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Posted: 16 years ago
HII VARTIKA HOPE UR FINE SWEETY.................. THE UD WAS............... AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME................ SUPERB......................................... WONDERFUL......................... AMAZING................ ROCKING.................. MINDBLOWING................. FANTASTIC.................. BEAUTIFUL................. OUT OF THIS WORLD...............

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JUST TOO GOOD.....................

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WITH LOTS OF LOVE,

AND GOOD WISHES,

PRITI.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hiiiii vertika...hope u r in a good mood....yaar!!!!

ud was cool...lekin yaar ...yeh kya raj ko sabhi apne father k tarah mante the.....i hope naina aur huda nahin mante honge....😆😆

aur yeh huda hamesha raj se kyoun jealous hota hai .... yaar!!!!!!matlab raj chahe rajveer ban k aaye ya phir vyom ...huda ko insecurity mahsoos ho hi jati hai...naina ko le kar...!!!!!!!! woh maan kyoun nahin leta k naina hamesha se raj k thi aur rahegi..........

mujhe pata hai k karan jarur shreya se takraya hoga...😉 aur pooja to hamesha se hi aisi hai.....😆
yeh yudi ka suspence solve karo jaldi se....akhir woh shadi kis se kar raha hai....😕
CONT. SOON...........PRIYA
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey bahut hi senti update tha yaar, 😭
Mujhe nahi pata tha ki humare cadets Raj ko itna jyada miss karte hai😲; mujhe to lagta tha ki bus Naina hi Raj ko jyada miss karti hai ya fir Alekh but it was excellent sweety.😭
Pata nahi tum log aisa kaise likh lete ho yaar.😛😛😛
I am really very happy for this update.😃
Naina ko kya padi thi itni jaldi sab ko ye batane ki ki vo Raj nahi hai😡, thoda baad me bata deti to kya chala jaata us ka.🤢
Yudi ne abhi tak nahi bataya ki kaun hai vo jis se shaadi kar raha hai Yudi.😕
Naina ne Vyom ko sahara diya haivow g8!😳 par is Huda ki problem kya hai?😡
Humesha Naina ko dusron k saath dekh kar jalta hai aur to aur Alekh ko bhi jalan hue Neelu k liye aur Ali ko Pooja k liye.😆
Karan to bus Karan hi hai ab ye kaun hai jis se vo takra gaya?😉
update asap dear.
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
sorry dear, i couldn't comment on Chahat for the last two updates, okay here comes my comments now

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Here comes the next part guys:-

'Tu bhi na Karan, jab bhagwan akal baat rahe the to pata nahi kahan tha tu tab.' He was murmuring.

hahahahah good one! yeh karan aur vyom bhi na😆😆

'Ab yahan aise hi khada rahega ki Naina ko mayega bhi.' Vyom asked.

'Haan jaa raha hoon yaar.' He said n left.

He saw Naina was talking with some one on phone. After some time she turned n found Karan standing there.

'Kya hua Karan?' Naina asked.

'Kuch nahi bus tum ko dekhne aaya tha.' he replied lowering his eyes.

'Jaldi bolo kya baat hai?' Naina asked again.

'Sorry Naina mujhe nahi hurt karna tha tum ko par jaanti ho na mujhe mujh se ye sab kaise ho jaata hai mujhe bhi pata nahi chalta hai.' He said making a sad face.

'It's ok Karan. I didn't mind.' Naina replied.

'Haan vaise bhi mind kar ne k liye mind hona bhi to chahiye na jo ki tum ladkiyon k paas to hota nahi hai.' Karan said and soon their fight started because of Karan's such statement.

i loveeeeeeeeeed this statement, that was so naughty of karan, mujhe laga woh sach mein mafi mang raha hai, but this was so unexpected!!😆😆😆 they are really the cutest friends ever 😆😆

Naina has already arranged all things and have done all packing. They brought Vyom to the airport and soon their flight started, Naina ki seat kuch aise thi ki us ko Vyom k bagal baithna tha aur Karan ko ek ladki k bagal ki seat mili thi.

'Excuse me mam, can I have a magazine?' Karan asked the airhostess.

'Offcourse sir.' She handed over him a bunch of magazines.

'Thanks, Par kya aap mujhe bata sakti hain ki in me se sab se acchi kaun si magazine hai?' Karan asked her flirtlously.

She told him about each and every magazine and he was just enjoying flirting with her. Vyom showed Naina . Naina just smiled at him and said, 'Ye nahi sudharega.'

