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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: namratavyas


thanks sana.. 2nd one on the way 😊.. i much needed encouragement



ya dear im here for encouraging u people...u r so talented..👏.waiting for ur update...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OS - 2
TERE LIYE

Ranvi wakes up and holds his head in a bad pain.. he gets up and sees himself in the middle of the forest and its dark.. suddenly he shouts.. "gunjan.. gunjan" and gets up and sees her lying near a tree..

He runs to her and sees that she is fine.. " gunjan .. gunjan.. theek hai tu?"

She wakes up and rubs her eyes and gets up to see.. " yeh kahan hai hum ranvi?" she asks in surprise..

He just sits down and thinks about what all had happened..

Gunjan is engaged to a guy from another pind.. his name is dharam.. he is the son of the sarpanch of that pind and also an NRI from Canada.. gunjan doesn't really like him so much but for her mother she agreed for this alliance..

That morning dharam with his friends..

" oye aaj kuch karma da dil kar raha hai.. chal apna plan ko kaam pe lag ate hain" he laughs and all his friends also encourage him..

" gunjan jee hum aa rahe hain.. aaj to aapko apna banana hi hai" he smirks

Dharam with his friends reached balwants house and entered to see balwant sitting there..

" sasriyakaal papaji" he said and touched balwants feet

" aree.. jeeta reh puttar.. tum sab ithe? Kuch khaas baat hai ki?" balwant asked in surprise

" haan jee papaji.. yeh sab na mere dost hai .. kuch dilli se aaye hain aur kuch Canada se.." dharam introduces the 4 guys and 2 girls with him..

All of them fold their hands in namaste

Balwant - "acha to puttar tum sab aa hi gaye ho to.. yehi khana khake jaana.. gunjan puttar dekho dharam aaya hai"

Gunjan comes down and sees dharam.. she is bit nervous.. but still she smiles to greet him..

Dharam - "are nahi papaji.. who kya hai na hum sab ne aaj ke dopehar ka khana who highway de paas wale dhabe pe karne ka socha hai.. aur hum to yahan gunjan ko bhi saath mein le jane ke waaste aaye hain"

Balwant is unsure.. " who puttar mein samajta hoon. Par abhi tum dono ka byah nahi hua hai.. aur ek jawaan beti nu yuh bahar bhejna sahi nahi hoga"

Gunjan also agrees

Bansuri interrupts.. " oye sarpanch ji.. yeh ki keh rahe hain? Dharam aur gunjan ki sagai ho chuki hai.. aur shadi bhi jaldi hi ho jayegi.. ab dono bahar jayenge saath waqt bitayenge to thoda ek doosre ko jaan lenge.. ab saath poori zindagi bitani hai"

Balwant - par bansuri ji"

Dharam - " haan papaji.. aur hum to sirf khana khane jaa rahe hain.. aur humare saath to do aur ladkiyan bhi hai.. aur din ka samay hai.. aap chinta mat kijiye.. main gunjan da acha khayaal rakhoonga"

Bansuri - jaane bhi deejiye.. apna hone wale damaad pe bharosa rakhiye.. jaa gunjan puttar tayaar ho ja"

Dharam and his friends share a smirk..

Gunjan is unsure but still gets ready to go.. she tries calling ranvi but he doesn't answer her call..

And they leave.. gunjan is uncomfortable between dharams friends .. as all are too modern.. even the girls are dresses in short clothes and different attitude..

They reach the dhaba... its very far from the pind.. on a highway... in a desserted place..

They all get onto the table and order many things.. including beer and other alcoholic drinks..

Gunjan feels a bit restless... she tries calling ranvi again but he dint answer the call..

Dharam sits next to gunjan " gunjan itni pareshaan kyu ho.. sab enjoy kar rahe hain.. tum bhi enjoy karo.. itna chup mat raho.. main tumhare liye kuch peen eke liye mangata hoon.. orange juice peeyogi?"

Gunjan is uncomfortable .. but still agrees..

Dharam signals one dhaba guy.. the guy goes to get the juice.. but in the counter dharams friend is standing and he puts something into the juice..

Then he gives the juice to gunjan..

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Ranvi is sitting and talking to some guy about seeds and fertilizers etc.. and they finish talking and he leaves..

He drives a distance and takes out his phone to speak to his beeji.. and sees gunjans calls..

"are.. gunjan ne do baar mainu kyu phone kiya?"

He calls back.. but gunjans phone is off.. ranvi is worried..

He calls his house.. and bansuri answers the call..

Ranvi - hello bansuri taiji..

