An Eternal Love Story last part updated 28.09.08 - Page 23

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

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wat n updt......brilliant...........d way it began wid d thrill n den emotional n den at d end cute romantic1.....
thank u so much Lipi dear, thanks a lot for ur love through my fic.😊😊😊

superb!!!!

ur fic was amazing.........d way it started naina searchin for raj n den rn love n romance also abhi n nandini

thank u again sweety,haan is ko likhne ka mera experience bhi bahut hi accha tha 😃😃😃n i will miss it too much.

wid huda ,ali ,pooja n yudi.....not frgt aalekh.......den came d thrill n action part..........

gr8 dialoges as well...........it had all d elements of good fic..........

mujhe ye jaan kar jyada khushi hai ki aap sab ko pasand aaya hai ye bahut.😉😉😉

it was a rocking fic

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Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

Hello darling😊

I read the whole update..It was shocking for me too specially main vamp was Sherry..😡Why did she hated Raj so much?????It was emotional when Raj begged for Naina's life..

Vo hota hai ek to Raj Lala ka adopted child tha fir Lala Sherry se humesha Raj ko compair karta tha jo logically galat tha😡 us ka hi frustration nikala hai Sherry ne Raj aur specially Naina par but thank god Naina ko kuch nahi hua aur vo bach gayi.😉

Loved the way in which every1 handled the difficult situation..So fianlly Sherry died but Raj was in utter pain of losing his loved1 ...

But in the end all was fine...😛

Fir us ne kisi apne ko kho diya jis ka dard Raj ko poori ki poori zindagi tadpata rahega na.😭

Last scenes were really cool

"Raj kahan ho tum?" Naina asked.

She searched him n found him playing with their two naughty and sweet kids Raina and Nihaal.

"Kya Raj tum bhi na baccho k saath bacche ban jaante ho."Naina complanied smiling.

"Haan aur aao tum bhi ban jaao baccha na." he said n pulled her hand.

Here Abhi and Nandini:-

"Nandini kahan reh gaye thi aap?" Abhi asked her.

"Bus aap k ladlon ko lene gayi thi school se." Nandini told him.

"Oh to humare sher aa gaye." He kissed his both children. Do pyaare pyaare se bete hain Abhi aur Nandini k, Namit aur Prakhar.

"Papa aa gaye." Two small kids jumped with joy when they saw their papa.

"Haan aa gaye papa aur ye tum logon ki chocolate." He gave it to them.

"Ye Alekh tub hi na in dono ki aadat kharab kar raha hai na." Neelu said.

"Haan aur teri aadat bhi apun ne hi kharab ki hai na." He winked Neelu.

Nishant a boy and Ashlesha a gal kid; this is the small and happy family of Alekh.

HAPPY ENDING

Thanks a lot dear for liking it.😃

But wat abt Huda,yudi Pooja n Ali..Hope they r fine too.

Do start some new fiction as u r n exceptional writer👏

Thanks a lot for encourage and really they all are fine and well settled now.😛

Originally posted by: rituka7

the update is as usual awesome
i love this fic .
it is damn cool

Janti hoon..... k naraz ho mujh se. lekin woh to pm k baat hai.... yahan par main tum se naraz hoon .... how dare u k tum ne mujhe........ yani k vertika k friend ko ullu banaya..... 😆

action scenes bahat acche the. & finally it was a happy ending....yeppiiii🥳

i really love this fic soooo much, aur haan... yeh mat socho k mashka mar rahi hoon ......dil se kah rahi hoon

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hiii Vertika ,

Hello darling,😊

i read it n liked it dear....am really very shocked😲😲😲 it's SHERRY !😲 i never thought that all these things r done by sherry.why the hell she do that😡 that tooo with Raj who luv her like his sis.

Kuch baatein aise hoti hain jo humari samajh k bahar hoti hain😕.Sherry ki nafrat jayaj hai Raj se reason ye hai ki us ko lagta hai ki jo pyaar us ko milna chahiye tha vo us ko na mil kar Raj ko mila ,to hue na us k saath nainsaafi.😲

apne Papa ki maut ka badla lena chahti thi but Lala ne jo kiya tha kya sahi tha...😕😕😕am really feel Sorry for Raj.😒

Nahi par apne papa ki maut ka badla lene ki aad me vo apna badla le rahi aur kya?😡

well am happy that Ali, Pooja, Huda , Yudi also join them n Saved Naina.aur major Vidyarthi paid too much for what he done😭😭😭 he sacrifice his life.

Haan jab un ko realise hua ki vo galat the to unhone apni galti ki keemat apni jaan de kar chukai ye bahut jyada tha.

yaar waise Raj n Naina finally have an a complete family. the name of their kids r very nice like them...😳am also happy for Abhi n Nandini & also for Alekh n Nilu.u made a perfect ending.
am gonna miss it sooooo much.

Thanks a lot ab mujhe lag raha hai ki meri mehnat yahan safal hue hai.😛

n for ur wonderfull job u deserve this ...👏
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Thanks darling i am overwhelmed now.😃