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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

very sorry for late reply......

totally amazing updt....

rn were absolutely awesome.....




Its okay and thanks for loving the part

Yeh they always are awesome.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!! - thanks alot

Raj wants Naina to come with him shart ke mutabik but Naina reminds him what the condition was!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 - yeh Raj never forgets anything

Raj mandir gaya nahi toh uske baat ka koi matlab nahi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›But Raj saara blame Navin par daal deta hai!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - haha wo kaha kabhi accept karega oski mistake

When Naina still refused to come with him, he became cross and walked off!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - so typical of him i know

She felt bad that she had made him upset again and followed him usse manane ke liye!!!!! - ab oske bina thori na kuch hoga

Magar Raj toh maan hi nahi raha hai aur bilkul bacche ki tarah rute gaya hai!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - yeh she was having a tough time

I think Raj is deliberately ignoring her pleas so that she follows him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - hmmm perhaps

He surely knows how to turn the situation in his favour!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - oh yes thats what makes him Rajveer

Naina is right that Raj is like a kid who keeps making demands and Naina has to accomplish them!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep an extremely cute kid

Magar Raj ka bhi toh kuch haq hai na uspe aur yeh Raj ka pyaar hi toh hai jo Naina ko hamesha apne paas dekhna chahta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - hmmm for sure. ab to pura haq banta hai kyu ke not only does he own her heart but her whole being

Finally Raj understands what Naina has to go through and promises her ke ab aisa nahi hoga!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - he is very understanding

Naina got a pleasant surprise but she had full trust in him and would go anywhere with him with her eyes closed!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yehi to pyaar hai

The surprise that Raj gave Naina was amazing and just perfect!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - after all he is perfect in everything he does

Naina is surprised to see the depth of Raj's love and she just loved him more and more!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yep it just cant stop and grows and grows

Raj said tumse zyada nahi and engulfs her in his arms and got romantic with her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - like always he has the same answer as it is simply true. Romancing with her is his favourite pass time so how cud he resist it

Raj kehta hai ke waha unke alawa aur koi nahi aayega aur woh jo chahe kar sakta hai aur usse koi rok nahi sakta!!!!!😈 😈 😈 😈 - hehehe the wicked side is emerging

Raj gives an evil laugh and said ab Naina ko usse koi nahi bacha sakta and Naina ne socha Raj ko kya ho gaya hai and got scared of his intentions!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - yes the girl certainly got scared

Naina is really strange ek taraf Raj se pyaar karti hai aur usse darti bhi hai!!!!!πŸ€ͺ πŸ€ͺ πŸ€ͺ πŸ€ͺRaj koi pehli baar toh uske kareeb nahi aa raha hai!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - certainly its true per kya kare yeh larki kabhi kabhi switched off hojaati hai

Naina squealed and ran away from him but he chased her and finally caught her from behind!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - funny situation i know

Naina screamed like hell and then kicked hard on Raj's shin and Raj let her go and then groaned with pain!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - poor guy and it sure was very funny kyu ke dono bewacoofo kee tarha larahe hai

Raj's dialogue ke lagta hai Naina ka pura khandaan undertaker se related hai was too funny!!!!🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - hehehe i'm glad u found it hillarious

Naina ran towards him and is now saying sorry and helping him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - Now she cant see him in pain can she

Now they are laughing at each other as they know how to make a fool of themselves and are really two of a kind!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - sach me dono hee paagal hai. They certainly deserve each other

Naina is right ke Raj khud kisi bacche se kam nahi hai toh its obvious that he will like kids!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - for sure wo ek bacche jesa hee hai per a kid who everyone would want to love all their lives

Raj ne kaha woh chahta hai woh jisse pyaar kare woh bhi baccho se bahut pyaar kare toh Naina kehti hai kitni sharte hai Raj se pyaar karne ki!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - hmmmm for sure Naina was bound to ask as he had many demands

Naina ne kaha woh Raj se pyaar nahi kar sakti and is thanking God and walking away!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - kardi na garbar osne

Raj was so hurt and getting really angry at this!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - he was bound to after all what he heard was outrageous

It was Naina's turn to tease him and finally she said kyunki woh usse bahut pyaar karte hai and burst out laughing!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - after all oski hee gf hai to oska asar to hone waala hai

Raj toh yeh mazak mein bhi nahi sun sakta ke Naina usse pyaar nahi karti!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 - of course he cant kyu ke oski zindagee hee khatam hojaehgee

Naina was shocked to see tears in his eyes and promised him ke uska saath kabhi nahi chhodegi!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - oska dard nahi dekh sakti wo or pyaar bhi to itna hee kartee hai

Raj gave Naina such a beautiful surprise and the messages that the fireworks left made Naina ecstatic and she stared at him with love!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ - yes he was so wonderful that she couldnt believe it

Raj's love for Naina is so deep and he said ke uski saasein bhi Naina ke liye hi chal rahi hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - definitely they are one soul with one heart now

Naina is scared of losing him but he promised her that they will live together and die together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - oh yes an unbreakable promise

He kissed her passionately and they held each other not wanting to let go!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - hmmmmm neither of them wanted to loose the moment

Rain came at the right moment and completed the package making the moment perfect and the night even more romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - ab filmy situation to daal na hee parega na and rain is perfect