Bansuri - haan bol ranvi puttar .. ki hoya.. sarpanch jee se baat karma hai ki

Ranvi - nahi taiji.. who menu gunjan se baat karma hai.. usne mujhe pehle phone kiya that.. par maine uthaya nahi..

Bansuri - gunjan to ghar vich nahi hai.. woh to bahar gayi hai.. dharam aur uske doston ke saath khane pe dhabe..

Ranvi is bit worried

"taiji.. aapne use akele bhaj diya?"

Bansuri gets angry - oye ranvi.. hume mat sikha.. who uska mangetar hai...

Ranvi - par phir bhi taiji

Banuri - ranvi.. tu dost hai na gunjan ka.. to dost ban ke reh.. uski zindagi mein zyada dakhal dene ki zaroorat nahi..

And she disconnects the phone

Ranvi is worried.. suddenly he gets a call from the guy he had just met that he forgot something..

Ranvi drives back to the place he had met him.. fortunately the same dhaba where dharam has brought gunjan


part 2 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98147494


a like or comment will not hurt 😊

Edited by namratavyas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yaar intresting...very nice..👍🏼.ahh i cant wait next update...😒ab aage kya hoga...jaldi do yaar... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana2511

yaar intresting...very nice..👍🏼.ahh i cant wait next update...😒ab aage kya hoga...jaldi do yaar... 😊


aa raha hai.. 20 minutes mein..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25


OS 2 - TERE LIYE

part 2

Ranvi meets the guy again and finishes talking to him.. as he walking he hears two guys talking

" abe yaar.. yeh dharam to sikandar nikla.. aaj to gunjan de saath acha mazaa udane wala hai" they start laughing..

Ranvi is shocked.. and he sees that in a corner there is dharam and his friends and gunjan is also there..

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Gunjan has had her juice and feels bit dizzy.. and she holds her forehead in dizziness.. and she tries to stand..

The girls and dharam's friends smile and leave from there slowly.. dharam goes and sits near gunjan and puts his hand around her shoulder..

Gunjan is uncomfortable and pushes his hand away.. dharam holds her hand tightly and she is in tears.. " chod menu dharam." She screams..

But he grabs her hand very tightly...

Suddenly another hand grabs dharams hand.. gunjan looks up and sees ranvi..

He releases dharams hand from holding gunjan and pushes him away..

Gunjan runs behind ranvi and holds his arm and is in tears.. but she is also feeling bit dizzy due to the drink..

Dharams friends collect around them.. ranvi holds gunjans hand and starts to take her away..

Dharam comes in front of ranvi and puts his hand on ranvis chest to stop him " tu ise nahi le jaa sakta"

Ranvi pushes his hand away and starts walking again.. but dharam grabs ranvi's collar..

Ranvi gets real angry " bas dharam.. main gunjan nu yahan se le jaa raha hoon.. aur mainu koi nahi rok sakta.. tub hi nahi" he says firmly and pushes dharam away..

Dharam gets angry and punches ranvi on his face.. ranvi's lip starts to bleed.. he collects himself and punches back dharam and they both get into a fight..

Gunjan faints and falls on the ground.. dharams friends pick her up and put her into the jeep and start driving away..

Dharam pushes ranvi and runs and gets into the jeep and they drive away..

Ranvi takes his bike and start following them... they keep driving and get into the jungle.. and they drive deep into the jungle.. ranvi follows them..

Finally he manages to get in front of the jeep and stop them..

He pulls out the guy who was driving.. and takes gunjan out and rests her near a tree.. and ranvi gets into fight with all the guys.. ranvi manages to defeat them all and beats them into a pulp.. but one guy hits him on his head.. and ranvi falls on the floor..

The guys get scared and take the jeep and drive over ranvi's bike and drive away.. gunjan is left out on the ground and ranvi also goes unconscious..

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Ita late night and ranvi and gunjan are left in the jungle..

Ranvi checks his bike all destroyed..

Gunjan walks up to him.. " ranvi.. yeh sab meri wajah se hua.." she says in a sad tone..

" nahi gunjan.. main jaanta hoon ki teri koi galti nahi hai.. bas shukar hai kit u theek hai.. mainu maaf kar de.. maine tera phone nahi uthaya.. pehle hi baat ho gayi hoti to yeh naubat nahi aati" ranvi says holding gunjans shoulder..

Gunjan is teary eyed and she hugs him.. ranvi dint expect her to do that suddenly.. " tu nahi aata to aaj kya hota ranvi" she says

" ro mat gunjan.." he says and lifts her head.. " chal abhi hume baahar ka raasta dhoondana hoga"

Gunjan - " haan ranvi..papaji pareshaan ho rahe honge"

Its very dark and they are unable to find their way out of the jungle.. they keep walking..

