An Eternal Love Story last part updated 28.09.08 - Page 21

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was fanatastic

Thanks dear for saying this fantastic.😊😊😊

but ye Eagle koun hain jise dekhkar Raj itna hairan ho gaya plz ise bhi Raj ka koi known mat bana dena

Dekho kya hota hai is last update me.

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: nihatri

nice update yaar. continue

Originally posted by: pritib0

HII VARTIKA DEAR HOPE UR ROCKING...................... THE UD WAS AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME...................... MINDBLOWING...................... SUPERB................................. ROCKING................................ FULL OF ACTIONS..................... AMAZING................................ JUST TOO GOOD.................... LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT........................ EXCELLENT....................... FANTABULOUS..................... WITH LOTS OF LOVE, AND GOOD WISHES, PRITI.

Originally posted by: srojaleen

HIIIIII VERTIKA, Mujhe pata hai, eagle jaroor woh idiot GEHLOT hi hoga........rite! yaar... woh Raj ka picha kyoun nahin chodta!

Hello Priya darling.😊😊😊

Dekho ab ye baat update se hi clear hogi ki kaun hai Eagle.😉😉😉

By the way, it was toooooooooo good & excellent ud.

cont. soon.

Thanks a lot darling.🤗🤗🤗

LOVE & WISHES

PRIYA

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hey Vertika!!!

Hmmmm...very interesting dear....

Loved the way....Naina, Vaibhav, Abhi, Nandini and Raj are trying to

catch the Eagle....

Veey intelligent....

Continue soon dear.

Take care.

love

Riya.

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

THE UD WAS JUST TOO GOOD.................... AWESOME............. FILLED WITH ACTIONS.....................LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT...............

Thanks a lot dear.😊😊😊

But I cannot believe that you will be ending it soo soon.....i wish that youcould continue for longer.....may be send all of them on another mission.......i love reading your FF....

Haan mujhe bhi thoda ajeeb lag raha hai ki meri ek ff jaldi hi khatam ho rahi hai par agar aur aage padhna hai to read my fic Chahat and Dsetiny these are based on RN and KMA.😛😛😛

I have a feeling that Eagle is going to use Naina and Vaibhav as bate to get the other to surrender........but i hope that in the end everything will turn out positively.

May be u r right let's see what's next.😉😉😉

Waitng for your next update......

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

hey please update soon....and let us know when you have update it.....waiting eargerly for the next part

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

awesome.cont soon..........

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Thanks Shai.🤗🤗🤗

Nandini Raj ko dilasa de rahi hai ke Naina ko kuch nahi hoga but is herself worried about Abhi!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

vo to hogi hi na mission itna difficult jo hai.😭😭😭

Naina ne Raj ko sab kuch bata diya and he became even more worried!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Hona hi hai, us ne bus ye bataya tha ki Eagle ko pata hai ki hum yahan hain.😕😕😕

Abhay ka MG Vidyarthi se baat huyi magar beech mein cut gayi and they decided what they have to do!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Good for them!!!!

Haan pata nahi kya hota agar pooch bhi lete to.😛😛😛

Yeh MG Vidyarthi ish situation mein bhi bol raha hai ke Eagle ko zinda pakadna hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Baat sahi hai ki Eagle ko pakdna to zinda hi hai na.

Yeh MG Vidyarthi apne bete ko bachane ke liye information leak kar raha tha!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Eagle uske bete ko chhodne se raha!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

vahi to kaha Eagle ne ki come on MG bhool jaao apne bete k baare me.😆😆😆

Naina ne saare cameras deactivate kar diya hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!👏 👏 👏Yudi ne sikhayi thi yeh method!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Good for him!!!!!

Yudi se acccha expert kaun ho sakta hai vaise bhi.😛😛😛

Raj,Abhi aur Nandini pakde gaye!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭O no!!!! Aalekh ne smoke bomb phek ke bacha liya unhe!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Very good!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Alekh bhi na ek dum dhansoo kaam karta hai na.👏👏👏

Haan Eagle yeh sab tumari soch se bhi zyada intelligent hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab Naina ko pakad liya!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔O no!!!! Aur Vaibhav ko uski maut aur Naina ki maut mein se chunna hoga!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Tuff problem na.😕😕😕

Raj ne server ka password deactivate kar diya and destroyed the whole network!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 Wow!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Par Eagle bhi aise haar maane waala nahi hai na.😡😡😡

