ek precautionary step hai

Navin: are aisa kuch huwa hee nahi to phir tu yeh precaution kyu lerahee hai? (saw how the colour of her face changed and she looked nervous) wait a minute…wo raat jab tum log wo beech pe gaye the to…my god mera shak sahi tha.

Naina: (felt embarrassed) actually bhaiya wo ummmm…osse pehle bhi…

Navin: (was utterly disappointed) I'm going to kill him

Navin began to leave the room in earnest and Naina tried calming him down and reminded him that what happened between them was an act of responsible adults. Navin was surprised to hear that and reminded her that what was she doing with a preganacy test if they had been responsible. He continued to fret and get angry at Rajveer. Naina tried her best to explain to him that what happened was not wrong.

Neelu: (in between their argument) uhhh Naina it's pink

Navin: (that made it worse for him and he fumed further) ab to chorunga hee nahi me ose. Not after what he has done to you (he continued walking with the intention to kill him and then Naina and Neelu followed him with the desperate need to stop him)

Naina: bhaiya wait, aisa nahi hai jo aap soch rahe hai

Navin: wo pink hogaya hai or tu mujhe kehrahee hai ke kuch nahi huwa. You're bloody pregnant!

He didn't realize that they were out in the lobby now and Alekh, Ritu, Sameera and Neelu were sat in the hall and now heard him say it out loud. All of them were shell shocked to hear this and just kept staring at them completely numb. Naina felt so embarrassed that she wished she could have disappeared somewhere. Now everyone knew and it was going to be so awkward for her to be around them. Frustration took over her and she grabbed the device out of Neelu's hand.

Naina: isme pink huwa hai to oska matlab yeh hai ke result negative hai samjhe bhaiya (she gritted her teeth)

Navin: kya? (felt stupid) I thought ke iska matlab hota hai ke positive hai. Oh God (he held his head in agitation) aaj ka din hee lagta hai bhaaree hai. Ek to pehle tune or Raj ne itnee bari garbar kardee or phir oske baad tune yeh bawaal macha diya.

Naina: excuse me per maine aisa kuch nahi kiya. Wo to ittefaq se aap mere kamre me aagaye

Navin: wo to acha huwa ke me aagaya warna itnee baree baat mujhe pata hee nahi chaltee (she just rolled her eyes) maana ke tu pregnant nahi hai per osse yeh baat to jutlaati nahi na ke tum dono itne aage barchuke ho

Naina: ab bhaiya aap bhi please ma or baba ki tarha lecture mat dena. Maante hai ke hamne jo kiya jald baazi thi per wo hamara pyaar tha or kuch nahi.

It took a lot of convincing from everyone and finally Navin seemed okay with it but still he found it awkward to know that his sister had grown so much to have that sort of relationship. She wasn't married yet so he had to be the over protective big brother.

Later they sat down discussing about what happened with Rajveer and how he still hadn't left his room. He just wasn't prepared to listen to anybody or even talk to anybody. They had to find a solution to bring him out.

Naina: (idea popped) Bhaiya me pregnant hu

Navin: (out of his wits) What?

Naina: yes I'm pregnant

Navin: tu hosh me bhi hai tu kya kehrahee hai? Yeh koi mazaak ki baat nahi

Naina: uffo (annoyed) me sahi me thoree pregnant hu per yehi to khel hai. (everyone looked confused) dekhye me samjhaatee hu. Jistarha aap dhoka khaagaye ke me pregnant hu osee tarha Rajveer bhi to khaasakta hai.

Navin: wo kese?

Naina: you didn't know what was negative and positive on this device to Raj ko pata nahi hoga to ose yeh dikhaa ke easily fool karsakte hai. Yeh baat jaankar wo bahaar zaroor niklega or phir hum ose mana lenge

Navin: (shook his head) this wont work. Wo ham sab ko pakar lega

Naina: nahi pakrega bhaiya. Not after what we do with him.

