**RANJAN SS TERE LIYE part 10(nri exposed) - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
very beautifully written namrata😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Goonjta hoon jo dil mein toh hairaan ho kyun
Main tumhaare hi dil ki toh awaaz hoon

A tear flows out her eyes as she hears his heart beats.. but when she opens her eyes he is not there.. she can hear him but she looks around and cant see him..


Loved this part so very much NJ, the whole OS was as usual very nice, touched my heart... and i mentioned these lines coz i donno why but this made me cry 😭 very emotional ...well done.. and sorry for late comment...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u all guys for all ur comments.. willupdate very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really awesome... I think after this I will become frequent viewer of Veera...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: VindhyaMounika

Really awesome... I think after this I will become frequent viewer of Veera...

hey how r u yar.. welcome to this forum.. yeah do watch.. there is some absolutely amazing chemistry in the leads.. both couples.. u will sure enjoy
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Posted: 12 years ago
u write very well
lovng it !
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gunjan is sitting in her room and crying in a corner.. noone is at home and veera comes to meet her..

Veera keeps looking for gunjan every where "gunjan didi.. kahan ho aap"

She goes up the stairs and to to her room and she sees it's a dark room and gunjan is sitting in a corner holding her knees and her head down..

Veera is a bit surprised and goes to her.. " gunjan didi.. ki hoya?"

She lifts her head to see gunjan in tears.. gunjan suddenly hugs veera and cries more..

" veera.. mainu yeh byah nahi karma.. nahi karna hai yeh byah mainu.. mainu pyar ho gaya usse veera.. manu pyar ho gaya usse"

Veera holds gunjan tight.. " yeh ki keh rahe ho gunjan didi.. kisse pyar hogaya hai aapko?"

" mere iss shadi nu rukwa de veera.. veera kuch kar.. mainu pehle yeh kyu nahi samajh aayi.. yeh pyar hi hai" gunjan says crying

Veera also in tears and asks again" kis se pyar ho gaya hai aapko gunjan didi"

" Ranvi se.. " gunjan speaks up.. veera's eyes go wide open in surprise and happiness..and she suddenly smiles up with tears..

Gunjan suddenly realizes what she has done.. she told her feelings to none other than veera.. she suddenly feels an embarresment.. she moves away from veera and is unable to look into her eyes..

Veera speaks up " yeh to badi acchi khabar hai gunjan didi.. aapne acha kiya mainu bata ke.. mainu lagta hai ki apko balwant tayaji se baat karni chahiye.. mainu pata hai ki veerji ke liye aap se achha koi ho hi nahi sakta" she wipes off gunjans tears

" lekin veera mai kya kahoon papaji se.. mainu to yeh bhi nahi pata ki ranvi ke dil mein kya hai.." gunjan says in a worry..

" ab to mainu hi kuch karna padega gunjan didi.. aap pareshaan na ho.. veerji ki dil ki baat main jaroor nikalungi" she says and hugs gunjan and goes away..

Gunjan wipes her tears and looks at guru sahibs photo and prays..

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Veera goes home and thinks of what to do.. then she gets an idea as to how to know what her veerji wants..

Suddenly an idea hits her.. she calls dalveer and jaggi "dalveer veerji. Aap mera ek kaam kar sakte hai kya?"

Ranvi is walking home from his khet.. he keeps thinking that he dint answer gunjans call since two days and how she might be feeling.. but she has stopped calling him.. he feels bit disturbed and takes his phone to call her.. but then again he chides his thoughts and puts his phone back into his pocket..

Suddenly he bumps into dalveer who is running.. " oye dalveere kahaan bhag raha hai"

Dalveer is panting " acha hua tu mil gaya ranvi.. mai teny hi dhoond raha tha.. tujhe pata nahi ki.. gunjan da accident ho gaya hai.. bahut zakhmi hai who haspatal wich bharti kiya hai usse"

Ranvi is totally taken aback.. " yeh ki keh rata hai tu.. yeh kab hua?" he says and starts running to the hospital..