Vaibhav Naina ko baccha leta hai aur dono bach ke waha se nikal jaate hai!!!!! Great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ki sangat ka asar hai ki sab k sab itne intelligent hain.😆😆😆

Eagle hai kaun jisse dekhkar Raj itna shock ho gaya!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Dekho ab is update me pata chal jaayega.😃😃😃

Naina unhe bachane jana chahti hai magar someone hit her and Vaibhav and then all was blank!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Haan yaar kya kare vo jab koi peeche se maar de to.😲😲😲

Totally action packed episode!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏I hope sab sahi salamat wapas aa jaye!!!!😊 😊 😊

Thanks for liking it dear.😊😊😊

Here comes the last part for Eternal

Raj pata nahi kya kya soche jaa raha tha. "Sherry tummmm?"

"Haan mai," she was Sherry Gehlot daughter of Lala Gehlot.

"Mai tum se nafrat karti thi Rajveer bachpan se hi. Tum ne mujh se mere papa ko cheen liya, jab mujhe mere papa ka pyaar milna chahiye tha tab tum aa gaye humare beech aur papa mujh se jyada tum se pyaar karne lag gaye. Har waqt mujhe tane sunne ko milte ki mai tumhare jaise kyoun nahi hoon? Nahi banana mujhe tumhare jaisa , fir tumhari is cadet Naina ne maar dala mere dad ko tabhi maine soch liya tha ki mai tum dono se badla le kar rahoongi har haal me.Kuch maheeno pehle mujhe pata chala ki tum zinda ho Rajveer, tabhi maine decide kar liya tha ki tum ko mai saza doongi har us dard ki jo tum ne mujhe diya hai."

Raj was still dumbstruck he doesn't know how to react. Us ne shayad aisa kabhi nahi socha tha ki jis behan ko vo itna manta tha aaj vo hi us ki dushman ho jaayegi.

"Kya hua Capatin aaj aap k paas koi bhashan nahi hai mujhe dene k liye kya?" Sherry ki aakhon me Raj k liye nafrat saaf dikhai de rahi thi.

"Pata nahi kyoun aaj mujhe lag raha hai ki mai duniya ka sab se badnasseb insaan hoon Sherry." Raj said almost dropping him down on floor.

"Sach kaha tum ne Captain aur ab mai tum ko dikhati hoon badnaseeb hona kya hota hai?" she switched on a tv set and showed him the figure which made Raj completely dumbstruck and his companions as well.

"Itni nafrat hai tum ko apne is bhai se?" Raj asked it half heartedly.

"Nafrat ki intehaa kya hoti hai ab ye tum sab dekhoge Captain aur khaas kar k tum Captain Shekhwat aur tumhari pyaari biwi Naina, usi kameene ne maara tha na mere dad ko. Mai jaanti thi ki apna khoon apna hi hota hai , jis din mere dad ki death hue thi us din hi maine kasam kha li thi ki mai zinda nahi choodongi tum sab ko." Sherry pagal ho gayi thi badle me.

"Nahi Sherry tum aisa nahi kar sakti ho Naina k saath,vo…….. vo mera pyaar hai Sherry……" he couldn't control his tears.

"Mere dad bhi mera pyaar the Captain Shekhawat……." She screamed.

Par tabhi kuch guards andar aate hai Eagle k ishare par aur sab ka haath kas k baandh dete hain peeche.

Raj was unable to speak anything. He was unable to understand something from his destiny.

"Kuch bhi kar lijiye Sherry, aap yahan se bach kar nahi jaa paayengi aaj." Abhi said.

"Mujhe pata hai Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan ki aap log kuch bhi nahi kar paayenge, zara yahan najar daaliye." She pointed them towards the tv sets.

They saw all the places that their all companions are trapped now. God knows aage kya hona hai. They saw Naina tide with a chair b/w two boards having current in them.

"Bus ek ye button aur aap ki beloved Naina ki zindagi khatam." Sherry said.

"Nahi Sherry aisa nahi karogi tum…………" Raj screamed.

"Ab apne har ek saathi ko maut k muh me jaate hue dekho Captain." Sherry said.

Here Abhay and Chaubey:-

Pata nahi kahan se un aadmiyon par goliyan chali aur sab k sab dher ho gaye.

"Ye kis ka kaam tha, achanak?" Abhay puzzled.

"Ye humara kaam tha Major." A man said coming out of bushes.

"Captain aap yahan?" Abhay asked.

He was none other than Captain Gunraj Singh Randhawa along with our Lft's; Pooja, Ali, Huda and Yudi.