'U know Naina hum jab aa rahe the U.S.A. se India to plane me is ne har ek ladki se to nahi par mujhe lagta hai atleast aadhi ladkiyon k saath to flirt kiya hoga hi.' Vyom told her.

'Ye humesha se hi aisa tha school me bhi kisi ladki se flirt karne ka mauka nahi chodta tha.' Naina said smiling.

yeh karan bhi na, bilkul huda types hai😛

'Naina ek baat kahoon?' Vyom asked.

'Haan boliye.' Naina said.

'Naina k naino me ansoon acche nahi lagte isliye humesha hasti raha karo.' Vyom said.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's so sweet, he cares about her so much

Naina was taken a back. It reminded her of him who says that.(yaar agar aisa nahi tha to maan lo na ki Raj ne kaha tha aisa).

vartika tu mujhe ullu mat bana, mujhe pata hai woh raj hi hai😉

Karan was still flirting with all airhostesses but not with the gal sitting next to him. He tried very much to get a glimpse of her but all of his trails were in vain. She has covered her face with a magazine she was reading till the start of journey.

'Ms. Shreya aap ne ye mangaya tha na utarne se pehle so pls have it.' A young man handed her over something.

'Haan maine mangaya tha and thanks for it.' The girl replied.

When Karan saw her face he was lost by her beauty. She was none other than famous actrees Shreya Kapoor (imaginary)(Shraddha Nigam).

'Aap Shreya Kapoor hai na?' Karan asked.

'Yeah mai vahi hoon.' She replied sweetly.

'Myself Karan Malhotra from U.S.A. I am son of Mr. Aditaya Malhotra.' He introduced himself.

'Oh vohi Malhotra companies waale jin ki worldwide kaafi saari factories hain.' Shreya asked.

'Yeah vahi', he replied.

'Glad to meet u Mr. Malhotra.' Shreya said.

'Call me Karan not Mr. Malhotra, vaise bhi ye mere dad ko bulate hain sab.' Karan said.

'Yeah glad to meet u Karan.' She said.

yah karan bhi na ladki dekhi nehi ki line marna shuru😆😆 waise am glad there's another love story building up 😃

Soon the announcement was heard of arrival at Chandigarh airport. They came downstairs. Naina has already booked a private cab for reaching Ambala though Yudi insisted to send a car but she denied.

'Ok Shreya I hope we will meet soon. Can I have ur cell number please?' he asked.

'Sorry but mai apna no. kisi ko nahi deti. Ok bye' She said sweetly and left.

hahahahah ho gaya izzat ka faluda😆

'Kya hua?' Vyom asked Karan.

'Kuch nahi yaar bina no diye hi chali gayi.' Karan said with sadness.

'Come on let's move. Vahan shaddi me abhi aap ko bahut log mil jaayenge flirt karne k liye.' Naina teased him.

'Par yaar she was amazing. Pata hai maine aaj tak us se sundar ladki nahi dekhi apni life me.'Karan said in a dreamy tone.

'Ab chalein ki yahin rehna hai tum ko us ki yaadon k saath.' Naina asked.

'Haan chal vaise bhi tujhe kahan accha lagta hai ye sab.' Karan teased.

'Shut up Karan chalo ab.' Vyom said.

'Saale tum ladke bahut dhoke baaj hote ho apne dost ki taang kisi ladki k same impression jamane k liye jaroor keechoge.' He said to Vyom.

that's so right! u have expressed the guy's psychology sooooooooo well!! it's true , they make smart comments more when they are with girls they like😛

All laughed at it and sat into the cab. The way was long. A song was coming on the radio.

(Gumsum Chaandani Ho, Naajani Ho, Ya Koi Hoor HoDilnashi Ho, Dilkashi Ho Ya; Jannat Ka Noor HoMaasha Allah, Maasha Allah, Maasha Allah.....) - 2 Tum Saba Ho Ya Ghata, Ho Kehkasha Ho Saayba HoSubah Ki Pehali Kiran Ki Jaisi, Bebaak Alhad Pawan Ki JaiseKhushbuyein Tum Lutaati Ho Masti Mein Chur ChurMaasha Allah, Maasha Allah, Maasha Allah..... Tum Haya Ho, Tum Rida Ho, Tum Wafa Ho, Tum Nasha HoKhaamosh Nazarein Sada Jaisi Tumhaari Baatein Duwaayon JaisiHar Nafas Mein Tum Samaayi Ho Phir Bhi Ho Itani DoorMaasha Allah, Maasha Allah, Maasha Allah.....Gumsum Chaandani Ho, Naajani Ho, Ya Koi Hoor HoDilnashi Ho, Dilkashi Ho Ya Jannat Ka Noor HoMaasha Allah, Maasha Allah, Maasha Allah....

