An Eternal Love Story last part updated 28.09.08 - Page 25

Originally posted by: ashu20

hi

just read the ff..it was really great

plz post another such short and sweet ff.

love ashu

Originally posted by: srojaleen

Janti hoon..... k naraz ho mujh se. lekin woh to pm k baat hai.... yahan par main tum se naraz hoon .... how dare u k tum ne mujhe........ yani k vertika k friend ko ullu banaya..... 😆

ab mai kya karoon tum logon ne bahut common guess lagaya tha to mai kuch uncommon karna chahti thi.😉😉😉

maine to socha tha k main villain gehlot hoga, lekin tumne to kahani ko ek mindblowing twist de diya yaar.....main villiain sherry ko bana diya.

Haan kuch alag kiya na darling? 😆😆😆

& finally sab ki shadi ho gayi , sab k bacche bhi ho gaye......lekin yaar kya solid solid naam rakha hai tum ne un k bacchon ka.

yaar in solid naamo k liye mujhe solid effort bhi karne pade hain.😛😛😛

action scenes bahat acche the. & finally it was a happy ending....yeppiiii🥳

thanks Priya darling😃😃😃

i really love this fic soooo much, aur haan... yeh mat socho k mashka mar rahi hoon ......dil se kah rahi hoon

PRIYA

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!

thank u Shaina mam.😊😊😊

Sherry hi Eagle hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Thats shocking!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Sherry Raj se itni nafrat karti hai!!!!

Haan kyounki us ko lagta tha ki Raj ne us se us k dad ka pyaar cheen liya hai.😭😭😭

Raj toh usse kitna pyaar karta hai magar aaj uski wahi behen uski dushman ban gayi hai!!! Poor Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj ko bhi kya pata tha ki aise dhokha degi us ki behan.😭😭😭

Raj is completely dumbstruck and does not know how to react!!!!

He said ke usse lag raha hai ke woh ish duniya ka sabse badnaseeb insaan hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Thats so sad!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Koi bhi bhai jab ye dekhega ki us ki behan, us ko paalne waala pita sab ek jaise hain to aur kahega bhi kya?😔😔😔

Sherry pagal ho gayi hai badle ki aag mein!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Usne Naina ko pakad rakha hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔O no!!!!

kuch nahi hoga Naina ko aakhir vo Raj ki zindagi hai.😛😛😛

Sherry toh Naina ko marna chahti hai kyunki woh Raj ka pyaar hai!!!!

Us ko lagta hai aisa karne se vo Raj se us k jeene ki wajah cheen legi.😡😡😡

Gunny aur baaki char yani Ali, Pooja, Yudi aur Huda ne sahi time pe entry maari!!!! Good for them!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Un ko sab ko bachana jo tha na.😉😉😉

Huda was surprised to hear that Raj is alive aur abhi bhi sochne baith gaya!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

vo aur us ka sada hua dimaag.😡😡😡

Yudi ne kaha ke Captain sir ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good for him!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Are apne capatin sir k bahadur solidier hain na.

Pooja ne bilkul sahi kaha ke pehle Shahrukh aur Simran ko matlab Raj aur Naina ko bacha lete hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

sab important hain par Raj n Naina are the most important ppl.🥱🥱🥱

Huda and Chaubey found Vaibhav but they were found by Eagle!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔O no!!!!

Sherry button dabane hi waali thi ke Gunny came and fired on her hand!!!😊 😊 😊 😊What timing!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Humara Gunny hai itna perfect.😛😛😛

Gunny usse ussi din samaj gaya tha jab woh KMA mein aayi thi!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good for him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Us ka dimaag vakai me bahut jyada tej chalta hai naa.👏👏👏

Sherry is so relaxed and cool!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Uske poore adde mein bombs planted hai!!!😲 😲 😲 😲O God!!!!

sab pehle se set kar k rakha hai us ne 😡😡😡taaki kabhi bhi us ko fasne ka mauka aaye to vo sab ko dara sake.😕😕😕

Abhay is very smart!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊He made a plan to destroy te camera first and then they rescued Naina!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

yeah he is really sweety.😉😉😉

Abhimanyu ne bahut accha kiya he slapped Sherry!!!! 😊 😊 😊Bechara Raj he is still shattered!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Us ko kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha hai; Abhi ne pehli baar kuch accha kiya.😆😆😆

Blast huya aur mayke dekhke Sherry had trapped Naina!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔O no!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

vo bahut jyada nafrat karti hai na Naina se.

