An Eternal Love Story last part updated 28.09.08

As promised it's my short fic on our Raj n Naina n I will love to write on them.

It will be updated regularly n I don't know about the last date of closing the fics but it will be finished in ten updates.

I hope u all ppl will give your replies n opinion about my first short fic.

Part first:-

Pyaar vo hota hai jo kabhi khatam nahi hota.Pyaar agar saccha ho to us ko koi kabhi bhi nahi bhula pata . Aisa hi pyaar tha Naina aur Rajveer ka jo Naina Rajveer k door jaane k baad bhi bula nahi saki thi.

Pata nahi ki Naina ka pyaar pura hoga ki nahi. Ye to shyad khud bhi vo nahi jaanti thi. Par dil me kahin ek tamaana yak eh sakte hain asha jaroor thi ki kaash Rajveer sir zinda ho aur ek baar mujh se aakar keh dein ki Naina mai tum se bahut pyaar karta hoon itna jyada pyaar ki shyad maut bhi mujhe tum se alag nahi kar paayi aur dekho mai aaj tumahre saamne hoon.

Naina was in her deep thoughts. Six months have been passed when Rajveer has left her alone. Is beech me Naina me bahut changes aa gaye the na vo jyada baat karti thi kisi se na hi hasti thi. Alekh hi ek aisa insaan tha jis se Naina abhi bhi baat kar leti thi sab logon se thoda jyada. Kal Naina ko finally Indian Army me shaamil kiya jaa raha hai aur is samay us k saath vo do sab se important log nahi hain jo us ki zindagi k liye sab se jyada jaroori hai ek us ka bhai aur doosra us ka pyaar.

Mom aur dad ko Naina ne kal ki pass out parade k liye bulaya hai aur kal ye bhi decide ho jaayega ki kis ko milege Sword of Honour that?s y she was missing both of them badly.

Naina didn't say a single word n smiled at her lingo.

"Mai tere se kuch pooch rahi hoon na?" Pooja again asked Naina.

"Kuch nahi Pooja." Naina replied.

"Oye mere se kya not reachable hai. Tu hi hai jo humesha not reachable ya not answering me hoti hai. Mujhe lagta hai aaj tere handset ki memory me se kuch bahar aa gaya hai na?"Pooja asked in concerned voice.

Naina took a deep sigh n replied, " Haan Pooja aaj mujhe Naveen bhaiya aur Rajveer sir ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai." Naina ki annkhein bhari hue thi.

Pooja said, " Naina tere se kitni baar kaha hai ki acche kamo me apna inbox khali rakha kar jis se tujhe kuch naye sms bhi mile kyoun humesha purane sms padhti rehti hai?"Pooja tried to comfort her.

"Nahi Pooja mai un dono ko ek pal k liye bhi nahi bhula paati hoon. Vo meri zindagi ka hissa the aur rahenge." Naina replied.

"Mai is liye keh rahi hoon aisa Naina ki agar har time tera inbox full rahega to naye sms kaise aayenge is me? Vaise bhi ab dono yahan nahi hai to kabhi tu .............. "after a small pause Pooja said, " Huda ki waiting call ka bhi reply dene ki soch.?"

Naina gave a sharp gaze to her.

"Pata hai ki tera aur Huda ka handset match nahi karta par vo itna bura bhi nahi hai yaar." Pooja said with lowering her eyes.

Naina thought some thing n said, " Accha ye bata tu mujhe kyoun dhoondh rahi thi ?" Naina ne baat badlane ki koshish ki.

"Are haan vo to mai bhool hi gayi. Chal tujhe ek naya hanset dikhati hoon, ya tu keh sakti hai kisi se milwati hoon." Pooja said n almost dragged her hand.

"Are tu le kahan jaa rahi hai mujhe ye to bata?" Naina asked Pooja.

"Nahi vahan chal k pata lagega." Pooja said n they both came out of the Academy.

"Kaun hai yahan par?" Naina asked when both reached there n Naina was searching for that person.

"Vo dekh" Pooja pointed towards the basket ball court where a tall n handsome guy was playing with a few cadets.

"Kaun hai ye?" Naina asked Pooja.

"Ye hain Major Vaibhav Agnihotri humare naye Vice Principal." Pooja informed Naina happily.

"Par Abhimanyu Sir kahan gaye?" Naina asked.