Suddenly he stops when he sees gunjan standing on the way somewhere.. he is shocked to see her... he runs to her and grabs her and sees her and he is in little tears.. " tu theek to hai? Ki hua tujhe" he says and sees that she is fine..

Gunjan is bit shocked " ki hua ranvi.. main to bilkul theek hoon.. aisi kyu pooch raha hai.. waise yeh sawaal to mujhe poochna chahiye ranvi.. do din se tu mera phone nahi utha raha hai.. ki hi gaya hai tujhe bata mainu"

Veera is watching all from a distance..

Ranvi suddenly doesn't answer her and starts to walk away.. gunjan feels bad and runs away home..

And veera confronts ranvi on the way suddenly.. " kya hua veerji.. aap itna kyu pareshaan ho gaye?"

Ranvi behaves a bit calm " who veerakidi.. pata nahi kyu dalveer ne mujhse kaha ki gunjan ka accident ho gaya hai aur who hospital mein hai.. isiliye main thoda"

" veerji.. aap gunjan did ke liye har baar itna pareshaan kyu ho jate hain?" veera seriously asks

Ranvi tries to look away " who veera.. meri sabse achi dost hai who.. fikar karta hoon main uski .. aur kuch .."

"veerji.. gunjan did aapki itni acchi dost hai.. aapko kabhi un se pyar nahi hua?" she suddenly asks..

Ranvi is just taken aback and keeps looking at veera.. " yeh kya keh rahi hai veera.. gunjan ki saggai ho gayi hai.. aur jald hi uska byah hona wala hai"

" kya aap gunjan did se pyar karte hai veerji?" veera sternlt questions again

"yeh sab se koi farak nahi padta hai veera" ranvi tries to chode away the question

" veerji.. aapko meri sau hai bataiye? Kya aap gunjan did se pyar karte hain?" she asks keeping ranvi's hand on her head..

Ranvi is in bit tears... he thinks for a while.. and then slowly confesses by nodding his head in yes..

Veera has a big smile.. and she hugs ranvi immediately.. "mainu pata tha veerji.. aur main bahut khush hoon aapke liye.. aur gunjan didi ke liye.."

Ranvi holds veera in his arms but keeps thinking of what he has said.. " nahi veerakidi.. ab is baat se koi farak nahi padta.. gunjan ka byah hone wala hai.. aur mein.."

"nahi veerji.. mere veerji ko duniya ki har khushi ka haq hai.. aur jisse aap pyar karte hain who aapko jaroor milegi.. ab jo karna hai who mein karoongi" she looks up to ranvi and says in confidence..

Both go home..

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Next day is karwachauth..

Gunjan is sitting by the window of her room esrly in the morning and thinking about ranvi..

Suddenly bansuri comes to her room.. " are gunjan puttar.. tu tayyar ho gayi.. chal neeche.. tere hone wale sasural se sargi aa gayi hai.. ab kuch kha le. Purs din vrath jo rakhna hai tere hone wale pati ki lambi umar ke waaste haan"

Gunjan is not interested.. " beeji yeh sab jaroori hai kya.. jab byah ho jayega to rakh loongi"

But bansuri gets angry " dekh gunjan.. mujhse jyada behes mat kar.. jo kahan hai who kar..ab neeche chal"

Gunjan is upset.. but she goes down and sees lots of women are there.. anyways she sits down eats her food.. she eats with tears in her eyes and runs back to her room soon after.. bansuri senses something not right..

she tells to herself.. " yeh byah jaldi nipat jaye to acha hoga"

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Ranvi is sitting in his room and thinking about gunjan.. veera enters his room.. " veerji.."

Ranvi smaps out of his thoughts " haan veera.."

"veerji aapko pata hai na ki aaj kya hai.." veera says

" veerakidi.. mainu pata hai par.." ranvi replies back..