Raj is right ke lagta hai uparwala bhi unke saath hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - oh yes God to hamesha onke saath hee hai

Accha huya they found the guest house and Raj made up a story and the guard let them in!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - as usual Raj lied

The guest house was dark and scary and it was freaking Naina out!!!!! Mujhe bhi yeh guest house kuch theek nahi lag raha!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - hmmm yeh something doesnt seem right abt it so lets see what happens

Yeh Raj ne us guard se kya kaha??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - kuch to secret rehna chaheeye

Raj is teasing Naina for being scared and Naina got annoyed and attacked him!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - yeh to hona hee tha aakhir how long can she tolerate it

Raj continued to tease her and laughed like hell and finally stopped her assailing hands and rolled her over!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - ha after all he loves naina when she is like this fighting machine

The song is very nice and perfect for them in this rain!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - thanks for liking it

Raj and Naina are sooo romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - osme koi shaq nahi hai

It was very hot and passionate!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - for sure RN rise the fire completely

Romance ke beech Naina ko bhook lagi!!!!!! Bechara Raj!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hehee she sure knows hwo to ruin good parts

Yeh toh lagni hi thi kyunki Raj har waqt Naina ko itna occupied rakhta hai ke kuch aur karne ka mauka hi nahi mila!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - you could say that for sure

Raj was disappointed ke acche khaase romantic moment ko Naina ne kharab kar diya!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - yeh i know poor him

But Raj's love is not just physical and he loves her completely and Naina is glad to have him in her life!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yes thats the beauty of his love for her

Raj is again joking and they are playing around with each other forgetting the rest of the world!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - yehi to khaas baat hai dono ki her baar sab kuch bhool jaate hai


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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 32

The guard had returned shortly bringing them dry clothes to change into and to Naina's surprise Rajveer had asked for something to eat too. She was glad that he had thought of it from the beginning and instantly went for the bite. He just kept staring at her lovingly as she satisfied herself and seeing her happy kept him happy.

Then they changed their clothes and Naina went to the adjoining bathroom much that she didn't want to but she had no choice. The bathroom also freaked her out as it was filled with cobwebs and creepy crawlies swam around in the mucky gutter water. She just quickly shut her eyes and got changed. Suddenly something fell onto her and she freaked out and squealed opening the door and dashed out back towards the hall.

Rajveer just kept laughing as she got more annoyed and insisted that they leave the place immediately but Rajveer told her that the rain had still not stopped so it was impossible for them to leave. She fretted and just felt too uuneasy. He told her to sit down with him and till she is with him nothing will happen.

They just spent talking with each other and then watched T.V randomly. After a while Rajveer switched to a channel which was going to show a horror film and he loved it.

Rajveer: Are you sure Naina tum theek rahogee, I mean yeh movie dekhne kee zaroorat nahi

Naina: (nervously) Nahi Raj it's okay (didn't want to show she was afraid anymore) wese bhi tum ho to mujhe darr nahi lagega

They began watching it but right after the first murder, Naina changed her mind. The guy in the mask was freaking her out. She saw an engrossed Rajveer beside her so she tried to not be afraid and just enjoy it too but it wasn't easy. She cuddled into him.

Rajveer: kya huwa, darr lagraha hai?

Naina: n…nahi…me theek hu, theek hu mein

He just smiled and continued watching wrapping his arm around her for comfort. The scenes grew grotesque and even more frightening. Many times she shut her eyes but didn't tell Rajveer to stop the film. She didn't want to ruin it for him and plus give him another chance to make fun of her.

Rajveer: Mujhe to abhi bhi kaafi bhook lagrahee hai what about you? (she just nodded saying she was fine because she didn't want to move from the position she was in) ek kaam karta hu, baahar jaake dekhta hu ke kitchen me khaane ka kya hai or kuch lekar aata hu.

Naina: (held him back) Abhi kyu jaarahe ho (desperately) thoree dair baad jao na

Rajveer: (teasingly) kyu darr lagraha hai?

Naina: (annoyed face) For god's sake Raj mujhe koi darr war nahi lagta okay (tried to hide her anxiety) I was concerned about you missing the film

Rajveer: Naina me yeh film dekh chukka hu so it's okay (he touched her cheek affectionately and then got off the sofa and left the room) me abhi aaya

Now she was all alone just like the next victim in the movie. She tensed up about what would happen next. She sat all cuddled up resting her head between her knees.

Every five minutes she looked towards the door expecting Rajveer to return but he still hadn't which kept her restless. Like that a good half an hour passed and still he hadn't returned. Why hadn't he? She panicked and began getting weird ideas. Then she brushed them off trying to calm herself down. Then she laughed thinking the movie was getting on her nerves so she went to change it. But then she paused thinking that what if Rajveer returned and found her watching something else then he would just think she was really afraid and kept lying. So she just left it deciding she'll be brave enough to watch it without freaking out. He still hadn't returned.

Suddenly she heard a loud crashing noise from outside the room which made her jump. She got goosebumps all over her body and her heart raced with anxiety. She decided to find out so she stood up and left the room.

Naina: Raj? Raj? Kya huwa?

She got no reply, it made her worried and her heartbeat increased by the second. She gulped and continued going through the dark scary corridor. When she reached the end of it she heard a loud scream. It was Rajveer. She quickly ran to where it was coming from non stop and ended up in the kitchen but when she got there no one was there. She only found some broken dishes and broken furniture.

