An Eternal Love Story last part updated 28.09.08 - Page 24

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hello!!!Vertika!!!

Hello Riya darling.😊

What an update.......with so much happening.....

Yeah really bahut ho happening update tha.😛

That vamp was Sherry!!!!!😲😲

Yeah unbelievable tha na.😉

Thank God Naina was saved.........

😊

Haan Raj k pyaar ne MG Vidyarthi k gunaah ko dhodte hue sab kuch theek kar diya.😭

Poor Raj....he had to go through so much of pain...and grief...😭😭😭

Haan us ko jhelana hi pada itna kuch apni choti se zindagi me.😲

Brilliant.....😃👍🏼

Thanks dear.😊

specially the last part...Raj and Naina with their kids....

how sweet....

Raj sach me baccho k saath baccha ban jaata hai.😆

You are a very talented writer...and on the completion

of your fic you deserve ....👍🏼

Thanks a lot again dear.😳

The update was too good....mindblowing.....

Thanks a lot again darling.😃

Take care.

Love

Riya.

Originally posted by: litika

awwwwwwwwwww ending bahut hi cute thi sabki apni apni families .....i really liked ur fic it was really good........start another fic soon...plz...will be waiting😃

Originally posted by: prerna1

hey that was so cool and sweet

Thanks buddy.😛

Sherry Eagle thi my god i cannot even imagine how Raj was feeling at that time

that was so bad poor Raj .

Humesha us ko takdeer ne dhokha diya hai yaar😭 , pata nahi kyoun us k saath hi hota hai aisa.😕

Khair ab sab accha hai bus yahi satisfaction hai.😊

but all wells if end wells

Very true.👏

so wonderful story love raj naina romance and sceneces too

Raj aur Naina hai hi itne passoniate k un k baare me jitna likho kam hai.😉

plz continue with ur new fics and with already started ones too.

I will try my best to fulfill ur hopes dear.😛

Originally posted by: yyyy

wow what an emotional update..i was shocked to know it was sherry behind all this..poor raj..he loved her truely as a small sister but she turned out to be a devil.

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

excellent end.superb fic yaar👏.........

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!

Sherry hi Eagle hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Thats shocking!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Sherry Raj se itni nafrat karti hai!!!!

Raj toh usse kitna pyaar karta hai magar aaj uski wahi behen uski dushman ban gayi hai!!! Poor Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj is completely dumbstruck and does not know how to react!!!!

He said ke usse lag raha hai ke woh ish duniya ka sabse badnaseeb insaan hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Thats so sad!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Sherry pagal ho gayi hai badle ki aag mein!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Usne Naina ko pakad rakha hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔O no!!!!

Sherry toh Naina ko marna chahti hai kyunki woh Raj ka pyaar hai!!!!

Gunny aur baaki char yani Ali, Pooja, Yudi aur Huda ne sahi time pe entry maari!!!! Good for them!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda was surprised to hear that Raj is alive aur abhi bhi sochne baith gaya!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Yudi ne kaha ke Captain sir ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good for him!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja ne bilkul sahi kaha ke pehle Shahrukh aur Simran ko matlab Raj aur Naina ko bacha lete hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda and Chaubey found Vaibhav but they were found by Eagle!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔O no!!!!

Sherry button dabane hi waali thi ke Gunny came and fired on her hand!!!😊 😊 😊 😊What timing!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Gunny usse ussi din samaj gaya tha jab woh KMA mein aayi thi!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good for him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Sherry is so relaxed and cool!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Uske poore adde mein bombs planted hai!!!😲 😲 😲 😲O God!!!!

