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Posted: 16 years ago

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"Hey Naina," Neelu saw her and came to her.

"Hi Neelu kaise hai? Meri bhateeji ka dhyan rakh rahi hai na?" Naina asked hugging her.

"Haan baba khayal rakha jaa raha hai aap ki bhateeji ka. Kaise hai tu? Kitni dubali ho gayi hai Naina lagta hai apna khayal nahi rakhti hai tu." Neelu said complaining.

"Nahi bus abhi kuch dino pehle khali hue hoon na recover karne me time lagega." Naina said with a small smile on her face.

"Accha andar chal sab se milna hai na." Neelu said.

Karan called her, "Naina kya yaar hum se bhi milao na apne frnds ko."

"Haan Neelu ye mera dost hai Karan aur in k saath''.." before she could complete she saw Pooja who was shocked to see some one standing there.

"Rajveer sir aap jinda hain''''" she was really shocked to see Vyom in front of her.

Us ki awaaz sun kar Ali, Huda aur Yudi ne bhi dekha Vyom ko n they were equally shocked.

No one noticed Naina and Neelu along with Karan standing at the gate.

"Kahan the sir aap boliye , boliye'' pata hai aap k bina apun logon ko lag rahela tha jaise ki apun sab bina baap k ho gaye hain. Ek baar bhi aap ne apun logon k bare me nahi socha." Alekh's eyes were moist.

"Haan sir ji aap ka netwok agar aise hi not reachable hona tha to hum sab ko bata k hona tha. Pata hai aap k jaane k baad Naina ka sim card permanently jam ho gaya tha. Vo koi bhi sms receive nahi kar rahi thi na hi kisi bhi call ka reply kar raha tha." Pooja told it with teary eyes.

Vyom gave a look to Naina, he understood that how did she feel after loosing his love.

"Haan sir ji hum se aise kya galti ho gayi thi ki aap ne hum sab ko ye bhi nahi bataya aap ne ki aap zinda hain." Huda said.

"Haan sir aap ek baar hum ko ye bata kar to dekhte. Hum sab ko yahan lag raha tha ki hum sab aap ko bacha nahi paaye aur ye gum hume andar he andar khaye jaa raha tha." Ali said.

"Relax guys, just chill, abhi aaye hain Captain sir in ko thoda aaram to karne do." Yudi said.

"Tu sahi keh raha hai Yudi hum to bhool hi gaye the ki'''.." Huda said but soon his eyes got shifted towards Naina.

Naina moved closer to them and stood in front of all, "Guys mujhe aap sab ko kuch batana hai."

"Abhi nahi Naina pehle tum log thoda relax kar lo fir baatein karenge." Yudi said.

"Nahi vo baat abhi honi jaroori hai." She paused and taking a deep breath she continued, "Guys ye Rajveer sir nahi hain."

It shocked all of them. "To fir kain hain ye?" Yudi asked still not convinced.

"Haan Naina apun ko bata kaun hai ye chikna?" Alkeh asked.

"Ye mere frnd Karan k frnd hain aur in ka naam Vyom Rathode hai." She said.

"Oh baba ji, ye to bilkul Shahrukh lagta hai na." Pooja said.

"Excuse me, kya kaha aap ne?" Vyom asked in a confusing tone.

"Don't worry Vyom ye Pooja ki apni hi lingo hai vo aise hi baat karti hai." Naina told him.

"Oye main yahan itne der se kuli ki tarah saamnaan le kar khada hoon meri chinta hi nahi hai kisi ko." Karan said in a complaining tone.

"Are haan yaar , is ko koi dekh hi nahi rahela hai." Alekh taunted.

"Oye mai vakai me itna saara bhoja le kar khada hoon yahan." Karan said.

"Ok Karan bus mai aa rahi hoon." Naina said. "Alekh zara to Vyom ko sahara de kar le jaa kisi room me aaram se." she said.

"Chief vo, first floor ka third room khali hai, vahan in ka aur Karan ka saamaan rakhwa do aur Naina ko us k bagal waala room de dena." Yudi said.

"Oye theek hai, tu khali peeli tension mat le." Alekh said n left with Vyom from there.

Meanwhile no body noticed that Huda was in a deep thought, he was thinking some thing.

After an hour they all assembled in hall planning something for engagement.

"To Yudiye tune bataya nahi ki tu shaadi kis se kar raha hai?" Huda asked.

"Relax bro bus shaam tak intezaar karo apne aap pata chal jaayega." Yudi said n winked Neelu.

"To kya program hai aaj shaam ka, meri daroo ka intezaam to ho gaya hai na; ki mai check kar k aao?" Alekh asked.

"Chief pls, ab to kam se kam thoda change karo na apne aap ko." Yudi said.

"Kyoun be, kyoun badlega apun apne aap ko?" Alekh roared.

"Sahi keh raha hai Yudi Alekh. Ab tum baap ban ne waale ho na to thodi zimmedari uthana seekho aur is tarah se '''" she couldn't continue.

"Ok, ok samajh gaya apun." Alekh said which made Neelu smile.

"Naina tum jaanti ho tumahri baton ka asar farun hota hai is par; mai kehti reh jaati hoon par ye nahi sunta hai aur vahi baat agar tum kehti ho to ye farun maan jaata hai." Neelu said.

Naina smiled. Tabhi us ki najar neeche aate Vyom par padi; vo thoda ladkhada gaya tha.

"Vyom'''..ruko tum." Naina screamed and ran towards him. It made all astonished. Sab ki najar uth gayi jahan Naina , Vyom ko sahara de kar neeche la rahi thi.

"Haan yahan baith jaao aaram se, ok." She made him sit on sofa.

"Vo nautanki kahan reh gaya?" Alekh asked.

"Kaun nautanki ?" Naina asked .