Naina: (tears welled up) Raj? Kaho ho tum? Raj?

She searched around but couldn't find him, not even the guard. What happened to them all of a sudden? Just then the land line began ringing which made her yell out of fright. By now she had become completely afraid with no one to console her. With a lot of hesitation she went towards the phone to take it thinking perhaps it could be her savior.

Naina: h…h…hello

Voice: Naina (chuckle) pehchaana mujhe?

Naina: (was perspiring) kaun ho tum?

Voice: tumhaara deewana

Naina: (angry) Raj agar tum yeh mazaak karahe ho to stop it right now (she cut the phone off)

Then the phone rang again. Her hands trembled as she picked up the phone again thinking perhaps it was someone else.

Voice: Don't ever cut my phone

Naina was terrified by the tone of the voice. This couldn't have been Rajveer at all.

Voice: suna hai horror films ka bara shoke hai tumhe

Naina: koun ho tum?

Voice: meresawaal ka jawaab do

Naina: pehle mujhe yeh batao ke koun ho tum

Voice: picture me to horror kai baar dekha hoga. (laughed) asal zindagee me bhi dekhna chaahogi?

Naina: Just stop it!

Voice: sssssssssh….(lowered the voice to almost a whisper) maine tumhaare liye ek tohfa tayaar kiya hai

Naina: Mujhe tumse kuch nahi chaheeye

Voice: I'm afraid you don't have a choice in this honey

Naina: (crying) kyu karahai ho aisa?

Voice: kyu ke tumne rules tore hai. Horror films me darna mana hai or tum puree tarhase kaap rahee ho

Her eyes went wide with horror after hearing that as she realized he was watching her. She did a rapid search around.

Voice: Yes me tumhe baree acchee tarhase dekh sakta hu, (hissed) ab wahee karo jo me kehraha hu

The voice instructed her to move forward out of the kitchen and walk towards the other hall adjacent the kitchen. She began moving slowly and with each step her anxiety increased, sweat beads appeared on her forehead and her hands didn't stop trembling. She noticed a trail of blood and kept following it until she was instructed to stop. She froze in her tracks with utter shock.

Voice: how do you like my gift?

Naina saw Rajveer lying on the floor with a knife stabbed in his stomach and blood all over. She dropped the phone and dropped down next to him, screaming and panicking.

Naina: AAAAAAAAH! RAJ! UTHO RAJ!

There was no movement and then her eyes fell on the big mirror in front of her. She saw the masked man with the knife behind her. Her eyes stuck out completely horrified. She screamed and ran from there but her legs failed on her and she crashed with the table. She caught her breath but the masked man popped up infront of her again. She panicked and threw things at him to prevent him from coming near her. He grabbed hold of her from the back and pulled her with him by the waist. She stomped on his foot and threw him back against the fireplace and then ran from there. She got near the place where Rajveer lied a few mintues earlier but now wasn't there. She covered her mouth with her hand to stop her pained cry and fear. Then she heard the masked man approaching so she ran from there.

Naina: Somebody help me! Koi hai? Please bachao mujhe!

She ran and spotted a phone so went to grab it but to her dismay the lines were disconnected. She couldn't understand what to do.

The masked man approached. She put the phone down and turned around slowly. He came closer and closer. She had reached the peak of her fear. When he was just an inch away from her, he took out his knife and just as he picked it up to attack she began screaming her lungs out.

Then all of a sudden she froze as she couldn't believe what she heard. She heard laughter and the masked man was laughing. What was going on? Why was he messing with her mind? Then she heard another laughter coming from the back and then was even more horrified when the masked man in front of her removed his mask and revealed that he was none other than Rajveer. Her very own Rajveer. She stood there out of her wits whilst he continued laughing joined by this second person who was in fact Alekh.

Rajveer: (still laughing) Kya kaha tha tumne 'mujhe koi darr war nahi lagta' God you gotta see your face right now.

Naina was still in a state of shock as to what just happened and then when she saw Rajveer, Alekh and then Neelu too joining in the fun a sudden rage filled her and she strode towards Rajveer and without thinking gave him a tight slap. All of them stopped and stood in silence and horror.

Naina: Samajhte kya ho apne aapko? Yu paagalo ki tarha meree jaan nikaal ne ke baad yu chaati phaar phaar ke hass rahe ho? (cluthed on to his shirt fiercely and shook him) Kya dekhna chahte the tum? Yeh ke Naina zinda rehti hai ke nahi? How could you do this to me Raj? How could you…(angry tears) koi andaaza bhi hai tumhe ke tumhare is mazaak ne kya haalat kardee thi meree, koi andaaza…(she broke down in his arms)

Rajveer understood that this time he went too far and she didn't appreciate it. He hadn't wanted this and had never thought that she would take it so seriously. He thought he certainly did deserve that slap as he hurt her too much this time. He held her tight in his embrace.

Rajveer: mujhe maaf kardo Naina. Mera maksat tumhe istarha chote pohchaane ka nahi tha. Me to bus tumhaara yeh darr dhoore karne kee koshish karaha tha.