Raj ne kaha Naina ko chhodne ko chahe badle mein uski jaan lele!!!😛 😛 😛 😛He loves her so much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

is me bhi koi shak hai kya?😳😳😳

Magar Sherry toh Naina ko marna chahti hai jisse Raj poori zindagi til til marega!!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

us ki zid hai na ye.😭😭

MG Vidyarthi ne Sherry ko mara magar Sherry ne bhi marte marte Naina pe goli chalayi!!!! Marte waqt bhi yeh nahi sudri!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

vo badle k liye kuch bhi kar sakti thi na.😭😭😭

Bechara Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Uska gum sabse bada hai aaj usne sab ko kho diya hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

sahi me yaar vo fir de poori tarah akela ho gaya😲😲😲 na par Naina hai na us k saath humesha.😉😉😉

MG Vidyarthi Naina ko bachate huya mar gaye!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Poor him!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔He wasn't really bad!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Haan par shayad unhone apne bete k liye jo kiya tha vo kanoon ki najron me galat tha na.

They got Medal and got promotions!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

😊😊😊

Raj is playing with their two kids Nihaal and Raina!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How cute!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Woh baccho ke saath baccha ban jaata hai aur keh raha hai ke Naina bhi bacchi ban jaye!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Accha hai na isi bahane vo apne past k saare dard bhool jaata hai na.😕😕😕

Such a Sweet and Happy Family!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

really😉😉😉

Abhi aur Nandini ke do bete hai Namit and Prakhar!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How sweet!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

😃😃😃

Neelu kehti hai ke Aalekh ne apne bacche Nishant aur Ashlesha ki adat bigaad ke rakhi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

He is so sweet and is teasing Neelu!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh ki small and happy family!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

sab apni family me mast hain.😛😛😛

I loved the last part with Raj and Naina and their kids!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was a really great story and had everything!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

thanks mam.😉😉😉

I guess its time for the fairytale ending.......... And they lived Happily Ever After!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

like a good happy ending film😊😊😊

Ye fic bhi likhi thi kya?😲

Baap re tere dimaag ka kya kehna?

My god,😆 vaise maine abhi first part padha hai and it's really awesome yaar. 👏👏

Mujhe lagta hai Raj zinda hai aur Chaubey us se hi mila hai😊. So Abhi is leaving nice.😃

hey .....

i just realised that my last reply is missing.....

so i thought that i would write it again.....and this led me to read the FF once again.....and I have only one thing to say.....LOVED IT.....enjoyed reading it as much as i did the first time....you indeed are a very talented writer.....

The twist in the tale.....was mind blowing......Sherry is the Eagle.....i would have never guessed it .........never...

she did all of this to avenge her fathers death....what a planning indeed....here it would be right to say that planning conspiracies flows in the Ghelot family.....

I felt extremely hurt to see what raj had to go through....when he pleaded and begged in front of sherry to spare naina's life....he was completely heart-broken to see that sherry had so much of hatred against him.....

Glad that finally everyone arrived at the right time and saved naina and everyone else....

Vidyarthi paid a big price for his actions....he did deserve this....

My bets part was the to see naina and raj with their children...and the ending was just PERFECT....

I will say in once again....you are a Talented and brilliant writer so please never stop writing.....

I look forward to the other FF that you will write...

Take care

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Ye fic bhi likhi thi kya?😲

Haan yaar likhi thi aur khatam bhi ho gayi ye ab .😛😛😛

Baap re tere dimaag ka kya kehna?

thanx dear.😃😃😃

My god,😆 vaise maine abhi first part padha hai and it's really awesome yaar. 👏👏

thank u so much dear hope so jaldi hi poora padh k comment de tu.😉😉😉

Mujhe lagta hai Raj zinda hai aur Chaubey us se hi mila hai😊. So Abhi is leaving nice.😃

Raj ka to pata nahi par Abhi k jaane par nice mai samjhi nahi.😕😕😕

Originally posted by: starasdf

OMG man thiss wazz a gr8 fic

i cant belive it ur such a gr8 writer n luved ur endin

Star⭐️