my fan-fic... - Page 17

Please update soon.....the short part after such a long wait was very disappointing....

sorry dears, but i didnt hv enuf time. i hope u understand. but i promise, the next part is gonna be interesting and long! keep reading. n im sorry again!

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hi guys, wats up?? im finally updating the ff. hop u like it.

Suddenly, Suraj sits down on the sofa with a thud and yawns, Manasvi starts heading to her room, and Bhavri looks at Arjun like she has just seen a ghost!
A: hello! Aise reactions expect nahi kiye the maine…
M (turns around to speak) arjun, please, agar yeh koi mazaak hai, to let me tell you, it's not a very good one!
A: o bhabhi, main mazaak nahi kar raha hoon. I'm serious…
S: whatever arjun!
A: oh come on bhaiya! Aap ki shaadi teen mahine baad hai!
S: to? Iss ka matlab yeh nahi hai ke ghar ko iss tarha chhod kar hum holiday par chale jaye.
A: I agree bhaiya, lekin (coming closer and speaking in suraj's ear) sochiye na, aap aur manasvi bhabhi kahin akele… aap ko koi disturb nahi karega! Think bhaiya, think!
Suraj looks at arjun, half smiling, half blushing…
S: ok, I agree!
A: yay! (To bhavri n manasvi)Come on ladies, mazaa aayega!
B & M: NO!!!
Arjun motions suraj to persuade manasvi, while he takes bhavri to their room…
In A-Bs room,
A: come on bhavri, hamara bhi holiday ho jayega aur bhaiya aur bhabhi ko bhi kuch waqt akele mein mil jayega! Be a sport bhavri!
B: uh arjun!
A: please bhavri! Please please please…
B: BAS!!!(Putting her arms around arjun) Kaha jaane ka plan hai???

Meanwhile, in manasvi's room, manasvi walks in followed by suraj.
S: manasvi, chalo naa! Please… mere liye! kisi ko koi problem nahi hai! To phir tum kyun itna tension le rahi ho?
M: kaha jaana hai?

Later, they meet in the hall again.
A: im sure ke aap sab jaanna chahte hai ke hum kaha jaa rahe hai! Ladies and gentlemen, we are going to Mount Abu…
S: wow! Mountains…
A: haan, aur sabse zaroori baat yeh hai that we are going by car!
S: how romantic!!
Manasvi gives an angry look to suraj.
A: abhi se packing shuru karle! Hum kal subah 4 baje nikal rahe hai!
S: itni jaldi?
A: yes bhaiya. Tab hi to mazaa aayega! Aur phir Abu yahaan se kaafi door bhi hai.
S: ok arjun, lekin sab se poochna parega.
A: woh sab ready hai bhaiya. Bas aap sirf apni packing karlijie, and we r off…
M: main chalti hoon, mujhe khushi ki bhi packi…
A: hello… bhabhi, aap se kisne kaha ke khushi bhi aa rahi hai? Uski school hai, aur woh miss nahi karegi!
M: kya? To woh kaise…
A: mummy-papa to hai na! aur maine khushi ko bhi samjhadiya hai! Woh nahi aana chahti.
Manasvi looks hesitant, but then agrees.

Hop u ppl like this part. M posting the next part in a few mins...

Heres the next part...

At around 2:00 am, everyone is done with the packing. They sit in the hall and talk about their plans.
B: hum waha pe shopping to karenge na?
A: iske siwa aur kuch yaad hai tumhe? Hum holiday pe jaa rahe hai, shopping nahi…
S: tum dono behas karna bandh karo.
Both A-B fall silent.
M: bhoomi, sab khane ka samaan gadi me rakh diya hai na?
B: haan bhabhi, dono gadiyon me rakha hai.

Soon, its time for them to leave.
In A-Bs car, arjun is talking nonsense, and bhavri is listening quietly.
A: u know what bhavri, I have a weird feeling that this holiday is gonna be a blast. Dekhna, do couples, fun, romance………..
Bhavri is getting bored and decides to take a nap while arjun continues blabbering to himself.

On the other hand, in S-Ms car, the environment is totally different. Both of them are quiet, and the song "bolo naa tum zara" from fight club is going on. Both keep glancing at each other from time to time and smile. A romantic atmosphere is created when both of them reach out for the CD player to repeat the song when it gets over. After that, suraj grips manasvi's hand tightly and does not let her go for almost 3 hours.

Then, at around 7, they stop at a local dhaba for refreshments and breakfast. While sitting at the table, their conversations…
A: its gonna be real fun, naa bhaiya!
S: hm! Waise hotel rooms to book kiye the na?
A: bhaiya, your little bro is a genius! Mera ek dost waha ke hotel ko own karta hai! I talked to him, aur usne do rooms book kiye hai!
M: do rooms? Lekin hamare liye teen rooms ki zaroorat hai!
A: lekin… (suddenly realizes that suraj and manasvi are not yet married) oh my God! I'm sorry bhabhi! I forgot!
M: ab? Arjun, you are the limit sometimes.
A: relax bhabhi! Ek aur room ki booking kardenge.
M: aur agar room nahi mila to?
A: oh come on bhabhi… be positive.
B: chalo ab der ho rahi hai. Dopahar se pehle pohonchna hai.
A: haan chalo.