Naina: (continued crying) dubaara aisa mazaak kabhi mat karna Raj. Tum nahi jaante agar tumhe kuch hogaya to…(gulped) to phir me bhi zinda nahi rahoongee

Rajveer: ssssh… (rubbed her back to console her) I'm sorry Naina. Mujhe pata nahi tha ke tum sach me itnee darr jaaogee

Naina: Tumhe khodene se darr gayee thee Raj. I can't live without you anymore.

Rajveer: Or tumhe kya lagta hai ke me rehsakta hu? Naina tum hee ne to mujhe zindagee ke sahi mayeene sikhaaye hai. Ab tumhe khodene ka matlab hoga zindagee ko khona. Me waada karta hu aisa mazaak phirse kabhi nahi karunga.

They held each other pretty tight as if they were afraid to lose each other if they let go. But soon they were interrupted by Alekh as him and Neelu felt quite awkward standing like that in front of them. Naina was surprised to find them here and enquired as to how they ended up here. Then Rajveer told her the whole plan of how when he left the room to find something to eat he found the phone and decided to inform someone at home where they were. But then he thought that this was the right time to take the fear out of her so he made another plan and informed Alekh instead and told him to come over here with Neelu. Then they made the plan of the masked man and here they were. Naina shook her head as she couldn't believe they did this with her but Rajveer asked for forgiveness again and this time Naina genuinely forgot about the whole incident.

Alekh: wese guys I think hame yeh picture puree kardenee chaheeye

Naina: What?

Alekh: (winked at Rajveer) Kyu Raj karnee chaheeye na

Rajveer: ha…ha… kehte hai ke horror films adhuri dekhne se story haqeeqat ban jaati hai

Naina just stood there ruminating on it and both the boys burst out laughing at her expression. She actually believed it again.

Naina: RAJ! NAHI CHORUNGI TUMHE!

She chased him around the whole house.

The rain had still not stopped so all four of them had no choice but to remain in that guest house much to Naina's misfortune. She still hated the place but as long as Rajveer was with her she felt safe and wasn't scared any longer. All of them fell asleep tired out from the long hectic night.

Next morning

Naina woke up and found a sleepy Rajveer beside her and she smiled. She was still half asleep and saw him open his eyes and both just smiled at each other.

Rajveer: Good morning

Naina: good morning…Raj (all of a sudden she was wide awake) Raj? (she sat up with shock and straightened her clothes looking around the surroundings) Raj hum yahi sogaye (total shock) maine tumse kaha tha ke jese hee baarish khatam hogi ham nikal jaaenge or hum yahi sogaye (stood up and looked at her watch) My god waqt dekha hai its 11:00. Ab to sach me margaye

Rajveer: (still half asleep) ummmm subhe subhe itne fire me uthogee to kitna mushkil hoga bed se nikal na

Naina: mere yaha ghabrahat se paseene chute rahe hai or tum ho ke koi parwa hee nahi. (slightly kicked him) Get up Raj!

Alekh and Neelu also woke up hearing the noise and were also half asleep thinking what was going on. Then realized that it was one of Rajveer Naina arguments so just frowned and sat down again least bothered.

Rajveer: (relunctantly got up and tried calming her) dekho khamakha itna pareshaan hone kee zaroorat nahi. I tried very much to stay awake last night per me bohat thak gaya tha or phir tum bhi gehri neend me thi to mujhe nahi laga ke tumhe utha du. Khair ab jo hogaya so hogaya ose badal to nahi sakte na. Ab chalo jaldi tayaar hojao or ghar chalke dekhte hai ke kya haalat hai.

Naina: mujhe to darr lagraha hai Raj. Pata nahi maa baba kya soch rahe honge or phir tumhaare saath yu puree raat…(she bit her nails)

Rajveer: agar hum kuch dair or yaha rukhe to sach me kuch bara hee hojaaehga.

They got changed back into their clothes and then told Alekh and Neelu to also wake up and leave. Alekh kept consoling Naina that everything was going to be alright as they also were with them so they were not alone. She still worried but Rajveer told her that he would take care of everything and Navin was also there to back them up.

Back at the house

Mira: Navin tune ose ijazat kese dee? Jaanta hai na ke yeh mangnee or shaadi ke beech ka faasla bara hee naazuk hota hai or yeh aaj kal ke larke larkiya…

Navin: Maa kya aapko Naina pe bharosa nahi?

Mira: os bharose se hee to mera vishwaas jura hai. Per phir bhi puri raat wo ghar se gayab rahe or abhi tak laute nahi hai to me kya samjhu

Navin: Maa tum khamakha itna ghussa kyu horahee ho. Dekhye Raj pe to aapko bharosa hai hee na ke wo kuch aisa nahi karega or phir onki shaadi hone hee waalee hai

Naina's father: tumhaaree maa theek kehrahee hai Navin. Hamare yaha larkiya shaadi se pehle aise larko ke saath raat raat bhar ghoomti nahi or tum yeh jaante ho phir bhi tumne onhe jaane diya

Navin: baba wo mujhse kehke gaya tha ke wo Naina ko jaldi waapis leyaehga per…

Mira: Tu to hai hee nalayak per Ritu tumne kyu Navin ko samjhaaya nahi ke aisa nahi hosakta. Kyu nahi roka onhe

Ritu looked towards Navin who gestured her not to say anything so she just turned her eyes down towards the ground without uttering anything.

