**RANJAN SS TERE LIYE part 10(nri exposed) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
ok so veera knws dat dey shld be together
nd gunjan was jealous becoz of pooja hmmm interesting
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Nice part namrata di loved it
Continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
last 2 parts were great...loving the way this story is progressing!
do continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Very sweet!
I'd like to read ur other works as well πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Thank u all guys.. i wil update tomo which will include song too :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
very cute, continue soon πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Namrataji Thanx for such Lovely,cute,romantic updates of Ranvi-Gunjan couple.U r just TTTooo awesome Mashallah.loved ur idea of adding A lovely song on the updates for the Lovebirds.πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘
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Ranvi, gunjan and veera all reach back to pritampura..throughout the journey gunjan is lost in thoughts and they both have no conversation.. ranvi drops gunjan home in the jeep and takes her luggage out of the jeep and leaves her till the door.. he hands over the keys on the jeep to her and leaves from there with his bag..

Gunjan goes inside her house but she keeps turning back to see ranvi walking away.. she keeps turning and back and waiting to see if he will turn back to see her.. but he doesn't.. suddenly she feels emotional but still walks inside the house..

Bansuri sees gunjan coming inside.. " oye gunjan.. tu aa gayi puttar.. kaisi thi shaadi?"

Gunjan is bit confused by the extra sweet behaviour of bansuri..

" jee beeji.. sab theek hi tha.."

"changa.. cha lab jaa ke thodi der aaram kar le.. aaj shaam nu ek party rakhi hai.. sab nu khane pe bulaya hai.. to ache se tayaar ho jaana " basuri says smilingly

" khane pe.. achanak.. kaisi party beeji" gunjan asks

" haan dharam aur uska parivaar aa raha hai.. aur saath mein kuch tere papaji ke dost bhi aa rahe hai.. kafi log aayenge.. toh achi tarah tayyar ho jaana.." bansuri orders and walks away to see the preparations"

Gunjan goes to her room and changes and freshens up.. she thinks of calling ranvi ..

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Ranvi on the other hand is in his room and is thinking about gunjan.. he has visions of his childhood.. when they were in school together and she used to go and talk to him in concern when he was upset.. and when veera went away to delhi how she used to come and console him and speak to him..

He gets visions of all the good times they had as kids.. then he remembers that her wedding is on the cards and also her engagement . he was present there..

Ranvi just blinks his eyes and comes out of his visions..

Suddenly he gets a call on his mobile.. he picks up and sees that its gunjan calling.. he keeps seeing his mobile for some time .. and just disconnects the call..

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Gunjan is ready for the evening with her beautiful orange salwar and as usual looking goegeous with her jewelry and all.. she is sitting in her room and keeps seeing her phone..

Over the day she has called ranvi atleast 15 times but he never answered her callnor called back..

She even called his house to know that he isn't there..

She starts to feel bad and avoided by him.. but then why is his avoidance mattering her soo much she feels..

Suddenly bansuri enters.. " gunjan puttar tu tayyar hai?" she asks and sees gunjan well dressed for the evening..

She just stands up and gives a forced smile to her mother.. and she smiles back.." to phir neeche chal.. mehmaan aa gaye hain"

Gunjan goes down and sees many people .. mostly unknown to her.. then she sees dharam who is wickedly smiling at her..

She starts to feel bit worried.. but then she says namaste to dharams mother and smiles..

All come and congratulate her and dharam fore their imoending marriage.. gunjan is all lost in between the guests and feels lonely...

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Guys I have added a song here.. please read the written part and the verses and then listen to the song and make ur imagination.. and u will really enjoy this part.. thanks

The song is imagination of gunjan through out..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ClierfoUdsQ[/YOUTUBE]

As she is sitting in a corner and thinking.. suddenly she notices ranvi in a corner and singing to her.. but then he vanishes in the crowd

Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan
Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan..

Gunjan gets up and starts to look around for him between the people and she sees everyones faces and cant see ranvi again... suddenly her mom holds her hand and takes her to some guests and introduces them and makes her talk to them.. while she is not interested..

Then she sees ranvi again behind the lady she is talking .. gunjan gets tensed seeing him.. she keeps looking at him and not listening to the conversation ..

Ranvi comes close to her and pulls her to himself and takes her in the centre of the hall and turns her around and grabs her by her waist.. gunjan is teary eyed..

He slowly wipes off her tear with a finger and winks at her and smiles and goes away..

(Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan
Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan) -2
Kaisi, sarhadein, kaisi majbooriyaan
Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

Suddenly a her mom gets dharam next to her and all people start to congratulate them.. gunjan's worried eyes keeps looking for ranvi.. they hall shake hands with both of them as she is

Gunjan is in her room and removing her earrings.. suddenly she sees ranvi on her bed behind her.. she gets up tensed.. but he grabs her arm and pulls her over himself and rolls her on the bed... she looks at him with lost eyes.. he slowly moves away the little hair off her face and puts it behind her ears..

Tum chhupa na sakogi main woh raaz hoon
Tum bhoola na sakogi woh andaaz hoon

She pushes him away and runs towards her balcony tensed wether he is coming towards her.. but suddenly he grabs her by her waist and moves her to a corner.. he smiles closes her eyes with his hands and pulls her close to his chest

Goonjta hoon jo dil mein toh hairaan ho kyun
Main tumhaare hi dil ki toh awaaz hoon

A tear flows out her eyes as she hears his heart beats.. but when she opens her eyes he is not there.. she can hear him but she looks around and cant see him..

Sun sako, toh suno, dhadkanon ki zabaan
Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan
Kaisi, sarhadein, kaisi majbooriyaan
Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

Gunjan is unable to get over ranvi at any moment... she is in kitchen and rolling parathas.. she suddenly sees ranvi there.. he slowly comes behind her and holds both her hands gets very close and rolls the parathas with her.. gunjan closes her eyes instantly..

Then she is serving food to her father.. and she sees ranvi on the other chair.. he shows his plate and smiles.. she puts food to his plate and suddenly all spills on the table and she realizes that he is not there.. her mom looks at her in anger.. gunjan gets tensed and runs away on the stairs

Gunjan is sitting worried on her terrace and she sees ranvi standing and singing from there to her.. she gets up tensed as he is approaching her..

Main hi main ab tumhaare khayaalon mein hoon
Main jawaabon mein hoon, main sawaalon mein hoon

She tries to run away but he grabs her arm and pulls her towards him and rests his forehead on hers and smiles..while she closes her eyes.. and then she opens her eyes to see he is not there..

Main tumhaare har ek khwaab mein hoon basa
Main tumhaari nazar ke ujaalon mein hoon

She turns around and sees him again.. and then he opens his arms and asks her to come.. she moves her head in a no.. and starts to move behind.. she runs away from there..

She goes near the terrace door teary eyed.. and looks back and sees ranvi still with open arms..

Dekhti, ho mujhe, dekhti ho jahaan
Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan
Jaanam, dekh lo, mit gayi dooriyaan
Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan
Kaisi sarhadein, kaisi majbooriyaan
Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

She smiles with tears in her eyes and runs towards him and hugs him real tight and in tears..

Main yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan hoon, yahaan

537048 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#89
wow nice update
nd i loved dat song
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
brilliant update, loved all parts, looking forward to next
and i loved the song choice!! πŸ‘

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