All of them enter the cars. This time, the ladies take over the driver's seat and the gents occupy the passenger's seats. This time, with Bhavri in control of the car, the environment is totally different. Whenever Arjun opens his mouth for speaking, Bhavri increases the volume of the CD player.
A: Bhavri, tumhe nahi lagta ke… (Bhavri increases the volume) salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq, salaam-e-ishq. (Arjun falls silent)

A few minutes later,
A: bhavri, kya tumhe… (B increases the volume again) har manzar, har lamha, yeh pagal dil tanha… (Arjun falls silent again)

Meanwhile, in S-Ms car, Suraj is busy looking at Manasvi, who is busy driving. Slowly, he starts feeling drowsy, and within no time, he is fast asleep. Manasvi smiles to herself.

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Wow so nice see the FF being updated.....and very nice parts indeed!!!!!! Please keep updating regularly....

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hey everyone, y no responds? i know i hv updated after a loooooong time, but at least respond. neway, m continuing.

After a few hours at 11, they stop just at the foot of the mountain. The ladies and gents exchange positions and the gents take up the driver's seat.
A: this is gonna be fun. Bhavri, I just can't wait.
Bhavri lets out a huge sigh, which forces arjun to give her a weird look, a mixture of confusion and anger.

Slowly, but steadily, they start climbing the mountain. Bhavri gets really scared and grips Arjun's hand tightly.
A: Bhavri, don't hold me so tightly, main gadi kaise chalau?
B: Arjun mujhe darr lag raha hai…
A: kis baat ka?
B: kahin… (Stops and looks at arjun)
A: kuch nahi hoga Bhavri… Trust me! I know what I am doing.
Bhavri relaxes a bit after that.

After an hour's drive, and loads of twists n turns, they finally see people.
A (to a passerby) arre bhaisaab, yeh _________ (m not mentioning the name) hotel kahaan hai?
Passerby: Aage se left, aur phir ek kachchi sadak milegi, uspar chale jaana.
A: thanks.

They take the path explained by the passerby and soon reach their hotel. Arjun and Suraj go to the reception.
A: namaste, humne aapke hotel me do rooms book kiye the, Arjun Goenka ke naam se.
Receptionist: Yes sir, aapke rooms ready hai.
A: mujhe ek aur room chahiye. Abhi!
Receptionist: I am so sorry sir, lekin hamare paas koi extra rooms nahi hai. Yeh peak season hai, iss liye saare rooms booked hai. Sorry sir.
Arjun and Suraj look at each other and remember Manasvi's words "aur agar room nahi mila to?"
A: it's ok. Ek kaam kijiye, aap hamare rooms ki booking rakhiye, hum thodi der me wapas aate hai.
Receptionist: ok sir.

Arjun and Suraj come outside and Suraj tells Manasvi about the problem.
M: kya… ab kya hoga?
S: kuch nahi. Hum kisi aur hotel mein jaa rahe hai. Agar room mil gaye to yaha ki booking cancel kardenge.

They check out all other hotels, but because of the peak season, every hotel is full.
A: (standing outside a hotel) lagta hai hame wapas apne hotel jaana chahiye.
S: haan arjun, lekin manasvi…
A: main unse baat karunga. She'll be fine.
S: I hope so!

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hi guys, hey, thnx parvatisrikant. heres the next part.

In the car,
A: bhabhi, hamare paas koi choice nahi hai. Yaha kisi bhi hotel mein rooms nahi hai.
M: arjun, I can't do this.
S: ek minute. Iss waqt hum hotel chalte hai aur dekhte hai ke kya ho sakta hai.

They leave for hotel ________.
A: (to receptionist) kya kuch bhi nahi ho sakta? Sirf ek extra room chahiye hame…
Receptionist (going thru her records again) I am sorry sir, lekin do din tak aapko koi room khali nahi milega.
A: iss ka matlab do din baad hoga.
R: most probably sir.
A: ok.

Arjun goes outside and talks to suraj, manasvi n bhavri.
A: do din tak koi rooms nahi hai inn logo ke paas. Do din baad Shayad mil sakta hai.
M: to do din tak kya mujhe aur Suraj ko ek kamre me sona parega?
All of them fall silent. Just then,
B: ek raasta hai.
A: kya???
B: arjun, agar tum aur Suraj bhaiya ek room me so jao, to main aur Manasvi Bhabhi ek room me so sakte hai.
S: idea bura nahi hai…
M (firmly): nahi. Aisa kuch nahi hoga. Bhoomi, main aur Suraj ek room me adjust karlenge.
Suraj looks unbelievably at Manasvi.
B: are you sure bhabhi?
M: haan bhoomi. Ab chale?

They head to their rooms, while an employee of the hotel brings up their bags.
In A-Bs room,
A: wow bhavri, kitna accha room hai na? Kitna romantic…
B: (absentmindedly, becuz she is busy helping the employee bring the bags in) hmmm…

Meanwhile, in S-Ms room,
S: Manasvi, tumne bhoomi ki baat ka mana kyun kar diya?
M: Suraj, woh dono bhi to yaha par rest karne aaye hai. Unhe thodi privacy ki zaroorat hai.
S: oh. Accha, main abhi reception pe phone karke ek extra bed order karta hoon.
M: kyun?
Suraj looks weirdly at Manasvi, who is smiling widely.
S: woh.
M: Suraj, yaha itna bada bed to hai. Hum dono yaha fit ho jayenge…
S: haan lekin… will you be comfortable?
M: haan Suraj, I'll be fine. Kyun, tumhe kya laga?
S: umm, kuch nahi…
M: Suraj!!! (Goes near him and gives him a hug. This surprises Suraj, as she had never done this before)

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