Veeba Tagathon:Suhaagraat ki SIYAPPA! !:Part-14{1},page-65 updated!

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: sunny303
ahahahah loved it!!!

Awesome update Ellie...you stayed true to the story but added your own umpph...poor Ballu, what will he do?!!

Looking forward to the next update😃

Thank you dear🤗 I am so glad u loved it😳...I am also clueless what will Ballu do?😆

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

[NOTE:Belated Eid mubarak to all u friends!🤗Ok dis is an update by Meilliures..Thank u Meilliures buddy!🤗So please read on and keep givn ur likes and comments!😉Let's move on wid da Tagathon and Baldev's Suhaag raat ki SIYAPPA!!!😉😈]

Part-3(By ElireEli),page-9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110855569

Part-4.

(Author:Meilliures..⭐️)

Baldev's heart was thudding loud as he saw Ranvi coming closer towards him. He wanted to ask Ranvi about the Suhag Raat steps so that he can impress Veera at their wedding night

''Oh god he is coming closer! I have to ask him. He is the better choice. He z an experienced man so he would teach me the steps properly! But how? We don't have a proper relationship. And if I ask him he will make a big scene or he may go and tell gunjan! Chee that will be embarrassing! What can I do?''

SNAP

''Baldev um asking u something. Why don't you reply me''

Baldev came out of his thoughts and looked at Ranvi with horrified eyes

''Woh who. . What did u ask?''

Ranvi was confused

''Hmmm I was asking you whether you have prepared for the drama! Did you memorise your dialogues'?

''Huh wo Ranvi.. um not ready. My friends explained me the steps. But i don't remember most of the steps! If you could help me I'll be grateful to you''

Ranvi was shocked! What steps is he talking about??

''Baldev what are you saying. What steps are you taking about? This is not a dance competition. U have to act Baldev''

''Ya I have to act and impress Veera! So can you please explain me the steps of Suh... woh nai.. i just forgot the last step in the drama. Now I remembered.. u don't need to worry Ranvi!!

Ranvi was surprised! He wants to impress Veera! They are going to get married soon and he is trying to impress Veera in every single thing! He thought to himself and smiled at him and left the place

Now baldev was confused! ! ''Whom will I ask about the steps! It's would've been embarrassing if I had asked Ranvi because he is Veera's veerji! ! What if I ask Veera!! She is going to be my wife! And she is educated! So obviously she'd know better than others! She doesn't need to be married to know these steps. She would've learnt about this in Delhi. So I'll ask her about the step today night''

Baldev was walking here and there! ! He wanted to know the steps from Veera as soon as possible

Finally as he expected his beeji gave him milk and went to sleep

He jumped out through the window and went to veera's place. He saw her sleeping peacefully! A smile crept on his lips. He didn't want to wake her up. He just wanted to admire her features and that innocent face! He saw her lips pouting! He just wanted to taste it and he bent to kiss her! As soon as his lips touched hers Veera woke up with a thud and pushed him away! !

Veera was shocked to see someone standing next to her and at the next moment she realised that it was Baldev.

At the same time Baldev was shocked at his act!! How can he kiss her like that. He just wanted to ask for Suhaag Raat steps. But what did he just do?

Veera got off from the bed

''Oye Baldev. What are you doing here at this time? I know that we are going to get married but that doesn't mean that you can come into my room at this time! Get out Baldev''

''Stop it Veera!! I wanted to ask you something. I can't stop myself from asking it!! Please clear my doubt Veera. I can't sleep without knowing this''

''What do you want to know Baldev? That too at this time??''

''Veera. . I just wanted to ask.. woh can u.. can you.. i. Just.. can u tell me how to.. woh veera''

''Oye why are you stammering? ? Ask me properly. I'll explain you''

''Veera woh. . Can you explain me how to act and what to do in our wedding night? I want to impress u at that night. U know na.. 1st impression is the best impression. So can you explain me?

Veera was shocked. She didn't know how to react and what to explain! But soon her shock vanished and she laughed out aloud!!

''So baldev. U want me to explain about the steps of Suhaag Raat right Baldev? I will explain you by showing a demo. What say Baldev? ''

Baldev was shocked is an understatement. He didn't know how to react!! Before he could think anything Veera pushed him on to the bed and fell on top of him..

[Okay the next writer tagged in this tagathon is Lovelyvb or Saffa!😛Go ahead wid dis Saffa and dnt forget to tag another writer..Dis is getting more and more interesting!😆😉]

Part-5(By Lovelyvb),page-20:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111018859

Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago

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Muna

@DazzilerDizzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Haye,Haye! Veera is gonna do a Demo 😉Now i can't wait!☺️Continue ASAP!!

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Once again me pissed dt i cudnt like da post but bt dis ws truly awsum Meilliures! ⭐️ Loved it!So da ball is now in Veera's court.. 😆 Things might get interesting here..I wonder wat Saffa wil do wid dis! 😆 Once agn thank u so much for a beautitul update!U write so well! 👏 Thank u! 😉

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ElireEli

@ElireEli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Meilliures dear that was truly awesome!⭐️...Veera will teach him😆 I am so sure something is cooking up in her mind..😆...lets see how it turns out. You are an amazing writer dear...why don't you write often?😳..I read an OS of yours long back😕...plz plz write often...and thanks for the wonderful update🤗

Saffa...best of luck dear! 😉 Eagerly waiting for your version😃

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Pizza_maniac

@Pizza_maniac

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

It was truly wonderful and damn entertaining 😆
Loves it loved it loved it!! Great job guys! 👍🏼

Edited by Jyo_Veebafan - 11 years ago

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Roshini Mathews

@RoshiniManeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

wow yaar...awesome update... LOved it...Demo for suhaag raat that to from the dulhan herself would be first in world history...this is gonna be so so funny. Thank u so much dear...🤗

Lovely...all the very best... Have read ur works.. U r a wonderful writer...Looking forward☺️ for the demo😆

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Awesome Update VeeBa Love u 😳😃

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HarshaMawra

@HarshaMawra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ
Once again me pissed dt i cudnt like da post but bt dis ws truly awsum Meilliures! ⭐️ Loved it!So da ball is now in Veera's court.. 😆 Things might get interesting here..I wonder wat Saffa wil do wid dis! 😆 Once agn thank u so much for a beautitul update!U write so well! 👏 Thank u! 😉

Hahahah thank u so much sina! Um expecting a hot update😳

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HarshaMawra

@HarshaMawra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: ElireEli
Meilliures dear that was truly awesome!⭐️...Veera will teach him😆 I am so sure something is cooking up in her mind..😆...lets see how it turns out. You are an amazing writer dear...why don't you write often?😳..I read an OS of yours long back😕...plz plz write often...and thanks for the wonderful update🤗
Saffa...best of luck dear! 😉 Eagerly waiting for your version😃

Aww thank u so much dude!! I'll try to write whenever um free!

Love ya😉