She narrated the whole plan to them all about how Navin would go barging in his room and drag Rajveer out as if he was furious with him. Then they would play the drama of Navin being really angry with him for performing such an act and making her pregnant. Then the finale would be of her dying and then make him repent everything. Alekh did warn her that Rajveer might take it the wrong way as he was quite upset with the happenings already. She comforted him by saying that when he'll find out they were joking then he would certainly forget everything. After all he had played the dying game with her so many times and she always forgave him. This way he would forget his sorrow and come back to his self. So they all had agreed finally and the plan had been put in action…

END OF FLASHBACK

All of them were laughing on Rajveer's expense but he was not happy at all. A rage had filled him by now as they all had made fun of life. His life and his child's life and he wasn't going to forgive them for that.

Alekh: sach me is baar tera chehra dekhne laayak hai. Her baar tu sab ka paplu banata hai or aaj tera bangaya (laughed out loud) teree to phat hee gayee yeh maut ke khel ki wajese (continued laughing and mocking Rajveer with the rest)

Rajveer: (stood up irately) OH JUST SHUT UP! MAUT KA BHI TAMASHA BANATA HAI KOI

All of them stopped laughing after hearing him being so hot headed. Then he just left from there leaving all of them quite upset and hurt. They had tried to joke with him and here he was still angry with them. Naina felt the worst. She followed him out as enough was enough.

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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Navin is so angry with Raj and is abusing and accusing him!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Navin is hitting Raj and finally showed him the device!!!!!!

Raj was shocked to know the reason for it!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Naina tried to free Raj from Navin's grip and stop him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

She was upset to see that Navin had found the pregnancy test she had used!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Navin knows that both Raj and Naina have crossed their limits and Naina is pregnant!!!!!

Naina is so distressed and crying so much and Raj feels terrible to see her like this!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj held Naina in his arms to comfort her and he was going to take care of everything!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He knew it was his fault and he was not going to leave her in the middle!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin to gun leke aaya hai to shoot Raj and even Ritu can't stop him!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Ritu ko toh ek thappad laga ke Navin ko raaste pe laana chahiye tha!!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

They haven't commited any crime and it was just love!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Everyone is trying to stop Navin and Raj taking the cue ran away!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is running for his life and Navin is behind him!!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj ne sahi kaha ke uske bagair Naina kaise jeeyegi!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina stood before Raj like his shield and is trying to save him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj is trying to get her to go and in all this Naina gets shot!!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

This was the height but how can the heroine die??😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Everyone ran towards them and is crying their eyes out and Navin is thinking what has he done!!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj was shocked and did not know how to react and upset and angry at Navin!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj is crying and asking Naina to come back to him and promises ke usse kabhi tang nahi karega!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina said uski kasam khaake kehta hai and Raj agreed without thinking!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Then Raj realised what he had heard and saw Naina smiling!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj finally came to know ke yeh sab natak tha!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

When Naina had slipped tab Neelu ne usse sambhala tha and helped her to her room!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina was horrified to be caught with her pregnancy test by Navin!!!!!

Neelu also blabbed out without noticing Navin and Navin was stunned!!!!!

Navin is disappointed aur samajh gaya ke uska shak sahi tha ke ush raat jab woh dono beach pe gaye thhe tab!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina told him ke usse pehle bhi and Navin said he is going to kill Raj!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Neelu ne kaha ke its pink toh Navin ne samajh liya that Naina is pregnant!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Navin ki wajah se sabko pata chal gaya and Naina felt so embarrassed as now everyone knew and it was going to be awkward for her to be around them!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina was so frustrated that she grabbed the device and informed Navin that it meant she is not pregnant!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

It took a lot of convincing and finally Navin seemed okay with it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But he found it awkward to know that his sister had grown so much to have that sort of relationship!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Naina came up with this master plan!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina rightly said ke Navin ki tarah Raj ko bhi pata nahi hoga toh yeh dikhakar usse fool kar sakte hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Aalekh ne warn kiya tha that Raj may take it in the wrong way!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Magar Naina ka kehna bhi sahi tha ke Raj had played the dying game with her so many times and she always forgave him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Everyone agreed to act in the plan and Navin scared Raj with the wonderful act!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Aakhir sher ko sawa sher mil hi gaya!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Raj sab ke saath aisa karta tha aur aaj Naina ne usse hi maat de di!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