This song was perfect for describing Vyom's feeling . Kya soch raha tha dil me is gaane se pata chal raha tha isiliye lagtaar Naina ko dekhe jaa raha the Vyom.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooooo romantic, perfect song, perfect situation, lovely description

Naina noticed this so she found it hard to ignore his gaze. Pata nahi kyoun par us k dekhne ka andaaz bhi vaisa hi tha jaise Raj ka tha.

tralalalalalala...........naina tu bhi maan ja, woh raj hi hai😉😉 the scene is soooooooooooooo romantic............am melting😛

Hey bhagwaan tumne mujhe kis tarah ki situation me daal rakha hai mai kya karoon mai samajh nahi paa rahi hoon.

Tabhi Karan bola 'Naina mujhe bahut bhookh lagi jara kuch kha lete hain.'

oye bhukkad kuchh der apni bhukh kabu mein nehi rakh sakta tha kya?😡😡 kitan romantic mood tha...........

'Ok cab rukwa lo kahin.' She said.

Vyom was on back seat lying because he has a back pain. Karan looked a restaurant and made the cab stop.

They all came out and sat in the restaurant and have the food. When they were coming out from the restaurant Vyom noticed something. He indicated Karan to bring Naina out safely and come back soon.

'Chalo Naina ', Karan understood n brought her out.

woooooooooow more mysteries😛 u really stop at the most suspense filled moments
rocking update yaar, amazing writing, hats off to you

How was the part guys pls reply soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago
😡😡ok here's my comments for the next part i missed

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

'Hey Naina,' Neelu saw her and came to her.

'Hi Neelu kaise hai? Meri bhateeji ka dhyan rakh rahi hai na?' Naina asked hugging her.

awwwwwwwww soooooooo sweet, u portray naina n neelu's conversations sooo well😛

'Haan baba khayal rakha jaa raha hai aap ki bhateeji ka. Kaise hai tu? Kitni dubali ho gayi hai Naina lagta hai apna khayal nahi rakhti hai tu.' Neelu said complaining.

'Nahi bus abhi kuch dino pehle khali hue hoon na recover karne me time lagega.' Naina said with a small smile on her face.

'Accha andar chal sab se milna hai na.' Neelu said.

Karan called her, 'Naina kya yaar hum se bhi milao na apne frnds ko.'

'Haan Neelu ye mera dost hai Karan aur in k saath''..' before she could complete she saw Pooja who was shocked to see some one standing there.

'Rajveer sir aap jinda hain''''' she was really shocked to see Vyom in front of her.

pooja shocked mat hona! tune bilkul sahi socha hai, yeh rajveer sir hi hai, bas hamari ek badmash friend hai vartika woh pata nehi kyon vyom ko rajveer sir banane mein tuli hui hai 😡 par son't worry hum usse sach nikalke rahenge😆

Us ki awaaz sun kar Ali, Huda aur Yudi ne bhi dekha Vyom ko n they were equally shocked.

No one noticed Naina and Neelu along with Karan standing at the gate.

'Kahan the sir aap boliye , boliye'' pata hai aap k bina apun logon ko lag rahela tha jaise ki apun sab bina baap k ho gaye hain. Ek baar bhi aap ne apun logon k bare me nahi socha.' Alekh's eyes were moist.

my eyes are moist tooo, such an emotional scene😭😭😭

'Haan sir ji aap ka netwok agar aise hi not reachable hona tha to hum sab ko bata k hona tha. Pata hai aap k jaane k baad Naina ka sim card permanently jam ho gaya tha. Vo koi bhi sms receive nahi kar rahi thi na hi kisi bhi call ka reply kar raha tha.' Pooja told it with teary eyes.

Vyom gave a look to Naina, he understood that how did she feel after loosing his love.

'Haan sir ji hum se aise kya galti ho gayi thi ki aap ne hum sab ko ye bhi nahi bataya aap ne ki aap zinda hain.' Huda said.

'Haan sir aap ek baar hum ko ye bata kar to dekhte. Hum sab ko yahan lag raha tha ki hum sab aap ko bacha nahi paaye aur ye gum hume andar he andar khaye jaa raha tha.' Ali said.

