**RANJAN SS TERE LIYE part 10(nri exposed) - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fiza1995

First of all a very sincere sorry for not commenting on previous updts.
Loved this part alot.
U write wid a grace 👏
Thanks for d pm. 😊


thanks a lot fiza.. all thesec wonderful comments r very encouraging 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiru2992

superb...:-)

plzz do continue asap...:-)


i will soon.. thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWWW RanJan soo adorable!!😳 really loved gunjan's confession and also love how you made the "I love you" ranjan style - aka - speaking/understanding only through the eyes and actions, not words!
plz continue asap as ur writing is very good, 👏 and i also am loving reading about an uninterupted ranjan story (nothing aginst veeba fans as i like them also, but my love for ranjan is (already) too much😆 and growing everyday😳)

can't wait for the khet scene😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsm i lovd it Waiting continue soon btw ty for pm 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sasha_Yuvreen

AWWW RanJan soo adorable!!😳 really loved gunjan's confession and also love how you made the "I love you" ranjan style - aka - speaking/understanding only through the eyes and actions, not words!

plz continue asap as ur writing is very good, 👏 and i also am loving reading about an uninterupted ranjan story (nothing aginst veeba fans as i like them also, but my love for ranjan is (already) too much😆 and growing everyday😳)

can't wait for the khet scene😉


hey thanks shasha... ur comments are amazing.. i am gonn continue soon.. and yeah a song coming up soon.. i will also write a veeba story in this i have decided so i also get veeba fans reading my ss...
yeah i love ranjan and they are defo growing on me by the day.. the inncoence of ranvi's love makes me crazy seriously
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samud_kriyansh

Awsm i lovd it Waiting continue soon btw ty for pm 🤗


i will soon.. thanks buddy...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Gunjan comes down from the stairs.. suddenly one kid comes to her and hands her something.. it's a gift.. she is bit confused and she takes the gift and runs to her room and starts to open it..

It's a kamar bandh... gunjan takes it in her hand and blushes seeing it.. then she decides to try it.. but she is wearing a salwar kameez.. so she just hits her forehead and smiles for her being silly..

Then she gets an idea..

Bansuri starts to call her.. "gunjan .. gunjan.. kithe hai tu.. khana nahi khana kya?" gunjan is irritated... gunjan pretends to faint when bansuri enters..

Bansuri gets tensed and holds her and puts her into bed.. " beeji.. mainu kuch theek nahi lag raha hai.. main so jaoon?" she asks bansuri

Bansuri makes an irritated face .. " cha theek hai.. khana ithe hi bhijwa deti hoon.. so jaa ab.." she says and goes away..

Gunjan is very happy.. she receives the food and locks the room door.. and she starts searching her cupboard..

Finds a very simple pink lehanga and wears it.. she wears very minimum simple jewellery .. just like how ranvi likes to see her.. in simplicity..

She takes the kamarbandh to wear it.. but then she gets a bit naughty and escapes from her window slowly as everyone is busy in the house and noone will bother about her presence..

She runs away to meet ranvi in the khet

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I have added one song os here.. hope u will enjoy it.. I think it suits the situation..


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XfWWD322WQgI[/YOUTUBE]

Gunjan is running from her house to the khet.. smiling and feeling shy.. she remembers all the moments with ranvi.. from her childhood to the karwachauth.. she looks at the kamarbandh in her hand and blushes.. but she keeps running to the khet

Ranvi is sitting on the little roof made with bamboos in the khet and waiting for gunjan.. but suddenly he senses that she has come..

Re baandhe, re baandhey, re baandhay
Aise mohe baandhe
Haan mohe baandhe wo nainon kee dor se
Hai ye pyaar kaisaa
is kaa raaz hai kyaa bol de
Keh bhee de..

Gunjan reaches the khet and looks for ranvi every where.. he stands up from the roof and sees gunjan.. he gets lost in her looks.. she was looking like an angel from the heaven.. her simple lehanga and open hair and subtle jewellery.. he has a light smile on his face.. but gunjan dint notice him there.. and she is looking around..

Kabhi sukoon, kabhi laage balaa hai
Kabhi duaa, kabhi laage halaa hai
Nainon se ye kyaa ho chalaa hai
Bariyaa o bairiyaa, mujhe sataa naa bairiya

Ranvi steps down from the roof slowly and starts walking towards gunjan. But he suddenly stands still with folded arms waiting for her to turn back and see him standing there..

She suddenly turns back and sees him too.. her heart starts beating faster.. she clutches her hand which has the kamarbandh in it.. she starts to feel shy and tilts her eyes down ..

Then they both start walking towards each other .. noone around.. just the green khet and the open night sky.. only the stars are the witness of their beautiful love..

Kaisi ye peer jo raatein jaage
Taaron ko chhaantey re

As they come close to each other.. ranvi holds both her hands.. gunjan slowly lifts her head and looks into ranvi's eyes.. which are filled with so much love and passion for her.. ranvi softly says " gunjan..main tumhe bahut chahta hun.. bachpan se le kar aaj tak sirf ek hi ladki ke waaste yeh dil dhadka hai.. main tumhari zindagi ki har aarzoo, har khwab ko poora karna chahta hoon gunjan.. aur baki ki zindagi ka har pal tumhare saath jeena chahta hoon.."

Tears flow out of her eyes.. she just hugs him instantly and holds him very tight just to not let go of him..

" haan ranvi.. mainu bhi tujhse bahut pyar hai.. bas galti itni ki der se samajh aaya.. par ab joh samajh gayi hoon to tujhse kabhi door nahi rehna chahti"

Ranvi also gets teary eyed.. and they both share a romantic hug...

Palkon kee dibiyon mein rehte
Khwaab hain udne ko kehte
Haathon se chhootaa, chhootaa chalaa hai jiyaa..
Bairiyaa..

Bariyaa o bairiyaa, mujhe sataa naa bairiya

Bariyaa o bairiyaa, mujhe sataa naa bairiya

It suddenly starts to rain.. ranvi holds her hand and takes into a corner shade .. ranvi starts to dust the water off his hair.. he suddenly looks at gunjan who is holding the kamarbandh in her palm towards him..

Udne lagee hain khamoshi se
Baaton kee parchiyaan

Ranvi smiles and takes the kamarbandh from her palm.. and slowly moves towards her.. and corners her to a bamboo stick.. suddenly she loses balance but he holds her waist to balance.. then he comes real close and slowly ties the kamarbandh around gunjans waist.. she just closes her eyes in seduction.. he wipes away some water drops on her waist with his hands..

Hone lage aadhe aadhay
Aankhon se hi kayi vaade
Saansein jalaaye ishq ki sardiyaan
Bairiyaa..

She opens her eyes and looks into ranvi's eyes.. then she slowly lifts her hand and takes off the engagement ring from her finger and tosses it away..

And then hug each other again and just feeling lost in each others arms

Bairiya o bairiyaa, mujhe sataa naa bairiyaa
Kabhi duaa kabhee kabhee halaa
Bairiyaa o bairiya..

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Posted: 12 years ago
RES!!
will read all parts n comment!
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally confession ho gaya
nd very romantic update
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super se uper waala update tha
very nice namrataji
keep writing more n more 😊

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