Everyone were present in the hall including Gehlot and Sameera. Gehlot also agreed that what Rajveer did was wrong and he took responsibilty of taking his school when he returned. Sameera also tried to defend Rajveer but Gehlot also didn't want to listen to anything like Naina's parents.

Rajveer, Naina arrived with Alekh and Neelu following but they remained at the door peeping in to see what the situation was like. They saw the whole family and by the looks on the parent's face it seemed a hot discussion was going on.

Rajveer: (whispered) lagta hai ke head office tak complaint pohoch chukee hai. Ab appeal karne ke liye apne apne wakeel chunlo

They walked in calmly as if nothing happened but as soon as Rajveer saw the strict expression on Gehlot's face he gulped and turned his eyes down towards the ground as if he was a child who was going to be told off. Naina also did the same and stood behind her parents.

Gehlot: yeh kya harkat hai Raj? Ghar ki izzat or maryaada ka koi khayaal hai tumhe?

Rajveer looked towards Sameera for help and then at Navin but both of them gave him a sorry helpless look. Naina's parents asked her the same which gave Rajveer a chance to go over to Navin.

Navin: (spoke low) itnee dair kese laga dee tum dono ne. maina kaha tha ke raat ko hee waapis aajaana

Rajveer: kya batao yaar mera bhi yehi irada tha per beech me wo baarish or phir pata nahi kab kese hum sogaye ke…

Mira: Hamare sawaal ka jawaab do Raj.

Navin: ab jab dono waapis aahegaye hai to jaane do na Maa

Mira: Tu beech me mat bole Navin. Dekho Raj hamne pure bharose se tumhe hamare ghar ki izzat soupee yeh soch ke ke tumhe bhi hamare ghar ki izzat hogi lekin aaj jo tumne kiya osse yeh bilkul nahi lagta.

Rajveer felt very guilty

Naina's father: ek baar bhi tumne nahi socha ke tumhaaree is harkat ki wajese kya asar hoga hum per. Kya tumhe bilkul bhi parwa nahi ke agar kuch oonch neech hogayee shaadi se pehle to kya jawaab denge hum dunya waalo se. Tumhaare yaha shayad aisa nahi hota hoga or wese bhi tumhaaree pichlee zindagee ke bare me jo hame pata chala hai osse to mujhe pehle andazaa lagadena chahiye tha ke tum jesa insaan kabhi kissee cheez ki izzat karega hee nahi

Those words really hurt Rajveer and he shot his head up. They had made the wrong picture of him and he had to defend himself.

Naina's father: lekin Naina ke pyaar ke aage me majboor hogaya or is rishte se mujhe koi aitraaz nahi tha. Ek baat yaad rakhna Raj ke abhi Naina ki shaadi nahi huwee hai tumse to abhi bhi wo hamare hee ghar ki izzat hai or me tumhe aise ose uchaal ne nahi dunga.

Rajveer: Dekhye aap log meree baat to sunye. Ha me legaya tha Naina ko saath lekin aise koi iradese nahi jesa aap soch rahe hai me…

Gehlot: Raj ose yu bina pooche lejaake hee tune ghalati kee hai or meree izzat pe bhi sawaal uthaaya hai tune. Why didn't you think before taking the step. Mujhe laga tha ke ab tu sudhargaya hai per aisee harkat ke baad mujhe nahi lagta ke aisa kuch bhi huwa hai.

Rajveer: (upset) Dad atleast aap to mujhe ghalat mat samjhye. Meree baat to sunye

Naina's father: bas ab hame kuch nahi sunna. Jitna kuch karna tha or dekhna tha wo sab hogaya ab or nahi. Ab ham waapis abhi jaarahe hai Mumbai. Isse pehle ke or koi bhi ghalat kaam ho hum sab jaarahe hai

Both the parents walked off leaving Rajveer very distraught. A big issue was made out of nothing and they didn't even let him explain as to what happened.

Gehlot: Raj is baar tumne bohat bari ghalati kardi hai or hame tumse yeh umeed nahi thi. Aaj tumne hamara sir sharm se jhuka diya

He also walked off and Rajveer's heart pierced hearing all these taunts. He was not only at fault here and still was getting blamed for it all.

Navin: I'm sorry Raj ab me teree koi madad nahi karsakta. Maa baba ne jo kiya wo sahi kiya or tujhe yeh nahi karna chaheeye tha

He also walked off and now Rajveer was angry more than upset. He was angry with all the accusations he received without any right reason. No one was ready to listen to him. Before Sameera or Naina could stop him he stomped off upstairs to his room and shut the door with a bang.

Naina knew this was wrong and wanted to clear everything but no one was ready to listen. She told Sameera everything that happened and then they both decided to solve this mess. Rajveer was not at fault at all and he got all the blame. First of all they went to Navin.

Navin's room

Ritu: yeh kya kiya tumne Navin. Oro ki tarha tumne bhi Raj ko itna kuch kehdiya jab ke tumne hee ose jaane ko kaha tha

Navin: To me or kya karta Ritu. Maa baba to kuch sunne ko tayaar nahi the or phir osne kaam hee kuch aisa kiya to…

Naina: (barged in) aisa kuch nahi kiya osne

Navin: Naina, Raj ko defend karne ki koi zaroorat nahi

Naina: bhaiya kya aapne poocha Raj se ke kya huwa tha

Navin: poochne ke liye kuch tha hee nahi

Naina: Tha. I mean ose batane ka moka bhi nahi diya kisne or bus baras pare. Asal me baat yeh thi ke raat ko achanak baarish hone kee wajese hame ek ghar me rukhna para tha. Or bus osme puree raat ham stuck hogaye the or ham akele nahi the waha pe Alekh or Neelu bhi the hamare saath.