"Are haan un ka transfer Delhi ho gaya hai aur aaj vo jaa rahein hain yahan se." Pooja informed Naina.

"Par achanak kyoun aise?" Naina was depressed ki aise kyoun jaa raha hai Abhi.

"Mere ko ye to pata nahi hai Naina par hum ne socha hai ki is se pehle ki Captain Abhimanyu ka network out of coverage ho jaaye hum un k handset me acche acche sms bhej dete hain." Pooja told.

"Hume lagta hai yahan humare bare me baatein ho rahi hain." Abhi asked walking towards them.

"Haan good morning sir aap k bare me hi Naina ko bata rahi thi mai." Pooja said with a smile.

"Sir aap achanak kyoun jaa rahein hain?" Naina asked Abhi.

"Naina aap jaanti hain na ye Army hai is me kab kya orders aa jaayein. Oredes to follow bhi karne padte hain na." Abhi gave a small smile to her.

"Par sir kal humari pass out parade hai aur finally kal hum Lieutenants ban jaayenge to kya aap kal tak nahi ruk sakte?" after a short break Naina said again, "Rajveer sir aur Naveen Bhaiya k jaane k baad hum yahi chahte hain ki kam se kam aap to kal rahein yahan." Naina k naino me ansoon aa gaye the.

"Hum kal nahi jaayenge Naina. Hum parson subah niklenge .Hum ne pehle hi baat kar li thi headquarters se is bare me." Abhi told her.

"Ye to bada changa sms bhej diya aap ne sir.Mai abhi ye sms forward kar k aati hoon." Pooja said excusing them n left.

"Naina hum ko aap se kuch kehna hai." Abhi said.

"Haan boliye." Naina replied.

"Hum ko jaane se pehle ek bahut important information aap ko deni hai .Vo information ye hai ki aap ko Bunty Chaubey yaad hai na?" he asked.

"Haan yaad hai kyoun sir?" Naina asked with surprise.

"Haan to baat ye hai ki pichle kuch dino se hum ko us ki harkate kuch ajeeblag rahi thin jaise achanak us ka gayab ho jaana, pata nahi phone par vo kis se baat karta rehta tha aur KMA ki information deta rehta tha. Kabhi kabhi vo alag alag jagah ajeeb ajeeb kaam karte hue paaya jaata tha. To hum ko laga kuch gadbad jaroor hai kahin na kahin?"Abhi couldn't complete it.

"To aap ko kuch pata chala k vo is tarah ki harkate koun kar raha hai?" Naina ne beech me tokte hue poocha Abhi se.

"Humari poori baat to suniye Naina. Hum ne us k peeche kuch aadmi lagaye the apne. Hum ko bus itna hi chal paya pata ki kisi k kehne par vo ye saara kaam kar raha hai. Par vo kaun hai itna asaan nahi hai is ka pata lagana. Par pata lagane k pehle hi hum yahan se jaa rahein hain." Abhi said.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Thanks Shai. 😊

Naina's sorrow was very portrayed!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Kitna miss karti hai woh Raj ko!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

😭

Kregi hi after all she loves him sooooooooooo much.😉😉

Pooja ko aur koi kam nahi hai kya??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Matchmaking karti rehti hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Apni love lif kyun nahi sambhalti jaake!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Are yaar apni freind ki thodi chinta to karegi hi na.Soch rahi hai ki Raj gaya kab tak Naina us k liye ansoon bahayegi. Aage badh k zindagi phir se jeena shuru kare na Naina.😲

The song was apt for Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

thanks😃😃

Abhimanyu ka transfer ho gaya!!!!!😕 😕 😕Aur koi naya Vice Principal Vaibhav Agnihotri aagaya hai!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Ab yeh kya cheez hai??😛 😛 😛

dekho aage pata chalega.😉

But why is Bunty Choube behaving so strangely??😕 😕 😕 😕Aur woh kiske kehne par yeh sab kar raha hai??😕 😕 😕

ye bhi abhi nahi keh sakti mai.😕😕

Is it Raj??😊 😊 😊 😊Wahi hoga!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Let's see kya hota hai aage.😊

Woh kab aayega wapas??😊 😊 😊 😊 😊I hope woh Naina ke kal ke ceremony mein aa jaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

dekhte hain.😃😃

@ Versha

thanks dear

@ dazzling_glory

thanks dear

@ prerna 1

thanks a lot darling .

dekhte hain kaun kya hai.