"Par aap yahan kaise aaye?" Abhay asked.

"Captains ye is baat ka waqt nahi hai, Captain Shekhawat aur baaki k log kahan hain?" Gunny asked.

Huda got surprised to hear it, "Captain sir….vo zinda hain kya?" he asked.

"Haan vo zinda hai aur mujhe lagta hai ki vo khatre me hain, humara pehla kaam un logon ko bachana hai." Abhay said.

"Hum Capatin sir k liye kuch bhi kar sakte hain, kyoun dood?" Yudi asked Huda who was thinking something else.

"Kya hua Huda bhai aap kya soch rahe hain?"Ali asked.

"Oye jaat sochne se battery discharge ho jaayegi tere handset ki to pehle Shahrukh aur us ki Simran ko bacha lete hain fir karenge apna handset recharge." Pooja said.

"Pooja aap yahin rahengi chip kar is bacche k saath, aap andar nahi jaayegi." Abhay said.

They sneaked into the main building, this time a littlie bit more consciously. "Yahan bada sunsaan hai." Ali said.

Gunny ne un ko silent hone ka ishara kiya. They searched all the ground floor than all the floors one by one but they didn't find anyone there.

"Kahan hain ye log?" Gunny frustrated finally.

"Hum ko lagta hai ki hum ko ek baar basement bhi check kar lena chahiye kyoun?" Abhay suggested.

"Hmmmmmmmm, u r right Major. Par is baar hum do groups me jaayenge, ek me Huda , Mai aur Chaubey aur doosre me Yudi, aap aur Ali honge." He decided and all proceeded towards their destination to find.

Huda and Chaubey soon found out Vaibhav n they untie him but their bad luck was that Eagle found out them.

"Oh to aap k group k log bhi aa pahuche hain yahan.Ab dekho mai kaise nipati hoon in ko." Saying this she press a button on her remote and firing was started towards Huda and Chaubey; so they stopped for a minute behind the walls.

Here Gunny has traced Eagle's room.

"Ab dekho captain mai kaise tumhare pyaar ko maut deti hoon." She was about to press a button when someone fired a bullet hitting her hand.

"Tumhara khel khatam ho chukka hai Ms. Eagle." Gunny said.

All turned towards Gunny who was standing at the door pointing his gun towards Sherry. "Maine to tum ko us din hi samjh liya tha jab tum KMA aayi thi Lala ki maut k kuch maheeno baad." He said gazing her. He moved towards her n caught her hand twisted it and pointed the gun on her head. "Apne aadmiyon se keh do ki Naina ko aur Vaibhav ko chod de varna anjaam bahut bura hoga."

"Bahut bolte ho tum Gunny, sach kahoon to mujhe accha lagta hai tumhara ye style," she was not frightened instead she was relax and cool, " Tumhe kya lagta hai ki mujhe maar k tum yahan se zinda jaa sakoge?Yahan humare poore adde me bombs planted hain Mr. Gunny jo mere aadmi kabhi bhi explode kar sakte hain."she gave a wicked smile, "Aur jahan tak baat rahi Naina ki to us ko to khud ab bhagwaab bhi nahi bacha sakta hai, mere baap ko maara hain na us ne mujhe anaath kiya hai na; ab dekho is ki saja kaise milte hai us ko."

"Tum kuch nahi kar paaoogi Sherry, kyounki is baar mai Naina ko kuch nahi hone doonga." Gunny said with determination in his voice.

Here Abhay and Ali were still searching for Naina. They found her locked in a room. Abhay understood Eagle's plan suddenly and he made a plan that first they will destroy the camera placed and than they will enter in that room .More attentively they done the job and saved Naina but she was still unconscious.

"Pata nahi kahan hai baaki k log?" Huda thought and they started searching rest of the gang again.

"Mujhe lagta hai ki pehle hum ko Naina aur baaki k logon ko dhoondh kar yahan se bahar kar dena chahiye varna pata nahi jaise Vaibhav sir behosh hain vaise hi agar Naina bhi hue to vo lad nahi paayegi aur humare liye problem create ho jaayegi." Chaubey suggested n they both saw Abhay carrying Naina into his arms coming to them.

"Haan Chaubey bhai sahi bol rahe hain." Ali said n they all came out from building and place Naina and Vaibhav in the jeep they brought and in which Pooja was already seated. They told Yudi too to be there and again went in.

"Hey vahe guru sab k sab ko sahi salamat le aana wapas." Pooja prayed.

