my fan-fic... - Page 7

hi guys, i couldnt update yesterday! sorry abt that...
recap: arjun talks to bhavri and baisa about suraj and manasvi, arjun thinks that bhavri is pretty...
Suraj is not able to sleep the whole night. he keeps on getting flashbacks of what arjun said. next morning, after breakfast, suraj goes to arjun's room.
S: good morning arjun, kaise ho?
A: good morning bhaiya, main thik hoon, tum kaise ho?
S: perfect... arjun, main tumse kuch poochna chahta tha...
A: kya baat hai bhaiya?
S: arjun, tumne jo kal kaha tha, woh hoga kaise?
A: uski fikar tum mat karo bhaiya, tum wohi karo jo main kehta hoon..
S: kya matlab?
A: matlab yeh ke... AH, chodo na, tum sirf aam khao, gutliya mat gino!
S: thik hai arjun, lekin meri baat yaad rakhna, manasvi par kisi bhi tarha ka dabav agar dala gaya, to main...
A: ok bhaiya, i know... tum fikar mat karo...
suraj leaves the room and arjun goes to baisa's room.
B: arjun, kaise aana huwa?
A: baisa main kal ki baat ko poora karna chahta tha.
B: are haan arjun! tumne kya socha hai?
A: baisa, humme kisi bhi tarha manasvi bhabhi ko yeh ehsaas dilana hoga ke bhaiya unse kitna pyar karte hai...
B: aur uske dil mein bhi hume aisi feelings jagani hogi...
Bhavri enters.
Baisa: bhoomi, ao, hum abhi suraj aur manasvi ki baat kar rahe the...
Bhavri: to phir kya socha aap ne?
A: abhi tak to kuch nahi socha, lekin manasvi bhabhi ko yeh ehsaas dilane ke liye ke bhaiya unse pyar karte hai, humme kuch na kuch to karna hi hoga.
Baisa and Bhavri(together):lekin kya?
A: idea!
arjun tells them about the idea!
Baisa: idea to bohot accha hai arjun, lekin, agar phir bhi manasvi par koi asar nahi huwa to?
A: hame yeh chance lena hoga baisa! teer chahe jitne bhi hawa mein chalaye jaye, ek teer to nishane pe zaroor lagega! aur woh teer hame batayega ke hame apne maksad mein aage badhna chahiye ya nahi!
Bhavri: arjun thik keh raha hai baisa! hame chance lena hoga!
A: to phir kaam kal se shuru kiya jaye?
B & B: yes sir!

thats it guys! hope u like this part

wow yaar
TOO GOD
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even the a-b scene was so cute .. arjun is very sweet in this.. awwww will miss this ff yaar..
going now n this is the last thing i'm doing.. good to find two episodes together.. tis too great yaar..
ll check it the first thing wen come back.. enjoy till then.. n keep updating... 😃

too good 👏 keep writing.
Apnye dewanoon ko itna na tardpaiy aaiy aaa jaiy.

sory nt comenting 4 a long time
im back nw
its tooo good
kep on writing

hi, thnks tuhina, luckystar and janu 4 the lovely comments, welcome back janu!
recap: suraj reminds arjun that if arjun forces manasvi to marry him, he will refuse, arjun has a plan.
Arjun has gone to the office and Bhavri is in the kitchen. Manasvi enters.
B: are manasvi bhabhi, aap kab aayi, main itni busy ho gayi thi ke maine aap ko notice nahin kiya...
M: main abhi aayi hoon. kya kar rahi ho?
B: khana bana rahi hoon.
M: kya bhoomi, tumhara ek business hai, tumhe yaad to hai na?
B: haan bhabhi, mujhe sab yaad hai. ghar aur kaam ko kaise manage karna hai main sab sikh gayi hoon.
M: accha, yeh to bohot khushi ki baat hai, lekin main to kabhi tumhe office ka kaam karte nahi dekhti hoon!
B: bhabhi, sughandhi creations ka saara kaam arjun sambhalta hai, mera kaam sirf designs banaane ka hai.
M: bhoomi, tumhe nahin lagta ke tumhe office ke kaam mein zyada dilchaspi leni chahiye?
Shefali enters...
S: bilkul thik kaha manasvi bhabhi ne!
B: are shefali bhabhi, aap kab ai?
S: yaha se guzar rahi thi, aur aap dono ki baatein suni. manasvi bhabhi thik hi to keh rahi hai bhoomi, tum kyun baar baar yeh bhool jati ho ke sughandhi tum ho, aur sughandhi creations tumhari company hai?
B: main kuch nahi bhooli hoon bhabhi. SC ke liye designs main hi banati hoon. lekin phir bhi, aap ki baat ke baare mein zaroor sochungi, aur arjun se bhi baat karungi!
M: mujhe yakeen hai bhoomi, ke arjun mana nahi karega.