'Relax guys, just chill, abhi aaye hain Captain sir in ko thoda aaram to karne do.' Yudi said.

'Tu sahi keh raha hai Yudi hum to bhool hi gaye the ki'''..' Huda said but soon his eyes got shifted towards Naina.

Naina moved closer to them and stood in front of all, 'Guys mujhe aap sab ko kuch batana hai.'

'Abhi nahi Naina pehle tum log thoda relax kar lo fir baatein karenge.' Yudi said.

'Nahi vo baat abhi honi jaroori hai.' She paused and taking a deep breath she continued, 'Guys ye Rajveer sir nahi hain.'

me saaaaaaaaaaaaaaad, it was such an emotional moment for all the cadets, really getting him back after they thought he was dead was the best thing that could have ever happened😭😭😭 par naina ne sabka dil tod diya😭

It shocked all of them. 'To fir kain hain ye?' Yudi asked still not convinced.

'Haan Naina apun ko bata kaun hai ye chikna?' Alkeh asked.

'Ye mere frnd Karan k frnd hain aur in ka naam Vyom Rathode hai.' She said.

'Oh baba ji, ye to bilkul Shahrukh lagta hai na.' Pooja said.

'Excuse me, kya kaha aap ne?' Vyom asked in a confusing tone.

haan vyom ji, agar aap hamare rajveer sir hai toh fir thik hai, par agar nehi hai toh aap sabse, especially naina se dur hi rahiye 😡😡😡 pooja aise hi hai, and she's calling u shahrukh because she thinks u r rajveer, samjhe?

'Don't worry Vyom ye Pooja ki apni hi lingo hai vo aise hi baat karti hai.' Naina told him.

'Oye main yahan itne der se kuli ki tarah saamnaan le kar khada hoon meri chinta hi nahi hai kisi ko.' Karan said in a complaining tone.

'Are haan yaar , is ko koi dekh hi nahi rahela hai.' Alekh taunted.

'Oye mai vakai me itna saara bhoja le kar khada hoon yahan.' Karan said.

poor karan, i love his character 😃😃😃

'Ok Karan bus mai aa rahi hoon.' Naina said. 'Alekh zara to Vyom ko sahara de kar le jaa kisi room me aaram se.' she said.

'Chief vo, first floor ka third room khali hai, vahan in ka aur Karan ka saamaan rakhwa do aur Naina ko us k bagal waala room de dena.' Yudi said.

'Oye theek hai, tu khali peeli tension mat le.' Alekh said n left with Vyom from there.

Meanwhile no body noticed that Huda was in a deep thought, he was thinking some thing.

what are you thinking huda, ki chalo ek rajveer se chhutkara mila nehi dossra aa gaya?😆

After an hour they all assembled in hall planning something for engagement.

'To Yudiye tune bataya nahi ki tu shaadi kis se kar raha hai?' Huda asked.

'Relax bro bus shaam tak intezaar karo apne aap pata chal jaayega.' Yudi said n winked Neelu.

arrey yudi ab toh bata de yaar😕😕 sab log tere engagement pe aa bhi gaye aur tu abhi tak chhupa rah ahai??????????😆

'To kya program hai aaj shaam ka, meri daroo ka intezaam to ho gaya hai na; ki mai check kar k aao?' Alekh asked.

'Chief pls, ab to kam se kam thoda change karo na apne aap ko.' Yudi said.

'Kyoun be, kyoun badlega apun apne aap ko?' Alekh roared.

'Sahi keh raha hai Yudi Alekh. Ab tum baap ban ne waale ho na to thodi zimmedari uthana seekho aur is tarah se '''' she couldn't continue.

hee hee can't imagine Alekh as a father, but he will make a good father i know that, he was so caring and protective about naina😛😛😛

'Ok, ok samajh gaya apun.' Alekh said which made Neelu smile.

'Naina tum jaanti ho tumahri baton ka asar farun hota hai is par; mai kehti reh jaati hoon par ye nahi sunta hai aur vahi baat agar tum kehti ho to ye farun maan jaata hai.' Neelu said.

Naina smiled. Tabhi us ki najar neeche aate Vyom par padi; vo thoda ladkhada gaya tha.