Abhay is very smart!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He made a plan to destroy te camera first and then they rescued Naina!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Abhimanyu ne bahut accha kiya he slapped Sherry!!!! 😊 😊 😊Bechara Raj he is still shattered!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Blast huya aur mayke dekhke Sherry had trapped Naina!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔O no!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj ne kaha Naina ko chhodne ko chahe badle mein uski jaan lele!!!😛 😛 😛 😛He loves her so much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Magar Sherry toh Naina ko marna chahti hai jisse Raj poori zindagi til til marega!!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

MG Vidyarthi ne Sherry ko mara magar Sherry ne bhi marte marte Naina pe goli chalayi!!!! Marte waqt bhi yeh nahi sudri!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Bechara Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Uska gum sabse bada hai aaj usne sab ko kho diya hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

MG Vidyarthi Naina ko bachate huya mar gaye!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Poor him!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔He wasn't really bad!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

They got Medal and got promotions!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj is playing with their two kids Nihaal and Raina!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How cute!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Woh baccho ke saath baccha ban jaata hai aur keh raha hai ke Naina bhi bacchi ban jaye!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Such a Sweet and Happy Family!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Abhi aur Nandini ke do bete hai Namit and Prakhar!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How sweet!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Neelu kehti hai ke Aalekh ne apne bacche Nishant aur Ashlesha ki adat bigaad ke rakhi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

He is so sweet and is teasing Neelu!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh ki small and happy family!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

I loved the last part with Raj and Naina and their kids!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was a really great story and had everything!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

I guess its time for the fairytale ending.......... And they lived Happily Ever After!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey Vertika i really didn't know that u so much good writer who can easily create suspense aur aisa suspense jis se humare hosh hi ud gaye hain.

Mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki mai itna accha bhi likh sakti hoon.

Sherry i can't believe ki vo ho sakti hai Eagle.

Jaisa ki hum sab ne socha tha kimain victim Lala hoga par yahan baat kuch aur hi nikle.

Yahi to baat hai jo alag thi main story se na , vaise Sherry ka aisa karna logical tha.

Specially i like the ending so much small and happy family and rthe name u chose for their kids was really outstanding.

I really appreciate ur writing skill which is teraffic yaar.

Pata nahi tum sab itna accha kaise likh lete ho mai to comment dene me bhi itna sochti hoon ki kya batoo.

Thank so much for praising me so much . I know that the names were good but it was really hard to select names for Raj n Naina's kids.

Hat's off to u and ur this superb fic .

Kitna accha pace tha ki itni jaldi khatam ho gayi i am really going to miss it soon.

me too yaar after all it's may creation na . Ab bus kar tareef karna.

Nopw start a new fic as well.

thank u so much darling.

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII VARTIKA HOPE U R WELL

I am not only well but excellent yaar.😛😛😛

THE WHOLE STORY WAS FANTASTIC,

SUPERB.👏

MINDBLOWING👏

TOOOO GOOOD👏

AWESOOOOOOOOOOOME👏

U R A WONDERFUL WRITER⭐️

Thank u n write like Preeti😉😉😉, well nice to know that u liked the story.😃😃😃

HOPE KI TUM AAGE BHI AASE HI FF'S LIKTI RAHO SWEETY.

I will try my best dear.😊😊😊

WITH LOTS OF LOVE

DEEPA.

Originally posted by: KRIZZY

fantastic

but sheery was the eagle

damn really really shocking

rn, abhi nandni and alekh neelu had 2 - 2 kids

how cute.

Originally posted by: pritib0

HII VARTIKA DEAR HOPE UR FINE SWEETY............. THIS UD AND THE WHOLE FF WAS................... AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME...................... FANTABULOUS............................................ EXCELLENT................................. MINDBLOWING......................... WONDERFUL...................... BEAUTIFUL.............................. FULL OF SUSPENSE................ AND THRILL........................ SO ROMANTIC.................. CHARISMATIC..................... MAGNETIC.................. SUPERB.................. ROCKING........................ SUPER-DUPER HIT................... OUT OF THIS WORLD................ AMAZING............. I AM SPEECHLESS............. AND AT LOSS OF WORDS................. TAKE CARE................ WITH LOTS OF LOVE, AND GOOD WISHES, PRITI.