**RANJAN SS TERE LIYE part 10(nri exposed)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys.. this is my first try on an OS on this forum.. although i have written FF's on other forums before..

so do comment and let me know if u like it.. then will write more..😳😊

thank you

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Its gunjan's friend's sangeet and mehandi day.. and gunjan all dressed in a beautiful lehanga choli with her long choti.. the curls on her face are kissing her rosy cheeks.. with handful of bangles and shimmery jhumkas.. she looks like a divine princess..

Ranvi arrives there in his dark blue and black sherwani.. absolutely the most handsome guy around..

Veera walks into the celebration place and sees gunjan chatting and laughing away with the other girls.. all are applying mehandi

V - gunjan didi..

G - are, tu aa gayi.. aur...ranvi kithe hai?

V- veerji utthe unke doston ke naal baithe hain.. aur aap kitni sohni lag rahi ho gunjan didi.. bilkul ek pari ki tarah..

G - bas oye.. ped pe chadana hai mujhe.. (laughs).. chal tub hi mehandi lagva le..

Dekh meri mehandi..

She shows her both hands with mehandi and smiles

Some girls come and take them to dance as the music is played.. first some of the girls start dancing and others stand around and clap..

Jaggi goes out to all the guys - are sab chalo, uthe to kudiyon ne sangeet shuru bhi kar diya hai..

All move inside to see the dances.. ranvi sits there and smiles as he sees all the guys rushing inside to see the dance.. but in the end he too gets up and goes inside..

One by one the girls are dancing and pulling in one another to replace.. finally one of them pull in gunjan.. as she comes in the centre and starts dancing... ranvi enters moving the curtain.. his heart beat increases as he sees gunjan swaying to the music..

Aww she looked so stunning..

As she swirls and turns around to see ranvi enter, an innocent smile appears on her face.. ranvi's eyes glitter as he smiles back feeling bit shy and totally mesmerized seeing her... he moves back and away from the room..

Veera notices the smiles exchanged and gets into some thoughts..

Gunjan calls another girl to dance and she moves out and stands next to veera..

G- veera mainu pyaas lagi hai.. abhi paani peeke aati hoon..

And she runs out of the room.. and she runs past ranvi who is standing in the hall.. and suddenly she runs into ranvi..

Ranvi holds her shoulders to prevent her from falling.. gunjan doesn't hold him to aboid his kurta getting stained from the mehandi in her hands..

Ranvi slowly gives her balance and she tries to move back..

G - aah.. ruk ranvi.. mere jhumke ..

Her jhumka is stuck to ranvi's kurta button.. ranvi looks at the stuck jhumka and then looks at gunjan.. he is totally aww struck by her as he looks on and slowly tries to remove the jhumka trying not to hurt her..

But he is not able to remove it..

G - ranvi.. mainu dard ho raha hai..

She says in a soft subtle voice.. and she looks up into his eyes which are suddenly full of concern for her pain..

He slowly takes her to a wall and supports her to stand.. and pulls out the jhumka from her ears..

Gunjan lifts her face and moves back her hair and starts to go.. and ranvi suddenly speaks up

R - gunjan .. tera jhumka..

He is holding it in his hand and shows it to her..

Gunjan looks at her hand and looks back at ranvi in confusion..

He walks upto her and goes close to her ears.. and slowly takes his fingers into her hair and moves it behind her ears.. gunjan just closes her eyes..

He has a faint smile on his face as he slowly pierces the jhumka into her ears.. gunjan starts to blush and touches her hand to his cheeks and runs away.

Ranvi moves back and smiles and touches his cheeks and rubs away the little mehandi that gunjan applied on his face..


os 2 - page 4 - TERE LIYE part 1 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3856393&PID=98144552&#p98144552

TERE LIYE PART 2 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98147494

tere liye-part 3-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98472702

tere liye part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98531692


tere liye part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98890934


tere liye part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98971636

tere liye part 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99432437


tere liye part 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99526338


tere liye part 9

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3856393&TPN=24&#p99985014


tere liye part 10

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3856393&TPN=28&#p100367583

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its lovely yaar...i kept on blushing the whole time while reading it lol ☺️
please do continue 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MrsArnavSingh

its lovely yaar...i kept on blushing the whole time while reading it lol ☺️
please do continue 👍🏼

Thank u dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: khuwahish

So cute... Loved it...


hey buddy.. u are on this forum too :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very Nice!!! 😃...>Awww that gunjan and Ranvi pic...They look sooo cute...😳😳😳
Edited by divyadollar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow namrata jee... very beautiful 👍🏼
and so cute... lovely...
and btw, that display picture of yours? is it you in it?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yeah rim. Thats me in d pic
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow you look so cute... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os
i want this to happen in show such a cute scene it will be
thanks for pm namrata and write more and more OS on ranvi-gunjan
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sparkle2985

nice os

i want this to happen in show such a cute scene it will be
thanks for pm namrata and write more and more OS on ranvi-gunjan


thanks sparkle.. i am writing one more scene.. i will update it and send it to. u.. yaar but i see very less interest of readers 😭.. hope it picks up..

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