Suddenly it starts to rain heavily..

They both hold hands and run under a tree.. ranvi notices some hut like place in a distance.. " gunjan who dekh.. wahan koi ghar hai lagta hai.. chal" they both run inside..

Its pitch dark.. but then they are safe from rain..

Ranvi looks around and sees some things kept there.. and looked like someone lived there..

Gunjan starts to walk inside and ranvi onto a corner looking for some light..

He finds a lantern with some oil in it.. and some wood too.. he looks around and finds a match box and lights it.. " are gunjan.. yahan ek lalten hain..".. he lights the lantern and takes it high and turns back ..

He sees gunjan.. her hair is opened and she is drying her dupatta.. ranvi gets mesmerized into her as she looked so divinely beautiful in the faint light of the lantern.. he is unable to take his eyes off her..

She dusts her wet long hair andputs it back.. and wears her dupatta..

Ranvi looks away and brings down the lantern as he feels awkward getting attracted to her..

Gunjan smiles at him " are ranvi.. acha hua hume roshni ka thoda intezaam ho gaya"

Ranvi walks upto her and makes a bon fire.. he takes some old bedding and makes some place for gunjan to sleep..

"gunjan tu ithe so jaa.. hume savera hone ka intezaar karma hoga.. jaise hi subah ho jayegi.. hum yahan se nikalne ka raasta dhoond lenge..

Gunjan - "aur ranvi tu?"

" main uthe so jaoonga" he says

He goes and lies down in a distance opposite of gunjan.. and lies down on his back and puts his hand over his forehead..

Gunjan lies down on her bed and closes her eyes.. suddenly she hears a howl..she gets up in scare " yeh awaaz kya hai ranvi?"

" kuch nahi gunjan.. bhediya honga jungle ke" ithe nahi aayenge so jaa" ranvi says peacefully

" hum kal subah tak inka naashta to nahi banenge?" gunjan is worried .. ranvi doesn't reply.. she gets up and goes to see him.. and he has fallen asleep already..

" iss jungle mein bhi neend kaise aa sakti hai ise" she fumes and goes back to her bed and sits.. she hears the howls again and feels scared..

She takes off the jewellery she is wearing.. her jhumkas, bangles necklace all and puts it down and lies down

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Its morning and the sun rays hit ranvi's eyes.. he slowly opens his eyes and sees that its day already and rubs his eyes..

He tries to get up so that they can leave from the jungle.. suddenly he is pulled back.. he turns towards his side and sees gunjan holding his jacket with her one hand..

He looks at her face.. she is serenly sleeping with her dupatta draped around her and her one hand holding ranvis waist coat..

He gets totally lost in seeing her.. she is looking so simple with her open hair and no jewellery..so simple and yet so attractive.. he slowly puts her hair away from her face.. suddenly he controls his attraction and releases her hand from his coat..

Gunjan wakes up too.. ranvi stands up.. " who ranvi.. mainu bohot darr lag raha tha unn awaazo se.. aur tum so gaye the.. isiliye main ithe aake so gayi." She says innocently..

"koi gal nahi gunjan.. hume chalna hoga.. suraj nikal aaya hai" ranvi explains

Gunjan starts to wear her jewellery fast.. ranvi helps her with it .. but then they have to hurry up.. so he takes some and puts it into his pocket..

And they leave.. walking for sometime they find the main road.. and ranvi stops a truck to take a lift back to pind


to be continued...😊.. on monday..


do comment guys.. pls show some encouragement😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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namrata m coming here n dis veera forum first time, jst to read ut os...so its ranjan ss...beautiful loved it...and lived d Punjabi dialogues, its awesome. .continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asharkibiwi

namrata m coming here n dis veera forum first time, jst to read ut os...so its ranjan ss...beautiful loved it...and lived d Punjabi dialogues, its awesome. .continue soon.

thanks mariyam.. u r so sweet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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namrata its soo gud every scene is in front of my eyes...i easily imagine everything...u r a great writer...👏

ahh one whole day to go for monday..😒.its k thoda long update dena...waiting for read...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana2511

namrata its soo gud every scene is in front of my eyes...i easily imagine everything...u r a great writer...👏

ahh one whole day to go for monday..😒.its k thoda long update dena...waiting for read...😊

thanks sana. Tomo i m dead busy yar. I will update on monday. Wish some more ppl read and leave some comments. This forum has commentophobia
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb Veeba has engrossed my mind and so i don't much concentrate on ranjan but reading this i m really surprised and happy its awesome...👏

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