'Vyom'''..ruko tum.' Naina screamed and ran towards him. It made all astonished. Sab ki najar uth gayi jahan Naina , Vyom ko sahara de kar neeche la rahi thi.

ai haaaaaaaaai, kitna fikr hai naina ko vyom ke baare mein, aag dono taraf laga hai😳😳😳 par vyom, i am telling u again, tum agar hamare rajveer sir ho toh thik hai, agar nehi ho toh naina se dur hi rehna, 😡woh sirf rajveer ki hai

'Haan yahan baith jaao aaram se, ok.' She made him sit on sofa.

'Vo nautanki kahan reh gaya?' Alekh asked.

'Kaun nautanki ?' Naina asked .

'Are wahi tera bachpan waala dost Phoolan.' Huda said somehow he didn't like Vyom with her.

'Mai yahan hoon guys.' They all turned their face and found Karan playing with small kids.

'Tum ye kya kar rahe ho Karan?' Naina asked surprisingly.

'Kitna sweet ladka hai na.' Pooja said to which Ali gave him a sharp look, to made him more jealous Pooja further added, 'Lagta hai is ka handset baccho k handset se kaafi jaldi match kar gaya hai.'

'Pooja agar aap yahan dhyan de to jyada accha nahi hoga.' Ali said.

'Oye tere ko kya problem ho rahi hai usool, Pooja ne abhi tak apna plan nahi badla hai filhaal.' Huda teased him.

baapre Ali is jealous😆

Ali smiled but didn't say anything. Pooja smiled at Huda too and she got a wink in reply.

'Kuch nahi Naina ye bacche mere saath khelna chahte the to maine socha kyoun na thoda inka bhi entertainment ho jaaye.' Karan told.

He was running away with them outside. He didn't see the person entering and bumped with her and they both finally fell on the ground.

'Ye Karan bhi na kabhi dekh k nahi chal sakta hai.' Naina got up from her seat n the scene she saw was amazing.

'Aap yahan?' Karan asked that person.

VARTIKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!11 I WILL KILL YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU😡 Hamesha suspense mein lakar chhod deti hai😡 ab who's this person who banged into karan??????????????😕😕😕 jaldi bataaaaaaaaaaaaa

Hello guys kaisa tha ye part ?

Waiting for replies.

the update was aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesooooooooooooooome, fantasticccccccccccccccccccccccccc, n excellentttttttttttttttttttt😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
woooooooooooow simply super,

very intrestn part sweety excelent,



Aarthi
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Update was really gud...😛

Itni choti si umar ke Raj ko apne father jaisa manthe the yeh sabhi cadets ..Baap re..Us tarha to Naina in ki maama hui ha ha😆..jokes apart..It was really wonderfull..Wat is Huda thinking now????N he is already jealous of Vyom..Ek boxing match ho jana chahiya Huda n Vyom ke beech...similar to the 1 in LRl serial..
Yudi is marrying Shalini or some1 else????N Karan collided with _____________.Fill in the blank..
Thanx for informing..
Do update soon

Hello Suhana bahut hi badiya joke tha and thanks for liking it.😊😊😊
Is Huda ki problem ka kabhi bhi koi bhi solution nahi ho sakta hai 😡😡😡koi kuch nahi kar sakta hai bus boxing match na hi ho to accha hai.
Yudi k baare me abhi mujhe hi nahi pata to mai tujhe kya bataoo?😕😕😕
Thanks a lot dear.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Hello Vertika!!!
wow!! a very nice update!!!!
Ab sab ne Vyom ko hi raj samajh liya!!!!!
Loved it dear.....
take care...
Continue soon..




love
Riya.

Thanks Riya dear.😊😊😊
Haan sab k sab missunderstand to hue par Naina ne cofusion remove kar de fauran.😉😉😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

this part is too good
finally all of them are re-united
update soon long asap.............

Thanks dear.😛😛😛
Haan sab k sab wapas back in action.😃😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shree85

Hi Vertika

What have u done? itne acche mod par khatam kar diya ab main next ud ka wait kaise karoongi. Anyways the ud was marvellous. Its good to see that Naina is worried about Vyom and my God Pooja is such a hillarious person. Her sad dialogue was also bringing smile to my face. U have used very good words in her dialogues. Keep up the good work dear and update soon as i can't wait.
With Lots of Love
Shree

Hello Shree,😊😊😊
Karna to padega😉😉😉, ye baat hi to readers me interest build karti hai ki aage padhe vo update.😛😛😛
thanks dear,😃😃😃
Ab kya karein apni Pooja ka istail hi aisa hai ki koi rota hua sun kar hasne lage.😆😆😆
thanks again dear.😃😃😃
i will update it soon.

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