"Tum logon ko kya lagta hai ki tum logon ne Naina ko chuda liya hai to bahut bada kaam kar liya hai." Sherry said.

"Hum ab kya kya karenge ye tum bhi dekhogi Sherry Gehlot ", and Abhimanyu slapped her across her face with anger.

Raj was still shattered that he was not realizing the situation. They brought Sherry out side the main building . As soon as they stepped outside one by one ten blasts took place and the whole building was smashed.

A thick layer of smock has filled the atmosphere of gases and ashes. When it got cleared the scenario has been changed completely.

Sherry has trapped Naina hitting Pooja on her head and her guards have surrounded rest of the gang. "Maine kaha tha na ki yahan se nikal k jaana itna bhi asaan nahi hoga Captain."

"Sherry Naina ko chod do." Abhi roared.

"Kya baat hai Captain Chauhan abhi bhi aap ki so called Royal akad gayi nahi." She taunted whereas Naina was still unconscious.

"Pls Sherry Naina ko chod do chahe badle me meri jaan le lo." Raj pleaded.

"Kya ye tumhare is biwi ne mere baap ki jaan lene se pehle socha tha?" she asked with anger.

" Sherry is se tum ko kuch bhi haasil nahi hoga, tum yahan se zinda nahi jaa paoogi ."Gunny said.

"Par is baat ki khsuhi hogi ki kam se kam Capatin Rajveer ka udhaar chuka doongi jis se ye poori zindagi til til k marega." She said.

A bullet shot but from where and to whom it can not be guessed. Suddenly a loud scream was heard, "ahh".

It was Sherry who got hit by MG Vidyarthi who reached there and understood the whole scene so well.

"Sherryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy", Raj screamed n ran towards her; but she was so quick and she fired a bullet targeting Naina par beech me MG Vidyarthi aa gaye aur goli un k seene me lag gayi. Here Sherry died soon because the gun hit her heart directly.

"Sir,"

"Papa", the young guy ran towards his father and all of them.

"Mujhe maaf kar dena Sherry mai nahi chahta tha ki aisa ho. Aaj maine sab apno ko kho diya koi nahi bacha mere paas mera apna." Raj was crying badly on her dead body. Aaj Raj ka gum sab se bada tha ki us ne sab ko kho diya sab ko…….

"Mujhe p…a..t.a hai , ki a…a..p sab ko mere bare me pa.ta haiiiii, par m…a……..i…….n..e ja………an moojh k nahi kiya aisa. Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar di.ji….yega aap sab aur meeeeeeeeerrrrrreee bete k….ko bhi apni hi t….a…rah ka brave aur patriotic soldier baniyega." He died saying it.

"Papa", the child cried profusely. Abhi and Gunny soothed him.

Naina came back to his sense when he heard a loud scream of Papa by that child. "Raj", she screamed and saw him crying like hell on the dead body of Sherry.

Few hours later:-

"Sir aap ko wapas dekh kar hum sab bahut khush hain." Ali said.

"Yes sir." Huda added, "Aur Phholan k liye bhi."

They were awarded from the "Vishist Seva Medal" and they got promotions as majors and captains now on 15^th August.

Seven years later:-

"Raj kahan ho tum?" Naina asked.

She searched him n found him playing with their two naughty and sweet kids Raina and Nihaal.

"Kya Raj tum bhi na baccho k saath bacche ban jaante ho." Naina complnied smiling.

"Haan aur aao tum bhi ban jaao baccha na." he said n pulled her hand.

Here Abhi and Nandini:-

"Nandini kahan reh gaye thi aap?" Abhi asked her.

"Bus aap k ladlon ko lene gayi thi school se." Nandini told him.

"Oh to humare sher aa gaye." He kissed his both children. Do pyaare pyaare se bete hain Abhi aur Nandini k, Namit aur Prakhar.

"Papa aa gaye." Two small kids jumped with joy when they saw their papa.

"Haan aa gaye papa aur ye tum logon ki chocolate." He gave it to them.

"Ye Alekh tub hi na in dono ki aadat kharab kar raha hai na." Neelu said.

"Haan aur teri aadat bhi apun ne hi kharab ki hai na." He winked Neelu.

Nishant a boy and Ashlesha a gal kid; this is the small and happy family of Alekh.

This was the final and the last part of my fic. Hope ki aap sab ko pasand aaye and as being last part I hope aap sab is baar reply me kanjoosi nahi karege so reply long comments.