Navin put his hand over his head and sat down not believing what he just did. He felt bad for what happened especially for Rajveer. They all decided to go to the parents and explain it all to them before they thought more terrible about Rajveer.

Rajveer's room

As he had entered he was really angry and he threw couple of things around and crashed a few things too.

Rajveer: her kisee ko me hee ghalat lagraha hu. Hamesha kee tarha koi meree baat sunne ko tayaar hee nahi. Yeh kaha ka insaaf hai? Kaha ka.

He was upset and distraught. He sat down on his bed resting his hands under his chin and went in deep thought. He agreed that to some extent he had already broken the trust of her parents by taking that step further with Naina. But he also knew that his intentions were not wrong and his act was not a sin. He also knew that her parents would freak out after knowing but he had never intended to bring a stain on their dignity or family. He cared about it just as much as Naina did after all he also considered it his family too. So how could they think so low of him still? What hurt him the most was what her father said about how he was still being held for the mistakes he had made previously. He was not the same Rajveer anymore so why was it all reminded to him again.

Rajveer: Naina ke aane ke baad me wo awara ayaash Rajveer nahi raha to phir kyu koi yeh maane ko tayaar nahi? (threw a side lamp in rage) bus ab bohat hogaya. Thak gaya hu me sabko saabit karte karte. Ab me kisee ko koi safai nahi dunga. Jise jo karna hai kare.

Parent's room

Mira: Raj ne hamse kuch kaha kyu nahi. Kyu nahi kaha ke aisa kuch nahi huwa?

Navin: Maa aapne ose moka hee kaha diya. Bus Hitler ki tarha baras paree ospe

Mira: (pulled his ear) Asal me doshi to tu hai or os bechaare ko kitna sunna para

Navin: Are maa (struggling) maa ab to mujhe baccho ki tarha daantna band kardo

They just found Navin impossible and then thought about how to resolve the mess. Naina's father felt very bad for everything he said to Rajveer and decided they'll go and apologise to him. On the other hand Sameera explained to Gehlot and he felt bad too that he made the same mistake he had made earlier. He should have stood by Rajveer and should have known him better to know he wouldn't do anything of the sort. He also decided to go and talk with him.

They tried to get through Rajveer but he didn't respond and kept his door locked. They kept saying that they were sorry for what happened but he still didn't respond so they gave up and left it there. Naina's father still stood affirmative with the decision of going back to Mumbai and all the preparations had been made. But there were some technical faults with their bus and the duration of when it was going to be fixed was unset. Navin convinced the parents to go back in the hired car and the rest of them will follow as soon as the bus was fixed. They agreed and the parents were gone.

Naina made her way back up the stairs to talk to Rajveer again and make him open the door but midway she felt a bit light headed and her foot slipped….

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Too good!!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Raj was concerned about Naina and thats why he had ordered food for her!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Anyone would freak out seeing the condition of the bathroom!!!!!🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒

Raj is laughing at her and even though she wanted to leave immediately, it was impossible as the rain had still not stopped!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Naina was feeling scared but did not want to show it and so she said its okay if Raj watched the horror movie!!!!

But I think Raj jaan bujhke horror movie dekhne baitha tha!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina itni darri huyi hai aur Raj kitchen mein khaana laane gaya!!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Bechari Naina channel change bhi nahi kar sakti yeh sochke that Raj will think she was really afraid and kept lying!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Jo Naina ke saath ho raha tha usse koi bhi darr jaata and Raj's scream and those noises obviously scared her!!!!!!🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒

The phone call and the trail of blood made her tremble and she was sweating!!!!!!

Raj ko ush haalat mein dekh ke toh Naina ki jaan nikal gayi hogi!!!!!!🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒

Then she saw a masked man with a knife behind her and she began running!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj removed his mask and is now laughing!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

He is joined by Aalekh and Neelu, his partners in crime!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is really very naughty and he scared Naina to death!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

He totally deserved the tight slap Naina gave him as he really went too far this time!!!!! 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Aisa mazak koi karta hai kya??😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Raj is now hugging her and telling her he is sorry as Naina continued to cry!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

Naina is scared of losing Raj and would die if something happens to him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj also cannot live without her and promised ke woh aisa mazak phir kabhi nahi karega!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina loves Raj very much and could not stay mad at him for long and genuinely forgave him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

But Raj and Aalekh are again teasing Naina and their Tom and Jerry chase started!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina waking up next to Raj and them smiling at each other was very cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is worried as they had fallen asleep there instead of going back after the rain had stopped!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Naina is trying to wake Raj and Aalekh and Neelu are least bothered by another of Raj and Naina's arguments!!!!!πŸ₯± πŸ₯± πŸ₯± πŸ₯±

Lagta hai yeh Raj aur Naina ka jhagadna aam baat ho gayi hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Here Navin is getting and scolding and he is trying to explain but Mira and Naina's dad is not ready to listen and even Ritu is getting a scolding!!!!!!