" veerji.. aaj aapko apne dil ki baat aaj to batana hi padega.." she starts bothering ranvi

" veerakidi.. aaj main kaise.. kitne log honge uthe.." he tries to explain

" veerji.. aap koshish to kijiye.. agar aap apne dil ki baat nahi bataoge toh gunjan didi aapko milegi kaise? Aap bahut galat kar rahe ho veerji yeh chup rekhke.." she says and goes away

" are veerakidi sun to.." ranvi says but then in vain.. he thinks of what to do..

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Its evening and gunjan is getting dressed.. and she is sitting in front of ther mirror and wesring her earrings.. she remembers all her moments with ranvi and is happy that she is clear of her feelings for him..

She came down as all the women are collected to break their fast and their respective husbands also there.. gunjan is bit lost and not interested..

They all go to the terrace as the moon is visible now... gunjan also takes her tray and goes up and sits there.. she is just a spectator as all the husbands break the fast of their respective wives.. and all happy and luaughing..

Gunjan is holding her tray and sitting in a corner.. bansuri sees her and is irritated..

All women go down for dinner.. one lady sees gunjan sitting there.. "are gunjan.. ki hoya.. dharam nahi aaya kya?"

Bansuri interrupts " are aisi koi baat nahi.. ab unka pind bhi to thoda door hai na.. aata hi hoga munda.. aap sab chaliye na.. khana lag gaya hai.. dharam bhi jald hi aa jayega.." she smiles at the women and takes them down..

Gunjan also goes down and sits and sees everyone having dinner and bansuri gets busy helping them..

Just then the phone rings.. bansuri answers the call and she has a shocked facd.. " haanji theek hai jee..jee" she says in disappointment..

Some lady asks her " ki hoya bansuri.. sab theek hai na.."

Bansuri smiles at her " haanji sab theek hai..aap aur khana lijiye na.." she says and goes to gunjan who I sitting in a corner..

She grabs her hand and says " gunjan meri baat sunn.. ae dharam di photo le aur upar jaa kar chaand ko dekh kar apna vrat tod le.. woh aaj aane nahi wala.. yeh le" bansuri hands over dharams photo and pushes her to go..

Gunjan is totally uninterested.. she goes up and sits there.. then anyways she decides to break her fast..

She puts dharams pic on the compound with a stone to support.. then she takes the channi and looks at the moon through it with teary eyes.. she closes her eyes and suddenly she hears some foot step behind her.. her heart starts to beat faster.. she feels a gush of emotions inside her..

And she turns back with closed eyes and the channi.. she slowly opens her eyes to see ranvi standing in front of her.. she is in disbelief and she keeps looking at him teary eyed.. and he too keeps looking at her..

Suddenly she snaps out of her thought and puts down the channi.. and ranvi holds her hand suddenly.. he comes close to her and bends down and lifts the cup of water and holds it to her lips..

Gunjan keeps looking at him and without a word she accepts the water and sips it.. he picks up a sweet and makes her eat it.. as she eats it a tear rolls down her eyes.. he wipes away her tears slowly and she bends down to touch his feet.. but he holds her not allowing her to do so and kisses her forehead..

And she hugs him tight.. they don't utter a single word and just start living the moment.. the moment of their true love for each other..

Suddenly they hear a voice.. "gunjan .. gunjan.." bansuri is screaming for her..

Gunjan suddenly moves from ranvi's hand and she looks down in case her mother has come.. " jee beji aa rahi hoon" she says going down the stairs and seeing if her mom doesn't come upstairs..

When she looks back ranvi has left.. and there is a note lying on her plate .. she picks it up and reads " mere khet de paas tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon".. she smiles and hides the letter and goes down with her thali..smiling..

The photo of dharam she leaves it there only.. and it flies away in the wind..
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i hope u all liked this part.. do leave ur wonderful comments.. one song follows this part.. thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it like anything...Waiting for the song now , update soon :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angelheart19

Loved it like anything...Waiting for the song now , update soon :-)

I wil try to update tomo. Thanks dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
The best part for me is the fast breakin and dharams photo flyin away...

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