that evening, arjun is already home. everyone has had dinner and is in their respective rooms. in A-B's room,
A: bhavri, kal se hamara kaam shuru ho raha hai...
B: haan, kya baat hai, arjun goenka ko dar lag raha hai kya?
A(getting angry): bhavri, arjun goenka kisi se nahi darta...
B: OH!!!! arjun goenka kisi se nahi darta!!!! to phir abhi jaa kar manasvi bhabhi se kaho ke surajji unse shaadi karna chahte hai!
A: KYA! bhavri, tumhara dimaag kharab ho gaya hai kya?
B: nahi to, tumhi ne to kaha tha, arjun goenka kisi se nahi darta! itni si baat pe dar gaye?
arjun stands up and starts to go outside!
B: arjun, kaha jaa rahe ho?
A: manasvi bhabhi ke kamre mein...
B: kyun?
A: unhe woh sab kuch batane ke liye jo tumne mujhe kaha!
B: are arjun, arjun ruko(holds his hand tightly) main to sirf mazaak kar rahi thi!
A: lekin main mazaak nahi kar raha hoon!
B: arjun please ruk jao, (emotionally) please!!!
arjun stops.
A: thik hai, lekin dobara tum is tarha mera mazaak nahi udaogi!
B: thik hai baba, tumhara mazaak nahi udaungi! bas. ab chalo kamre mein!
back in their room,
B: arjun tum bhi na, choti si choti baat ko bada bana dete ho!
A: mujhe pasand nahi hai ke koi meri qabiliyat par shak kare!
B: main kaha tumhari qabiliyat par shak kar rahi thi arjun? main to sirf mazaak kar rahi thi!
Arjun stays quiet...
B: ab to maaf kardo, i m sorry!(holds her ears) kaan pakar ke maafi mangti hoon, ab to maaf kardo!
A: thik hai thik hai! main tumhe maaf karta hoon!
B: thank u very much!
A: ek baat poochu bhavri?
B: haan poocho...
A: bhavri agar hamara plan kamyab nahi huwa to?
B: aisi baatein nahi sochte arjun. Be positive!
A; shayad tum thik keh rahi ho bhavri!
B: ab chalo so jao! dus baj gaye hai!
A: good night!
B: good night!

thats it! next part is gonna be rockin, so stay tuned!!!!

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hi, n thanks for the lovely comments...
recap: manasvi and shefali talk to bhavri about paying more attention to SC, bhavri plays a joke on arjun.
Next morning, in HH, every1 is at the breakfast table. They are having fun but, as usual, mansen, yuvraj and mamaji's expressions are totally vacant!!!!! 😆 😆 Bhavri notices this and signals arjun to look at them... Arjun laughs.
After breakfast, in A-B's room, arjun is about to leave for office.
A: bhavri, tumhe yaad hai na kya karna hai? kuch bhooli to nahi ho na?
B: mujhe sab yaad hai arjun! yeh sawaal tum subah se saat(7) baar pooch chuke ho!
A: kya karu bhavri, bhaiya aur manasvi bhabhi ki zindagi ka sawaal hai!
B: haan arjun, aur tum fikar mat karo, jo hoga accha hi hoga!
A: ok bhavri, main chalta hoon... aur kuch bhoolna mat! aur sab ho jaye to mujhe phone karna...
B: thik hai arjun!!!
A: bye!
Bhavri laughs to herself. Just then suraj enters. bhavri tells him what he is supposed to do! he agrees.