@ fanatic 21

thanks dear

here is the next part guys:-

"To mai ye chahta hoon ki mere jaane k baad aap cadet Singh Choube par najar rakhe aur pata lagaye baat kya hai?" Abhi said finally.

"Par sir bahut jadli hi humari posting orders aa jaayenge fir kya hoga?" Naina asked.

"Don't worry Cadet Singh aap k orders abhi aane me thoda waqt hai aur hum chahte hain ki aap tab tak is mystery ko solve kar le." Abhi added.

"Theek hai sir. Par mujhe aap se kuch details chahiye hongi." Naina told.

"Aap chaliye humare saath hum aap ko Chaubey se related saari details de dete hain." Abhi said n both of them left towards his room.

Some one was listening their convo. Soon that person dialed a number on his cell phone

"Hello , haan bolo Chaubey kya khabar hai?" The person asked.

"Sir ji khabar ye hai ki Captain Abhimanyu ka transfer ho gaya hai Delhi. Vo parson subah niklenge yahan se."

"Kya??????? Par achanak aise kaise?" The man asked.

"Ye to nahi pata sir ji haan par ye baat jaroor hai ki unhone Cadet Singh ko ye batya hai ki unhe mujh par shak hai aur kai dino se unhone mere upper najar rakhi hai." Chaubey said.

"Maine tum se kaha tha ki ye kaam samhaal kar hona chahiye par tum na."

"Mai kya karoo sir ji pata nahi kaise Captain Abhimanyu ji ko shak ho gaya." Chaubey was confused.

"Tum jaante nahi ho Chauhan Sahab ko; vo baaj ki najar rakhte hain. Khair chalo koi baat nahi. Aur kuch bhi hai?"

"Haan sir ji ab jaane k pehle unhone mere peeche Naina ko laga diya hai." Chaubey said.

"Oh no ab to gaye. Cadet Singh to vaise bhi ????." He couldn?t complete his statement. Udhar se Chaubey ka phone disconnect ho gaya tha ." Koi aa gaya hoga." He thought n disconnected it as well.

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Tanhaa hai hai tujh bin raatein meri,

Din mere din k jaise nahi,

Tanha hai man, tanha hai ruh;

Nam meri aankhein rahein,

Aaja mere ab rubroo,

Jeena nahi bin tere,

Tere Bin mai yu kaise jiya

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Koi hai jo abhi bhi sochta hai Naina k liye chahe Naina jaanti nahi hai is baat ko.

Next Day morning:-

All cadets are ready for going in parade ground . Naina was missing among all.

"Oye Punjaban tune Phoolan ko dekha kahin?" Huda asked pooja.

"Oye nahi jaat pata nahi Naina ka network subah se kyoun out of coverage hai."

"Kahan chalo gayi Phoolan?" Huda was tensed for her so he started searching for her in whole academy.

Here Naina was standing infront of Wall of Fame. She was gazing her brothers photo. Vo tasveer jis ko yahan wapas lagane k liye Naina ne kitni badi ladaiyaan ladi aur jeeti bhi. Yahi wajah hai ki Lala ko apne karmo ki saja bhi mil gayi. Phir bhi jaate jaate vo Naina ki aakhri kushi Rajveer ko le gaya apne saath.

Some one placed a hand on her shoulder. He was none other than Alekh. Vo jaanta tha ki aaj k din Naina yahan hi aayegi sab se pehle. To jab Naina nahi mil rahi thi to us ne Naina ko sab se pehle yahin dhoondha.

"Kya soch raheli hai?" Alekh asked.

"Yahi Alekh ki apne bhaiya ko saheed prove karne k chaakar me maine apne Rajveer sir ko kho diya." Naina replied.

"Aisa nahi hai Naina vo dono humesha tere saath hain yahan." Alekh said.

"Jaanti hoon Alekh. Par phir bhi.......... Accha tu jaanta hai jab mai class me first aati thi to bhaiya mujhe bahut chidate the ki mai cheating kar k first aayi hoon. Par mere first aane par un se jyada koi bhi khush nahi hota tha. Isilye vo apne saare frnds ko mere first aane par treat bhi dete the par mujhe bina bataiye." Naina ne Alekh ko batana shuru kiya aur jaldi hi us ki aankhon me un yaadon k aane se chamak dikhaii de.