"Are wahi tera bachpan waala dost Phoolan." Huda said somehow he didn't like Vyom with her.

"Mai yahan hoon guys." They all turned their face and found Karan playing with small kids.

"Tum ye kya kar rahe ho Karan?" Naina asked surprisingly.

"Kitna sweet ladka hai na." Pooja said to which Ali gave him a sharp look, to made him more jealous Pooja further added, "Lagta hai is ka handset baccho k handset se kaafi jaldi match kar gaya hai."

"Pooja agar aap yahan dhyan de to jyada accha nahi hoga." Ali said.

"Oye tere ko kya problem ho rahi hai usool, Pooja ne abhi tak apna plan nahi badla hai filhaal." Huda teased him.

Ali smiled but didn't say anything. Pooja smiled at Huda too and she got a wink in reply.

"Kuch nahi Naina ye bacche mere saath khelna chahte the to maine socha kyoun na thoda inka bhi entertainment ho jaaye." Karan told.

He was running away with them outside. He didn't see the person entering and bumped with her and they both finally fell on the ground.

"Ye Karan bhi na kabhi dekh k nahi chal sakta hai." Naina got up from her seat n the scene she saw was amazing.

"Aap yahan?" Karan asked that person.

Hello guys kaisa tha ye part ?

Waiting for replies.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Update was really gud...😛
Itni choti si umar ke Raj ko apne father jaisa manthe the yeh sabhi cadets ..Baap re..Us tarha to Naina in ki maama hui ha ha😆..jokes apart..It was really wonderfull..Wat is Huda thinking now????N he is already jealous of Vyom..Ek boxing match ho jana chahiya Huda n Vyom ke beech...similar to the 1 in LRl serial..
Yudi is marrying Shalini or some1 else????N Karan collided with _____________.Fill in the blank..
Thanx for informing..
Do update soon
Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello Vertika!!!
wow!! a very nice update!!!!
Ab sab ne Vyom ko hi raj samajh liya!!!!!
Loved it dear.....
take care...
Continue soon..




love
Riya.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Vertika
What have u done? itne acche mod par khatam kar diya ab main next ud ka wait kaise karoongi. Anyways the ud was marvellous. Its good to see that Naina is worried about Vyom and my God Pooja is such a hillarious person. Her sad dialogue was also bringing smile to my face. U have used very good words in her dialogues. Keep up the good work dear and update soon as i can't wait.
With Lots of Love
Shree
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Posted: 16 years ago
this part is too good
finally all of them are re-united
update soon long asap.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
HIIIIIIII VARTIKA HOPE U R MAST THE UD WAS AWESOOOOOOOME YAAR TOOOOOOOOGOOOOOOOOOD👏
SUPERB👏
MINDBLASING👏
INTESTING👏
ROCKING👏
FANTASTIC👏
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK👏
U R A EXCELLENT WRITER
UD ASAP
LOVE U
DEEPA.......................
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

I loved the bhabhi nanad meeting!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina ka apne bhatiji ke baare mein pucchna was so sweet!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh ne kaha Raj ke bina woh log jaise bina baap ke ho gaye thhe!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭Well Aalekh has always loved him the most out of the five!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja's words are very emotional!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Vyom ab samaj gaya ke Naina ki kya halat thi apne pyaar ko khone ke baad!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Sab sun liya magar abhi bhi apna natak bandh nahi kar raha hai Raj!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Yudi is pretty cool and kehta hai ke inhe aram ki zaroorat hai!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Kaafi samajdar hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja ne kaha ke yeh bilkul Shahrukh lagta hai aur Vyom confuse ho gaya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Karan ko toh koi dekh hi nahi raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Karan tumne sahi kaha tum kuli hi ho!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Yeh Huda kya soch raha hai??😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Yeh Yudi shaadi kar kisse raha hai jo kisi ko pata nahi hai aur itna mysterious act kar raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛

Aalekh ko toh apne daru ki padhi hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Sab ne kaha toh nahi mana magar Naina ne kaha toh jhat se maan gaya!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Waah!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Neelu ne bhi yehi kaha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Vyom ladkhadaya toh Naina daudke uske paas gayi aur usse sahara de kar neeche layi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Huda ko Vyom Naina ke saath accha nahi laga!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Yeh ab tak nahi sudra hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Abhi bhi isne Naina ka peecha nahi chhoda hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Aalekh toh Karan ko nautanki bulane laga!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Karan baccho ke saath khel raha tha!!!😛 😛 😛 😛So cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja ne Karan ki tareef kya kardi Ali toh jealous ho gaya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆So cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Huda bhi usse tease kar raha hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉

Karan kisse se takra gaya!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Kaun hai yeh??😊 😊 😊 😊Is it Shreya??😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow what a gr8 part so naina cares for Raj oops Vyom
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

I can't decide where to begin...because you have narrated emotions of soooo many people in just one update....FANTASTIC.....how do you manage this yaar.....

Loved the scene between Neelu and Naina...with Naina worrying about her neice and Neelu about Naina's health....
The reaction that alekh gave to raj was quit shocking for me as he is one who does not show his emotions easily......but then again he has always cared for and respected raj the most...
Yudi acted quite mature...by think that they would all need rest after the long journey.....
Pooja is her usual self....you do a great job at writng dialogues for her in her special lingo...
Huda kis soch mein pad gaya....I think he doubts that vyom might be raj....
Naina's concern about vyom's health is very caring....i just hope that vyom is raj.....please ab ye suspense jaldi se khatam karo.....
Poor Karan...usko kisi ne bahv hi nahi diya.....but him playing with kids is just toooooo cute.....
And finally who is it that Yudi is marrying.......
Please update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
wat n excellent part..........all of dem 2gether............fabulous........

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