Later, manasvi is coming down from the stairs. suddenly, she hears a voice from behind.
bhavri: bhabhi, manasvi bhabhi...
Manasvi turns while climbing down the stairs and she slips and falls, on.... SURAJ!!!! suraj holds her(i mean saves her from falling down) he cant get his eyes off her! First, manasvi is busy trying to stand up from suraj's arms and doesnt notice him. But then, when she fails to get up on her own, she looks at suraj and sees him staring at her!
M: suraj! (no reply from him) SURAJ!!!
suraj suddenly gets out from his trance to look at manasvi in his arms! he gently but very quickly helps her up.
M: thanks suraj, agar tumne mujhe nahi pakda hota to main shayad...(points to the ground) waha hoti...
S: sabse pehle, mujhe thanks kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi... aur doosri baat, main tumhe kabhi girne nahi doonga! tum chaho ya na chaho, tumhare saath hamesha rahunga! tumhe koi dukh pohnchana chahe isse pehle use mujhse guzarna parega! tumhe agar koi dard dena chahe isse pehle use mujhe dard dena hoga!
Manasvi is totally shocked! She tries to say something but she falls short of words! she walks away to the kitchen...

Meanwhile, bhavri has been listening to all this from her room. when suraj enters the room, he sees tears in her eyes!
S: bhoomika, kya huwa? tum ro kyun rahi ho?
Bhavri(wiping a tear): kuch nahi surajji, aap ki baaton ne mujhe thoda sa emotional kar diya! waise mujhe nahi pata tha ke aap itne acche dialogues bol lete hai...
S: yeh sab maine soch samajh kar nahi bola tha bhoomika, mere dil ne jo kaha, maine woh bol diya!
Bhavri: manasvi bhabhi kitni lucky hai na, ke unhe aap jaisa insaan mila jo unse itna pyar karta hai!
S: aisa kyun keh rahi ho bhoomika?
Bhavri: surajji, aap mujhe bhoomika mat bulaiye! bohot bada naam hai. Bhoomi is better!
S: thik hai bhoomi, aur tum bhi mujhe surajji mat bulao... main tumhara jeth hoon, to tum bhi mujhe arjun ki tarha bhaiya keh sakti ho! waise, tum ne aisa kyun kaha ke manasvi bohot lucky hai? kya arjun tumse pyar nahi karta?
Bhavri lowers her head... and then shakes it!
S: main arjun se baat karta hoon!
bhavri: nahi suraj bhaiya, aisa mat karie...
S: kyun?
Bhavri: mai apa pyar uspar thopna nahi chahti hoon.
S: lekin hum manasvi ke saath bhi to aisa hi kuch kar rahe hai na bhoomi!
B: nahi bhaiya, hum manasvi bhabhi par aapka pyar thop nahi rahe hai, hum sirf yeh janna chahte hai ke kya woh bhi aapke liye wohi mehsoos karti hai jo aap unke baare mein karte hai...
S: lekin hum dono ki haalat bhi to kuch ek jaisi hai na?
B: nahi bhaiya, aapki haalat aur meri haalat mein farak yeh hai ke meri shaadi usse huwi hai jisse main pyar karti hoon lekin jo mujhse pyar nahi karta. aapki haalat aisi hai ke app usse pyar karte hai jiske feelings ke baare mein aap ko pata nahi hai!
S: lekin hum dono jinse pyar karte hai woh humse pyar nahi karte...
B: aapse kisne kaha ke manasvi bhabhi aapse pyar nahi karti? aaj apne unse jo kaha, uske baad koi bhi aurat aapko ek thapar mar ke chali jaati, chahe aap uske sabse acche dost hi kyun na ho! lekin manasvi bhabhi ne aisa nahi kiya. iska matlab yeh hai ke, unke dil mein aap ke liye kuch hai, jo woh kisi ko dikhana nahi chahti hai! anyway, bhaiya, mujhe arjun ko phone karke use yaha ki progress ke baare mein batana hai!
S: thik hai bhoomi, main chalta hoon!

bhavri calls up arjun
A: hi bhavri, koi good news?
B: bohot badi good news hai arjun! (she tells him everything that happened btn SM)
A: wow bhavri, that is good news, main nahi jaanta tha ke bhaiya manasvi bhabhi se itna pyar karta hai!
B: thik kaha tumne arjun, suraj bhaiya sach mein manasvi bhabhi se bohot pyar karte hai! (bhavri cannot control her tears so in a shaky voice) arjun, main phone rakhti hoon (sob)
A: bhavri tum thik to ho... (bhavri hung up)

thats it guys. it took me exactly 1 hour to write all that!

wow !!!!!!!!! read all d parts. 😊 😊 n must say u r amazing writer 👏 .very -very good ff. 😃 keep it up. 😃 😃

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