"Haan Naina tera bhai bahut accha tha isiliye bhagwaan ne bola ki yahan aa jaao upper acche logon ki jyada jaroorat hai." Alekh said.

"Mere aas paas k hi log milte hain bhagwaan ko aise bulane k liye. Pehle bhaiya fir sir." Naina complained.

"Oye Phoolan tu yahna hai mere tere ko kahan kahan dhoondh raha hoon yaar." Huda asked coming.

"Kya hua kaiko chilla k kaan padhela hai?" Alekh asked turning towards Huda.

"Oye kaidi tu to chup hi kar mai is ko dhoondh raha tha to tu bata nahi sakta tha mujhe ki ye yahan pe hai", he said in complaining tone.

"Accha Huda hua kya?"Naina asked finally.

"Phoolan uncle ji aunty ji aa gaye hain aur tujhe doondh rahe hain aur doosri baat ki vo jhabreela bhi tujhe dhoondh raha hai." Huda told Naina.

Soon they all left for ground n after final parade it was time for presenting Sword of Honour n best cadet pass out.

"So ladies n gentleman nujhe aaj bahut khushi ho rahi hai KMA k is batch ko alvida kehte hue kyounki is batch ne vo kaam kar dikhaye hain jo is desh k liye aur ek acche sipahi ban k liye garv ki baat hai. Mujhe naaz hai apne is batch par. Is batch ne na sirf apna hunar dikhaya hai har field me balki KMA k purane batch ki shaan ko bhi wapas lautaya hai Captain Naveen Singh Ahluwalia aur Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhwat ki begunahi sabit kar k."

There was a huge round of applause filled the atmosphere when BC said so.Naina could feel proud on her n her all friends.

"To ab baari hai is batch k best cadet pass out ki.Mai manti Mr. Thakraal se gujaarish karta hoon ki vo ye Award present karein." He called Minister Gujraal. He came upstairs.

"To is saal k best cadet pass out hain.............Cadet Alekh Sharma". Again huge clapping sounds were heared.

"Yupieeeeeeeeeee" , Yudi jumped with joy n hugged Alekh.

All of them hugged Alekh one by one.

Alekh went upstairs n received the prize from minister.

After this prize it was turn for The Sword of Honour.

"KMA ko naaj hai is saal k The Sword of Honour ki."BC said.

"Mera bheja kaiko kha raheli hai. Mujhe kya pata." Alekh said.

"Mujhe lagta hai ye Award to Phoolan ko hi milega." Huda said.

"Haan hum ko bhi lagta hai aisa." Ali said.

"Agar tum log chup raho bro to pata chale ki kaun hai vo." Yudi said.

But Naina was silent between all this converstaion.

"This Award goes to two persons ................ Cadet Naina Singh n Cadet Ali Beg." BC announced it gladly.

?Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee? , Huda danced this time with joy n hugged Naina instantly.

Naina too hugged her back n soon all of them hugged Ali n Naina one by one.They both went towards stage n they were handed over The Sword of Honour.

BC requested them to say some thing. First it was Ali who spoke he thanked all including KMA members n his mentor n Rajveer as well.

Now it was Naina's turn . She stood at phordium n started speaking,

"Mai jab yahan aayi thi to mujh me kaafi kamiyaan thi jo door karne me humare KMA ne humari kaafi madad ki. Mai shukra gujaar hoon KMA faculty ki aur mere sabhi doston ki jihonne kadam kadam par meri madad ki hai. Mai specially thanks kehna chanogi apne mentor Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhwat ko jin ki wajah se aaj mai hoon yahan par. Kyouki uhone kaha tha ki 'I BELIEVE CADET NAINA SINGH' aur mere bhaiya Captin Naveen Singh Ahluwalia ko jinki wajah se mai yahan aayi aur apne ko prove kar paayi. Thanks to u all." Naina came down .

A large clapping sound was heared soon.

Koi tha jo door baithe ye sb dekh raha tha jis ko aankhon me khusi k ansoon the ye yaad kar k ki 'ALWAYS BELIEVE YOUR SELF BECAUSE I BELIEVE CADET NAINA 'AH' SINGH'. Akhon me ansoon bhar gaye the us shaksh ki.

Soon the person's cell phone rang.

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