All of them are now laughing at Raj but he is not happy at all!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj didn't take this joke in a good stride!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

This is not fair jab Raj Naina ke saath aisa karta hai she forgives him but now jab uspe aayi hai toh gussa ho gaya!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj is angry as they had made fun of his life and his child's life and he wasnt going to forgive them for that!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Everyone is upset and hurt as he was still angry with them!!!!!!

Naina hadn't expected this and she followed him out and hopefully ab woh Raj ki akal thikane laayegi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Arwa !

what an Update dear !!! 😛
I had a roller coaster of reactions reading it...😆
Firstly I was stunned at Naveen's behaviour and thought has he lost it? 😆
Then was very angry on him for abusing and accusing Raj like that..😛
Then was shocked to know Naina's pregnancy test was positive 😲
Then I switched to defend Raj when that Naveen was tirelessly accusing him only, while Naina is equal partner in the crime 😛
Then seriously I was on edge when that moron was behind my Raj to kill him and my poor Raj was running to save his life...
I was like 'come on ! Raj !! Don't Run !!! Give him some piece of brain ! ' 😆
Maine toh yaha tak socha ki yeh Ritu waha khade khade kya kar rahi hai? Ek thappad laga deti toh bhi Naveen line par aajata ! 😆
Jab koi kuch nahi kar raha tha toh mann kiya main hi aajau wahapar aur do fatke lagau Naveen ko ! 😆 😆
And then Naina jumped to defend Raj...and I was like 'Arey meri Tragedy Queen! Marna kyun hai ? Ek jhapad laga apne bhaai ko...line pe aajayega !" ( In short aaj Naveen ko peetne ka FULL MOOD tha mera ! 😆 😆 )
Then Naina was shot and I was shocked ! 😲
when Naveen was crying I was like, ab kyun ro raha hai ! But I got the inkling what you were about to do and see....I was right ! 😃
They played a prank on Raj, but I'm on Raj's side !( as always 😉 ) Aisa mazak karenge toh usse toh gussa aayega hi na !
So....the gist of my nonsensical rambling is that....I liked the update and enjoyed it veryyyyyyyyyy much ! 👏👏 👏
ohkk....now do i need to say? Or u'll understand??😕
U didnt??😲
okay..i think i should say it then....😳
UPDATE SOOONNNNNN ! 😉
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Arwa
How r u??
Update was really hilarious..Manali is right when she says that it was similar to a roller coaster ride..Kabhi kuch ho jaata n kabhi kuch..😲😆.
I mean initially I was scared like wat has got into Naveen's head?
He was so very angry with Raj..n like Raj even I was shocked to know the reason..He knew that both Raj n Naina had crossed their limits n Naina is pregnant..
Way he was abusing Raj made me flinch..I really wud have killed Naveen for this..😡
Then he hit him too.This is not done Naveen .They haven't commited any crime..It was just love..
Raj was running away to save his life ..Every1 was so shocked to see Naveen holding the gun to kill Raj..
Naina was so distressed ..She was crying so much.Raj was feeling terrible to see her like dis..
Then when Navin tried to kill Raj Naina came in between n got shot..
Raj was so shocked n angry..he cudn't believe wat has happened !!!😕😭😭
This was high time n den Naina was fine..
Like Raj I too came to know abt this stupid plan..
Oh My God!! This was just too funny..u really made me laugh so much🤣🤣
It was really embarrasing for Naina to b caught with preganancy test kit by her own brother.....But Naveen is really very understanding.😆😆😆.he agreed to act in that plan n really scared Raj with his wonderful act..👏
Alekh n others were having a gud laugh at this joke..
But Raj didn't take this joke in a gud stride..He was really very angry with all this..
Naina hasn't expected this..
Wat will happen now??
Continue soon
Bye

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