Raj has to pass a comment even in this situation and his comment about head office and wakeel was funny!!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Naina's dad does not have any respect for Raj nor does he trust his daughter to do the right thing!!!!!!

Yeh kya tareeka huya apne damad se baat karne ka??πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Baat toh aise kar rahe hai jaise Raj ne Naina ko zabardasti uske saath le gaya ho!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Damad ki koi izzat hai yaa nahi??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Even Gehlot blames Raj and is upset with him!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Bechare Raj ko kya kya sunna padha!!!!! A big issue was made out of nothing!!!!!!

I had thought four of them being together will sort things out par yahan toh koi Raj ki baat sunne ko taiyaar hi nahi hai!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Aalekh aur Neelu bhi unke saath thhe, dono akele toh nahi thhe aur phir bhi sabko problem hai!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Naina ke dad ko Raj ki pichli zindagi ki baat karne ki kya zaroorat thi??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Raj is now more angry than upset and stomped off upstairs to his room!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Ritu ne sahi kiya jo Navin ko daanta ke oro ki tarah usne bhi Raj ko itna kuch keh diya!!!!! 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Naina told Navin everything and he felt bad for what happened, especially for Rajveer!!!!!

Naina and Sameera decided to solve this mess and they all went to explain everything to the parents!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is now throwing things around in anger and is upset and distraught!!!!!!!

He is thinking deeply about things and knew that the step he has taken with Naina was not a sin as his intentions were not wrong!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj's reaction to this was right as zyada safai dene se sabko lagta hai ke woh galat hai!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Ish wajah se hamara sudhra huya Raj kahi phir se na bigad jaaye!!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Mira is now saying ke Raj ne kuch kaha kyun nahi??πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Arre woh log kuch kehne ka mauka dete toh kehta na!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Mira is now pulling Navin's ear and saying ke asal doshi toh woh hai aur bechare Raj ko kitna sunna padha!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Now Naina's father is feeling bad and decided to go and apologise to Raj!!!!! πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Gehlot is also feeling bad for not trusting Raj!!!!!

Sab Raj ko manane ki koshish kar rahe hai magar ab woh itni asani se nahi manne waala!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina phir se Raj se baat karne gayi but she felt faint and slipped!!!!!! Yeh Naina ko kya huya hai??😲 😲 😲 😲

I hope Naina is alright and Raj would be there to help her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi !
Wonderful update πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Raj is very naughty ! Naina ko kaise daraya usne!
but I didnt like the way Naina's father talked with him...😑 Arey ! aao dekha na taao seedha jhadna shuru!!
Baat toh aise kar rahe the jaise Raj ne Naina ko zabardasti uske haath muh baandhke apne saath le gaya ho!! Damad ki koi izzat hai ya nahi? πŸ˜†
And i'm afraid, is wajehse sudhra hua Raj firse bigad na jaaye!πŸ˜•
Aur yeh ek aur nayee museebat!!!
Naina kyun faint hogayi? Is she pregnant???😲
Update soon....I'm getting damn curious....
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Hi Arwa
How r u???
Update was so scary in the beginning , hilarious in the middle n saddy saddy in the end.
So many emotions in 1 single update..πŸ‘πŸ‘
Raj is really very naughty..He really scared Naina to death..No sensible person can like horror movies, I so hate dem just like Naina..
Even Alekh n Neelu were his partner in crime..Raj really deserved dat slap
But then he is so cute dat no 1 can stay angry from him..πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
They both fight in a real cute way..
Why is every1 accusing Raj???Naina ke dad to apne son-in law ki thori bhi respect nahin karte??Bechare ko kya kya sunna pada!!!😲
Even Gehlot was not taking Raj's side..
Bechara Raj!!!! he was so depressed...
But then Naina n Sameera cleared all the confusion n every1 was feeling guilty..
Wat happened to Naina??? I hope she is fine.😊
Continue soon
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
Colourful update....full of different emotions. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Raj ne naina ko kitna pareshan kiya. Even Alekh and Neelu help Raj in his plan. Why do guys always like to scare girls when it comes to horror movies. Naina ka naraaz hona sahi tha😑...But she loves him very much and caanot stay mad at him for long.πŸ˜ƒ
I am shocked😲 by Naina's father's reaction. Who kuch zyaad hi bol gaye. He does not have any respect for Raj nor does he trust his daughter to so the right thing. Even Ghelot blames Raj and get upset with him. Raj feels very hurt and betrayed.πŸ˜’πŸ˜”
Its good that Naina and Sameera clear everyones doubts.
Sab log raj ko manane ki koshish karte hai...par who ab itni aasani se nahi mane wala.πŸ˜”
I hope that niana is alright. And that Raj would be there to help her.πŸ˜’
please continue soon
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The first bit was sooooo funny n naughty of Raj!!! To wat an extent h scared Naina....gosh!!! Naughty boy!!! And Aalekh n Neelu was also there to help him out...hehe. And I had thought four of them being together will sort things out....par yaha to koi Raj ki baat sunne ko tayyar hi nahi hai....kitna kuch suna diya usse....huh!!! Aur Naina k father ko Raj ki pichli zindagi ki baat karne ki kya zarurat thi?? Raj's reaction to this was right.....as zyada safai dene se sabko lagta hai hum ghalath hai....huh!!!

But at least sab ki misunderstanding dur to hui....not w8ing to knw wat happens as Raj has opened the door....and Naina has slipped. Pls continue soon.
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Originally posted by: manatated

Hi !

Wonderful update πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - thanks so much
Raj is very naughty ! Naina ko kaise daraya usne! - yes he is very naughty indeed
but I didnt like the way Naina's father talked with him...😑 Arey ! aao dekha na taao seedha jhadna shuru!!- ab kya kare kabhi kabhi aisee hee nainsaafi hoti hai

Baat toh aise kar rahe the jaise Raj ne Naina ko zabardasti uske haath muh baandhke apne saath le gaya ho!! Damad ki koi izzat hai ya nahi? πŸ˜† - hehehe perhaps he shud have then the accusations he got cud have become valid
And i'm afraid, is wajehse sudhra hua Raj firse bigad na jaaye!πŸ˜• - hmmm don't worry Naina hai na ose sambhaalne ke liye
Aur yeh ek aur nayee museebat!!!
Naina kyun faint hogayi? Is she pregnant???😲 - this is a very gud question. Lets see what happens next
Update soon....I'm getting damn curious.... - sure wud do



Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Arwa

How r u??? - hey Suhana I'm gr8

Update was so scary in the beginning , hilarious in the middle n saddy saddy in the end.
So many emotions in 1 single update..πŸ‘πŸ‘ - hehehe i'm glad u foudn all of them together. Yeh I tried to make it masala wala as possible

Raj is really very naughty..He really scared Naina to death..No sensible person can like horror movies, I so hate dem just like Naina.. - yeh for sure he is the nautghiest but then again all men are like that na

Even Alekh n Neelu were his partner in crime..Raj really deserved dat slap - yes he did as he really scared Naina
But then he is so cute dat no 1 can stay angry from him..πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† - ha yeh baat bhi sahi hai
They both fight in a real cute way.. - ab dono ek duje se itna pyaar karte hai to sab cute hee hoga na

Why is every1 accusing Raj???Naina ke dad to apne son-in law ki thori bhi respect nahin karte??Bechare ko kya kya sunna pada!!!😲 - He does but his principles just make him think that way or ghusse me insaan na jaane kya bole deta hai

Even Gehlot was not taking Raj's side..
Bechara Raj!!!! he was so depressed... - yeh poor guy became all alone

But then Naina n Sameera cleared all the confusion n every1 was feeling guilty.. - yeh after all kitna kuch kehdiya bina soche samjhe

Wat happened to Naina??? I hope she is fine.😊 - sure u'll find out soon
Continue soon
Bye


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Originally posted by: dazzling_glory


Colourful update....full of different emotions. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ - thanks very much for loving it

Raj ne naina ko kitna pareshan kiya. Even Alekh and Neelu help Raj in his plan. Why do guys always like to scare girls when it comes to horror movies. Naina ka naraaz hona sahi tha😑...But she loves him very much and caanot stay mad at him for long.πŸ˜ƒ - yes men just love it or Raj to kuch ziada hee pasand karta hai Naina ko satana. oske pyaar karne ka andaaz hee kuch aisa hai. Oh yes for sure naina surely loves him too much

I am shocked😲 by Naina's father's reaction. Who kuch zyaad hi bol gaye. He does not have any respect for Raj nor does he trust his daughter to so the right thing. Even Ghelot blames Raj and get upset with him. Raj feels very hurt and betrayed.πŸ˜’πŸ˜” - ab yeh to hona hee tha after all Raj bina bataye chala gaya to and her parents are rather too strict. It's true he shoudlnt have said so much or ab Raj bilkul akela mehsus karaha hai

Its good that Naina and Sameera clear everyones doubts.
Sab log raj ko manane ki koshish karte hai...par who ab itni aasani se nahi mane wala.πŸ˜” - yes it is going to be difficult for sure now kyu ke Raj bohat ziddi hai

I hope that niana is alright. And that Raj would be there to help her.πŸ˜’ - sure lets see what happens
please continue soon



Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

The first bit was sooooo funny n naughty of Raj!!! To wat an extent h scared Naina....gosh!!! Naughty boy!!! And Aalekh n Neelu was also there to help him out...hehe. - thanks alot for loving it. Yeh Raj is too naughty or unfortunately kuch karnahee sakte oske baare me. Sab ke sab miljaate hai to aisa hee hota hai

And I had thought four of them being together will sort things out....par yaha to koi Raj ki baat sunne ko tayyar hi nahi hai....kitna kuch suna diya usse....huh!!! Aur Naina k father ko Raj ki pichli zindagi ki baat karne ki kya zarurat thi?? Raj's reaction to this was right.....as zyada safai dene se sabko lagta hai hum ghalath hai....huh!!! - yes poor guy koi kabhi oskee baat sunta hee nahi hai or ose hee ghalat samjh bethe hai. For sure sometimes giving safai doesnt always help.

But at least sab ki misunderstanding dur to hui....not w8ing to knw wat happens as Raj has opened the door....and Naina has slipped. Pls continue soon. - Now Naina wasnt going to leave everything the way it was so she had to set things right. Hmmm yeh lets see what happens with her now.


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